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Itou Shizuka - Merry-go-round Mellow

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termerys
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, September 30, 2013 at 10:19:32 PM

Artist: Itou Shizuka
Title: Merry-go-round Mellow
Source: HiNA2 Spring has come!!
Tags: katsura hinagiku roxkyuubiforever kantokun
BPM: 165
Filesize: 10217kb
Play Time: 04:18
Difficulties Available:
  1. HiNA (4.9 stars, 727 notes)
  2. Kanto's Hard (4.83 stars, 411 notes)
  3. Normal (4.27 stars, 263 notes)
  4. Rox's Easy (0.95 stars, 138 notes)
Download: Itou Shizuka - Merry-go-round Mellow
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  1. Rox's Easy : Done
  2. Normal : Done
  3. Kanto's Hard : Done
  4. HiNA : Done
READY FOR MODDING
zerozaber
HiNa's diff - PERFECT!!!

can't suggest anything :)

waiting for another diff to mod
deohome123
สู้ๆฮับ :)

/me โยนดาว ;)
Hinagiku
HINA!!! :) :)
-Athena-
[quote="Hinagiku":f154a]HINA!!! :) :)I giggled.
Frostmourne
เติมรบกวนเปลี่ยน Frostm hard เป็น Frostmourne's Hard ที

จะได้เหมือนเพลงนี้ http://osu.ppy.sh/s/39561
Xinely
m4m from irc ~

[Frostmourne's Hard]
00:17:733 (6) - make http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/604828 better imo
00:36:642 (1,2) - make curved? i try make this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/604826 (if yes, ofc fix spacing note after this)
00:40:460 (2) - make straight like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/604833 ?
01:00:278 (7) - spacing (1,08x)
01:12:096 (3) - finish?
01:20:824 - ^
01:48:824 - add note?
02:21:914 (3) - finish?
02:33:733 (5) - ctrl+J and move to x:294 y: 142
03:25:914 - finish?
03:37:551 (5) - ^
03:40:824 (1) - better if https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/604855 imo

[Rox's Easy]
i think better use clap custom hitsound like other diff
00:16:824 (1,2,3,4) - i see after this pattern have 1,0 DS, so make this 1,0 DS too
00:45:914 (1) - spacing (2,07 X_X)
00:53:187 (2,3) - spacing (1,05)
00:57:005 (5,1) - spacing (1,35)
01:07:914 (4,5) - remove clap?
01:19:187 (4,1) - spacing
01:18:460 (2,3,4) - it's hard stack for newbie, make like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/606502 ? (avoid that ^ spacing too)
01:46:642 (2) - make straight wiht (1)'s tail and (3)'s head slider?
01:49:914 (1,2,3,4) - i have pattern for this, try this code?
104,112,109914,6,0,B|200:112,1,80,2|0
224,40,110642,2,0,B|288:104,1,80,2|0
360,72,111369,2,0,B|360:160,1,80,2|0
432,192,112096,2,0,B|368:256,1,80,2|0
01:54:278 (2,1) - spacing (0,85)
02:29:005 (4,1) - ^ (0,82)
02:30:642 (3,4) - spacing D: *jump orz
02:59:733 (1,2,1) - - ^
03:06:278 (3,1) - spacing
03:07:732 (3,1) - ^
03:09:914 (1) - ^
03:11:914 (2) - ^

[Normal]
00:29:914 (4) - stack with (5) better
00:50:460 (4) - stack with (3)?
01:12:096 - finish
01:15:005 - ^
01:23:733 - ^
02:21:914 - ^
02:24:824 - ^
03:25:914 - ^
03:28:824 - ^
02:33:551 (1) - ^
01:17:005 (4) - NC?
01:25:005 (4) - ^
01:32:460 (1) - delete this and make spin end in 01:32:460 - ?
02:11:733 (4) - NC
02:16:096 (6) - ^
02:20:460 (6) - remove 1 repeat and add note in 02:21:551 - ?
03:18:460 (4) - x:328 y:140
03:46:642 (1) - remove this? it's so hard after spin suddenly circle

[HiNA]
HP+2, OD+2
only in this diff have until 8 combo colours, make as same other diff please
just can only check this, i can't mod insane diff orz

Anyway,good luck (:
Topic Starter
termerys

Xinely wrote:

m4m from irc ~

[Normal]
00:29:914 (4) - stack with (5) better ok
00:50:460 (4) - stack with (3)? ok
01:12:096 - finish Yes to all
01:15:005 - ^
01:23:733 - ^
02:21:914 - ^
02:24:824 - ^
03:25:914 - ^
03:28:824 - ^
02:33:551 (1) - ^
01:17:005 (4) - NC? No to all
01:25:005 (4) - ^
01:32:460 (1) - delete this and make spin end in 01:32:460 - ? No
02:11:733 (4) - NC No to all
02:16:096 (6) - ^
02:20:460 (6) - remove 1 repeat and add note in 02:21:551 - ? no
03:18:460 (4) - x:328 y:140 okay
03:46:642 (1) - remove this? it's so hard after spin suddenly circle okay

[HiNA]
HP+2, OD+2
only in this diff have until 8 combo colours, make as same other diff please Fixed!
just can only check this, i can't mod insane diff orz

Anyway,good luck (:
The other 2 diffs I'd let the guess differs to fix themselves. Thanks for modding!
johnsonxii
This song is so good. hope it get ranked real quick.
modding modding....

HiNA

01:08:460 (1) - I suggest straight 1/2 beat reverse slider.
01:10:642 (6) - same here. don't know the exact reason though...
01:51:369 (1) - starting point to (256 342) finish at (256 192)
01:51:914 (2) + 01:52:642 (4) - move to (256 192)
01:52:096 (3) - flip from 01:51:369 (1)
01:54:278 (1,2) - add finish?
02:17:551 - decrease spinner 1/2 beat and add note
02:35:369 (5,6) - increase distance spacing from 1.00x to 1.5x such as (380 80)

Kanto's Hard

00:19:369 (3) - move to 410 70
00:19:733 (1) - move to 442 78 to make slider end where 00:18:642 (2) started
----00:50:824 (1,2,3,4,5) - Luv this! LOL
02:02:096 - change the tempo like this ?

Normal

01:05:005 (3) - less reverse. add note at 01:06:096 (4) instead
03:49:733 (5,6) - I'm not sure if this is too hard for normal?

