This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年5月17日 at 9:08:22

Artist: angela
Title: Aoi Haru (TV Size)
Source: Seitokai Yakuindomo
Tags: Byakugan249
BPM: 179
Filesize: 2762kb
Play Time: 01:23
Difficulties Available:

1. 249's Easy (2.39 stars, 86 notes)
2. Hard (4.96 stars, 204 notes)
3. Insane (5 stars, 280 notes)
4. Normal (3.89 stars, 112 notes)

Download: angela - Aoi Haru (TV Size)
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Byakugan249 's diff added~ thank you!

hi
from my queue

General
Need a "Easy". your "Normal" is high star rate. please make under 3 star late "Easy".

Normal
00:15:247 (1,2,3) - 2grid left(grid level4). (3)stack on 00:13:236 (3) end is prittey
00:47:426 (1) - too long. maybe start at 00:50:107. and before add note is better?
00:52:789 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/ccsD like this
01:07:202 - add note
01:09:884 - ^
01:12:565 - ^
01:15:917 (1) - NC and 01:17:258 (4) - remove NC

Hard
OD and HP +1?

00:20:107 (2) - 1grid up
00:40:889 (4) - delete?
00:47:426 (1) - same as Normal
01:00:163 (7) - too many revers . Im not like this;; how about this? http://puu.sh/cctO
01:20:945 (1) - 1grid up?
01:23:627 (1) -start at 01:26:308 is better. It unites with the words ""Riii" of vocal."


Insane
OD+2?

00:23:124 (4) - i would not anti-space this.
00:37:873 (3) - http://puu.sh/ccxg try this?
00:47:426 (1) - same as Normal
00:58:990 (2) - use x1.0
01:23:627 (1) - same as Hard

That's all good luck

u said u needed an easy. do u mind if i can make 1 for u?

Byakugan249 wrote:

u said u needed an easy. do u mind if i can make 1 for u?

Of course not, please do it~
I will wait for your diff

done took me an hour to do

Download: Angela - Aoi Haru (TV Size) (Neptunus) [249's Easy].osu

Sorry about double posting. i want to keep my guest diff post and my mod post separate so that it wont be confusing for me

General:
resnap all kiai parts. theyre a bit off


Normal:
00:09:878(1) - add a whistle to continue the whistle pattern
01:12:895(1) - make it like This?
01:13:230(3,1) - remove the whistle at the end for (3) but add it on (1) which is the next note

Hard:
00:05:856(1) - stack this on (4)
00:51:777(1,2) - hidden repeat slider

Insane:
00:24:291(9) - i think ur missing a clap at the beginning?
00:30:660(10) - ^
00:45:409(3) - i dont see a reason why a clap is here. i suggest that u remove it

this is the best i can do. from time to time since i made a guest diff i may giv random stars to this map but right now im gonna keep it for now. GL

Byakugan249 wrote:

Sorry about double posting. i want to keep my guest diff post and my mod post separate so that it wont be confusing for me

General:
resnap all kiai parts. theyre a bit off


Normal:
00:09:878(1) - add a whistle to continue the whistle pattern
01:12:895(1) - make it like This?
01:13:230(3,1) - remove the whistle at the end for (3) but add it on (1) which is the next note

Hard:
00:05:856(1) - stack this on (4)
00:51:777(1,2) - hidden repeat slider

Insane:
00:24:291(9) - i think ur missing a clap at the beginning?
00:30:660(10) - ^
00:45:409(3) - i dont see a reason why a clap is here. i suggest that u remove it

this is the best i can do. from time to time since i made a guest diff i may giv random stars to this map but right now im gonna keep it for now. GL

thanks~249~ I will do it soon~

占位 mod预订


EDIT:

General

kiai感觉加的不太顺 两段加起来太长了而且觉得第一段结束的不太对 结束也该在00:50:101吧
其实不如试试第一段别加 改成00:28:649 (1) - 闪一下 第二段不变

Mucsic lead-in不用开

249's Easy

这微妙的感觉 虽说节奏有的有点乱排版也不是特别漂亮但就没有可mod的地方..

