Alright let's see what I can find. Found this on #modreqs.
Bold: Unrankable/must fix. Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you. Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it. Blue: Comment. Just putting this for fun
[General] are you sure you want a white combo color? some players' eyes might get hurt because of this. the purple combo color should be lighter to match miu's hair.
[Easy] Decrease the OD and AR by 1. it looks too hard for beginners if you ask me. 00:11:284 (3) - beginners might think that this is a circle due to the sliderlength. extend the slider till 00:11:798. if im correct it follows the bass if im right. 00:21:741 (2,3) - i don't think that this is a good idea in easy diffs. beginners might hit it too early due to the hitburst covering it. space it out to make it easier for beginners. 00:27:912 (2,3) - ^ 00:34:598 (3,4) - same as above but since it's at the red ticks, beginners might hit it too early or late. i suggest deleting all 3 notes and add a slider at 00:34:427 and ending it at 00:35:284 to follow the vocals a lot accurate. 00:42:312 (1,2,3) - same as 00:21:741. 00:56:884 (1) - end this spinner till 00:58:770 because it follows the piano and it fits with the song. i felt uncomfortable when it reached at the red tick. 01:05:627 (3) - maybe add a finish at the beginning to match the vocals? 01:07:341 (4,5) - same as 00:21:741. 01:11:798 (1) - this note is being covered by spinner-osu and that makes it hard for beginners to see where the note is. move it where it can be fully visible for beginners to see. 01:23:113 (2) - same as 00:11:284 but i'll leave this up to you. 01:24:655 (4) - ^ 02:29:284 (1) - rotate this note -50 degrees to avoid the bad overlap. it should be like this. 02:46:770 (2) - same as 01:23:113. 02:48:312 (4) - ^ this is just my personal opinion on this but there's too many stacks. like i said it'd be hard for beginners to know where the note is or when to hit the note. so i suggest unstacking some of the notes or all of them to make it easier for beginners. it'd be fine if it was a normal diff, but for an easy, it's not.
[Normal] either decrease the HP by 1 to make it easier, or increase the OD by 1 to make it a bit challenging for players. 00:11:284 (3) - add another repeat to follow the bass. 00:20:027 - add a circle here? the vocals are still going from here. 00:22:427 (4) - a NC here because of new lyrics. 00:28:598 (6) - is there a reason why a whistle is here? if there's no reason, remove it because it looks like it's just put there. 00:36:141 (5) - ^ 00:45:055 (4) - same as 00:22:427. 01:13:170 (7) - ^ . (7,8) is following "sekai no" which is connected in vocals. sort of... 01:25:512 (5) - add a finish here to match the cymbals. 01:47:112 (6) - i see that this is a blanket but make this slider look like (5) for a smoother flow to the next note. 02:26:541 (6) - same as 00:22:427. pertty nice, but the NCs bothered me a bit.
[Hard] increase the HP by 1. i feel that you're going too easy on players who play the hard diff. 00:11:455 (7) - this slider should end at 00:12:141 to follow the instrumental. if you do this, move the spinner 1 tick up as the long pause connects from the slider. 00:43:512 (4,1) - keep the spacing consistent. it's at 0.67 and the default DS is at 1.0 if this is intentional move this to avoid the slight overlap on (3). 01:00:141 (3) - maybe a NC because the melody changes? 01:05:627 (5) - same as above because of new lyrics. 01:16:598 (5) - ^ 01:39:912 (2) - it'd look a lot nicer if you can stack the ends together to make a nice heart out of these 2 sliders. 01:57:227 (3) - Ctrl+J for a better flow to the next note. 02:22:427 (1) - is this a hold slider? im just confirming this because i want to make sure. you dont have to do anything about this. 02:34:084 (6) - do Ctrl+R for a smoother path from the previous slider. nice diff you got here.
