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Subplaid - Jeg onskerikke a skade deg

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grumd
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grumd
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 18 марта 2012 г. at 15:06:50

Artist: Subplaid
Title: Jeg onskerikke a skade deg
Tags: RockeDon i dont want to hurt you
BPM: 175
Filesize: 1943kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,8 stars, 59 notes)
  2. Hard (4,95 stars, 214 notes)
  3. Insane (4,88 stars, 346 notes)
  4. Normal (4,21 stars, 104 notes)
  5. Rocke's Taiko (4,83 stars, 475 notes)
Download: Subplaid - Jeg onskerikke a skade deg
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Lyrics:
You know, if that kind human acceptance does that much for you and me, think of what it is when God himself puts His arms around you and says, "Welcome home."
What love is this? It is God's love, and no other love can be defined until that love has been properly understood.

And I want to say thanks to Shiirn and especially narakucrimson for their huge contribution in ranking this map!
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Reiji-RJ
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Reiji-RJ
Привет! У тебя 2 одинаковых мапки, какую модить? D:

[General]

  1. Размер твоего бг 1000х667, а должен быть либо 1024х768, либо 800х600. Пофиксь. Хотя я бы посоветовала другой бг, мгм..
  2. Мп3 320кб/с, сделай как минимум 192 кб/с.
  3. Изи будет? Самая легкая диффка должна быть > 3,5 звезд.
  4. Комбо цвета сливаются, сделай их более контрастными. Н-ну.. что-то вроде такого:

    [Colours]
    Combo1 : 242,0,0
    Combo2 : 108,108,108
    Combo3 : 182,177,173
    Combo4 : 86,116,105
    Combo5 : 139,177,173
    Combo6 : 138,0,0
[Normal]

  1. СВ 1,60 слишком много для такого бпм на нормале D:
  2. Так вроде все хорошо, только поработать над хс
[Hard]

  1. 00:26:400 (х) - добавь ноту
  2. 00:37:028 (7) - нк
  3. 01:04:800 (х) - ноту
[Insane]

  1. 00:26:400 (х) - ноту
  2. 00:31:542 (9) - нк?
  3. 00:38:742 (8) - ^
  4. 00:40:028 (1) - убери нк?
  5. 00:41:485 (5) - нк?
  6. 00:42:685 (15) - мгм, нк?
  7. 00:46:628 (7) - ^
  8. 00:48:171 (15) - ^
  9. 00:50:742 (1) - убрать нк?
  10. 00:52:457 (9) - нк?..
  11. 00:55:542 (1) - убери нк
  12. 00:58:971 (11) - нк
  13. 01:01:714 (1) - убери нк
  14. 01:03:257 (8) - нк?
  15. 01:06:857 (8) - ^
  16. 01:24:000 (5) - ^
  17. 01:27:685 (х) - ноту сюда
grumd
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grumd

Reiji-RJ wrote:

Привет! У тебя 2 одинаковых мапки, какую модить? D: я поменял название песни, а оно создало новую карту D: в принципе всё равно что моддить, карты одинаковы

[General]

  1. Размер твоего бг 1000х667, а должен быть либо 1024х768, либо 800х600. Пофиксь. Хотя я бы посоветовала другой бг, мгм.. размер подстроим, но почему всем так не нравится этот БГ? отлично песне подходит
  2. Мп3 320кб/с, сделай как минимум 192 кб/с. нигде нет другого качества.. что ли погуглить программу, какая сжать сможет
  3. Изи будет? Самая легкая диффка должна быть > 3,5 звезд. если кто-то сделает, то будет. я их не умею делать D: но попробую, если что
  4. Комбо цвета сливаются, сделай их более контрастными. Н-ну.. что-то вроде такого:

    [Colours]
    Combo1 : 242,0,0
    Combo2 : 108,108,108
    Combo3 : 182,177,173
    Combo4 : 86,116,105
    Combo5 : 139,177,173
    Combo6 : 138,0,0
сейчас попробую, но в том-то и была идея, что они сливаться должны. если так нельзя, поменяем

[Normal]

  1. СВ 1,60 слишком много для такого бпм на нормале D: по-моему, нормально выглядит. разве много?
  2. Так вроде все хорошо, только поработать над хс что за хс? °-°
[Hard]

