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Mixagji
>SakiK
ありがとうございます
NCをいくつか修正しました
YTYuyu
Yo modding this map because of ur request :)

General:
No problems here

Normal:
00:12:010(1) - make this look the same as (3)?
00:17:260(4) - add a clap at the end?
00:25:510(3) - Ctrl+H for an easier path?
00:28:885(4,6) - i think u forgot to add claps on these?
00:33:760(4) - add a clap at the beginning
00:35:260(6) - remove the whistle and add a clap?
00:38:260(3,4) - add a clap at the beginning for (3) and add a clap for (4)
00:41:260(6) - same as 00:33:760
00:46:510(5) - ^
01:01:510(4) - remove the clap at the end. sounds odd IMO
01:11:635(6) - add a clap?
01:30:760 - move the break to 01:30:197
02:00:010(1) - this slider can be a bit nicer
02:16:510(4) - add a clap at the end

Hard:
01:30:197 - same as my suggestion on easy
01:54:572(3) - add a clap at the repeat arrow
01:56:260(4) - add a clap at the beginning
01:57:760(3) - add a clap

Insane:
u dont hav to do this but can u re-name it to lunatic?
00:34:885(4) - add a clap
00:35:635(5) - ^
01:30:197 - same as my suggestion on easy
02:07:510(5) - NC
02:13:510(5) - ^

this is the best i can do. GL :D
Reiji-RJ
Seiga Nyan Nyaaan \>o</

[General]

  1. Remove one of the nyan from tags
[Normal]

  1. 00:06:010 (1) - finish
  2. 00:18:010 (1) - finish to the end? :O (just suggestion)
  3. 00:24:010 (1) - ^ D:
  4. 00:27:010 (1) - remove finish
  5. 00:33:760 (4) - nc?
  6. 00:39:760 (4) - ^
  7. 00:41:260 (6) - youu can add finishes with lower volume >w<
  8. 00:45:760 (4) - nc
  9. 00:45:760 (4,5) - add claps
  10. 00:48:010 (1) - finish
  11. 00:50:260 (3) - clap
  12. 00:54:010 (1) - finish
  13. 00:51:010 - and then, where are claps? D:
  14. 01:06:010 (1) - finish
  15. 01:27:010 (1) - finish
  16. 01:29:635 (x) - add a note?
  17. 01:48:010 (1) - finish
  18. 01:53:260 (2) - as in 00:41:260 (6) -
  19. 02:03:010 (3) - finish
  20. 02:10:510 (4) - ^
  21. 02:16:510 (4) - ^
  22. 02:18:010 (1) - ^ (yes, I love finishes :<)
[Hard]

  1. 00:06:010 (1) - guess what! xD
  2. 00:40:510 (5) - ^
  3. 00:41:260 (1,2) - finishes~~
  4. 00:53:260 (1,2,1) - ^ :<
  5. 01:06:010 (1) - ^
  6. 01:09:010 (1) - hidden slider
  7. 01:22:510 (7,9) - you forgot claps
  8. 01:26:447 (8) - ^
  9. 01:29:635 (3) - ^
  10. 01:51:760 (3) - finish
  11. 01:53:260 (1,2,1) - ^
  12. 01:58:510 (1,3) - claps
  13. 02:04:510 (1,2,3) - ^
  14. 02:16:510 (1,2,3) - ^ D:
  15. 02:18:010 (1) - finish
[Insane]

  1. 00:06:010 (1) - finish
  2. 00:40:510 (5) - ^
  3. 00:41:260 (1,2) - ^
  4. 00:46:885 (5) - clap
  5. 00:47:635 (10) - ^
  6. 00:51:385 (3) - ^
  7. 00:52:135 (5) - ^
  8. 00:53:260 (1,2) - finishes
  9. 00:54:010 (1) - ^
  10. 01:05:260 (1) - maybe reduce to 01:05:447 - ?
  11. 01:06:010 (1) - finish
  12. 01:42:010 (1) - ^
  13. 01:53:260 (6) - ^
  14. 01:58:510 (1) - ^
  15. 02:15:010 (1) - ^
  16. 02:37:697 (2,3) - ctrl+R for better flow :O
Sorry if some of my suggestions are no longer useful, because I modded it before Byakugan D:
Very good map, I liked Hard <3
Good luck~
Topic Starter
Mixagji
>Byakugan249,Reiji-RJ
thank you for mod~
Normal & Hard are almost fixed
>Reiji-RJ
Finish suound is put on cymbals in music. so I didnt add it. sorry ><
Leorda
Konnichiwa