Rox's Easy

nothing to mod...

Hope my mods are useful.
Topic Starter
termerys

phuditj wrote:

This song is so good. hope it get ranked real quick.
modding modding....

HiNA

01:08:460 (1) - I suggest straight 1/2 beat reverse slider. No
01:10:642 (6) - same here. don't know the exact reason though... No
01:51:369 (1) - starting point to (256 342) finish at (256 192) Okay
01:51:914 (2) + 01:52:642 (4) - move to (256 192) ^
01:52:096 (3) - flip from 01:51:369 (1)^
01:54:278 (1,2) - add finish? Only the first one sounds great, second one isn't
02:17:551 - decrease spinner 1/2 beat and add note Okay
02:35:369 (5,6) - increase distance spacing from 1.00x to 1.5x such as (380 80) No

Normal

01:05:005 (3) - less reverse. add note at 01:06:096 (4) instead Okay
03:49:733 (5,6) - I'm not sure if this is too hard for normal? I hope so too!
Thanks for modding! KD!
KantoKun

phuditj wrote:

Kanto's Hard

00:19:369 (3) - move to 410 70 ok
00:19:733 (1) - move to 442 78 to make slider end where 00:18:642 (2) started ok
----00:50:824 (1,2,3,4,5) - Luv this! LOL (?)
02:02:096 - change the tempo like this ? no
thx mods ;w; lol
Wataru
Such a little to mod lol

Rox's Easy

1/4 note is maybe too hard for Easy?

All of my mod is just suggest Don't 100% Trust me

01:07:914 (4,5) - this one is too hard for easy maybe remove "4" and unstack this (just suggest)

02:21:914 (5,6,1) - 5 overlay 1

03:39:369 (4,5) - maybe move 4 to the red line on the left? easy to click with sounds good
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Normal

00:21:187 (3,4) - stack it ? This is now not so beautiful

01:19:369 (3) - delete this ?
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Hard

Nah , Nothing
------------

Insane

Nothing too ;__;

*Combo's Colour is so weird , maybe use only 4-5 colour , such as pink , orange , light yellow , grey , light green?


That's all and thank you for made this song

it's really nice :----;

+1 star
Topic Starter
termerys

Wataru wrote:

Such a little to mod lol

Rox's Easy

1/4 note is maybe too hard for Easy?

All of my mod is just suggest Don't 100% Trust me

01:07:914 (4,5) - this one is too hard for easy maybe remove "4" and unstack this (just suggest) Okay

02:21:914 (5,6,1) - 5 overlay 1 That looks fine for me

03:39:369 (4,5) - maybe move 4 to the red line on the left? easy to click with sounds good Okay
------------

Normal

00:21:187 (3,4) - stack it ? This is now not so beautiful Okay

01:19:369 (3) - delete this ? Okay
------------

Hard

Nah , Nothing
------------

Insane

Nothing too ;__;

*Combo's Colour is so weird , maybe use only 4-5 colour , such as pink , orange , light yellow , grey , light green? Fixed


That's all and thank you for made this song

it's really nice :----;

+1 star
KD for you!
P A N
mod in game

SPOILER
03:04 P A N: mod*
03:04 P A N: ในนี้
03:04 P A N: Normal
03:08 P A N: 01:48:460 (1) - โค้งหน่อยดีมั้ย -0- http://puu.sh/2pBiT
03:08 P A N: ดูสวยๆ
03:11 P A N: 02:35:369 (5,6,7) - ห่างไม่เท่ากัน
03:14 P A N: 03:16:096 (4) - โค้งๆประมานนี้น่าจะสวยกว่านะ http://puu.sh/2pBuB
03:16 P A N: 03:34:642 (1) - โค้งแบบนี้อาจจะสวยกว่า http://puu.sh/2pBz7
03:19 P A N: 03:40:460 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - อาจดูเหลี่ยมๆไปนิด
03:23 P A N: Easy
03:24 P A N: 01:08:096 (4) - โน็ตตรงหาง slider น่าจะเขยิบออกมานะ มือใหม่คงพลาดเเหละ
03:28 P A N: 01:20:096 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - NC บ้างดีไหม มือใหม่อาจจะต้องการเลือดจาก NC เยอะ
03:32 P A N: 02:06:824 (5) - อาจจะเปลั้ยนเปน slider เเล้วไปจบที่ 02:07:369 - นะ
03:33 P A N: 02:29:914 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - NC บ้าง
03:34 P A N: 03:11:914 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - โน็ตกดเยอะไปป่าวไม่รู้นะ
03:39 P A N: Hard
03:40 P A N: 00:59:733 (3) - โต้งลงมาอีกหน่อยจะได้สวยๆ >> http://puu.sh/2pClr
03:43 P A N: 01:17:187 (4) - ลองวาดให้โค้งแบบนี้ สวยกว่า >> http://puu.sh/2pCtI
03:45 P A N: 02:08:824 (1,2) - เอาลงมานิดนึงก็ได้ มันเฉียด hp bar
03:47 P A N: 02:09:551 (3) - โค้งกว่านี้นิดนึงขยับไปทางขวาหน่อยนึง http://puu.sh/2pCAo
03:48 P A N: 02:27:005 (4) - เเก้เหมือน 01:17:187 (4) - เนื่องจากก๊อปมา lol
03:49 P A N: 02:29:914 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ลองวาด stream ให้มันโค้งกว่านี่จะได้สวยๆ
03:50 P A N: 03:19:369 - insert break time?
03:51 P A N: 03:23:005 - copy มาอีกเเล้ว -0-
03:52 P A N: 03:31:005 (4) - เเก้เหมือน 02:27:005 (4) -
03:52 P A N: มันชัดไปป่าว 55
03:53 P A N: HiNA
03:53 P A N: ควาทเร็ว slider โคดเร็วเลย 555
03:54 P A N: 00:21:369 (3) - เหมือนมันยังเฉียดกับ (2) ไม่สนิทนะ
03:56 P A N: 00:19:187 (2) - x360 y196
03:57 P A N: 00:19:369 (3) - x272 y132
03:57 P A N: 00:19:551 (1) - x368 y92
03:58 P A N: 00:24:096 (1) - ขยับไปทางขวาหน่อยไหม
03:59 P A N: 00:27:187 (2) - เลื่อนไปขวา 1 grid เเล้วก็เลื่อนจุดตรงกลาง slide ลง 2 grid ขวา 2 grid
04:00 P A N: 00:34:096 (1) - สวยกว่าไหม http://puu.sh/2pD2z
04:01 P A N: 00:50:278 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ชอบเฉยๆไม่มีไร
04:02 P A N: 00:57:914 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ผมว้าถ้าเลื่อนไปตรงกลางจะเปนไรที่สวยมาก http://puu.sh/2pD6Q
04:03 P A N: 01:00:278 (8) - ขึ้น 2 grid จะได้เปนสามเหลี่ยม
04:04 P A N: 01:05:733 (11) - เลื่องจุดปลาย slider ไปทางขวา 2 grid (เลื่อน (12) ตามมาด้วย)
04:05 P A N: 01:07:733 (17) - NC? จะได้เข้ากับเพลง มัน 3 จังหวะ
04:06 P A N: 01:18:460 (3) - ถ้าไม่ได้ตั้งใจก็เอาลง 1 grid ไปทับอันเก่าจะได้มีระเบียบ
04:07 P A N: 01:19:187 (1) - เหมือนกัน ถ้าไม่ได้ตั้งใจก็เอาลงให้ หาง slide มันทับอันเก่าให้สนิท
04:09 P A N: 01:59:369 (3) - ขึ้น 1 grid ขวา 1 grid น่าจะสวยกว่านะ
04:10 P A N: 02:02:642 (3) ขึ้น 2 grid
04:11 P A N: 02:05:733 (4) - x264 y140
04:15 P A N: 02:14:460 (4) - x76 y324
04:15 P A N: 02:23:733 (5) - x280 y43
04:16 P A N: 02:27:005 (2) - ขึ้น 1 grid ซ้าย 1 grid
04:17 P A N: 02:41:551 (2) - ขวา 3 grid
04:18 P A N: 03:03:187 (2) - x171 y308
04:21 P A N: 03:03:733 (4) - x336 y228 หรือเลื่อนไปขวาๆอีกนิด ให้ distance มันดูเท่ากัน (3,4,5 อะ) จะได้สวยๆ
04:23 P A N: 03:15:369 (5,1,2) - ลองแบบนี้จะได้ดูสวย http://puu.sh/2pDVf
04:27 P A N: 03:27:023 (3) - x83 y37
04:30 P A N: 03:35:914 (4) - x254 y24
04:31 P A N: 03:59:733 (2) - x461 y45
04:32 P A N: 04:00:278 (4) - ลง 1 grid ซ้าย 1 grid โค้งสวยกว่า
04:33 P A N: 04:06:096 (7) - x81 y67
04:34 P A N: 04:07:187 (3) - จุดกลาง slider ขึ้น 3 grid ซ้าย 3 grid โค้งสวยกว่า
04:36 P A N: 04:08:460 (7) - ซ้าย 3 grid ลง 1 grid?
04:38 P A N: 04:14:278 (4) - ขึ้น 4 grid เเล้วเลื่อนปลาย slider ไปขวา 3 grid?
04:38 P A N: 04:08:460 (7) - เลื่อนจุดกลาง slider ไปซ้าย 3 grid ลง 1 grid?
Topic Starter
termerys