  1. 00:26:400 (х) - добавь ноту точно, отличное решение этому ломаному ритму
  2. 00:37:028 (7) - нк okay
  3. 01:04:800 (х) - ноту okay
[Insane]

  1. 00:26:400 (х) - ноту okay
  2. 00:31:542 (9) - нк? okay
  3. 00:38:742 (8) - ^ okay
  4. 00:40:028 (1) - убери нк? okay
  5. 00:41:485 (5) - нк? okay
  6. 00:42:685 (15) - мгм, нк? думаю да, там комбо слишком длиное выходит
  7. 00:46:628 (7) - ^ точно, потерял
  8. 00:48:171 (15) - ^ okay
  9. 00:50:742 (1) - убрать нк? можно
  10. 00:52:457 (9) - нк?.. лучше на 00:52:114, где начало такта и меняется тональность скрипки (?), фоновой мелодии
  11. 00:55:542 (1) - убери нк okay
  12. 00:58:971 (11) - нк okay
  13. 01:01:714 (1) - убери нк okay
  14. 01:03:257 (8) - нк? даа
  15. 01:06:857 (8) - ^ NOPE, sorry
  16. 01:24:000 (5) - ^ okay
  17. 01:27:685 (х) - ноту сюда думаю, да
спасибо :з
лови кудоску
Reiji-RJ
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Reiji-RJ

grumd wrote:

Reiji-RJ wrote:

Привет! У тебя 2 одинаковых мапки, какую модить? D: я поменял название песни, а оно создало новую карту D: в принципе всё равно что моддить, карты одинаковы Попроси БАТов удалить ту карту, а эту переименуй нормально: viewtopic.php?f=56&t=24443

[General]

[*]Мп3 320кб/с, сделай как минимум 192 кб/с. нигде нет другого качества.. что ли погуглить программу, какая сжать сможет Если у меня пойдет программка, то постараюсь сделать мп3

[Normal]

  1. СВ 1,60 слишком много для такого бпм на нормале D: по-моему, нормально выглядит. разве много? Многовато..
  2. Так вроде все хорошо, только поработать над хс что за хс? °-° Хитсаунды :3
Не за что :3
grumd
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grumd
normal переделал под СВ 1.0, доволен.
хитсаунды подправил во всех сложностях
дубликат мапы удалил
поменял аудио на 128кбпс, звучит достаточно хорошо.
цвета комбо поменял
остальное тоже всё поправил.
жду следующих модов -.-

единственное – пока что не делал изи сложность
Reiji-RJ
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Reiji-RJ
Делай изи!

Сделай Timing -> Resnap all notes во всех диффках, так как ноты сбились с ритма.

В Нормале AR +1 или даже +2.. Тяжело читается в таких моментах: 00:50:742 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - ><'
А так неплохой хар- нормал вышел :3
В харде забыл хитсаунды.

А еще поставь финиши в такие места, где ты их слышишь в музыке. Например:

[Insane]

  • 00:21:972 (1) - на начало
    00:24:030 (1) -
    00:26:772 (1) - на начало
    00:27:115 (2) - на конец
    00:28:658 (1) - на конец
...и так далее

Кудоски не надо~
Удачи! :3
grumd
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grumd

Reiji-RJ wrote:

Делай изи! сделал изи!

Сделай Timing -> Resnap all notes во всех диффках, так как ноты сбились с ритма. сделал

В Нормале AR +1 или даже +2.. Тяжело читается в таких моментах: 00:50:742 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - ><' тоже готово, теперь и вправду лучше выглядит
А так неплохой хар- нормал вышел :3 в таком случае, назвал его normal+
В харде забыл хитсаунды. дада, точно, добавил

А еще поставь финиши в такие места, где ты их слышишь в музыке. Например:

[Insane]

  • 00:21:972 (1) - на начало
    00:24:030 (1) -
    00:26:772 (1) - на начало
    00:27:115 (2) - на конец
    00:28:658 (1) - на конец
...и так далее
оо, спасибо, теперь звучит отлично! добавил почти во всех диффах