[Insane] are you sure that HP8 is perfect for this diff? 02:34:084 (6) - how about replacing this for a stream or a stacked stream to challenge players? this 1/4 kick slider look too easy to be in an insane diff IMO. 00:52:255 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - make this pattern like this. personally i dont like back and forth patterns because sometimes they can be boring for me to play. 01:06:312 (3) - how about stacking this on the end of (1) for a smoother flow. if you ignore this, then move it below the end of (1) so that (2-5) is shaped like a parallelogram. 02:40:255 (5) - maybe a NC because of new lyrics? hands down my favorite diff in the mapset <3
20:48 <Kawayi_Rika> : let me irc mod >w< 20:48 <S i R i R u> : okay 20:48 <Kawayi_Rika> : redling :3 20:49 <S i R i R u> : :3 20:51 <Kawayi_Rika> : Inconsistency Kiai Times 20:51 <Kawayi_Rika> : >w< 20:52 <S i R i R u> : (o'ω'o) 20:52 <Kawayi_Rika> : http://puu.sh/C2RX 20:52 <Kawayi_Rika> : http://puu.sh/C2S1 20:52 <Kawayi_Rika> : try change same >< 20:53 <Kawayi_Rika> : 02:36:312 (6) - 20:53 <Kawayi_Rika> : Insane 20:53 <S i R i R u> : oh yes 20:53 <Kawayi_Rika> : I think thos circle should to here 02:36:141 - 20:55 <S i R i R u> : okay 20:55 <Kawayi_Rika> : :3 20:55 <S i R i R u> : (☉౪ ⊙) 20:57 <Kawayi_Rika> : 00:52:941 (4) - 20:58 <Kawayi_Rika> : Hard 20:58 <Kawayi_Rika> : add new combo to here 20:58 <Kawayi_Rika> : and remove00:53:284 (1) - 20:59 <Kawayi_Rika> : 00:55:169 (6) - Add new combo and Remove 00:56:027 (1) - 20:59 <S i R i R u> : 52.941 I think i'll add nc and move too 20:59 <S i R i R u> : I think hard to see for now 21:00 <Kawayi_Rika> : yes 21:00 <Kawayi_Rika> : 21:03 <S i R i R u> : okay 21:03 <Kawayi_Rika> : Maybe add a circle? 21:03 <Kawayi_Rika> : 01:04:427 - 21:04 <S i R i R u> : can i keep this ? If it's not unrankable i live this point XD 21:04 <Kawayi_Rika> : just suggestion >< 21:04 <Kawayi_Rika> : if you want 21:04 <S i R i R u> : :3 21:10 <Kawayi_Rika> : 00:06:484 (1) - 21:10 *S i R i R u s away: Toilet (;ﾟﾛﾟ)ﾊｧﾊｧ 21:10 <Kawayi_Rika> : Normal 21:10 <Kawayi_Rika> : ...toilet 21:11 <Kawayi_Rika> : 00:06:484 (1) - this spinner should start to 00:06:655. 21:11 <S i R i R u> : (｀･ω･´)ゞ 21:11 <Kawayi_Rika> : www 21:12 <Kawayi_Rika> : 00:15:570 (1) - 21:12 <Kawayi_Rika> : New combo bug 21:12 <S i R i R u> : ∠(≧ω・) 21:16 <Kawayi_Rika> : 02:24:827 (3,6) - 21:16 <Kawayi_Rika> : http://puu.sh/C326 21:16 <Kawayi_Rika> : like this? 21:18 <Kawayi_Rika> : nope... 21:18 <Kawayi_Rika> : keep this pls >< 21:18 <S i R i R u> : changed 21:18 <S i R i R u> : oops... 21:18 <Kawayi_Rika> : orz 21:18 <Kawayi_Rika> : x.x 21:18 <Kawayi_Rika> : sorry x.x 21:18 <S i R i R u> : lol... http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/346194 21:18 <S i R i R u> : okay I'll change it back lol 21:19 <Kawayi_Rika> : yes 21:19 <Kawayi_Rika> : that is right ! 21:19 <Kawayi_Rika> : ww 21:20 <Kawayi_Rika> : 02:48:312 (6,7) - 21:20 <Kawayi_Rika> : change slider more easy playble? 21:20 <S i R i R u> : fixed o..O 21:20 <Kawayi_Rika> : :3 21:22 <Kawayi_Rika> : 00:43:684 (3) - Remove this circle sound much better 21:22 <Kawayi_Rika> : easy 21:23 <S i R i R u> : :3 21:24 <Kawayi_Rika> : 01:56:370 (2,3) - 21:24 <Kawayi_Rika> : add new combo or unstack :3 21:25 <S i R i R u> : ∠(・ω・) 21:26 <Kawayi_Rika> : 02:48:655 (1) - 21:26 <Kawayi_Rika> : missing add finish :3 21:26 <S i R i R u> : added ε-(/･ω･)/ 21:26 <Kawayi_Rika> : ok ~ thanks all ~ :3 21:27 <Kawayi_Rika> : submit gogo >< 21:27 <S i R i R u> : yes sir ∠(≧ω・) 21:28 <S i R i R u> : submited ^^