P A N wrote:

mod in game

SPOILER
03:04 P A N: mod*
03:04 P A N: ในนี้
03:04 P A N: Normal
03:08 P A N: 01:48:460 (1) - โค้งหน่อยดีมั้ย -0- http://puu.sh/2pBiT
03:08 P A N: ดูสวยๆ
03:11 P A N: 02:35:369 (5,6,7) - ห่างไม่เท่ากัน
03:14 P A N: 03:16:096 (4) - โค้งๆประมานนี้น่าจะสวยกว่านะ http://puu.sh/2pBuB
03:16 P A N: 03:34:642 (1) - โค้งแบบนี้อาจจะสวยกว่า http://puu.sh/2pBz7
03:19 P A N: 03:40:460 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - อาจดูเหลี่ยมๆไปนิด
03:23 P A N: Easy
03:24 P A N: 01:08:096 (4) - โน็ตตรงหาง slider น่าจะเขยิบออกมานะ มือใหม่คงพลาดเเหละ
03:28 P A N: 01:20:096 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - NC บ้างดีไหม มือใหม่อาจจะต้องการเลือดจาก NC เยอะ
03:32 P A N: 02:06:824 (5) - อาจจะเปลั้ยนเปน slider เเล้วไปจบที่ 02:07:369 - นะ
03:33 P A N: 02:29:914 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - NC บ้าง
03:34 P A N: 03:11:914 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - โน็ตกดเยอะไปป่าวไม่รู้นะ
03:39 P A N: Hard
03:40 P A N: 00:59:733 (3) - โต้งลงมาอีกหน่อยจะได้สวยๆ >> http://puu.sh/2pClr
03:43 P A N: 01:17:187 (4) - ลองวาดให้โค้งแบบนี้ สวยกว่า >> http://puu.sh/2pCtI
03:45 P A N: 02:08:824 (1,2) - เอาลงมานิดนึงก็ได้ มันเฉียด hp bar
03:47 P A N: 02:09:551 (3) - โค้งกว่านี้นิดนึงขยับไปทางขวาหน่อยนึง http://puu.sh/2pCAo
03:48 P A N: 02:27:005 (4) - เเก้เหมือน 01:17:187 (4) - เนื่องจากก๊อปมา lol
03:49 P A N: 02:29:914 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ลองวาด stream ให้มันโค้งกว่านี่จะได้สวยๆ
03:50 P A N: 03:19:369 - insert break time?
03:51 P A N: 03:23:005 - copy มาอีกเเล้ว -0-
03:52 P A N: 03:31:005 (4) - เเก้เหมือน 02:27:005 (4) -
03:52 P A N: มันชัดไปป่าว 55
03:53 P A N: HiNA
03:53 P A N: ควาทเร็ว slider โคดเร็วเลย 555
03:54 P A N: 00:21:369 (3) - เหมือนมันยังเฉียดกับ (2) ไม่สนิทนะ
03:56 P A N: 00:19:187 (2) - x360 y196
03:57 P A N: 00:19:369 (3) - x272 y132
03:57 P A N: 00:19:551 (1) - x368 y92
03:58 P A N: 00:24:096 (1) - ขยับไปทางขวาหน่อยไหม
03:59 P A N: 00:27:187 (2) - เลื่อนไปขวา 1 grid เเล้วก็เลื่อนจุดตรงกลาง slide ลง 2 grid ขวา 2 grid
04:00 P A N: 00:34:096 (1) - สวยกว่าไหม http://puu.sh/2pD2z
04:01 P A N: 00:50:278 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ชอบเฉยๆไม่มีไร
04:02 P A N: 00:57:914 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ผมว้าถ้าเลื่อนไปตรงกลางจะเปนไรที่สวยมาก http://puu.sh/2pD6Q
04:03 P A N: 01:00:278 (8) - ขึ้น 2 grid จะได้เปนสามเหลี่ยม
04:04 P A N: 01:05:733 (11) - เลื่องจุดปลาย slider ไปทางขวา 2 grid (เลื่อน (12) ตามมาด้วย)
04:05 P A N: 01:07:733 (17) - NC? จะได้เข้ากับเพลง มัน 3 จังหวะ
04:06 P A N: 01:18:460 (3) - ถ้าไม่ได้ตั้งใจก็เอาลง 1 grid ไปทับอันเก่าจะได้มีระเบียบ
04:07 P A N: 01:19:187 (1) - เหมือนกัน ถ้าไม่ได้ตั้งใจก็เอาลงให้ หาง slide มันทับอันเก่าให้สนิท
04:09 P A N: 01:59:369 (3) - ขึ้น 1 grid ขวา 1 grid น่าจะสวยกว่านะ
04:10 P A N: 02:02:642 (3) ขึ้น 2 grid
04:11 P A N: 02:05:733 (4) - x264 y140
04:15 P A N: 02:14:460 (4) - x76 y324
04:15 P A N: 02:23:733 (5) - x280 y43
04:16 P A N: 02:27:005 (2) - ขึ้น 1 grid ซ้าย 1 grid
04:17 P A N: 02:41:551 (2) - ขวา 3 grid
04:18 P A N: 03:03:187 (2) - x171 y308
04:21 P A N: 03:03:733 (4) - x336 y228 หรือเลื่อนไปขวาๆอีกนิด ให้ distance มันดูเท่ากัน (3,4,5 อะ) จะได้สวยๆ
04:23 P A N: 03:15:369 (5,1,2) - ลองแบบนี้จะได้ดูสวย http://puu.sh/2pDVf
04:27 P A N: 03:27:023 (3) - x83 y37
04:30 P A N: 03:35:914 (4) - x254 y24
04:31 P A N: 03:59:733 (2) - x461 y45
04:32 P A N: 04:00:278 (4) - ลง 1 grid ซ้าย 1 grid โค้งสวยกว่า
04:33 P A N: 04:06:096 (7) - x81 y67
04:34 P A N: 04:07:187 (3) - จุดกลาง slider ขึ้น 3 grid ซ้าย 3 grid โค้งสวยกว่า
04:36 P A N: 04:08:460 (7) - ซ้าย 3 grid ลง 1 grid?
04:38 P A N: 04:14:278 (4) - ขึ้น 4 grid เเล้วเลื่อนปลาย slider ไปขวา 3 grid?
04:38 P A N: 04:08:460 (7) - เลื่อนจุดกลาง slider ไปซ้าย 3 grid ลง 1 grid?
All fixed! Thanks! (except for kantokung's diff) KD!
KantoKun

