1. 00:21:187 (1) - Add a Finish in the begin of the Slider
2. 02:21:297 (KT) - I think this Kiai Line looks better in 02:21:187

1. 00:21:187 (1) - Add a Finish in the begin of the Slider
2. 01:05:745 (4) - Put this note Symmetrical with the Slider 01:04:863 (3) [Ctrl+h - change to circle]
3. 01:07:510 (2) - ^ with 01:06:187 (5)
4. 02:21:297 (KT) - I think this Kiai Line looks better in 02:21:187

1. 01:24:716 (1) - d'oh . Move the 4 Slider Point to the left. the penultimate.. [Grid lvl: 4]
2. 02:21:297 (KT) - I think this Kiai Line looks better in 02:21:187
3. 02:23:392 (1,2,3,1) - Bad rhomboid or.. whatever.. For Avoid problems with the Symmetry of the circle 02:24:716 (1) Try make This
   

   02:23:833 (2) = x:152|y:272 [Grid lvl: 3] / 02:24:275 (3) = x:48|y:176 [Grid lvl: 3]

4. 02:39:275 (2) - wut.. move this note to x:256|y:164 [Grid lvl: 4]
5. 02:43:466 (4) - So close from the last note.. move this to the same place of the slider 02:41:481 (4) and move the note 02:45:010 (3) for remake the Symmetry. Maybe the same with 02:45:892 (1,2)

1. HP+1
2. 00:21:186 (1) - Put a Finish.
   PD: I don't know why this note are 1ms less than the others diffs.. and not are Unsnapped And have the same BPM.
3. 02:19:201 (7) - Move this note 1 grid to the left [Grid lvl: 3]
4. 02:19:422 (8) - Make this note Symmetrical with the end of the slider 02:18:319 (4)
5. 02:19:642 (1,2,3) - Move this triplet 1 grid down [Grid lvl: 3]
6. 02:21:297 (KT) - I think this Kiai Line looks better in 02:21:187

Niva wrote:

[General]

-> Because you're using a custom skin (especially circles), you need to enforce a sliderborder in the .osu file. (well, at least that's what I heard around though, even if it's not true I still highly recommend you to use a light-pink or light-yellow sliderborder color (: ) ~ done
-> You don't need selection-selectoptions-over.png in the map's skinset, it won't affect the map (: ~ deleted
-> Hmm, try to find a 1024*768 BG instead (or just resize your current one)? Well... Current one is fine to use though, but those black parts on top and bottom (because it's not 768px in height) doesn't look good for no-video players >< ~ ok
-> Also, (not really sure about this), move "My Little Pony" to source? (well, idk much about My Little Pony though :3) ~ It's not directly from the show so like other remixes, tags are fine

[Easy]

-> Whistle here sounds great every 1/1 before your custom clap! You did this hitsound pattern on [Insane], so why not here too :3 ~ ok

1. 00:20:304 (4,1) - I personally dislike how (1) almost touches (4). Maybe move (1) one grid up? It doesn't break the flow here, and it's not hard to fix (: ~ ok
2. 00:36:407 (2,3) - (optional) Move (2) three grids right and one grid up, and move (3) two grids right and a grid up? As you can see from picture below, (1)'s start, (2)'s end, and (3) will form a neat straight line ~ don't see a necessity, so no
3. 01:02:216 (3) - (optional) If you want, you can create a slider wave here - it looks less random along with (2)'s placement and still flows well ~ ok why not
4. 01:15:451 (2,3,4) - (optional) It would be nice to give more angle between these three (use 01:18:539 (2) as your hint - it looks really well when (4) is touching this slider's border) ~ ok
5. 01:26:039 (2) - (optional) You could continue the encircle here, if you want to (: ~ no
6. 01:52:951 (1) - I think it's better to create something like you did on 01:56:481 (3,4), because a whistle is supposed to be on the slider tick (: ~ you're right
7. 02:05:084 (x) - Actually there's a distinctive sound here, so either start the spinner from here OR add a note here? ~ slider start changed
8. 02:07:951 (1,2,3,4) - I think you're too forcing symmetry here, considering this is after a spinner, arrange in an arc instead to get more flow? ~ maybe, but I think it's ok as it is.
9. 02:11:039 (6) - Weird to having this circle isn't symmetrical with (4), considering you keep symmetry a lot in this map. Fine to play, though ~ fixed
10. 02:13:245 (3) - (optional) Because (1) is a straight slider, curve this slider like below? It has linearity in there, but keeps the bezier flow also ~ looks good, but it's also fine as it is now.
11. 02:17:216 (3) - Actually you can make this blanketing (4) with (4) in x:96 y:192 and (5) just right beside it. Plays better before spinner, imo :3 ~ I think I don't get it: http://puu.sh/inuS ? Left it as it was... think it's ok.
12. 02:27:363 (6) - Make this as a 2/1 slider? (I won't miss a finish sound that is supposed to be on 02:28:245 :3) ~ ok
13. 02:43:687 (2) - I understand what you're going to create here - however, one grid right so the distance from (1,2) to 02:41:922 (4) equal? ~ ok

