hello...
my map is in pending now, plz mod~ http://osu.ppy.sh/s/45422
General: this map is quite good for a bubble,especially the hit sound work, but somehow i think could do more variety in arrangement (maybe you like straight lines?)
cause something like
i would do like
well, of course this is not problem, just mapping style and suggestion, feel free to ignore it
normal
00:28:497 (1) - finish?
01:08:494 (3) - head also finish?
01:20:449 (5) - feel like the 2nd repeat doesnt fit the song much
01:37:426 (1) - these places between 2 timing section, it is known as "slider not snapped" by some useless AI program, MATs may point out it too, maybe just put some notes and thats all?
Hard
00:28:714 (2) - this , maybe bring closer to previous notes
00:34:366 (2) - make the head stack at previous note 5
00:38:713 (7) - why dont make the head stack at previous slider's tail?
00:43:061 (4) - the rhythm suddenly stop when it came to this long slider, maybe shorten and map something?
01:02:842 (5) - ctrl+R this
01:15:884 (2) - because of the comboburst before, suggest you to stack at the note 4 there
01:38:185 (4) - this note is off timed, maybe offset 98270
well, good luck....
my map is in pending now, plz mod~ http://osu.ppy.sh/s/45422
General: this map is quite good for a bubble,especially the hit sound work, but somehow i think could do more variety in arrangement (maybe you like straight lines?)
cause something like
i would do like
well, of course this is not problem, just mapping style and suggestion, feel free to ignore it
normal
00:28:497 (1) - finish?
01:08:494 (3) - head also finish?
01:20:449 (5) - feel like the 2nd repeat doesnt fit the song much
01:37:426 (1) - these places between 2 timing section, it is known as "slider not snapped" by some useless AI program, MATs may point out it too, maybe just put some notes and thats all?
Hard
00:28:714 (2) - this , maybe bring closer to previous notes
00:34:366 (2) - make the head stack at previous note 5
00:38:713 (7) - why dont make the head stack at previous slider's tail?
00:43:061 (4) - the rhythm suddenly stop when it came to this long slider, maybe shorten and map something?
01:02:842 (5) - ctrl+R this
01:15:884 (2) - because of the comboburst before, suggest you to stack at the note 4 there
01:38:185 (4) - this note is off timed, maybe offset 98270
well, good luck....