P A N wrote:

mod in game
SPOILER
03:39 P A N: Hard
03:40 P A N: 00:59:733 (3) - โต้งลงมาอีกหน่อยจะได้สวยๆ >> http://puu.sh/2pClr
03:43 P A N: 01:17:187 (4) - ลองวาดให้โค้งแบบนี้ สวยกว่า >> http://puu.sh/2pCtI
03:45 P A N: 02:08:824 (1,2) - เอาลงมานิดนึงก็ได้ มันเฉียด hp bar
03:47 P A N: 02:09:551 (3) - โค้งกว่านี้นิดนึงขยับไปทางขวาหน่อยนึง http://puu.sh/2pCAo
03:48 P A N: 02:27:005 (4) - เเก้เหมือน 01:17:187 (4) - เนื่องจากก๊อปมา lol
03:49 P A N: 02:29:914 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ลองวาด stream ให้มันโค้งกว่านี่จะได้สวยๆ
03:50 P A N: 03:19:369 - insert break time?
03:51 P A N: 03:23:005 - copy มาอีกเเล้ว -0-
03:52 P A N: 03:31:005 (4) - เเก้เหมือน 02:27:005 (4) -
03:52 P A N: มันชัดไปป่าว 55
Thx mods >w<!! sorry for copy/past -3- & Update
mercury2004
DAISUKI DAKARA yayewewwww
Mod for you ♥ ♥ ♥ yuck!
Color Guide
Red : Change it please
Purple : Highly recommended
Orange : Suggestion

General
Inconsistence Letterbox in Break. Rox dif and kanto has no letterbox in break
Inconsistence kiai time. no idea if this is still rankable correct me if i'm wrong


Rox's Easy
00:39:551 (5) - point this to 00:40:460 (1) -
01:26:642 (1,2) - 2 grid up

02:06:824 why break here?

Normal
-AR1
00:55:005 (1) - nc
00:55:733 (1) - remove nc

01:01:187 (3,4) - a bit confusing beat
01:06:369 (1) - end spinner here 01:07:733

01:48:460 (1) - fix this shape
01:54:369 (1) - spinner too fast for middling
02:04:096 (5) - nc
02:16:278 (1) - end spinner 02:17:551 here
02:31:551 (3,4) - follow vocal better
03:41:914 (5) - nc

03:49:733 (5,6,7,1,2,3) - change to something else, too hard

Kanto's Hard
มันจะขี้เกียจไปหน่อยใหมเนี่ย กอปเพสท่อนไคเอาง่ายๆเลย
00:21:914 (4) - nc due to change in speed
00:39:187 (1) - no idea if this kind of slider is still rankable
00:45:369 (1) - confusing antijump. change distance snap will fix
01:03:369 (1) - no idea if this kind of slider is still rankable
02:06:642 (1,2) - snap this jump
02:13:187 (1) - no idea if this kind of slider is still rankable
03:48:278 (1) - remove nc
03:51:369 (9,10) - snap this

HiNA
Fix some slider shape will be perfect
01:19:187 (1) - ctrl G
01:24:096 (2,3,4) - antijump this feel better
01:31:551 (1) - nc


คุโด้ as always
Topic Starter
termerys

mercury2004 wrote:

DAISUKI DAKARA yayewewwww
Mod for you ♥ ♥ ♥ yuck!
Color Guide
Red : Change it please
Purple : Highly recommended
Orange : Suggestion

General
Inconsistence Letterbox in Break. Rox dif and kanto has no letterbox in break
Inconsistence kiai time. no idea if this is still rankable correct me if i'm wrong


Rox's Easy
00:39:551 (5) - point this to 00:40:460 (1) -
01:26:642 (1,2) - 2 grid up

02:06:824 why break here?