General
* Remove all kiai and use this kiai
  1. Kiai #1 : 00:54:010 ~ 01:06:010
  2. Kiai #2 : 01:54:010 ~ 02:18:010

Normal
* AR +1? Your current approach rate is kinda slow

00:12:010 (6) - Forgot to put new combo here?
00:33:760 (4) - Clap on head slider?
00:41:260 (6) - Clap?
00:42:760 (2) - What's the point to put clap on head slider?
00:50:260 (3) - Clap on tail slider?
00:55:510 (3) - Move to 00:55:322 and extend it for following synth?
01:01:510 (4) - Clap on tail slider?
01:06:010 (1) - Finish
01:27:010 (1) - Finish on head slider?
01:55:510 (2) - Move to 01:55:322 and snap the repeating slider to red tick for following synth?


Hard
00:29:260 (3) - Clap on 2nd repeating slider?
00:58:322 (4) - New combo?
00:58:510 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:17:635 (5) - Clap on head slider?
01:22:510 (7) - New combo for new stanza?
01:25:510 (5) - ^
02:10:322 (5) - New combo?
02:10:510 (1) - Remove new combo?


Lunatic
00:07:510 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:07:885 (1) - ^
00:21:010 (1,2,3,4) - I don't think this anti-jump is fit to the song....
00:31:135 (6,7) - Sudden jumps can makes players go confusing
00:35:260 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This streams are not fit to the piano D:
00:45:760 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - I think this part needs more hitsound, I guess


I hate Seiga Kaku >:(

EDIT : Reason that I hate Seiga Kaku is too much Desire Drive in C81
Topic Starter
Mixagji

Leorda wrote:

General
* Remove all kiai and use this kiai
  1. Kiai #1 : 00:54:010 ~ 01:06:010
  2. Kiai #2 : 01:54:010 ~ 02:18:010
no changed for now

Normal
* AR +1? Your current approach rate is kinda slow fix

00:12:010 (6) - Forgot to put new combo here? fix
00:33:760 (4) - Clap on head slider? fix
00:41:260 (6) - Clap?
00:42:760 (2) - What's the point to put clap on head slider? fix
00:50:260 (3) - Clap on tail slider?
00:55:510 (3) - Move to 00:55:322 and extend it for following synth? fix
01:01:510 (4) - Clap on tail slider?
01:06:010 (1) - Finish
01:27:010 (1) - Finish on head slider? fix
01:55:510 (2) - Move to 01:55:322 and snap the repeating slider to red tick for following synth? fix


Hard
00:29:260 (3) - Clap on 2nd repeating slider? fix
00:58:322 (4) - New combo?
00:58:510 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:17:635 (5) - Clap on head slider?
01:22:510 (7) - New combo for new stanza? fix
01:25:510 (5) - ^ fix
02:10:322 (5) - New combo?
02:10:510 (1) - Remove new combo?


Lunatic
00:07:510 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:07:885 (1) - ^
00:21:010 (1,2,3,4) - I don't think this anti-jump is fit to the song.... fix
00:31:135 (6,7) - Sudden jumps can makes players go confusing fix
00:35:260 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This streams are not fit to the piano D: fix
00:45:760 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - I think this part needs more hitsound, I guess fix
thank you for mod~

Leorda wrote:

I hate Seiga Kaku :x
Why!? perhaps You can't defeat her ? lol

Leorda wrote:

EDIT : Reason that I hate Seiga Kaku is too much Desire Drive in C81
lol
you participated in C81 ? that's nice
Kirino Kousaka
Hello!~ Here's my mod~ (a request from my queue)

