Hello!~ Here's my mod!~ and sorry for being sooo late! >< (a request from my queue)

• [General]

1. Delete the .osb file on your folder. It is unnecessary for your map since it doesn't have any SB's.
   
   [Easy]
2. 00:29:502 (5) - This note overlaps the HP bar. It is unrankable so try moving things that touch the HP bar downwards/away from it.
   
   [Normal]
3. 00:28:146 (3,4) - Fix Spacing.
4. 00:28:824 (4,5) - Is this a jump? Please fix spacing of this one, it is not necessary for normal diffs to have jumps.
5. 01:14:587 (1) - This note overlaps the HP bar. It is unrankable so try moving things that touch the HP bar downwards/away from it.
6. 01:18:655 (1,2) - Fix Spacing.
7. 02:08:147 (4) - Slider's end touches the hp bar.
8. 02:11:536 (1) - Slider's start touches the hp bar.
   
   [controlled fay]
9. 00:19:672 (2) - Slider's end touches the hp bar.
10. 00:52:892 (1,2) - Move this guys downwards, they're too high.
11. 01:30:858 (3) - ^
12. 02:43:740 (4) - This note is overlaps the HP bar. It is unrankable so try moving things that touch the HP bar downwards/away from it.
    
    [Chaos]
13. 00:15:604 (3) - This note overlaps the HP bar. It is unrankable so try moving things that touch the HP bar downwards/away from it.
14. 00:16:960 (3) - ^
15. 01:03:062 (7,8) - Slider's end touches the hp bar.
16. 01:06:282 (4) - This note overlaps the HP bar. It is unrankable so try moving things that touch the HP bar downwards/away from it.
17. 01:41:706 (1) - ^
18. 01:48:147 (5,6,7,8) - ^
19. 02:56:856 (3,5) - ^
20. 02:59:542 (3,4) - Move this guys downwards, they're too high.
21. 03:02:751 (4,5,1) - These notes overlaps the HP bar. It is unrankable so try moving things that touch the HP bar downwards/away from it.

That's all!~

hi

Easy
- fine, 但是不map完么?

Normal
- fine.

controlled fay
01:17:977 (1) - 感觉不需要NC = =
01:25:435 (5) - NC?

Chaos
00:24:418 (1,2,3) - 试着把(2)放到(456,144)看看?
00:25:943 (8) - 不要碰到00:25:689 (6,7) 更整洁些
00:33:909 (1) - Ctrl+R? 感觉flow更好
00:44:757 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - 叠一起有点像偷懒..
00:57:130 (8) - NC
02:57:453 (7) - NC

From my mod queue

[General]
Delete .osb if no sb
i love the song!

[Easy]
Finish song ... incomplete map?

[Normal]
AR -1
OD -1
00:08:467 instead of break maybe add spinner or some sliders?
00:11:200 ^
01:01:015 (2) this slider is funny.
01:07:815 (1) new combo
02:14:285 (2) same slider as 01:01:015
02:23:735 (5) new combo this slider, fit with song
02:33:903 (4,5,6,7) maybe put pattern? don't stack not nice.
02:34:615 this break is quite long
03:05:838 is this end of song? still have 30 second
Also i think maybe this can change to hard instead of normal

[controlled fay]
change name to controlled_fay?
01:09:531 add more repeat sliders here same as (1) instead of the break.
01:37:803 add more slider? feel strange here without any note
02:11:667 long break again...
03:06:070 same as normal here end?

[Chaos]
HP +1
OD +1
00:15:604 (3) - note overlaps the HP bar Unrankable Error.
00:16:960 (3) - ^ Unrankable Error.
00:44:771 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) Don't stack + New combo at 10?
01:03:062 (7,8) - HP Bar Unrankable Error.
01:06:282 (4) - ^ Unrankable Error.
01:41:706 (1) - ^ Unrankable Error.
01:48:147 (5,6,7,8) - ^ Unrankable Error.
02:56:856 (3,5) - ^ Unrankable Error.
02:59:542 (3,4) - too high up
03:02:751 (4,5,1) - HP Bar Unrankable Error.
03:05:880 here end? maybe end with spinner. (Same as normal + controlled fay) extra 30sec

Extra remarks:
i think fay did very good job in mapping controlled fay
Chaos has very very nice streams

End of mod
kd if help.