Normal

00:13:230 (3) - 这结尾的whistle改到后面的1上比较好
00:23:286 (3) - 开头whistle可以去 有body-whistle做转折没事
00:27:978 (3) - clap
00:47:420 (1) - spinner感觉太长了 中间隔了一个00:50:101感觉不顺 不如00:50:101结束后做一个break

Hard

00:18:425 (4) - 间距 连带后面的绿1也要改

Insane

Insane了AR+到9吧

00:16:163 (2) - 删？
00:21:274 (3) - clap移到结尾
00:25:213 (2) - 加？
00:25:381 (3) - 删？
01:22:615 (1) - 折返箭头很难看见

Hi~
sorry my poor English

[General]
write to the tag Byakugan249

[249's Easy]
00:08:537 (3) - Put in x:248 y:296
00:13:230 (2) - Put in x:240 y:304

[Normal]
00:28:649 (1) - Add Finish the head
01:04:850 (1) - ^

[Hard]
00:28:649 (1) - Add Finish the head
01:04:850 (1) - ^

[Insane]
00:27:978 (4) - Put in x:384 y:184
00:28:062-Add Circle
00:28:649 (1) - Add Finish the head
00:37:867 (3) - Put in x:216 y:256
01:04:850 (1) - Add Finish the head

Good map!
There's nothing wrong with a specially

amnb9280 wrote:

Hi~
sorry my poor English


[249's Easy]
00:08:537 (3) - Put in x:248 y:29 wait wat no. itd ruin the spacing
00:13:230 (2) - Put in x:240 y:304 ^


Good map!
There's nothing wrong with a specially

sorry no changes made but ty for the mod

EDIT: i fixed up a few spacing errors for my diff

Download: Angela - Aoi Haru (TV Size) (Neptunus) [249's Easy].osu

Updated~

From my mod queue!

249's Easy
00:44:738 (1) - The answers probably yes, but shaped like this on purpose?
01:08:872 (2) - Shape again ._.


Normal
00:06:526 (2,3) - Unrankable stacking issue: Change to grid level 4, and move (3) down one, and right one grid.
00:11:889 (2,3) - ^ Same, move (3) down one, and right one grid.

Insane
01:16:414 (2,3) - Stacking issue again. Level 4, (3) down one, right one.
01:19:431 (5) - Make this slider straight. It looks odd being slightly curved, but not actually curved.

Well, I didn't find much, but hopefully some of it's useful to you.

Lucy-Kaede wrote:

From my mod queue!

249's Easy
00:44:738 (1) - The answers probably yes, but shaped like this on purpose?

Better?

184,112,44738,6,0,B|80:112|80:256|192:256,1,240

01:08:872 (2) - Shape again ._.

D:

168,264,68872,2,0,B|80:264|56:192|88:120|168:120,1,240

Well, I didn't find much, but hopefully some of it's useful to you.

Fixed all. Ty for the mod

Download: Angela - Aoi Haru (TV Size) (Neptunus) [249's Easy].osu

Byakugan249 wrote:

Lucy-Kaede wrote:

From my mod queue!

249's Easy
00:44:738 (1) - The answers probably yes, but shaped like this on purpose?

Better?

184,112,44738,6,0,B|80:112|80:256|192:256,1,240

01:08:872 (2) - Shape again ._.

D:

168,264,68872,2,0,B|80:264|56:192|88:120|168:120,1,240

Well, I didn't find much, but hopefully some of it's useful to you.

Fixed all. Ty for the mod

updated~

@ Byakugan249: I changed all the first kiai time periods in all diffs, please see your diff, and let me know if you do not agree on that please

Neptunus wrote:

@ Byakugan249: I changed all the first kiai time periods in all diffs, please see your diff, and let me know if you do not agree on that please

no no its fine. i dont see any difference in my POV(point of view)

Hi~

[Easy]
00:26:470 (2,3) - I guess new players will click (3) 1/2 beat earlier, because (2) starts on a red line. Add a note at 00:27:140?
01:02:671 (2,3) - Same as 00:26:470 (2,3).

[Normal]
00:24:626 (5) - 加一个repeat?
01:01:833 - 和前面一样 感觉要加一个note

[Hard]
179bpm的hard用AR6打真的很痛苦...
用AR7吧
00:33:006 (5) - 这和(4)结尾的空间不好看 重新拉一下?