Normal
-AR1
00:55:005 (1) - nc
00:55:733 (1) - remove nc

01:01:187 (3,4) - a bit confusing beat
01:06:369 (1) - end spinner here 01:07:733

01:48:460 (1) - fix this shape
01:54:369 (1) - spinner too fast for middling
02:04:096 (5) - nc
02:16:278 (1) - end spinner 02:17:551 here
02:31:551 (3,4) - follow vocal better
03:41:914 (5) - nc

03:49:733 (5,6,7,1,2,3) - change to something else, too hard

HiNA
Fix some slider shape will be perfect
01:19:187 (1) - ctrl G
01:24:096 (2,3,4) - antijump this feel better
01:31:551 (1) - nc


คุโด้ as always
All fixed! Thanks!
KantoKun
I re somekiai lol & I think my name in tag is "kantokun" not "kantokung"
Update Here!
Laurier
mod4mod time

General
there is a large gap in the normal and easy. It will be a better balance if you make a diff between.

Easy
00:16:824 (1) - finish on tail
00:19:733 (3) - finish on head
00:21:914 (4,5) - change to slider. I think 1/2 stack is hard to beginners.
00:43:005 (3) - make a curve ? http://puu.sh/2KDeZ.jpg
00:45:187 (4,5) - same as 00:21:914 (4,5)
00:48:824 (3) - clap on tail
00:54:642 (3) - ^
01:06:278 (3) - try this ? http://puu.sh/2KDsl.jpg
01:15:005 (1) - clap on reverse
02:24:824 (1) - ^
02:35:369 (3,4) - same as 00:21:914 (4,5)
03:28:824 (1) - clap on reverse

Normal
00:19:733 (1) - make a symmentrical
00:49:369 (2,3,4) - try this ? http://puu.sh/2KDGI.jpg (follow vocal)
00:55:005 (1) - a little down of slider end. http://puu.sh/2KDKc.jpg
01:17:914 (7,1) - change to nc on (7)
01:28:096 - delete
02:29:369 (6) - move to next red tick
03:18:460 (4) - try this ? http://puu.sh/2KEB7.jpg

Hard
00:19:733 (1) - this stack is hard to read. try this ? http://puu.sh/2KFHF.jpg
00:47:005 (1) - slider end stack on (3) ? http://puu.sh/2KGR6.jpg
01:23:733 (1) - use same form as 01:23:005 (3)
01:29:187 (3) - like this ? http://puu.sh/2KIng.jpg
01:55:187 (6) - add note stack on 01:55:369 (1) -
02:06:642 (1,2) - fix spacing
03:19:369 - add spin ?
03:36:824 (3) - like this ? http://puu.sh/2KJfD.jpg
03:40:187 (3,1,2) - http://puu.sh/2KJir.jpg

HiNA
00:34:096 (1) - remove nc
00:34:096 (1) - make a brancket ? http://puu.sh/2KM4X.jpg
00:44:824 (1,2,3,4) - make a jump http://puu.sh/2KM7e.jpg
01:32:096 (5) - move 1tick right and add note at 01:32:005
01:54:642 (1) - remove nc
01:55:369 (1) - ^
02:00:278 (2,3) - ctr+g
02:00:824 (2,3) - ^
02:10:096 (1) - remove nc
02:10:278 (2) - add^
02:12:460 (1) - remove nc

thats all
Frostmourne
Hi Term ! , sry for the very lateness.

General
- I'm not really comfortable with the combo5 and combo6. They look blended with the black background (in case the player dim the brightness)
also this bg color is pink. I really find it weird when the black color totally ruins the bg. :?
http://puu.sh/2O0im.png I would use something like this so it will be easier to play and read
- http://puu.sh/2NjUc.png change 1,1 to 0,0. It used to be a bug that has been fixed already.
- Inconsistent tag in Kanto's Hard (change from kantokung to kantokun) I don't know why the mapper himself even wrongly typed lol
- Inconsistent letterboxes break, both open and close are fine but it has to be the same for the whole mapset
- You can change an ArtistUnicode in the editor(via notepad opening) to the origin like this : 伊藤 静
according to here

Rox's Easy
02:21:914 (5) - probably NC here as it's on 01:12:096 (1) - , it fits with vocal better !
03:36:824 (1) - remove NC and add NC at 03:37:552 (6) - instead to follow the pattern about following the vocal
Nice relaxing Easy diff :D

Normal
01:02:278 (4) - This slider is confusing, the previous notes you placed mostly follow on the vocal. So this slider starts on 01:02:096 (4) - (1/2 back) will fit with the vocal better and not confusing
01:08:460 (1) - It would be nice if you could lower this slider's volume to somewhat 20-30%. The current sounds loudly which can probably ruin the song
01:19:551 (x) - add a note here and make spacing like this? , It's correct spacing and looks good imo
don't forget to add clap for both 01:19:551 (3,4) -
01:27:005 (1) - add a clap here
01:52:824 (6) - new combo as it follows the new phrase of vocal
02:07:733 (1) - clap tail
02:23:187 (3,4) - this looks confusing for some reason, I would delete 02:23:187 (3) - , start this slider on 02:23:187 (3) - , extend this slider to 02:23:733
remove clap at 02:24:096 (4) - and add clap at 02:24:460 (5) - instead like this pic
02:32:278 (5) - I felt this note was unnecessary. I couldn't hear any strong sound from the music that worthy for a circle here, I would remove it so it won't be standing out like this (you mostly have used only a couple of 1/4 notes)
03:11:369 (6) - finish here would be great
03:12:642 (3) - this note plays bad and doesn't suit with the music much. I would just remove it, extend 03:12:278 (2) - and end at (3) like this
03:13:914 (5,6,1,2) - hard to explain , I will leave the screenshot of it and see if you agree with it :P
it sounds better + not complicated also it is easy to play because this is just a normal diff. Some of player might have hard time dealing this utterly cluttered notes so I guess you can simplify it like this ;)
03:31:005 (5) - I think this slider sounds better on the blue tick on 03:31:278, adding a note on 03:31:733 will clear the gap out too!
03:41:551 (3,4) - I would remove these two notes and move 03:41:914 (1) - to 03:41:733 instead , it follows the vocal like you have done mostly
beware of spacing on 03:42:460 (2) - too , also add a slider starting at 03:43:187 - to 03:43:369 would be a good idea
great rhythm