I see you've asked for alot of mods in a short time xD

Well, anyway hopefully some of this is different to the other guys. (I modded before I saw what they posted)



Hey! Modding from my queue as requested!


General
Kiai:
All of your kiai times are totally different.
In order to be ranked, they all need to be at the same times, including guest difficulties.
(If one diff is longer, but the rest start at the time as in shorter diff's it's ok I think)


Easy
~1:30:00 You should make the volume 75~80%, maybe 80 because it seems to be used a fair bit.
01:32:214 (1) - Add a clap to the end of the slider. (Only the end)
01:33:570 (2) - Do the same.
01:34:926 (3) - Clap on the first repeat (1:35:265), and at the end of the slider.
01:41:706 (5) - This sounds nice, and is a nice rythm, but would probably throw someone off in an easy difficulty.
You could add a 1/2 slider at 01:41:706, and a note on the 1/2 beat at 01:42:214 instead if you like.

01:49:841 (1,2,3) - This plays pretty hard.

01:51:197 (1,2,3,4) - This part plays hard aswell.
consider removing (4) and using repeats on (3) to cover the time.
Note 01:52:553 (1) will have to be redistance snapped. (It will be on like x3.8 ._.), as well as possibly the following combo.

01:56:960 (1) - Make it like this


Normal
00:08:147 (1,1,1) - Having break time at the start of a song like this, is pretty boring. I would highly recommend mapping though those first 2 break times.
00:14:248 (x) - Add a note.
00:14:926 (x) - Add a note.
00:16:960 (x) - Add a note.
00:17:638 (x) - Add a note.
^ Imo you really need the notes at the start of the song, having random breaks during a heavy beat is very off putting.

00:48:824 (4,1) - Should map this gap.
00:51:536 (4,1) - As well as this one.
01:27:469 (1) - Unstack this for a normal it's really confusing (1) looks like the slider (2).
01:43:740 (2) - You should make the timing point here (middle one) around 60% volume, so that the 1/3 beat isnt quite as loud.
01:48:485 (1) - Could do it here too, but isn't as noticeable.
02:08:824 (5) - Remove the hit circle and replace it with a 1/1 slider:
02:09:333 (1) - Move this to 02:09:502.

Edit: You could also add a note between those (above) sliders. At 02:09:333.



controlled fay
Didn't find anything of note.

Chaos
00:15:604 (3) - This note touches the hp bar if you wanted to fix it.
00:16:960 (3) - ^ Same here.
02:46:707 (1) - Dat stream xD

Thats about it from me ._.

Asgard wrote:

General

• 
  

1. What the F.. there are so many KIAI time! and this is unrankable http://puu.sh/hnUy
   OK..deleted some 1/8 KIAI

Chaos

1. 00:15:604 (3) - hit HP bar fixed.
2. 00:26:960 (4,1) - unrankable slider why?why unrankable?
3. 01:27:130 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Hard to see unstacked.
4. 02:58:647 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - so far i would like to keep this.
   [/b]

controlled fay

1. 00:54:926 (1,2,3,4) - change pattern.. hard to see
   

Normal

• 
  I will fix them for Anshi

1. 00:29:163 (5) - so far 1.0x distance spacing here:3
2. 01:28:824 (3) - this is not good stack end of slider X
3. 01:30:858 (4) - overlap that's OK imo...
4. 01:39:333 (2,3,4,5) - hard for beginner X
5. 01:47:469 (5,6,7,8) - ^ ^
6. 02:04:248 (2,3,4,5) - how about this? http://puu.sh/hnZF K
7. 02:08:824 (5) - not good keep
8. plz.. reduce distance after second timing point OK..
   [/b]

Easy

1. make whole song No...120s is enough for an Easy imo..and the part with 1/4 full filled is too hard to map for an Easy(it might feel 'weird')
   

thx for modding!!><

Kirino Kousaka wrote:

Hello!~ Here's my mod!~ and sorry for being sooo late! >< (a request from my queue)

• [General]

1. Delete the .osb file on your folder. It is unnecessary for your map since it doesn't have any SB's. done
   
   [Easy]
2. 00:29:502 (5) - This note overlaps the HP bar. It is unrankable so try moving things that touch the HP bar downwards/away from it.
   