[Insane]
00:21:945 (1,2,3,4) - 好大的一个trap... (3)和(4)之间不是1/2而是1/1呀
00:35:185 (4,5,8) - 小note的间距不齐是最容易看出来的了...
01:02:168 (1,3) - +whistle?
01:03:509 (2,3) - ^

祝好运~

249's Easy

1. Consider AR +1
2. This difficulty could use more whistles like the other difficulties.
3. Spacing in this difficulty is extremely small, which clusters the objects together and is hard to read. Instead of 0.6x, try using 0.8x.
4. 00:50:772 (1,2) - This comes very soon after the spinner, which might make beginner players mess up. Consider removing these two objects and placing down a break like on Normal.
5. 00:37:029 (1) - This loop looks a little strange. You should try and make it look a bit better. Something symmetrical like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/223188 would be nice.
   
   Nothing really wrong here, but the spacing feels too clumped together.

Normal

1. OD +1
2. Spacing in this difficulty is extremely small, which clusters the objects together and is hard to read. Instead of 0.6x, try using 0.8x.
   
   Again, the objects feel too clumped together.

Hard

1. HP +1
2. OD +1
3. AR +1
4. 00:10:716 - Add circle?
5. 01:06:861 - This repeat is BARELY visible. I highly recommend making it more visible.
6. 01:09:543 - Same with this one, it's really hard to see.
   
   I like this diff

Insane

1. OD +1 or +2
2. Raise the Circle Size please
3. 00:22:615 (3,4) - The spacing between these two objects is very misleading - I messed up many times here when testing this.
4. 01:12:140 - Add something here, it would fit with the drumroll. If you do add something, you'll need to rearrange the objects to fix spacing.
   
   Not a bad difficulty. I'd like it if the circles were bigger, and some of the spacing is a little strange and inconsistent.

Mapset is very nice! I'm not 100% sure about the timing though, some parts seem late and others seem a little early.

Charles445 wrote:

249's Easy

1. Consider AR +1 no i think that the AR is fine unless some1 else suggests it.
2. This difficulty could use more whistles like the other difficulties. ill think about the whistles
3. Spacing in this difficulty is extremely small, which clusters the objects together and is hard to read. Instead of 0.6x, try using 0.8x. Fixed.
4. 00:50:772 (1,2) - This comes very soon after the spinner, which might make beginner players mess up. Consider removing these two objects and placing down a break like on Normal. alright fixed.
5. 00:37:029 (1) - This loop looks a little strange. You should try and make it look a bit better. Something symmetrical like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/223188 would be nice. umm can u giv me the co-ordinates for each point. when i look at it it looks the same.
   
   Nothing really wrong here, but the spacing feels too clumped together.

Shiki wrote:

:) Hi~

[Easy]
00:26:470 (2,3) - I guess new players will click (3) 1/2 beat earlier, because (2) starts on a red line. Add a note at 00:27:140? no following instrumental
01:02:671 (2,3) - Same as 00:26:470 (2,3). ^

ty for the mods

Download: Angela - Aoi Haru (TV Size) (Neptunus) [249's Easy].osu

updated~

[General]

1. Disable letterbox during breaks, isn't necessary with this bg I think.

[Easy]

1. This difficulty is okay, but just okay, maybe you can improve some sliders, make different pattern or something. Looks very simple.
2. 00:19:263 (2) Remove the clap at the end of this slider, sounds empty and don't fit with the music.
3. 00:37:029 (1) I think this slider can be better. If you can't improve it let me know.
4. 01:07:531 (1) I'm not sure if this pattern is good for an easy difficulty, could be very hard to read for beginners, I suggest to change it.
5. 01:23:621 - A spinner isn't the correct way to follow this rhythm, obviously notes in the easier difficulty either, then just down the volume of the spin a little.

[Normal]

1. 00:11:889 (2) Too close to the previous note.
2. 00:23:286 (3) The whistle is on purpose on the slidertrack here? I think sounds bad.
3. 00:25:967 (1) Move the 3rd point of this slider 2 grids down, looks a lot better.
4. 01:15:911 (5) Add a new combo here and remove in the next (1).
5. 01:23:621 - Same as the easy difficulty, down the volume of the spin please.

[Hard]

1. This difficulty is fine, I can mention a myriad of details and minor things, but i'm really lazy now. You need more work in the hitsounds, try to be more consistent and not overuse the whistles.

[Insane]

1. 00:09:878 (5) You need a new combo here to be consistent.
2. 00:22:615 - I'm not sure about these anti jumps, kills the flow of the map, try to do something different.
3. 00:23:453 (5) Probably a new combo here will be fine?
4. 00:46:414 (5) ^ Same as above.
5. 01:20:604 (12,1) Really weird spacing here, I know that you were using this before but here looks specially weird, please fix it.
6. 01:23:621 - Same thing about the spin.