Кудоски не надо~ а разве кудосу только раз в треде можно давать? ты мне столько помогаешь, я бы уже три кудоски дал :з
Удачи! :3 спасибо)
Xgor
Elite Mapper
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Xgor
IRC mod
17:53 <Xgor> : Just curious, why do you have nazi zombies as the background?
17:53 <grumd> : It's the logo of Subplaid's promo-dj page in the internets
17:54 <Xgor> : Mmm ok
17:54 <grumd> : And also suits song's atmosphere, i guess
17:54 <grumd> : And in some way suits the title
17:55 <Xgor> : I would say it's the oposite to the title, but I guess it kind fits the song
17:56 <grumd> : That nazi-zombies are dead and won't hurt you now :)
17:56 <grumd> : But It's okay, yep?
17:57 <Xgor> : I think so, the background must be PG but I think this is ok
17:57 <grumd> : PG, what's that?
17:57 <Xgor> : PG-13
17:58 <grumd> : ooh
17:58 <grumd> : I don't think that this BG can scare little children, though
17:59 <Xgor> : I can imgaine that though....
18:01 <Xgor> : Anyways, when it comes to osu! BGs the recommended ratio of BGs is 4:3 and this is far from that, So much of
18:01 <Xgor> : your background is black bars and it looks ugly as it is right now
18:02 <grumd> : I guess I'll try to find a new one
18:03 <Xgor> : I guess that's the best idea, you could cut it otherwise
18:07 <Xgor> : Beginner could use a some circles to keep it a bit more variated
18:07 <Xgor> : It feels a bit weird that there is only two circles in the map right now
18:10 <Xgor> : Normal+ would be more fun if the slider speed was a a bit faster.
18:11 <Xgor> : You could also have a bit less beats, I think it would be more beginner friendly if you had less 1/2 usage
18:12 <Xgor> : What did you have before on Normal+?
18:13 <grumd> : You think that beginner is still too hard for newbies?
18:13 <grumd> : Maybe I'll just rename Beginner to Easy? :)
18:14 <Xgor> : Nah, I was talking about Normal+ I think it would be nice to make it more into a standard Normal
18:14 <Xgor> : Well I think both Beginner and Easy
18:15 <Xgor> : Or just into a standard slider
18:15 <Xgor> : Both work though
18:17 <Xgor> : Also, maybe change the tick rate on all difficulities to 2
18:18 <Xgor> : I think that fits the intensity of the song better
18:20 <Xgor> : Also, I think it would be good if Hard and Insane had different slider speed, They feel somewhat similar at parts
18:20 <Xgor> : due to that

Also, Nazi spacing mod as you wanted, note that all these is mostly speculations where it looks like you wanted a straight line or symmetry so disregard anything you don't agree with here
[Normal]
00:37:058 (6) - Move down a grid to align with (2,3)

[Hard]
00:25:572 (4) - Move down a grid?
00:26:344 (6) - Move the slider end point right four grids.
00:29:001 (5) - Move four grids up and four grids to the right
00:30:372 (2) - Move two grids up and two grids to the right
01:12:029 (4) - Move one grid left
Also, this has nothing to do with the spacing but when I look at it again I think it would be good if you made the rhythms slightly easier, some 1/4s and constant 1/2s at 175 BPM is makes this feel more like an Insane.

[Insane]
00:31:744 (2) - Move down a grid

Eh, that should be enough. Well pretty nice map a new mapper so star for you
*star*
Musty
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Musty
mmh.. The song is awesome but too short, and it's pretty well made for a new mapper like you i added this to my modding list :3
grumd
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grumd
Thankies, Mustaash! I'm waiting for your mod :)

Changed BG and combo colours, like Xgor suggested. Hope that BG still fits the song
grumd
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grumd

Xgor wrote:

Also, Nazi spacing mod as you wanted, note that all these is mostly speculations where it looks like you wanted a straight line or symmetry so disregard anything you don't agree with here
[Normal]
00:37:058 (6) - Move down a grid to align with (2,3) okay

[Hard]
00:25:572 (4) - Move down a grid? okay, aligned
00:26:344 (6) - Move the slider end point right four grids. aligned without grid snapping
00:29:001 (5) - Move four grids up and four grids to the right okay, aligned
00:30:372 (2) - Move two grids up and two grids to the right due to chain reaction of previous changes, aligned in other way
01:12:029 (4) - Move one grid left aligned without grid snapping
Also, this has nothing to do with the spacing but when I look at it again I think it would be good if you made the rhythms slightly easier, some 1/4s and constant 1/2s at 175 BPM is makes this feel more like an Insane. replaced some pairs of circles by sliders

[Insane]
00:31:744 (2) - Move down a grid nope, that mustn't be the straight line

Eh, that should be enough. Well pretty nice map a new mapper so star for you thaaanks ^^
*star*
Musty
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Musty
Ok here we go !