Kanto's Hard
01:17:914 (1,2,3,4) - this sounds weird, it isn't balance at all, I would remove the green line of 01:17:914 (1) - and 01:18:460 (4) -
the volume on 1-3 with around 50 sounds better alot :)
also remove all whistles in these 4 notes and add finish on (1) and (2) and (4) , it will correspond with 01:18:824 (5,6) - as the vocal sounds as is :D
02:27:733 (1,2,3,4) - ^ copy from it !
03:11:005 (2) - this must be changed to 1/4, it's wrongly snapped..
03:18:824 (1) - add one more repeat to make it follow the drum perfectly (end at 03:19:369)
03:31:733 (1,2,3,4) - same as I mentioned about using finishes' sound
03:41:551 (3,4) - in the test play mode, they sound as default clap which makes this song broken.
I would use this rhythm instead, I don't really know how this bug come but as I see, this new rhythm might help you fix this bug + consistent with 03:50:642 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - , I suggest you use some stream here but it doesn't need to be this large spaced stream, you can make it narrow like
03:50:642 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - you did as well
great hard diff

HiNA
I would say HP-1 makes this map much enjoyable , some parts that contain big jumps might piss of some players as well, you choice though
01:31:551 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is hard to read. It might fit your rhythm for some reason but as I played throughout the map. This point is really annoying.
I would simplify it, just make everything simple as plain stream like this
02:21:187 (1) - I would remove clap on this slider and remove clap on the tail only at 02:21:551 (2) - . It means (2) will still exist a clap on the head of it.
02:23:733 (5) - add clap
03:43:005 (4,5,6,7,8) - suggestion, I would make this stream like this pic. I would be more expected as it should be in the map in these days
also placing on the single point is a bit plain boring sometimes. :o just a suggestion if you like it, you can keep it ! :D
03:48:278 (5,6,1) - 03:49:187 (1) - sounds really nice when it starts at 03:49:005. This point does have important sound which you shouldn't ignore ("shiii~~") sounds something like this. But for the gap at 03:49:551 , you can add a note here so it will follow with guitar sound on 03:49:733 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - accordingly
04:02:096 (x) - add a note here on 04:01:914 (7,8) - will play better because the spacing is gradually increasing here, I bet people will hit at 04:02:278 (10) - early and get missed eventually (the gap between 04:02:005 (8) - and 04:02:278 (9) - is quite uncommon)
04:15:278 (1) - this slider must end at 04:18:520 (1/6) in order to snap it correctly

This mapset needs work for the hitsound only (just check its consistency and make them consistent)
rhythms are nice.
Good Luck !


KantoKun

Frostmourne wrote:

Hi Term ! , sry for the very lateness.

Kanto's Hard
01:17:914 (1,2,3,4) - this sounds weird, it isn't balance at all, I would remove the green line of 01:17:914 (1) - and 01:18:460 (4) -
the volume on 1-3 with around 50 sounds better alot :)
also remove all whistles in these 4 notes and add finish on (1) and (2) and (4) , it will correspond with 01:18:824 (5,6) - as the vocal sounds as is :D
02:27:733 (1,2,3,4) - ^ copy from it !
03:11:005 (2) - this must be changed to 1/4, it's wrongly snapped..
03:18:824 (1) - add one more repeat to make it follow the drum perfectly (end at 03:19:369)
03:31:733 (1,2,3,4) - same as I mentioned about using finishes' sound
03:41:551 (3,4) - in the test play mode, they sound as default clap which makes this song broken.
I would use this rhythm instead, I don't really know how this bug come but as I see, this new rhythm might help you fix this bug + consistent with 03:50:642 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - , I suggest you use some stream here but it doesn't need to be this large spaced stream, you can make it narrow like
03:50:642 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - you did as well
great hard diff

This mapset needs work for the hitsound only (just check its consistency and make them consistent)
rhythms are nice.
Good Luck !
All fix and thx :) :) !! >>Update<<
Backstep
My favorite song >3

Go Go for rank...

:P
mercury2004
hitsound dif

pick what you like. if you want you can use this as your new hitsound


http://puu.sh/2VeWG.osu
LunarSakuya
Hi ^^

General
- Your kiai times are inconsistent. I would use HiNA as the reference. Rox's Easy may need to be mapped until the end but if not, you might as well delete the kiai time from 04:03:733 to 04:15:187 in HiNA. It's not really needed much anyway imo. Watch out specifically for Kanto's Hard.

- Consider adding Hayate no Gotoku to tags

- your bg image is way too large lol. Please recompress it so it's at least less than 1mb. If you have trouble, pm me and I'll do it for you.

- In the .osu file of Kanto's Hard under Events, change the bg code line to 0,0,"hina_bg.png",0,0

Rox's Easy
00:19:733 (3) - Finish on head & Clap on end, like 00:16:824 (1) -
00:51:187 (5) - Delete Finish, I found it a bit overwhelming as this part's instruments are kinda subtle
01:27:187 (2) - Try extending this to the next red tick http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/761381 so you can catch the Finish on the reverse :D Up to you ofc
01:44:096 (1) - Finish on head, I hear cymbals in the bgm
01:52:824 (1) - Hm I would delete a reverse to be safe since you'd generally wanna avoid repeat sliders in the easiest diff. Try something like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/761372
02:01:005 (5) - Delete Finish, similar reason as before
02:24:824 (1) - You could rotate this so it's not overlapping with the previous note http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/761377
02:30:642 (3,4) - Spacing, fix with distance snap
02:36:460 (1) - Finish
02:37:005 (2) - same as 01:27:187 (2) -
03:05:551 (1) - default finish on head?
03:14:278 (1) - this spinner ended a bit weird imo, you could try creating 2 spinners? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/761392 (the first one is shortened by 2 white ticks), http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/761393 (better view of the 2nd)
03:41:005 (2) - Again, try extending to the next red tick http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/761395