   [Normal]
3. 00:28:146 (3,4) - Fix Spacing. fixed
4. 00:28:824 (4,5) - Is this a jump? Please fix spacing of this one, it is not necessary for normal diffs to have jumps. fixed.
5. 01:14:587 (1) - This note overlaps the HP bar. It is unrankable so try moving things that touch the HP bar downwards/away from it.
6. 01:18:655 (1,2) - Fix Spacing. fixed.
7. 02:08:147 (4) - Slider's end touches the hp bar.
8. 02:11:536 (1) - Slider's start touches the hp bar.
   
   [controlled fay]
9. 00:19:672 (2) - Slider's end touches the hp bar.
10. 00:52:892 (1,2) - Move this guys downwards, they're too high.
11. 01:30:858 (3) - ^
12. 02:43:740 (4) - This note is overlaps the HP bar. It is unrankable so try moving things that touch the HP bar downwards/away from it.
    
    [Chaos]
13. 00:15:604 (3) - This note overlaps the HP bar. It is unrankable so try moving things that touch the HP bar downwards/away from it.
14. 00:16:960 (3) - ^
15. 01:03:062 (7,8) - Slider's end touches the hp bar.
16. 01:06:282 (4) - This note overlaps the HP bar. It is unrankable so try moving things that touch the HP bar downwards/away from it.
17. 01:41:706 (1) - ^
18. 01:48:147 (5,6,7,8) - ^
19. 02:56:856 (3,5) - ^
20. 02:59:542 (3,4) - Move this guys downwards, they're too high.
21. 03:02:751 (4,5,1) - These notes overlaps the HP bar. It is unrankable so try moving things that touch the HP bar downwards/away from it.

That's all!~

thx for modding! fix most of the HP bar issue~

S h i o n wrote:

hi

Easy
- fine, 但是不map完么? 歌曲后面1/4用得太多,另外觉得E难度120s也够长了0.0

Normal
- fine.

controlled fay
01:17:977 (1) - 感觉不需要NC = =
01:25:435 (5) - NC?

Chaos
00:24:418 (1,2,3) - 试着把(2)放到(456,144)看看? 好
00:25:943 (8) - 不要碰到00:25:689 (6,7) 更整洁些 fixed.
00:33:909 (1) - Ctrl+R? 感觉flow更好 好
00:44:757 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - 叠一起有点像偷懒.. 特意做成原地连打的~就不改了
00:57:130 (8) - NC k
02:57:453 (7) - NC k

simple mod but still helpful,谢谢来mod

---Assault[K]--- wrote:

From my mod queue

[General]
Delete .osb if no sb deleted.
i love the song! =w=

[Easy]
Finish song ... incomplete map? last part of the song is full of 1/4,so i stopped here

[Normal] fix them for Anshi
AR -1 X
OD -1 K
00:08:467 instead of break maybe add spinner or some sliders? OK
00:11:200 ^ ^
01:01:015 (2) this slider is funny. it follows the rythmn
01:07:815 (1) new combo X
02:14:285 (2) same slider as 01:01:015 same as above
02:23:735 (5) new combo this slider, fit with song K
02:33:903 (4,5,6,7) maybe put pattern? don't stack not nice. OK
02:34:615 this break is quite long
03:05:838 is this end of song? still have 30 second yes
Also i think maybe this can change to hard instead of normal

[controlled fay]
change name to controlled_fay?
01:09:531 add more repeat sliders here same as (1) instead of the break.
01:37:803 add more slider? feel strange here without any note
02:11:667 long break again...
03:06:070 same as normal here end?

