fixed a lot thx

would ask you on IRC but i'm too lazy to get on the client right now orz;; did bobo gabe musty or whoever else i listed accept your mod request?

edit;

-Bakari- wrote:

to MATs/BATs: nothing really unrankable/wrong

I'm afraid I shant concur with this statement. Well, I do agree that nothing really's unrankable, but this map could seriously use some more improvement before ranking, or even a bubble. I did promise 3er123 that I would recheck this after it gets 3-5 more decent mods, after all. I just find that maps should have more quality and be in pending longer rather then the mapper trying to get it ranked fast loosing the map's potential quality. In this current state, the map just plays awkward for me. Not much more then that can be said, imo. Only some long-term mappers can finish a map quickly and try to get it ranked quickly with good quality. So, for now, just kick back and relax. A map with better quality that's still in pending is better then a shitty ranked map with bad votes, eh? (( NOT SAYING THAT ANY RECENTLY RANKED MAPS ARE SHITTY, IT WAS JUST A COMPARISON STATEMENT @BATs/MATs ;~; ))

Elly-chan wrote:

would ask you on IRC but i'm too lazy to get on the client right now orz;;

did bobo gabe musty or whoever else i listed accept your mod request?

wat?

Edit: Ohok. Mod in progress.
Reedit:

Hi, here's my mod requested by Elly-chan.

[Normal]

[Hard]

Elly-chan wrote:

I'm afraid I shant concur with this statement. Well, I do agree that nothing really's unrankable, but this map could seriously use some more improvement before ranking, or even a bubble. I did promise 3er123 that I would recheck this after it gets 3-5 more decent mods, after all. I just find that maps should have more quality and be in pending longer rather then the mapper trying to get it ranked fast loosing the map's potential quality. In this current state, the map just plays awkward for me. Not much more then that can be said, imo. Only some long-term mappers can finish a map quickly and try to get it ranked quickly with good quality. So, for now, just kick back and relax. A map with better quality that's still in pending is better then a shitty ranked map with bad votes, eh? (( NOT SAYING THAT ANY RECENTLY RANKED MAPS ARE SHITTY, IT WAS JUST A COMPARISON STATEMENT @BATs/MATs ;~; ))

Sure, you're right.
Personally i think this map can be improved but i also think that it's already playable now.. I see there's a lot of much better quality maps and experienced mappers, but this map deserves a chance to get ranked. 3er123 made a really great job when I saw this map for the first time it was terrible, but now It's really became better! Much better! Also, for the first map this one looks quite good.
It's just my point of view.

I like this song and i know mapper. And i really wish to see it ranked Ranking this going to be kinda achievement for mapper.

if i'm wrong here.. tell me why. i'll be glad to know.

Haha, no worries. Everybody has their own opinion. I'd just like to see a bit more improvement (( just a tiny bit, hence me saying get 3-5 more mods )) before I personally can rebubble this.~

thx Gabe

Star'd.~ ♫

Elly-chan wrote:

did bobo gabe musty or whoever else i listed accept your mod request?

IT WAS YOU Oh so that's why he asked me :L

Okay hi.

[Normal]

The occasional 1/2 patterns seem randomly placed and inconsistant to me but okay.

01:50:430 (3) - It's highly suggested that only 1 slider repeat it used on single sliders in Easies and Normals. It's known that many new players tend to let go after hitting the first slider repeat.

Well that's all that really seems to bother me about Normal.

[Hard]

Suggest lowering the AR to 7. 8 just seems a bit too fast for a song of this speed, in my opinion.

00:04:110 (5,6) - The spacing here doesn't seem right to me, how about swapping these two notes around so that the spacing is more consistant?
00:26:670 (6) - How about placing it within the curve of (5) to compliment the slider shape like you have with 00:24:270 (2,3) -
00:35:310 (1,2) - I really disapprove of these sorts of patterns, I find them highly frustrating to play. I suggest just replacing this with a simple triplet like you have at 00:43:950 (4,5,6) -
00:52:350 (1) - I suggest dragging the slider point slightly higher to avoid giving the slider a hook-like shape.
01:19:950 (2,3) - These hit objects look a little awkward as they overlap (4), I suggest stacking them.
01:39:630 (6,7,8,9) - Like the similar pattern to this I pointed out before, these sorts of streams are frustrating to play. I suggest substituting (6) for 2 hitcircles.
01:48:750 (2,3) - Same as 00:35:310 (1,2)
01:58:830 (5) - I suggest spacing this out further so that it isn't so close to (3)
02:06:990 (7,1) - Same as 00:35:310 (1,2)
02:46:830 (2,3) - ^
03:06:750 (1) - Perhaps you should map through this normally and end with a slider similar to the slider placed at the end of [Normal] for consistancy.