[General]

• Disable Countdown in every difficulties
• Disable Letterblox during breaks.

[Beginner]

I highly recommend to make the volume of HS to 70%.

00:24:715 (1) - The song says that there should be a Clap at the end of this slider, if you would fit the drums.
00:26:087 (2) - Replace the whistle you placed by claps?
00:42:544 (4,5) - for a score variation, delete these notes and add a Spinner?
Nice Beginner i like it !

[Normal+]

00:35:687 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern is confusing imo, it would be more playable like this : http://puu.sh/dTJX or something not overlapped.
00:38:429 (8) - The instrument change the note, new combo?
00:42:544 (3,4,1) - for a score variation, delete those notes and add a Spinner?
00:50:772 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - like the other pattern, it's confusing because of the overlap try this? : http://puu.sh/dTKl

Little issues. Good !

[Hard]

00:42:029 (5) - This should be a 1/2 imo, it doesn't fit the song very well because the song use 1/2 here.
00:42:372 (6,7,8,1) - Remove these notes and add a spinner for score variation.

Awesome Hard, keep your great work !

[Insane]

00:25:744 (8) - New Combo maybe?
00:42:544 (9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Remove and add a spinner for score variations when ranked. (if )
00:53:515 (10) - Add a new Combo because of Spacing and rhythm change.

I really enjoyed the end of this diff when i played it

Ok Overall is really good, and this is an awesome map for a new mapper like you, Maybe see you laaaaater~ :3
( i deserve a Star because i support you, Good Luck ! )
grumd
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grumd
SPOILER

Mustaash wrote:

Ok here we go !

[General]

• Disable Countdown in every difficulties disabled
• Disable Letterblox during breaks. disabled

[Beginner]

I highly recommend to make the volume of HS to 70%. tried that, really sounds better

00:24:715 (1) - The song says that there should be a Clap at the end of this slider, if you would fit the drums. i mostly didnt follow them. and with clap that slider sounds a bit weird. so, nope, sorry
00:26:087 (2) - Replace the whistle you placed by claps? noope ; ;
00:42:544 (4,5) - for a score variation, delete these notes and add a Spinner? good idea :) done
Nice Beginner i like it ! that's my first easy diff, so thanks a lot ^^

[Normal+]

00:35:687 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern is confusing imo, it would be more playable like this : http://puu.sh/dTJX or something not overlapped. okay
00:38:429 (8) - The instrument change the note, new combo? yep, i forgot
00:42:544 (3,4,1) - for a score variation, delete those notes and add a Spinner? okay
00:50:772 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - like the other pattern, it's confusing because of the overlap try this? : http://puu.sh/dTKl yep, changed to a bit defferent pattern

Little issues. Good !

[Hard]

00:42:029 (5) - This should be a 1/2 imo, it doesn't fit the song very well because the song use 1/2 here.
00:42:372 (6,7,8,1) - Remove these notes and add a spinner for score variation. hmm, i added a spinner and a note right after that

Awesome Hard, keep your great work !^///^

[Insane]

00:25:744 (8) - New Combo maybe? nope :з
00:42:544 (9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Remove and add a spinner for score variations when ranked. (if ) noo, i dont want to ruin that stream moment with a snotty spinner :<
00:53:515 (10) - Add a new Combo because of Spacing and rhythm change. yep

I really enjoyed the end of this diff when i played it <3

Ok Overall is really good, and this is an awesome map for a new mapper like you, Maybe see you laaaaater~ :3
( i deserve a Star because i support you, Good Luck ! )

thankies again
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Pereira006
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Pereira006
hello~~

IMO -> my opinion

Some Suggestions
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Beginner

  1. 01:18:201 (2,3) - IMO this part is too hard here gameplay because I gett 300 score the hitburst skin is big and approeach is too slow then is too hard read i suggest this http://puu.sh/dXzc this is most better gameplay for this "beginner"
stuff cool
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Normal+