Nice map ~ and about what Charles said, I think the timing is perfect.

eldnl wrote:

[Easy]

1. This difficulty is okay, but just okay, maybe you can improve some sliders, make different pattern or something. Looks very simple. ill improve the sliders but i think the pattern is fine for this.
2. 00:19:263 (2) Remove the clap at the end of this slider, sounds empty and don't fit with the music. Fixed.
3. 00:37:029 (1) I think this slider can be better. If you can't improve it let me know. I think i improved it a bit. I moved some points around.
4. 01:07:531 (1) I'm not sure if this pattern is good for an easy difficulty, could be very hard to read for beginners, I suggest to change it. alright i unstacked it from (3) and moved it next to (4)
5. 01:23:621 - A spinner isn't the correct way to follow this rhythm, obviously notes in the easier difficulty either, then just down the volume of the spin a little. ohh about this spinner. the reason i added this is mainly because of the other diffs. I added a slider instead.

Nice map ~ and about what Charles said, I think the timing is perfect.

Ty for the mod

Download: Angela - Aoi Haru (TV Size) (Neptunus) [249's Easy].osu

updated~

General

1. The artist should be ' angela ' instead of ' Angela '. The other ranked version has the artist like that. You'll need to fullsubmit after making that change.

249's Easy

1. 01:23:621 (1) - Make this a spinner like the other difficulties.

Normal

1. 01:15:911 (5) - There should be a new combo here.
2. 01:17:252 (1) - Remove the new combo here.

Hard

1. 00:52:783 (3) - There should be a new combo here.

Insane

1. 00:22:280 (2,3,4,5) - The spacing between these objects is far too small. It's very misleading. Space them out correctly.

If you want I can do a more detailed combo mod, but the combos I mentioned will be enough for ranking.

Alright Back to the spinner.

Download: Angela - Aoi Haru (TV Size) (Neptunus) [249's Easy].osu

updated and full submitted

Much better!

Bubbled!

Charles445 wrote:

Much better!

Bubbled!

very much thanks!~

All right, let's do this!

[General]

• 
  Timing:

1. The offset should be at 00:00:492, since that's where the music starts. So, set it to 492 ms.
   
   Settings:
2. Personally, I don't like how the countdown looks. I suggest removing it, but it's entirely your decision.

[249's Easy]

1. 00:37:029 (1) - Well, just saying, you could improve this slider shape a bit:
   
   SPOILER

   
   It's all about using more slider points Hope you like that slider shape I provided!
2. 00:39:710 (2) - Also, how about a new combo here? The music changes here :O
3. 01:07:196 (4) - This is very nazi, so sorry in advance: Please move this one grid up for more consistency in the spacing~

[Insane]

1. Well, some of the triplets are overmapping, since the 1/4 notes aren't really following anything in the music. Please bear in mind that this shouldn't happen. You are still in time to fix this, what do you want to do?

Well, that's all! Call me back!

narakucrimson wrote:

All right, let's do this!



[249's Easy]

1. 00:37:029 (1) - Well, just saying, you could improve this slider shape a bit:
   
   SPOILER

   
   It's all about using more slider points Hope you like that slider shape I provided! wow what a creative way to do this loop slider. i tried my best to do it. if you think it doesnt look the same pm me.
2. 00:39:710 (2) - Also, how about a new combo here? The music changes here :O Fixed.
3. 01:07:196 (4) - This is very nazi, so sorry in advance: Please move this one grid up for more consistency in the spacing~ ooh i don't like nazi modding but i'll fix this to keep the spacing consistent.

Well, that's all! Call me back!

oh wow never thought of using a 8 point looped slider. i'm gonna try to remember this in the future anyways ty for the mod

Download: angela - Aoi Haru (TV Size) (Neptunus) [249's Easy].osu

narakucrimson wrote:

All right, let's do this!

[General]

• 
  Timing:

1. The offset should be at 00:00:492, since that's where the music starts. So, set it to 492 ms.
   
   Settings:
2. Personally, I don't like how the countdown looks. I suggest removing it, but it's entirely your decision.