[Normal]

1. 00:21:187 (1) - Hmm, I prefer finish on slider's start here, to emphasize there's a new part from the song ~ sorry but no
2. 00:36:407 (2) - To make it neater - if you can stack this to (6), why not (: - in this case you'll only need to move (1)'s end a grid left and adjust (2), though ~ done
3. 01:00:010 (1,2) - Move (1) one grid down and (2) one grid left, so (5,6,2) will form a neater line here ~ fixed
4. 01:02:216 (4,5,6,1) - Again, imo you're too forcing symmetry on (1). If you can't make a good trapezoid here (because of the notes' placement), just create a diamond here (: ~ hmhm modified this a bit, trapezoid style i guess
5. 01:07:510 (2) - I highly[u] recommend to create a repeating 1/2 slider also, as you did on 01:03:981 (2) to keep the rhythm consistent ~ done
6. 01:08:392 (3) - (optional) I think it's better to place it on the bottom (x:256 y:360) so (6) will somewhat be encircled by a hexagon pattern ~ can't do that because of your highly recommended repeat-slider
7. 01:14:128 (1) - The stack here is playable, but it kills the flow imo (because it's 1/1 apart with the previous slider)... I'd rather arrange like this to keep flow, plus (1,2,3) will form a neat straight line also ~ I don't think it kills the flow, cause a new part is going to start, you know when to hit it, it's going to a different direction so this antijump-stack works imo...
8. 01:25:598 (3) - (optional) You can curve this downward if you want to, to give more flow between this slider and (4) xD ~hmno o.o
9. 01:31:775 (1,4) - Not perfectly stacked. Barely noticeable, though ~ kay
10. 01:38:503 - [u]Delete this inherit section. It's slider end anyway, you don't need a new inherit 1/4 before a slider's end :3 ~ right
11. 02:05:304 (1) - Same as [Easy] diff - move 1/2 earlier, or add note 1/2 before this spinner ~ done
12. 02:13:245 (5) - It's actually fine, but I personally dislike how there will be a 3/2 silence between this slider and next one. Try this rhythm instead? ~ i see, but I think as a sort of variety this works out fine
13. 02:18:098 (1) - (optional) I'd rather curve it rightward, because sudden linear slider doesn't fit with your previous slider's curve imo ~ really? think it fits just fine with the (2,3)
14. 02:43:245 (2,3,4,5) - I think, rather than stacking (3) to (8), it's better to make this four encircle (8) instead ~ I had another idea

[Insane]

1. 00:23:392 (1) - Is it intentional to make this slider not in the center? (you can easily move this one grid left and up, though) ~ centered
2. 00:36:186 (4,5) - This jump is quite shocking for me, although it plays fine. idk... maybe at least add new combo on (4)? (imo the best solution is to add new combo and move (4) few grids up also) ~ ok
3. 00:42:363 (4) - (optional) Make this circle got encircled by (3)? Would play cuter before the break imo :3 ~ no
4. 00:57:473 (5) - Shorten this slider by 1/4, and add a note where this slider originally ends? (the synth goes on like this) ~ yes but doesn't has to
5. 01:02:657 (5,6,7,8,9) - Uh... I personally dislike how circles will play on this jump. Use sliders like this instead? (what's more, (6)'s end will be stacked to (1) this way (: ) ~ yes but I like it
6. 01:09:495 (4) - Missing whistle here? (previous 01:07:730 (4,5) uses double whistle also, so why not here :3) ~ While I checked this, I came across other hitsound mistakes I did. I didn't correct them in the way you wanted it but I think they are fine now, so that the hitsound pattern changes every measure
7. 01:11:039 (3) - Minor stuff, but move two grids down if you're after symmetry here ~ thx
8. 01:18:098 (3,4) - This spacing could be tricky, because (2,3) and (3,4) isn't equally apart in the timeline, but equally spaced. I suggest to move 01:17:877 (2) upward, though ~ kay
9. 01:30:672 (x) - I wonder, why the rhythm stops here? Your 1/2 chain is very comfortable to hear here, don't let it stop ~ because I like it, don't see a problem whith this really
10. 01:38:392 (5) - Finish sound, if any, should belong on the downbeat here. So, remove the finish on slider's end, and add a note 1/4 after with finish if you want to ~ Yea ok
11. 01:54:275 (3) - I highly recommend to use more whistle to spice up this part - either on slider's start (like ztrot did in his GD) or slider's end. This suggestion applies for next parts like this - just make sure they're consistent (: ~ ok but they're not consistent, they change every measure like the rest of this part, I really like that idea ^^
12. 02:11:260 (1,2) - (optional) Your next (7,8) is curved, so why not curve these two also :3 ~ Cause why not bring in a bit of variety, I think it looks good
13. 02:22:730 (1,2,3,4) - I think you're too forcing (1) to be placed in the center here, resulting (2,3,4) is placed patternless. Make an arc like this instead? ~ Didn't feel like it has to be a pattern here ^^
14. 02:43:466 (7,1) - Minor stuff, it's not perfectly stacked (barely noticeable though) ~ kay

DaxMasterix wrote:

little mod because i like ponies

General:

1. Where is the Taiko.. ~ Not every map needs a taiko.
2. AIBat Wrote: Inconsistency in Kiai Times ~ I can't spot any inconsistency, can you tell me where they are in your opinion?