  1. 00:21:972 (1) - Remove the whistle and add finish on start slider
  2. 00:25:401 (2,3) - is not stack perfect try perfect stack 0,00x
  3. 00:28:830 (3) - are you sure whistle? I feel like more is finish is most fit so remove whistle and add finish ?
  4. 00:54:887 (6) - put new combo and at 00:55:572 (1) - remove new combo is better on my opinion I konw the combo color will break try manual combo like this http://puu.sh/dXHV
stuff cool
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Hard

  1. 00:25:744 (5,6) - I can see my owm this are incosiente spacing
  2. 00:26:344 (6,7) - I so sorry I feel this part is too much insane most better if you do CTRL+R to fix spacing and relax play this part
  3. 00:29:001 (5,6) - incosiente spacing
  4. 00:42:372 (1,1) - I like more the note need remove and spinner externd here 00:44:087 mean this http://puu.sh/dXQi most better for this hard
  5. 00:45:458 (3,4) - incosiente spacing
  6. 00:53:515 (4,5) - Again i can see my owm are incosiente spacing because they are 0.90x
stuff cool
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Insane

I really enjoy this diff
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
that all i think and have funny my noob mod
good luck and bye bye
grumd
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Topic Starter
grumd
SPOILER

Pereira006 wrote:

hello~~

IMO -> my opinion

Some Suggestions
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Beginner

  1. 01:18:201 (2,3) - IMO this part is too hard here gameplay because I gett 300 score the hitburst skin is big and approeach is too slow then is too hard read i suggest this http://puu.sh/dXzc this is most better gameplay for this "beginner"yep okay
stuff cool
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Normal+

  1. 00:21:972 (1) - Remove the whistle and add finish on start slider done
  2. 00:25:401 (2,3) - is not stack perfect try perfect stack 0,00x oh, really. done
  3. 00:28:830 (3) - are you sure whistle? I feel like more is finish is most fit so remove whistle and add finish? added a finish here and in some parts after that. maybe i just forgot about them before
  4. 00:54:887 (6) - put new combo and at 00:55:572 (1) - remove new combo is better on my opinion I konw the combo color will break try manual combo like this http://puu.sh/dXHV done


stuff cool
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Hard

  1. 00:25:744 (5,6) - I can see my owm this are incosiente spacing yeep
  2. 00:26:344 (6,7) - I so sorry I feel this part is too much insane most better if you do CTRL+R to fix spacing and relax play this part okay ;w; i tried my best to relax that part without ruining the pattern
  3. 00:29:001 (5,6) - incosiente spacing i know that 6th slider is too far from the end of 5th, but that slider is just for 1/4 and can be played just by holding the button. so i think there is no need to follow the spacing there
  4. 00:42:372 (1,1) - I like more the note need remove and spinner externd here 00:44:087 mean this http://puu.sh/dXQi most better for this hard no, sorry, that sounds too weird. the rhytm here requires two beats
  5. 00:45:458 (3,4) - incosiente spacing this part is similar to 00:29:001 (5,6), but i changed a pattern a bit nevertheless. now spacing is correct and looks better
  6. 00:53:515 (4,5) - Again i can see my owm are incosiente spacing because they are 0.90x okay
stuff cool
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Insane

I really enjoy this diff <3
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
that all i think and have funny my noob mod
good luck and bye bye

Thanks
Kitsuneko
709 posts
Joined June 2010
Kitsuneko
hi grumd
modding from In-Game request

[General]
offset:55
Feel very early offset
(don't forget to move Inherited timeline)

[Insane]
01:01:083 (1,2)- change angle at the same angle as 01:01:083 (1)
if i make it, like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/225096
01:05:172 (4) - more angle http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/225124
01:20:626 (10) - NC, has combos over 16

[Hard]
00:33:972 (6) - move to 1 grid up
00:38:601 (1) - move to 1 grid left
00:58:658 (6,7) - ^
sorry nazi~

[normal+]
I think dont need + into name

[Beginner]
didn't found error, sorry


beautiful placements, curves
really 1st map? I wonder :o

sorry short modding, I could not find errors
okay, then star for you

good luck grumd
Kitsuneko
709 posts
Joined June 2010
Kitsuneko
oops, sorry double posts
server was busy when post it...
riffy
osu! Alumni
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Joined December 2010
riffy
Ох..Поехали.
Мой нубо-мод.