  • [Hard]
  1. 00:31:322 - Put a hitcircle here. It sounds better imo.
  2. 00:32:822 - ^
  3. 01:54:572 (3) - Remove "clap" on both ends of this slider and put "whistle" at the reverse arrow.
  4. 01:56:260 (4) - Replace "clap" with "whistle" on the start and remove "clap" on end.
  5. 01:57:760 (3) - Replace "clap" with "whistle".
  6. 01:57:947 (4) - Remove "clap" on start.
  7. 02:00:760 (5) - Replace "clap" with "whistle" on the start and remove "clap" on end.
  8. 02:02:260 (4) - Replace "clap" with "whistle".
  9. 02:02:447 (5) - Remove "clap".
  10. 02:03:760 (4) - Replace "clap" with "whistle" on the start and remove "clap" on end.
  11. 02:06:760 (5) - ^
  12. 02:08:260 (4) - ^
  13. 02:09:760 (4) - ^
  14. 02:12:760 (5) - ^
  15. 02:14:260 (4) - ^
  16. 02:15:760 (4) - ^

    [Lunatic]
  17. 00:47:260 (8) - Add NC
  18. 00:58:510 (1) - Put "finish".
  19. 01:47:260 (7) - Add NC
  20. 02:28:885 (3) - ^
  21. 02:29:635 (1) - Remove NC
  22. 02:30:197 (10) - Add NC
  23. 02:53:447 (1) - Replace this slider with a stream. Something like this (as shown on the pic below) And if you agreed to this idea, put a "finish" on (7).
That's all!~
Nice map good luck!~ :)
Star~ :D
Topic Starter
Mixagji
>Kirino Kousaka
thank you for mod and star~
fixed=)
lovhin456
Hello

General:
- Fine

Easy:
- 00:06:010 >> Finish at start, I think normal finish suits better but soft is fine too
- 00:34:322 >> Umm, whistle ?
- 00:40:510 >> ^
- 01:46:322 >> Whistle ?
- 01:54:010 >> Finish at start
- 02:00:010 ~ 02:05:635 >> Ok, you are just repeting this pattern like 3 times ... isn't it too much ? I mean it's kinda boring and repetitive ):

Normal:
- AR -1 ? Objects seem to come faster with the current one but it works fine too if you want to keep it
- 00:06:010 >> Finish at start, I think normal finish suits better but soft is fine too
- 02:52:510 >> Remove new combo also whistle at the end

Hard:
- Uh, OD +1 ?
- And maybe AR -1 ? Ummm, the same reason as Normal ...
- 00:20:260 >> Uh, the stream doesn't sound very good, I suggest to delete (6)
- 00:26:260 >> ^ just that here you have to delete (8)
- 00:41:260 (1,2) >> Use normal hitsound set for these ?
- 00:44:072 >> Umm, this stream too ... delete (8) ?
- 00:51:572 >> New combo ?

Lunatic:
- 00:41:260 (1,2) >> Use normal hitsound set for these ?
- 01:23:447 >> New combo ?
- 02:15:760 >> ^

* Good overall
Topic Starter
Mixagji

lovhin456 wrote:

Hello

General:
- Fine

Easy:
- 00:06:010 >> Finish at start, I think normal finish suits better but soft is fine too
- 00:34:322 >> Umm, whistle ? fix
- 00:40:510 >> ^ fix
- 01:46:322 >> Whistle ? fix
- 01:54:010 >> Finish at start
- 02:00:010 ~ 02:05:635 >> Ok, you are just repeting this pattern like 3 times ... isn't it too much ? I mean it's kinda boring and repetitive ): yes,I will try other patterns :P fix~


Normal:
- AR -1 ? Objects seem to come faster with the current one but it works fine too if you want to keep it keep for now
- 00:06:010 >> Finish at start, I think normal finish suits better but soft is fine too
- 02:52:510 >> Remove new combo also whistle at the end fix


Hard:
- Uh, OD +1 ? keep for now
- And maybe AR -1 ? Ummm, the same reason as Normal ... ^
- 00:20:260 >> Uh, the stream doesn't sound very good, I suggest to delete (6) fix
- 00:26:260 >> ^ just that here you have to delete (8) fix
- 00:41:260 (1,2) >> Use normal hitsound set for these ?
- 00:44:072 >> Umm, this stream too ... delete (8) ? fix
- 00:51:572 >> New combo ?

