ragelewa wrote:

penis

I made a video so I could complain about the spinner

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R E D wrote:

Spin is NOT fine. The last spiner is harder than whole map :\ I LOVE this map! please make something about the spinner :\


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=POK7qDkwieo

Maraiga wrote:

R E D wrote:

Spin is NOT fine. The last spiner is harder than whole map :\ I LOVE this map! please make something about the spinner :\


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=POK7qDkwieo

Sorry xavita, but it's still fine xD
It's not that hard, I'm not the best spinner, not even near that and miku spins less than me and passed it too.

• I think the current rhythm here sounds fine, and the rhythm is consistent with the beginning.

• I want my map to catch the drum sounds in the song, so I'm keeping this

• same thing basically

• I'm keeping the 1/1 here for a better accelerated effect with 03:03:671 (1,2,3) -

1. Remove the countdown from the standard diffs.
2. You should check the kiai times in the extra and hard diff. I can see that some of them are unsnapped for +1ms or -1ms. You can see it here: http://puu.sh/16G6E
3. Don't use kiai times during break time, it's simply dumb lol. I'm talking about break time in the hard diff on 04:36:536. You could remove the break time as the extra diff

1. 00:15:469 (1) - Remove new combo to keep consistency with 00:04:683 (4)
2. 00:33:671 (1) - I'd add a green line on 00:34:008 to silence the slider's tick because its sound is really too loud together with that whistle on the slider's end
3. 00:36:368 (1) - ^
4. 00:39:065 (1) - ^
5. 00:41:930 Add a circle? Making something like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:10:076 (1) - This slider touches the HP bar: http://puu.sh/16Gl8. You should move it somewhere else
7. 01:36:031 (1) - Remove new combo? It's unnecessary IMO
8. 01:40:076 (2,3,4) - I think this pattern could be improved to have a better flow. You could make something like this, more flowing and enjoyable to play:
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   

   280,112,100076,2,0,B|240:128|192:120,1,80,8|0
   40,216,100413,2,0,B|80:208|128:224,1,80
   240,272,100750,1,8

9. 01:56:424 (2,3) - Remove clap from (2)'s tail adding it on (3) instead. Following this suggestion you should also remove clap from 01:57:267 (1)'s head and tail (The clap should be only on the reverse arrow)
10. 02:07:379 (2) - Same of 01:10:076 (1)
11. 02:07:885 (2,3,4) - To keep consistency with 02:02:492 (3,4) / 02:13:278 (3,4) and 02:18:671 (3,4) you should make a jump between (3) and (4) and not with (2,3)
12. 03:25:581 (2) - This slider could be confusing to play, there are so much repeats IMO. At the first try with Hidden everyone would think that the rhythm is this one: http://puu.sh/16GDN
13. 04:53:727 (3) - HP bar :\
14. 04:57:098 (1) - ^
15. 05:23:896 (1) - ^
16. 05:26:256 (4) - Remove whistle? You didn't use it on the next pattern: 05:31:312 (4,5,6)

1. 00:01:986 (3) - (nazi) x:336 y:284? It would be blanketted better with 00:01:143 (1)
2. 00:32:660 (1) - This stream should start on 00:32:576, 1/4 earlier. What abot to add a circle on the blue tick then?
3. 02:14:121 (1) - Remove new combo
4. 05:00:469 (5) - HP bar

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i smell fire!

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