General
Начало как-то скучно играть. Пустовато. Кружочков нет.:<
Может хоть что-то? НЕОБЯЗАТЕЛЬНО
Яркие цвета - не в тон БГ http://puu.sh/e6o3


Insane
00:25:744 (8) - новое комбо? двузначные числа раздражают.
00:36:715 (8) - ^
01:07:229 (11) - ^
01:08:944 (8) - ^
01:11:001 (10) - ^
01:12:372 (8) - ^
01:15:629 (12) - ^ Тут аж до 20ти подряд дошло
01:20:601 (10) - ^
01:27:115 (9) - ^

Normal+
Это вот на хард похоже ;D

Hard
Тоже пять звезд. Мсье любит кормить корейцев мапами
01:04:487 (7) - Новое комбо, да.
01:06:887 (5) - ^
01:15:458 (7) - ^
01:26:429 (6) - ^

Beginner
Nothing wrong
riffy
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riffy
Yeah. Lag.
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riffy
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riffy
o_0
problem with connection sorry :<
grumd
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grumd
SPOILER

Kitsuneko wrote:

hi grumd
modding from In-Game request

[General]
offset:55
Feel very early offset yep okay
(don't forget to move Inherited timeline)

[Insane]
01:01:083 (1,2)- change angle at the same angle as 01:01:083 (1) oh really, nice suggestion :) thanks
if i make it, like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/225096
01:05:172 (4) - more angle http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/225124 yep, looks better now
01:20:626 (10) - NC, has combos over 16 okay

[Hard]
00:33:972 (6) - move to 1 grid up y
00:38:601 (1) - move to 1 grid left y
00:58:658 (6,7) - ^
sorry nazi~ i just love nazi mods so there's nothing to sorry about <3

[normal+]
I think dont need + into name thought about that too. renamed

[Beginner]
didn't found error, sorry :3


beautiful placements, curves <3
really 1st map? I wonder :o first map which is going for ranking. previous maps stayed wip... but you can look at my other graveyarded subplaid maps, they have nice curvy patterns too :>

sorry short modding, I could not find errors that's good, thx :D
okay, then star for you <3

good luck grumd
Thanks, Kitsuneko!
grumd
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grumd
SPOILER

-Bakari- wrote:

Ох..Поехали.
Мой нубо-мод.

General
Начало как-то скучно играть. Пустовато. Кружочков нет.:<
Может хоть что-то? НЕОБЯЗАТЕЛЬНО нее, всё нормально и так
Яркие цвета - не в тон БГ http://puu.sh/e6o3 так задумано, вообще-то °-° это цвета потеплее для быстрой части в конце. они должны выделяться, всё в порядке


Insane
00:25:744 (8) - новое комбо? двузначные числа раздражают. окей, здесь можно
00:36:715 (8) - ^
01:07:229 (11) - ^
01:08:944 (8) - ^
01:11:001 (10) - ^
01:12:372 (8) - ^
01:15:629 (12) - ^ Тут аж до 20ти подряд дошло из киаи-тайм-части поменял только здесь, чтобы не было больше 16-и. в остальном комбо соответствуют ритму, менять не буду
01:20:601 (10) - ^
01:27:115 (9) - ^

Normal+
Это вот на хард похоже ;D да ну не. она лёгкая очень. хард как раз хард. 5.00 звёзд ни о чём не говорят. я даже поменяю её название на просто Normal

Hard
Тоже пять звезд. Мсье любит кормить корейцев мапами корейцев? ахах, нет, она лёгкая) я вон инсейн прошёл на 5 соток и окей
01:04:487 (7) - Новое комбо, да. добавил
01:06:887 (5) - ^ даа
01:15:458 (7) - ^ окей
01:26:429 (6) - ^ даа, можно

Beginner
Nothing wrong БУГАГА >:D

окей, спасибо Bakari!
riffy
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riffy
Да не за что. Я же просто нуб. Спасибо, что хоть что-то применил. :>
я стараюсь делать лучше, как видишь не очень выходит.
rEdo
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rEdo
pretty nice rhythms you've got there, starring~
also, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/225303 o.o
spboxer3
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spboxer3