Lunatic:
- 00:41:260 (1,2) >> Use normal hitsound set for these ?
- 01:23:447 >> New combo ?
- 02:15:760 >> ^

* Good overall
thank you for mod!
changed finish's hitsound~
DeathBlood
mod queuesヽ('ω')ノ≡ヽ('ω')ノ

[Lunatic]
00:08:072 (2) - 1グリッド→
00:34:697 (2,3,4,5,6) - 右側のほうが見やすいかもです! http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/241191
01:00:760 (3,4,5,6) - 形揃えれそうです!
01:16:510 (1,2) - 形的にはいいですが、ここで重ねるとちょっと叩きづらいかもです。
01:20:635 (6,7) - こっちのが形的にもキレイかもです! http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/241197
01:54:010 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 微妙にまだ直せます!
01:57:947 (5) - 2グリッド←
02:32:072 (4) - 1グリッド↓
02:35:072 (5,6,7) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/241204
02:41:635 (1,2,3,4) - もうちょっと曲げたほうがいいかもです。
02:47:635 (9) - できれば3連打の間にスライダーを通しましょう!

[Hard]
00:40:322 (4,5) - 4にホイッスル、5にフィニッシュ!
00:41:260 (1,2) - クラップ!
00:48:760 (3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/241210 ななめにしましょう!
00:53:260 (1,2) - クラップ!
00:55:322 (1) - フィニッシュ!
00:56:822 (1) - ^
02:37:322 (4,1,2,3,4) - (´;ω;`)

[Normal]
00:40:135 (2) - 1グリッド→1グリッド↑、スライダーの終わりにフィニッシュ
00:41:260 (1) - クラップ!
01:53:260 (1) - フィニッシュ!
02:31:510 (3,4) - 音的にはこっちのほうが合ってる?かな? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/241218
02:48:010 (1) - 1グリッド→!

[Easy]
特になしです!

ざっと見る限り形キレイですはい!
このくらいしか見つかりませんでした。
ヽ('ω')ノ≡ヽ('ω')ノもうしわけねぇです。
お互いランクド
がんばりましょう!(`・ω-)▄︻┻┳═一・:'.,.
Topic Starter
Mixagji
>DeathBlood
thx for mod
いくつか直させてもらいましたー
Meeatcookies
Great map, played it like in trance ;o
Ranger
Hi~
From my queue

[General]
How about add kiai Time at 00:54:010~01:05:635?

[Easy]
00:12:010 (1) - How about like this?
00:23:635 (4) - Spacing error a little.put in x:404 y:76(Grid Size:Tiny)
01:03:010 (1) - Add finish at the beginning
01:23:635 (4) - - Spacing error a little.put in x:404 y:76(Grid Size:Tiny)
01:54:010 (1) - Add finish at the beginning
02:40:135 (2) - Spacing error a little.put in x:424 y:308(Grid Size:Tiny)

[Normal]
00:22:510 (3) - Spacing error a little.put in x:200 y:104(Grid Size:small)
00:39:010 (1) - put in middle.it looks better to me
00:40:135 (2) - ^
01:44:635 (2) - Spacing error a little put in x:292 y:136(Grid Size:Tiny)

[Hard]
AR-1?
it`s so fast :o

00:20:260 (5,6) - Remove whistle or add whistle at 00:21:760 (5)
00:26:260 (7,8) - Remove whistle or add whistle at 00:27:760 (1,2)

[Lunatic]
00:07:135 (1) - Remove NC
00:07:885 (1) - ^
00:54:010 (1) - Add Finish at the beginning
02:18:010 (1) - Add Finish?


That`s all
Good luck~
Topic Starter
Mixagji

[Ranger] wrote:

Hi~
From my queue

[General]
How about add kiai Time at 00:54:010~01:05:635?