[Chaos]
HP +1 that will break the max score limit
OD +1 ^
00:15:604 (3) - note overlaps the HP bar Unrankable Error. fixed
00:16:960 (3) - ^ Unrankable Error. ^
00:44:771 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) Don't stack + New combo at 10? changed pattern
01:03:062 (7,8) - HP Bar Unrankable Error. fixed
01:06:282 (4) - ^ Unrankable Error. ^
01:41:706 (1) - ^ Unrankable Error. ^
01:48:147 (5,6,7,8) - ^ Unrankable Error. X,i can hardly see it touching the HP bar
02:56:856 (3,5) - ^ Unrankable Error. ^
02:59:542 (3,4) - too high up
03:02:751 (4,5,1) - HP Bar Unrankable Error. X
03:05:880 here end? maybe end with spinner. (Same as normal + controlled fay) extra 30sec here is the end of the song so i wont add any spinner

Extra remarks:
i think fay did very good job in mapping controlled fay
Chaos has very very nice streams

End of mod
kd if help.

thank you for modding!

Lucy-Kaede wrote:

I see you've asked for alot of mods in a short time xD

Well, anyway hopefully some of this is different to the other guys. (I modded before I saw what they posted)



Hey! Modding from my queue as requested!


General
Kiai:
All of your kiai times are totally different.
In order to be ranked, they all need to be at the same times, including guest difficulties.
(If one diff is longer, but the rest start at the time as in shorter diff's it's ok I think)
fixed.

Easy
~1:30:00 You should make the volume 75~80%, maybe 80 because it seems to be used a fair bit. OK
01:32:214 (1) - Add a clap to the end of the slider. (Only the end) K
01:33:570 (2) - Do the same. K
01:34:926 (3) - Clap on the first repeat (1:35:265), and at the end of the slider. done
01:41:706 (5) - This sounds nice, and is a nice rythm, but would probably throw someone off in an easy difficulty.
You could add a 1/2 slider at 01:41:706, and a note on the 1/2 beat at 01:42:214 instead if you like. Done

01:49:841 (1,2,3) - This plays pretty hard. fixed.

Make it like this

01:51:197 (1,2,3,4) - This part plays hard aswell.
consider removing (4) and using repeats on (3) to cover the time. X,it's even harder...so only rearrange the sliders
Note 01:52:553 (1) will have to be redistance snapped. (It will be on like x3.8 ._.), as well as possibly the following combo. done

01:56:960 (1) - Make it like this done!


Normal
00:08:147 (1,1,1) - Having break time at the start of a song like this, is pretty boring. I would highly recommend mapping though those first 2 break times.
00:14:248 (x) - Add a note.
00:14:926 (x) - Add a note.
00:16:960 (x) - Add a note.
00:17:638 (x) - Add a note.
^ Imo you really need the notes at the start of the song, having random breaks during a heavy beat is very off putting.
mapped this part
00:48:824 (4,1) - Should map this gap. K
00:51:536 (4,1) - As well as this one. ^
01:27:469 (1) - Unstack this for a normal it's really confusing (1) looks like the slider (2). OK
01:43:740 (2) - You should make the timing point here (middle one) around 60% volume, so that the 1/3 beat isnt quite as loud. done
01:48:485 (1) - Could do it here too, but isn't as noticeable. done
02:08:824 (5) - Remove the hit circle and replace it with a 1/1 slider: fixed.

Do this

02:09:333 (1) - Move this to 02:09:502. K

Edit: You could also add a note between those (above) sliders. At 02:09:333. added 2 notes



controlled fay
Didn't find anything of note.