[general]


  • Settings
  1. Inconsistency in PreviewTime you need fix it :P
  2. you need let kiai Times on Downbeat
  3. If you didn't have guest diff~I think you need to integrat kiai time
  4. fade out too awkward.
    If you find better quality mp3 file~I think this problem will resolve :(

[Easy]


  • mapping
  1. none~

[Normal]


  • Overlaps
    (Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap eachother, I hope you could space them farther apart.)
  1. 00:23:026 (4,6) -
  2. 00:32:969 (1,3) -
  3. 00:50:112 (1,3) -
mapping
  1. 00:23:369 (5) - NC ((It's too long combo in Normal diff
  2. 00:30:226 (1,2,3,4) - uneven spacing~

[Hard]


  • Settings
    loool 5.00 stars...

    Overlaps
    (Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap eachother, I hope you could space them farther apart.)
  1. 00:30:397 (2,4) -
  2. 00:35:369 (10,3) -

mapping
  1. 00:46:683 (1,2,3) - uneven spacing [nazi]

[Insane]



  • Overlaps
    (Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap eachother, I hope you could space them farther apart.)
  1. 00:29:540 (6,1) - really a bit overlaps. but I think fix is better >"<
mapping
  1. looks fine

red is unrankable issue. bule is need to discuss. Black is just suggest.
Samah
423 posts
Joined May 2010
Samah
From queue:

[General]
Add a 1 second lead-in? That voice kicks in very abruptly.
Why are both the Hard and Insane difficulties 5 star? The editor lists Hard after Insane!

[Beginner]
Why is the volume different on this diff? 69% vs 50% on all the others.
00:32:283 (5) - Remove the extra handle on the end of this.

[Normal]
01:04:854 (4,6) - Make these not touch.

[Hard]
I hate spacing less than 1.0x >_<
00:25:083 (3) - Remove the extra handle.
00:26:797 (8) - ^
00:35:369 (10,3) - These don't look nice overlapping.
01:16:854 (1) - Remove the extra red handle.
01:17:197 (2,3,4) - Move these apart a bit? The slider is quite close to the stack.
01:17:540 (4) - Remove the extra red handle.
01:26:454 (1) - Remove the extra handle.

[Insane]
00:29:540 (6,1) - (1) overlaps (6) a bit. Move it out slightly?
00:36:397 (7) - Might want to bring the end handle on this back a bit. It's unnecessarily long.
00:37:769 (1) - Remove the extra handle.

Some really nice slider hugging in these.
grumd
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Topic Starter
grumd
SPOILER

spboxer3 wrote:

[general]


  • Settings
  1. Inconsistency in PreviewTime you need fix it :P fixed
  2. you need let kiai Times on Downbeat sorry, what? i can't understand
  3. If you didn't have guest diff~I think you need to integrat kiai time ^ the same
  4. fade out too awkward. this version of the song is the only one. i can just find 320kbps audiofile.
    If you find better quality mp3 file~I think this problem will resolve :(

[Easy]


  • mapping
  1. none~

[Normal]


  • Overlaps
    (Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap eachother, I hope you could space them farther apart.)
  1. 00:23:026 (4,6) - nope, sorry, i cant change that[/color]
  2. 00:32:969 (1,3) - done
  3. 00:50:112 (1,3) - nope :(
mapping
  1. 00:23:369 (5) - NC ((It's too long combo in Normal diff done
  2. 00:30:226 (1,2,3,4) - uneven spacing~ fixed

[Hard]


  • Settings
    loool 5.00 stars...

    Overlaps
    (Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap eachother, I hope you could space them farther apart.)
  1. 00:30:397 (2,4) - remaked
  2. 00:35:369 (10,3) - remaked a bit

mapping
  1. 00:46:683 (1,2,3) - uneven spacing [nazi] fixed

[Insane]



  • Overlaps
    (Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap eachother, I hope you could space them farther apart.)
  1. 00:29:540 (6,1) - really a bit overlaps. but I think fix is better >"< moved a bit
mapping
  1. looks fine <3

red is unrankable issue. bule is need to discuss. Black is just suggest.