[Easy]
00:12:010 (1) - How about like this?
00:23:635 (4) - Spacing error a little.put in x:404 y:76(Grid Size:Tiny) fixed
01:03:010 (1) - Add finish at the beginning fixed
01:23:635 (4) - - Spacing error a little.put in x:404 y:76(Grid Size:Tiny) fixed
01:54:010 (1) - Add finish at the beginning fixed
02:40:135 (2) - Spacing error a little.put in x:424 y:308(Grid Size:Tiny) fixed

[Normal]
00:22:510 (3) - Spacing error a little.put in x:200 y:104(Grid Size:small) fixed
00:39:010 (1) - put in middle.it looks better to me
00:40:135 (2) - ^
01:44:635 (2) - Spacing error a little put in x:292 y:136(Grid Size:Tiny) fixed

[Hard]
AR-1? ok changed AR7
it`s so fast :o

00:20:260 (5,6) - Remove whistle or add whistle at 00:21:760 (5) fixed
00:26:260 (7,8) - Remove whistle or add whistle at 00:27:760 (1,2) fixed

[Lunatic]
00:07:135 (1) - Remove NC
00:07:885 (1) - ^
00:54:010 (1) - Add Finish at the beginning fixed
02:18:010 (1) - Add Finish?


That`s all
Good luck~
thank you~
dhwldhfl123


[Easy] nazi
00:10:885(3) - x196 y168
00:41:260(1) - whistle start,end 両方
00:46:322(1) - whistle
00:46:885(1) - ^
00:53:260(1) - whistle start,end 両方
01:10:885(3) - x172 y168
01:11:635(4) - x212 y304
01:12:010(1) - x276 y336
01:13:135(2) - x448 x240
01:53:260(1) - whistle start,endo 両方

[Normal]
00:41:260(1) - whistle start,end 両方
00:53:260(1) - ^
01:16:510(3) - NC
01:45:010(3) - ^
01:53:260(1) - whistle start,end 両方

[Hard]
00:41:260(1,2) - whistle
00:53:260(1,2) - ^
01:53:260(1,2) - ^

はい
Topic Starter
Mixagji

dhwldhfl123 wrote:



[Easy] nazi
00:10:885(3) - x196 y168
00:41:260(1) - whistle start,end 両方
00:46:322(1) - whistle
00:46:885(1) - ^
00:53:260(1) - whistle start,end 両方
01:10:885(3) - x172 y168
01:11:635(4) - x212 y304
01:12:010(1) - x276 y336
01:13:135(2) - x448 x240
01:53:260(1) - whistle start,endo 両方

[Normal]
00:41:260(1) - whistle start,end 両方
00:53:260(1) - ^
01:16:510(3) - NC
01:45:010(3) - ^  ここ以外全部修正
01:53:260(1) - whistle start,end 両方

[Hard]
00:41:260(1,2) - whistle
00:53:260(1,2) - ^
01:53:260(1,2) - ^

はい
はい
ありあり
lovhin456
Everything looks good
Bubbled
Breeze
Just some minor suggestions

Lunatic

  1. 00:35:260 (1,2,3) - delete 2 seems fit music more
  2. 02:53:447 (1) - Slider path was a little hidden by the hitburst of previous notes, so maybe it's better to move this slider out of hitburst?

Nothing major to pop the bubble, just let me know when you have any reply

EDIY : いい曲です、ランクしました
Topic Starter
Mixagji
thank you ;_;
Thite
omedetou!! :)
Dino99
Congratz!! ^w^
Topic Starter
Mixagji
thank you!
mancuso_JM_
Nice!
Congratz!! ;)
Laurier
おめでとうございます!
Topic Starter
Mixagji
arigatougozaimasu!
DeathBlood
おめでとう!! :)
mod したかいがあった:lol:
Rein
神譜面<3
Topic Starter
Mixagji
arigatou>w<!
Faust
Oppai momi momi !

Congratulations !
phonic
omedetou!
Topic Starter
Mixagji
arigatougozaimasu!
Frostmourne
really good map xD

congratzz~~~
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
good map~
Topic Starter
Mixagji
sankyu!
Sandpig
\;D/ graz
Topic Starter
Mixagji
thx\o/
AIR315
Congratz :33
CFW Magic
Well done for all difficulties except Lunatic which was extremely disappointing in it's lack of challenge. That felt more like a hard with AR 1 but drain rate 10. Next time make insane actually faster and harder instead of blindly topping drain rate without thinking about the actual difficulty of the map. Everything else is very well done, grats!

EDIT: Actually I shall be more constructive in my criticism, so it doesn't looks like I'm dissing or anything (far away from me the thought of that). But yeah, insane diff is basically a hard with increased drain rate. It's a shame because the potential of the song would allow even for a decent Insane+/Another/WhateverElsePeopleCallThose.
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