Chaos
00:15:604 (3) - This note touches the hp bar if you wanted to fix it. fixed.
00:16:960 (3) - ^ Same here. ^
02:46:707 (1) - Dat stream xD haha that's surprising><

Thats about it from me ._.

thank you for modding~ it helps a lot

General

• - SV的數字有點獵奇…修正一下 (改完有機率出現slider沒snap好的情況…有的話就按Timing>Recalculate Slider Lengths
  
  
  - 想說一下kiai方面使用的挺混亂的, 給你兩張圖自己核對一下>_<
  
  SPOILER

  
  

Chaos

• - Normal段落的音量降低一些! whistle稍吵

00:18:994 (T) - 無用綠線
00:20:858 (4,5,6,7,8) - 這邊幾個希望和前面的00:20:350 (1,2,3)分開一些
00:55:943 (3) - 拉長1/4, 刪00:56:197 (4) -
01:32:892 (4,5), 01:34:248 (4,5) - 這兩對slider+slider其實看不清楚(盡管我已經是用透明皮膚了) 稍微移開一點吧


後面的看過了就不多挑了 XD 繼續加油

@Pokie
感谢!!不过要准备六月的考试，只好先放置play了…时候再捡起来好了XD

Busy with school,（maybe）i have to grave this map for now…

Hi there~~mod from queue
抱歉有些晚，最近比较忙

General:

1. 所有难度的SliderMultiplier都有问题，请在osu文件中手动修回整数并且recalculate slider length。这问题似乎是因为调整timing导致的。
2. 建议不要用默认颜色。。。感觉太违和了……
3. 曲子后面没有map的部分有点长，可以考虑裁掉的……

Normal:

1. 00:08:147 (1,2) - 我觉得Normal里面这种放在红线上并不是很容易读的节奏还是不要stack了比较好
2. 00:29:841 (1,2,3) - 不弄成一样的么？
3. 00:34:587 (5,6) - 建议换成折返slider,并且只折返一次
4. 00:52:892 (1,2) - 这遮挡不是很好看……而且00:54:248 (3) - 很容易出现读图失误加上也没有特别的节奏在这里，考虑删掉吧
5. 00:54:587 - 然后考虑这里加note？
6. 01:01:028 (2) - 这扭曲成一团的slider。。。能试着把形状调整的更规则一些么……
7. 01:09:163 (8) - 放到360|192 ?
8. 01:15:943 (3) - 考虑减少一次折返
9. 01:22:045 (5) - ^
10. 01:22:723 (6,7,1,2) - 考虑把这4个放到一组NC
11. 01:24:079 (3) - 然后这里NC
12. 01:31:875 - 加note
13. 01:32:723 (2) - 这个折返听着有些别扭，建议做成白线上的slider
14. 01:34:587 - 加note
15. 01:35:435 (2) - 同前面……
16. 01:38:994 (1,1,2,1,2) - 这种排列很不适合normal，建议排开吧……
17. 01:41:706 (3) - NC
18. 02:02:215 (5) - 考虑删掉？
19. 02:17:977 - 考虑加note？
20. 02:19:333 - ^
21. 02:22:384 (1,2,3,4) - 感觉这里不需要下anti stream更何况是normal难度……
22. 02:31:367 (5) - 考虑删掉
23. 02:46:113 (2) - 减少一次折返
24. 02:53:124 (5,6) - 叠上，这速度排开间距就是坑normal级别的玩家呢……
25. 02:57:304 (3,4,5,6) - 这里很鲜明的白线节奏为什么要下在红线上？无法理解啊……建议全部放到白线……
26. 02:59:692 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^
27. 03:02:080 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^
28. 03:04:318 - Spinner可以考虑从这里开始……

菲姐的难度我就跳过去了……大概看了一下没有什么问题就是SV低了点，如果需要recheck的时候再找我吧

Chaos:

1. 00:13:570 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这一段我觉得完全没必要下1/2这么单调的节奏……主旋节奏什么的都被浪费了……
2. 00:25:689 (6,7) - 可以考虑删掉
3. 00:26:960 (4,1) - 这种造型 1.不推荐用 2.没叠好
4. 00:29:333 (4) - 考虑和(3)叠一起？
5. 00:30:180 (2) - 改成note放在原先结尾的位置？
6. 00:44:757 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - 这stream真的不好看……真的，而且部分还被spinner的score挡住导致更难受了……
7. 00:53:655 (4) - 放到(3)和(5)中间去
8. 00:56:197 (4,5,6) - 配合slider做个弧度出来？
9. 01:00:180 (4,4) - 叠起来
10. 01:07:808 (1) - 感觉太长了，完全可以拆成一个stream外加一个slider之类的……
11. 从01:14:587 - 到01:25:435 - 这段怎么说呢……应该是渐入高潮的一段却一点起伏都没有，只是绕着中间一个小圈子单纯的90度转来转去，显得太平淡而且缺乏变化了……试着把DS稍微做开一点，然后节奏也从1/1 1/2到加入三连什么的，使得整个的节奏变化更为平滑流畅一些会更好吧
12. 01:43:231 (1) - 这个转盘有点莫名其妙的感觉……把高潮的stream突然给中断了……建议前面部分改成长slider然后后半部分继续stream什么的
13. 01:53:062 - 加note
14. 02:06:452 (2) - 考虑删掉
15. 02:06:791 (1) - 考虑换成结尾处的一个note
16. 02:10:180 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 考虑做成间距逐渐拉大
17. 02:28:655 (4,5) - 删掉(5)，然后(4)做成折返

恩差不多就这些了，加油的说

[Timing]

1. You should usually put the offset in the very first beat, and that will be 11 with the current offset, but you got a wrong offset that made some red ticks feel purple, so use 4 ( -7 ) as the offset. dry beat need to be timed in their start

[Easy]

1. Complete it if you want me to mod the map. osu! is not a place for half-mapped easies.
2. Remeber that using some red tick fo consistency with music is better than not doing it

for the offset change?, i won't proceed doing a normal recheck (and mapping the easy last part...) if I don't know the response

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

for the offset change?, i won't proceed doing a normal recheck (and mapping the easy last part...) if I don't know the response

Agree with your idea about the Easy diff and the offset change.I'm busy with exams(from now to 6.15) so I can't do the offset change now (see my user page).Will fix everything when exams are over~I'll remind you in-game when i'm back. Sorry for the incovenience…

1 more month…

Edit:I'm back!

@Pokie 都改好了,KIAI那方面实在不知道规则到底是怎样... 另外因为迟了几个月,kd好像不能给了0.0 sorry...我该早点看的

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~mod from queue
抱歉有些晚，最近比较忙

General:

1. 所有难度的SliderMultiplier都有问题，请在osu文件中手动修回整数并且recalculate slider length。这问题似乎是因为调整timing导致的。
2. 建议不要用默认颜色。。。感觉太违和了……不懂配色...
3. 曲子后面没有map的部分有点长，可以考虑裁掉的……想保留全曲,有人喷再裁吧

Normal:

1. 00:08:147 (1,2) - 我觉得Normal里面这种放在红线上并不是很容易读的节奏还是不要stack了比较好
2. 00:29:841 (1,2,3) - 不弄成一样的么？
3. 00:34:587 (5,6) - 建议换成折返slider,并且只折返一次
4. 00:52:892 (1,2) - 这遮挡不是很好看……而且00:54:248 (3) - 很容易出现读图失误加上也没有特别的节奏在这里，考虑删掉吧
5. 00:54:587 - 然后考虑这里加note？
6. 01:01:028 (2) - 这扭曲成一团的slider。。。能试着把形状调整的更规则一些么……intentional,球的轨迹是跟着旋律的
   