Easy

1. 00:21:187 (1) - Add a Finish in the begin of the Slider ~ Changed this part
2. 02:21:297 (KT) - I think this Kiai Line looks better in 02:21:187 ~ Yep

Normal

1. 00:21:187 (1) - Add a Finish in the begin of the Slider ~ Changed this part
2. 01:05:745 (4) - Put this note Symmetrical with the Slider 01:04:863 (3) [Ctrl+h - change to circle] ~ no but changed that part
3. 01:07:510 (2) - ^ with 01:06:187 (5)
4. 02:21:297 (KT) - I think this Kiai Line looks better in 02:21:187 ~ sure

Insane

1. HP+1 ~ ok
2. 00:21:186 (1) - Put a Finish. ~ changed that part
   PD: I don't know why this note are 1ms less than the others diffs.. and not are Unsnapped And have the same BPM. ~ Mathwonder
3. 02:19:201 (7) - Move this note 1 grid to the left [Grid lvl: 3] ~ yep
4. 02:19:422 (8) - Make this note Symmetrical with the end of the slider 02:18:319 (4) ~ no but made something else
5. 02:19:642 (1,2,3) - Move this triplet 1 grid down [Grid lvl: 3] ~ ok
6. 02:21:297 (KT) - I think this Kiai Line looks better in 02:21:187 ~ jep

NotShinta wrote:

General:
-- If you ask a BAT nicely, I'm sure they could make the artist and title appear at 00:42:804 rather than at the start. This is how I always imagined it and I think it could look awesome. Truly. ~ Moved and colorized it :3
-- Was there not a video to be found here? It was a good one. It was a nice little package with the song and I would like to hear a good reason why it went. Or maybe my imagination has gone away. ~ It's back

Skin:
-- Your scorebar seems to be a bit messed up as it goes into Red; plus, there are unnecessary files in the folder concerning the scorebar. It looked like a nice idea though. Shame it obviously didn't work. ~ It wasn't finished anyway, now it should be

Insane:
- 00:36:186 (4,5,6,7) - This jump feels a bit unnecessary, as the music doesn't just suddenly intensify like the spacing, and it doesn't happen again. ~ I sorta like it, doesn't feel too bad either.
- 01:56:039 (5,6) - These feel a bit unnatural, and only seem to exist to establish fake difficulty apart from the others. ~ Hm I changed that part a little (spacing-wise), hope it's better now

Normal:
- 01:14:128 (1) - I would avoid stacking on slider ends, as they can go into confusing territory. I think you could respace this well. ~ ok
- 01:37:951 (6) - New combo, maybe? ~ I see no reason

Easy:
-- Tick rate 2 should perhaps be used to hold consistency with the other difficulties. ~ I think it's too spammy for an easy http://puu.sh/m4QK
- 00:14:128 (1) - Perhaps a spinner to start off an Easy could be confusing to the intended player audience. Maybe replace it with some long sexy slider? ~ I don't see a reason for it, I let some newbies try the diff and they don't seem to be surprised about the beginning spinner. Btw they also hadn't much trouble getting to the next note.
- 00:28:245 (1) - Similar thing here, but in the middle of a section in the difficulty. (and 01:08:834 (1) comes too soon after the previous note I'm sorry) ~ How can 1/1 be too soon? When the slider end, the spinner barely starts to get visible. Though I realise the spinners can be a problem, I'll ask some others about this. I don't want to change them, really.

jericho2442 wrote:

fixed a combo in easy on irc, and 2 patterns spacing totally changed in insane

ztrot's Wonders
01:54:716 (4,1,2,3) - spacing here, it feels rather broken, (4,1) and (2,3) same spacing but totally different timing, would really advise to give this a more visible difference I like this
02:16:775 (4,5,6) - naaaazi xD just move (5) down a lil to make it look better ;pyou can fix this tho moonshade.

MoonShade wrote:

MoonShade wrote:

Why do I feel like putting this under every ranked map I will do from now on?

ThePal wrote:

God, I was mapping this... Seems like I have to scrap that project then.
http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?st89n9qznct5zmv

Blazevoir wrote:

Got one for Pinkie for Smile, Smile, Smile?

ThePal wrote:

God, I was mapping this... Seems like I have to scrap that project then.
http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?st89n9qznct5zmv

Blazevoir wrote:

You can still map your own. It's not like there isn't more than one map of a song in the current Ranked/Approved beatmaps.

MoonShade wrote:

Like Blazevoir said, you can do your own thing if you like