[249's Easy]

1. 00:37:029 (1) - Well, just saying, you could improve this slider shape a bit:
   
   SPOILER

   
   It's all about using more slider points Hope you like that slider shape I provided!
2. 00:39:710 (2) - Also, how about a new combo here? The music changes here :O
3. 01:07:196 (4) - This is very nazi, so sorry in advance: Please move this one grid up for more consistency in the spacing~

[Insane]

1. Well, some of the triplets are overmapping, since the 1/4 notes aren't really following anything in the music. Please bear in mind that this shouldn't happen. You are still in time to fix this, what do you want to do?

Well, that's all! Call me back!

All fixed~thanks

Ok, after some irc modding, rebubbled!

narakucrimson wrote:

Ok, after some irc modding, rebubbled!

kds for IRC mod

Nah, don't worry about that, one time giving me kudosu was just fine. Thanks for the intention anyway!

sorry but pop

249's Easy
01:01:163 (1) - this slider is slightly hidden due to the hitburst from the slider at 00:58:816 (2) - , on a hard or something it would be ok, but for a easy its not, on easy every note should be clear to see and be fully visible for the new player to see, unstack this so its not being blinded at all

Normal
00:10:883 (4,1,2) - spacing error, (1,2) are too close to each other, due to the spacing used before this note, this sudden drop in spacing is hard to read for a normal difficulty, increase the spacing between (1,2)

Hard
00:27:978 (4) - this does not suit at all as a 1/4 repeat slider, it makes it break the flow. change it to a 1/2 slider ending at the same timing point and it suits the map much better, also remember to reshape the new slider so that it keeps the spacing consistent with the next pattern. more info for the reason behind this is the changing between 1/4 to 1/2 when the song dont is wrong and cofusing for the player, it needs to stay consistent in one timing for such patterns when the map also does
00:52:112 (4) - same
00:27:978 (4) - same
00:52:112 (4) - same,
01:04:180 (4,1) - same
(suggestion) 00:50:604 (1,2,3) - spacing, (2,3) are abit too close, respace to make the spacing work, it felt abit odd
01:01:498 (2,3) - the ending point on this again feels wrong but for a different reason, the music is doing a 1/4 pattern and so are you with the slider, then suddenly your map changes to 1/2 even though the song stays 1/4, due to not having to go back into playing a 1/2 pattern after its fine to leave this 1/4, but the random change is confusing and wrong for the song, delete the (3) and then extend the timing of (2) to 01:02:167
01:01:498 (2,3) - same

Insane
00:07:867 (2,3,4,5) - might as well even these spacings out, rather ugly
00:12:559 (1) - the repeat on this is blinded abit toooo much by the hitbursts before it, change the slider abit so the repeat sign is more visible
00:21:945 (1,2,3,4,5) - this whole patterns timing and spacing does not suit your map at all, its mainly the (1,2,3) section. before this sweeping 1/1 sliders and jumps have been used and got the player into a rhythm, then this uses a 1/2 repeating silder and no jump, feeling totally out of place to the style you have been using making it feel really bad, i fully advise to remake this whole pattern to suit your map style and the song better
00:27:308 (2,3,4) - spacing, (3,4) need to be abit closer
00:29:152 (3) - really dont suit as a 1/4 slider, change it to a 1/2 and remove the repeat, you will see how much more it follows your map style and song, it breaks your flow as it is
00:32:168 (2,3) - spacing here is wrong, need more space between these two so it follows your pattern
00:37:531 (2,3) - spacing here is wrong, need more space between these two so it follows your pattern
00:51:274 (1) - i say remove this new combo, its not needed at all
00:58:146 (1,2) - spacing here is wrong, need more space between these two so it follows your pattern
01:00:157 (7,8) - reason for these two 1/4 repeats? they dont follow your map or the song
01:08:537 (3,4) - little bit more space between these two
01:11:219 (4) - im really not sure about this slider, its extremely hard to fully notice due to the hitburst before and the overlapping slider, i would advise to make it all more visible

map still needs some work, but best of luck o/

jericho2442 wrote:

sorry but pop

249's Easy
01:01:163 (1) - this slider is slightly hidden due to the hitburst from the slider at 00:58:816 (2) - , on a hard or something it would be ok, but for a easy its not, on easy every note should be clear to see and be fully visible for the new player to see, unstack this so its not being blinded at all ohh i see. alright fixed.


map still needs some work, but best of luck o/

Ty for the mod

Download: angela - Aoi Haru (TV Size) (Neptunus) [249's Easy].osu