oh wow another app map. 2nd time today.
General:disable the countdown because it doesn't fit with the song.
Ignorant:00:16:829 (4) - I think that this wave slider can look smoother. it looks ugly IMO
00:24:594 (2,1,1,1) - since this is covering the hitburst, players might not know where the slider starts. I suggest that you space these out if possible.
00:38:358 (5) - a NC here because of new lyrics.
00:46:123 (1) - same as above but it's following instrumental and a finish is there.
01:00:417 (9) - same as 00:38:358
01:11:005 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this combo doesn't fit with the song. for this 1 remove (7) and do
this staring from 01:11:005-01:12:417. this follows the vocals accurately compared to the last one. i don't see what that was following at all.
01:19:829 (9) - a NC here because it follows the instrumental.
01:22:476 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same as 01:11:005 but i'll leave it up to you.
01:25:299 (10) - same as 00:38:358
01:38:005 (1) - dat slider O_O. anyways move it down a bit because the
top isnt showing that much.
02:41:535 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - same as 01:22:476
02:48:594 (1) - this looks boring because of the number of repeats. replace the second repeat and the end for another V-shaped slider. IMO it looks fun.
02:50:005 (1,1,1,1) - how about doing a diamond jump to challenge players?
03:13:299 (1,1,1,1) - try
this? IMO going back and forth looks boring so doing this looks fun and a challenge. if your confused, i'll tell you: the second (1) is at the top right, the 3rd (1) is at the bottom right, and the fourth (4) is at the top left.
03:38:005 - the kiai time should be here instead. i find it odd that the kiai is at 03:37:299 because the instrumental is still going.
03:48:770 (8) - same as 00:38:358
03:51:594 (6,7) - switch spots to challenge players.
04:11:888 (2,1,1,1) - same as 00:24:594
This is the best I can do. GL