Hm. Yeah I agree with Ygokid, you really should try improving your map as much as you can before ranking it.
Good luck!

Normal…I just want Finish Sound on 01:51:870. ==

tan14007 wrote:

Normal…I just want Finish Sound on 01:51:870. ==

Yup.

[normal]
sliders are bad. putting in 3 extra nodes in the middle is a good thing to make sliders look better, and you can use ctrl h/v/r to check for symmetry, then ctrl shift r to rotate it into the perfect position.
00:07:710 (6) - when you put a slider on beat 4 and have it roll over to beat 1 of the next measure, you can't put the new combo where it should naturally land. This makes your map very strange in terms of new combos. It's not much of a problem, just bad practice that people with little musical knowledge tend to make. It's more natural to split 6 up and put a new combo on the long white tick. This is not always true, but I think consistency in beatmaps is a virtue.
00:10:590 (3,4) - move these so they are like you did here: 00:07:230 (5,6) -
00:13:950 (1,3,1) - remove new combos, put it on 3 instead
00:27:870 (1,2,3) - looks better if these aren't in a straight line since (3) is curved
00:57:150 (2,3) - reverse this. Note how the slider is now on the "ya ha a" lyric part.
01:01:950 (1,2,3) - the song is pretty much quarter notes. That's fine for a normal, but what about putting in some syncopation to match the lyrics here? You'll lose your clap pattern, but that's not necessarily a bad thing here.
01:17:550 (2) - as before
01:20:430 (3) - this one is fine: the slider is straight
01:50:430 (3) - unless you're doing some crazy CTB stuff, the beginning of a kiai should be a new combo or you're just plain doing it wrong.
02:39:870 (5) - ^
02:48:030 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this is where design comes in. You can easily make these fit a hexagonal shape and stack when necessary.

[hard]
00:03:390 (4) - overmapped. There's nothing on the start of this beat and it sounds horrible. It doesn't fit the song because there's nothing actually IN the song there. shorten the slider and move it 1/2 later
00:11:070 (6) - in general, 2x+ repeats are bad. they are almost always unintuitive, much harder to read than normal since the last repeat isn't visible until you've hit the slider. Plus, you can separate them into 2 sliders, put the new combo in the proper place, and it will play much better.
00:12:870 (2) - when you're looking for spots to put in 1/4th notes, please listen to the song. There's really nothing significant here, so you shouldn't put anything here. Otherwise you're not really mapping the song. 00:13:830 - here's a perfect place for a triple.
00:16:230 - and here...
00:16:710 (5) - nothing here...
00:18:990 (2) - shorten and move 1/4 later
00:36:510 (6) - 2x repeat again...
00:50:670 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/CH0B
01:20:190 (4) - extend 1/4.
well hopefully you get the picture. The song is really bland. There's no syncopation. The way you get syncopation is to just follow the music/lyrics. It's really simple. Please continue checking the map for the same sorts of things I pointed out. I didn't point them all out because 1) I'm lazy and 2) I want you to learn and want to learn how to improve yourself.

Gabe wrote:

Star'd.~ ♫

♪♫♩♬♫~♥

ziin wrote:

[normal]
sliders are bad. putting in 3 extra nodes in the middle is a good thing to make sliders look better, and you can use ctrl h/v/r to check for symmetry, then ctrl shift r to rotate it into the perfect position.
00:07:710 (6) - when you put a slider on beat 4 and have it roll over to beat 1 of the next measure, you can't put the new combo where it should naturally land. This makes your map very strange in terms of new combos. It's not much of a problem, just bad practice that people with little musical knowledge tend to make. It's more natural to split 6 up and put a new combo on the long white tick. This is not always true, but I think consistency in beatmaps is a virtue.
00:10:590 (3,4) - move these so they are like you did here: 00:07:230 (5,6) -
00:13:950 (1,3,1) - remove new combos, put it on 3 instead
00:27:870 (1,2,3) - looks better if these aren't in a straight line since (3) is curved
00:57:150 (2,3) - reverse this. Note how the slider is now on the "ya ha a" lyric part.
01:01:950 (1,2,3) - the song is pretty much quarter notes. That's fine for a normal, but what about putting in some syncopation to match the lyrics here? You'll lose your clap pattern, but that's not necessarily a bad thing here.
01:17:550 (2) - as before
01:20:430 (3) - this one is fine: the slider is straight
01:50:430 (3) - unless you're doing some crazy CTB stuff, the beginning of a kiai should be a new combo or you're just plain doing it wrong.
02:39:870 (5) - ^
02:48:030 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this is where design comes in. You can easily make these fit a hexagonal shape and stack when necessary.