Thanks, spboxer!
grumd
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Topic Starter
grumd

Samah wrote:

From queue:

[General]
Add a 1 second lead-in? That voice kicks in very abruptly. okay
Why are both the Hard and Insane difficulties 5 star? The editor lists Hard after Insane!
I don't know what is happening with that shitty difficulty! Recently it was Insane:4.89, Hard: 5.00 and I couldn't understand why! Now I changed OD and HP drain a bit in both diffs and Insane is 4.98, Hard is 4.96... But I still don't know what happened when Insane difficulty decreased to 4.89.

[Beginner]
Why is the volume different on this diff? 69% vs 50% on all the others. changed to 60% in all diffs
00:32:283 (5) - Remove the extra handle on the end of this. done

[Normal]
01:04:854 (4,6) - Make these not touch. okay

[Hard]
I hate spacing less than 1.0x >_< i've just been using distance snap ;_;
00:25:083 (3) - Remove the extra handle. k
00:26:797 (8) - ^ k
00:35:369 (10,3) - These don't look nice overlapping. k
01:16:854 (1) - Remove the extra red handle. k
01:17:197 (2,3,4) - Move these apart a bit? The slider is quite close to the stack. remaked
01:17:540 (4) - Remove the extra red handle. k
01:26:454 (1) - Remove the extra handle. okay

[Insane]
00:29:540 (6,1) - (1) overlaps (6) a bit. Move it out slightly? done in previous mod :)
00:36:397 (7) - Might want to bring the end handle on this back a bit. It's unnecessarily long. nope, that is necessary, i did it to make the end of (7) parallel to (8)
00:37:769 (1) - Remove the extra handle. k

Some really nice slider hugging in these.<3
Thanks to Samah!
grumd
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Topic Starter
grumd
Somebody, please, tell me why that difficulty is so high in Hard and so low in Insane! I totally cannot understand how difficulty is calculated!
gyt
405 posts
Here since the beginning
gyt
- Тихие хитсаунды - это, наверное, модно сейчас, но мне они не нравятся. Может поставить 70% хотя бы?
- Kiai time во всех сложностях в разных местах заканчивается, а должен в одном (01:27:826). Начало тоже должно быть на полоске, т.е. на 01:05:883.

[Beginner]
00:26:112 (2) - для новичков запутано. Можно так попробовать http://puu.sh/eg0I. Ну или один длинный слайдер с повтором.
Так нормально, в общем. Можно было, конечно, повеселей сделать: побольше кружочков, поменьше слайдеров с повторами.

[Normal]
AR6? Ну не знаю, можно и 5 сделать, по-моему.
00:25:426 (2,3) - может отделить кружок? (типа так http://puu.sh/eg9a). Тут музыка такая, что хочется раньше щёлкнуть, особенно после бодрого 1/2 в начале [00:23:369 (1,2,3,4)]. С нормальным спэйсингом будет понятнее.
00:35:712 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - сделать как здесь 00:23:369 (1,2,3,4,1)? т.е. удалить 00:36:912 (5). Ну или 00:36:740 (4) для разнообразия. Такие стримы не слишком подходят normal'у, особенно на фоне простенького easy.
00:50:797 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - тоже самое ^
01:14:454 (1,2,3) - может как-то так сделать http://puu.sh/egha?
Тут в kiai time неплохой ритм мне нравится. Только у тебя все ноты кругами идут (по часовой стрелке - попробуй прокрутить быстро песню, увидишь). Но для первой мапы сойдет, конечно :)

[Hard]
Хорошо, вообще я не люблю слайдеры типа 00:27:826 (2) и 01:22:340 (1,2,3), но тут они вроде (со второго раза) нормально играются.
HP Drain подними хотя бы до 5-ти. Star Difficulty ни на что не влияет, ранкались мапы, где хард сложнее инсэйна по нему (http://osu.ppy.sh/s/33393).
Не понятно зачем было делать такую высокую скорость слайдеров.
00:36:055 (3,6) - такие нахлесты хорошо бы избегать
01:15:483 (1,2,3,4) - в этом месте я опять хочу идти по вокалу, а не по задним битам (так например http://puu.sh/egJJ). И опять эти мини слайдеры... В общем, делай, как хочешь, это не мой тип мап, так что я здесь плохой подсказчик. Играть интересно и это главное.

[Insane]
пиздец для задроСлишком сложно, я пасс :D
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