Normal
- hm a bit of a jump from Easy difficulty-wise? I found the SV a bit high imo

00:16:824 (1) - The custom Finish used don't seem that powerful especially for an intro. I suggest using the default for this and the others throughout this map :?
00:22:642 (1) - default Finish on head
00:28:460 (1) - ^, good for marking new stanzas in this case
01:20:096 (5) - Ctrl + J http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/761418 might fit better with the previous stack since they don't touch
01:28:096 (3) - dFinish sounds good
01:46:824 (5) - NC, stays consistent with 01:52:824 (1) -
01:48:460 (1) - Delete the whistle on the whole slider, a bit noisy
03:31:733 - Add note, a bit of an awkward gap here, especially with the vocals
03:34:642 (1) - I think you can neaten up some blankets here and there :lol: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/761426 something like that..
03:43:187 (3) - Finish on tail
Yeah I recommend the default Finish wherever you can hear emphasized cymbals in the bg music

Kanto's Hard
00:16:824 (3) - Finish on head to bring out this intro
00:19:733 (1) - ^
00:21:914 (4) - NC, i think the SV change is noticeable enough
00:46:096 (2) - ^
02:30:642 (1) - Finish on head, new stanza
02:35:551 (2) - Try replacing this with a single note http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/763811 Follows the instruments better & seems like a less-awkward transition imo
03:05:551 (1) - hm i highly suggest you map this part out since i don't feel like anything's escalating here in the bgm. :? Also avoids the small spinner spam with 03:14:096 (1) -
03:18:824 (1) - Why Soft? This has a very similar tone as the previous combo. Please change back to Normal set and perhaps add a finish at the end
03:31:005 (1) - not sure about this single combo...i'd check back on your other kiai times to make sure theres a NC consistency
03:42:278 (8) - Bring this closer to the next note (03:42:460 (1) - ) or maybe even stack it on the head. The spacing between (7,8) is too similar to (8,1) and may cause a little confusion?
03:48:278 (1) - Again, idk about this single combo, I'd probably delete it

HiNA
00:42:460 (1) - Delete the whistle on this whole slider. Slider body's a bit loud
01:24:096 (1) - Delete NC, didn't see the point of the single combo
03:34:642 (1) - Try curving the 2nd half of this slider http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/763827 fits a little better with (2) imo
03:57:733 (1) - Delete NC, NC on next note; to mark a new stanza?
had fun playing this :D

Nice map!! Though not really a big fan of your Finish orz
Good luck for rank <3 8-)
(also i started this mod 2 days ago so sry if it's a bit outdated xD)
Topic Starter
termerys
Thank you for your mod, I really appriciate it. But at the moment, I'm not at home. I'll be back on Tuesday
Leorda
Hi there

[General]
* Your BG filesize are too big, recompress it to less than 1MB


[Rox's Easy]
01:52:824 (1) - Don't use 2 repeating slider, it's confusing for beginner because they don't know when it's end
02:24:460 (2,1) - For better blanket combo, make a pattern like this one? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/766014
03:07:005 (1) - Remove new combo, since you add NC every 2 bars
03:09:914 (1) - ^
03:28:824 (1) - Finish at repeating slider doesn't fit to music, since the music doesn't hit cymbal
03:41:005 (2) - Add finish at head & tail slider? Since the music hit the cymbal?


[Normal]
00:48:642 (5,1) - Move 1 grid left for alligning the pattern? (nazi)
01:48:460 (1) - Remove whistle at sliderbody? Feels useless....
01:55:369 (2) - I feel this looks inapproriate for normal diff due to beginners having difficulty for reading this slider. Consider to change it?
03:02:642 (1,2) - I feel this pattern are part of lazy mapper (am I right?), for avoiding the beginner from boringness, why not change this pattern?
03:15:369 (3) - Spacing error
03:31:733 - Add note here? Feels empty....
03:41:733 (1) - Remove new combo, since you add NC every 2 bars


[Kanto's Hard]
* The 3rd kiai should end at 03:46:278

00:39:187 (1) - Remove new combo, you probably mistake
03:31:005 (1) - ^


[HiNA]
00:26:096 (4) - This slider needs more curvy, BTW
01:03:369 (2) - New combo?


Good luck
KantoKun

LunarSakuya wrote:

Hi ^^

General
- Your kiai times are inconsistent. I would use HiNA as the reference. Rox's Easy may need to be mapped until the end but if not, you might as well delete the kiai time from 04:03:733 to 04:15:187 in HiNA. It's not really needed much anyway imo. Watch out specifically for Kanto's Hard.

- Consider adding Hayate no Gotoku to tags

- your bg image is way too large lol. Please recompress it so it's at least less than 1mb. If you have trouble, pm me and I'll do it for you.

- In the .osu file of Kanto's Hard under Events, change the bg code line to 0,0,"hina_bg.png",0,0

Kanto's Hard
00:16:824 (3) - Finish on head to bring out this intro
00:19:733 (1) - ^
00:21:914 (4) - NC, i think the SV change is noticeable enough
00:46:096 (2) - ^
02:30:642 (1) - Finish on head, new stanza
02:35:551 (2) - Try replacing this with a single note http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/763811 Follows the instruments better & seems like a less-awkward transition imo
03:05:551 (1) - hm i highly suggest you map this part out since i don't feel like anything's escalating here in the bgm. :? Also avoids the small spinner spam with 03:14:096 (1) -
03:18:824 (1) - Why Soft? This has a very similar tone as the previous combo. Please change back to Normal set and perhaps add a finish at the end
03:31:005 (1) - not sure about this single combo...i'd check back on your other kiai times to make sure theres a NC consistency
03:42:278 (8) - Bring this closer to the next note (03:42:460 (1) - ) or maybe even stack it on the head. The spacing between (7,8) is too similar to (8,1) and may cause a little confusion?
03:48:278 (1) - Again, idk about this single combo, I'd probably delete it

Nice map!! Though not really a big fan of your Finish orz
Good luck for rank <3 8-)
(also i started this mod 2 days ago so sry if it's a bit outdated xD)

Leorda wrote:

Hi there

[General]
* Your BG filesize are too big, recompress it to less than 1MB

[Kanto's Hard]
* The 3rd kiai should end at 03:46:278

00:39:187 (1) - Remove new combo, you probably mistake
03:31:005 (1) - ^

good luck
Thx~ Fix all and
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: 06 - Merry-go-round Mellow.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 68480
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
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[Editor]
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[Metadata]
Title:Merry-go-round Mellow
TitleUnicode:メリーゴーランドメロウ
Artist:Itou Shizuka
ArtistUnicode:伊藤 静
Creator:termerys
Version:Kanto's Hard
Source:HiNA2 Spring has come!!
Tags:katsura hinagiku roxkyuubiforever kantokun
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[Difficulty]
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92,244,217551,6,0,P|156:240|152:164,1,142,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,96,218096,1,4,0:0:0:0:
384,96,218460,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,296,218823,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,296,219187,6,0,L|256:368,2,71,4|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,172,219733,2,0,L|240:164,3,35.5
300,176,220096,2,0,L|340:184,3,35.5,8|8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,200,220460,6,0,P|392:128|328:100,1,142,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,160,221005,2,0,P|260:232|324:260,1,142,0|2,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
404,300,221551,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,328,221642,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,348,221733,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,356,221824,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,352,221914,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,272,222278,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,272,222460,6,0,P|148:280|192:208,1,142,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,88,223005,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,120,223187,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,223369,12,0,224823,0:0:0:0:
172,132,226096,5,0,0:0:0:0:
140,208,226278,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,200,226642,1,2,0:0:0:0:
344,272,226824,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,148,227187,2,0,B|444:116|428:24|384:12,2,142,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,104,228278,2,0,L|176:172,1,142
148,224,229005,6,0,B|176:192|228:192|260:216,1,106.5,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,256,229733,1,0,2:0:0:0:
360,180,229914,1,4,0:0:0:0:
340,96,230096,1,0,2:0:0:0:
264,48,230278,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,56,230460,1,0,2:0:0:0:
120,124,230642,5,2,0:0:0:0:
124,132,230733,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,140,230824,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,148,230914,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,156,231005,1,2,0:0:0:0:
140,164,231096,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,172,231187,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,180,231278,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,188,231369,2,0,L|172:228,3,35.5,2|2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,252,231733,2,0,L|208:268,4,35.5,2|2|0|0|6,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
Frostmourne
Let give a try on this one. Everything looks fine to me.
Bubbled :)
Backstep
ดีใจด้วยเติม ฟองละ

(ระยะห่างคอมเม้นตั้งแต่บนเรปจิ๊ป โหดมาก 5 เดือน orz ._.)
Oyatsu
Omg... SO nice song!! Rank plzzzzz :)

Source should be: Hayate no Gotoku!
"HiNA2 Spring has come" is only a name of Album this song. Plz also add "HiNA2 Spring has come" in tags will better
And Artist is "Shizuka Itou".

- Link - from: http://hayatenogotoku.wikia.com/wiki/Ha ... g_has_come
Gamu

Oyatsu wrote:

Omg... SO nice song!! Rank plzzzzz :)

Source should be: Hayate no Gotoku!
"HiNA2 Spring has come" is only a name of Album this song. Plz also add "HiNA2 Spring has come" in tags will better
And Artist is "Shizuka Itou".

- Link - from: http://hayatenogotoku.wikia.com/wiki/Ha ... g_has_come
Artist name is no problem. It is written in the rule

Rule wrote:

Eastern artists must be written in the proper 'surname firstname' format (e.g. Japanese/Chinese/Korean). For artists which have a preferred romanisation, use this one.
I think should be a blank source.
Because, this song is a song album, but not used in the anime.


Source must be changed to anime name.
And, Album name must be added to Tags.

Anime name: Hayate no Gotoku!
Album name: HiNA2 Spring has come!!

Well, I am looking forward this map :3

Edit: sorry, There was a little mistake.
Garven
Go ahead and fix the stuff that Gamu pointed out then.

[General]
00:22:642 - I can have the title text appear at the point if you'd like.
Tick rate 2 fits this song best.
03:21:005 - wtf is that voice half-coming in? Bad mixing?

[Easy]
Raise your OD by 1 at least.
00:34:642 - This is really really quiet against the song. I'd raise the volume a little bit.
00:43:005 (3,4,5,1) - Whoa whoa, compare your spacing here. This shouldn't be happening in an Easy.
01:27:187 (2) - ctrl + g flows better
01:52:824 (1) - I don't recommend having more than one repeat on such a short slider in an Easy difficulty. It's hard to react with so little time.
02:21:914 (1,1) - It'd be awesome if you could rearrange this so there wasn't that huge overlap
03:05:551 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Considering how long your combos are for the rest of the map, this was a bit over-done.
03:14:278 (1) - This ends kind of awkwardly. Maybe have it end at 03:16:096 - with the drum clap, then have a second spinner from 03:17:187 - to 03:19:369 - (end with a finish)
03:22:278 (1,2) - Have these soft hits instead of normal?
03:43:187 (1) - End this at 03:44:824 - to allow for recovery time.
Nice to see decent slider shapes considering the age of the map.

[Normal]
Raise the OD by 1 at least.
Overall, I think the presentation would be a lot better if you could get rid of all those tiny overlaps with the 1/2 rhythms (like what you did at 01:21:369 (2,3) - ). That or reduce the circle size by 1.
Also it feels like you're using 1/2 rhythms far too much for a Normal. The transition from the Easy to this is pretty high on velocity alone - factoring the rhythms as well makes it rather over the top. The chorus' feel okay, but the parts between mostly feel a bit too 1/2 heavy.
01:18:824 (2) - This would have much better impact as circles
01:32:460 (1) - Way too soon after a spinner for a Normal. Give more recovery time (with this situation, it's probably best to just extend the spinner.
01:48:460 (1) - That whistle on the slider body intended? Sounds awful D:
02:24:460 (5,1) - The way the melody is moving, using a stack here really breaks the flow.
02:29:005 (5,6) - Instead of two circles, try deleting 6 and making 5 a slider from where it is now to 02:29:369 -
03:02:642 (1,2) - This is really bland rhythmically. Think you can make it fit the song a bit better?
03:19:369 (1) - End this at 03:21:369 - (same with the spinner in Hina)
03:22:278 (1) - The whistle on the slider body intended?
03:31:733 - Feels so empty without a beat here.
03:43:460 (1) - End this at 03:45:369 - and add a circle at 03:46:278 - so that there's enough time for recovery

I'll mod the rest later. Ran out of time. Poke me if I take too long please.
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