[hard]
00:03:390 (4) - overmapped. There's nothing on the start of this beat and it sounds horrible. It doesn't fit the song because there's nothing actually IN the song there. shorten the slider and move it 1/2 later
00:11:070 (6) - in general, 2x+ repeats are bad. they are almost always unintuitive, much harder to read than normal since the last repeat isn't visible until you've hit the slider. Plus, you can separate them into 2 sliders, put the new combo in the proper place, and it will play much better.
00:12:870 (2) - when you're looking for spots to put in 1/4th notes, please listen to the song. There's really nothing significant here, so you shouldn't put anything here. Otherwise you're not really mapping the song. 00:13:830 - here's a perfect place for a triple.
00:16:230 - and here...
00:16:710 (5) - nothing here...
00:18:990 (2) - shorten and move 1/4 later
00:36:510 (6) - 2x repeat again...
00:50:670 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/CH0B
01:20:190 (4) - extend 1/4.
well hopefully you get the picture. The song is really bland. There's no syncopation. The way you get syncopation is to just follow the music/lyrics. It's really simple. Please continue checking the map for the same sorts of things I pointed out. I didn't point them all out because 1) I'm lazy and 2) I want you to learn and want to learn how to improve yourself.

Sorry I dn't understand half of your mod. And this half not changed. Sorry.

I don't clearly what happened to the thread before. just a check as per your request. You can have a communication with elly later.


[Normal]

00:08:670 (2) - the spacing. move it a bit down
00:10:590 (4) - ^ keep stack
00:14:430 (6) - missing claps?
00:15:870 (1) - ^
01:07:710 (1,2) - I think sliderticks aren't necessary where you use SC1. try to silence them all if you agree
03:06:750 (1) - whistle doesnt fit imo
consider using silent sldierslide. feels noisy somewhere

[Hard]

00:07:230 (1) - could be blanket better
00:24:510 (3) - add 1 more node?
00:25:950 (7) - ^
00:46:110 (3) - why a NC here?
00:52:350 (1) - stack
01:34:350 (7) - blanket
01:40:110 (9) - spacing issue

hitsound is not bad. just please be more careful on arrangement/spacing. Remark of a map is based on every aspects of it. So if you have many tiny spacing/pattern issues they also descline map's score.

31's taiko seems ok to me.

02:39:870 (1) - here needs a NC. cause the note isn't in same measure with the spinner

Hard:

00:53:790 (5) - Clap on the start of this slider.
00:54:750 (2) - Stack on the end of the (5).
01:08:190 (2) - 1/4 shorter.
02:48:510 (6) - Clap on the repeat.

yeup

okay, let's try again after so long time.

omg, that map!

Gabe wrote:

omg, that map!

Wazzup ?

oh.. this map

You're missing Title and Artist unicode for Hard diff, or remove the one in Normal, because it's English too.
It was suposed to be there for the romanised title anyways.
If you would like to fix it right away, I'll be rebubble. If not, then before you're getting this ranked, please fix it. Good luck~

yahsu yahsu kalistera!!!!
busy rait nau...
gonna edit it later
thank youuuuu

Updated! I did my thing! Angelea got skillz! 3rd bubble! (or 4 xD)

Rebubbled~

orioncomet wrote:

Rebubbled~

Much Obliged! But how about rank

Why is creator 3er123

Your nickname is 716 Girl now

ah... Are you going to change to use nickname for an ago?

I highly suggest you to change the mapper's name to 716 Girl on the .osu of both difficulty.
Since your old username was 3er123 and you didn't ranked anything with that name, don't add it to the tags.

After you are done, call orion back.

Gabe wrote:

I highly suggest you to change the mapper's name to 716 Girl on the .osu of both difficulty.
Since your old username was 3er123 and you didn't ranked anything with that name, don't add it to the tags.

After you are done, call orion back.

She did, just with other account .

Bass wrote:

Gabe wrote:

I highly suggest you to change the mapper's name to 716 Girl on the .osu of both difficulty.
Since your old username was 3er123 and you didn't ranked anything with that name, don't add it to the tags.

After you are done, call orion back.

She did, just with other account .

Bass, no. She did a name change.
I modded this map with her old username.

wow
are you the 1st serious mapper of your country?

grats for bubble

Ranked!

i'm crying on the inside ;w;

nice song

gratz owo

Gratz on first ranked, good song :3 !

Gabe wrote:

I highly suggest you to change the mapper's name to 716 Girl on the .osu of both difficulty.
Since your old username was 3er123 and you didn't ranked anything with that name, don't add it to the tags.

uh

Grats finally~~~

K-POP


Nice Song nice map I love it :33 omedeto~ >w<

сириесли? долгострой века

...this map is highly overrated