7. 01:09:163 (8) - 放到360|192 ?
8. 01:15:943 (3) - 考虑减少一次折返
9. 01:22:045 (5) - ^
10. 01:22:723 (6,7,1,2) - 考虑把这4个放到一组NC
11. 01:24:079 (3) - 然后这里NC
12. 01:31:875 - 加note
13. 01:32:723 (2) - 这个折返听着有些别扭，建议做成白线上的slider我觉得还好
14. 01:34:587 - 加note
15. 01:35:435 (2) - 同前面……
16. 01:38:994 (1,1,2,1,2) - 这种排列很不适合normal，建议排开吧……
17. 01:41:706 (3) - NC
18. 02:02:215 (5) - 考虑删掉？
19. 02:17:977 - 考虑加note？
20. 02:19:333 - ^
21. 02:22:384 (1,2,3,4) - 感觉这里不需要下anti stream更何况是normal难度…… 想不到更好的排法了..
22. 02:31:367 (5) - 考虑删掉
23. 02:46:113 (2) - 减少一次折返
24. 02:53:124 (5,6) - 叠上，这速度排开间距就是坑normal级别的玩家呢……
25. 02:57:304 (3,4,5,6) - 这里很鲜明的白线节奏为什么要下在红线上？无法理解啊……建议全部放到白线……
26. 02:59:692 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^
27. 03:02:080 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^
28. 03:04:318 - Spinner可以考虑从这里开始……no change

菲姐的难度我就跳过去了……大概看了一下没有什么问题就是SV低了点，如果需要recheck的时候再找我吧

Chaos:

1. 00:13:570 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这一段我觉得完全没必要下1/2这么单调的节奏……主旋节奏什么的都被浪费了……我觉得还好吧..当时也有控分的想法,而且只有这个主旋律感觉好难下....
2. 00:25:689 (6,7) - 可以考虑删掉
3. 00:26:960 (4,1) - 这种造型 1.不推荐用 2.没叠好
4. 00:29:333 (4) - 考虑和(3)叠一起？
5. 00:30:180 (2) - 改成note放在原先结尾的位置？0.0不太明白
6. 00:44:757 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - 这stream真的不好看……真的，而且部分还被spinner的score挡住导致更难受了……
7. 00:53:655 (4) - 放到(3)和(5)中间去
8. 00:56:197 (4,5,6) - 配合slider做个弧度出来？
9. 01:00:180 (4,4) - 叠起来
10. 01:07:808 (1) - 感觉太长了，完全可以拆成一个stream外加一个slider之类的…… 我觉得这样玩着也很爽
11. 从01:14:587 - 到01:25:435 - 这段怎么说呢……应该是渐入高潮的一段却一点起伏都没有，只是绕着中间一个小圈子单纯的90度转来转去，显得太平淡而且缺乏变化了……试着把DS稍微做开一点，然后节奏也从1/1 1/2到加入三连什么的，使得整个的节奏变化更为平滑流畅一些会更好吧 先保留,这一段的下法要详细研究一下
12. 01:43:231 (1) - 这个转盘有点莫名其妙的感觉……把高潮的stream突然给中断了……建议前面部分改成长slider然后后半部分继续stream什么的 ？cool!连贯性大增
13. 01:53:062 - 加note
14. 02:06:452 (2) - 考虑删掉
15. 02:06:791 (1) - 考虑换成结尾处的一个note
16. 02:10:180 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 考虑做成间距逐渐拉大
17. 02:28:655 (4,5) - 删掉(5)，然后(4)做成折返

恩差不多就这些了，加油的说

除了标明的以外,其余的都改了...从你的mod里受到很大的启发,感谢来mod!

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[Timing]

1. You should usually put the offset in the very first beat, and that will be 11 with the current offset, but you got a wrong offset that made some red ticks feel purple, so use 4 ( -7 ) as the offset. dry beat need to be timed in their start

[Easy]

1. Complete it if you want me to mod the map. osu! is not a place for half-mapped easies.
2. Remeber that using some red tick fo consistency with music is better than not doing it

Offset change done.You can now begin with modding & easy collab!~

[Easy]

1. I would pretty much like to take time explaning it better and so... but
2. [Rhythm] In the start especially, I can feel it's a bit strange sometimes, and many times you do follow the synth, and many times many white ticks are not that easy to guess... if following music... You can see the example for this too
3. [Graphic] You will refine you're graphics while mapping as it's somewhat a bit squary sometime, and it'll be better to do a check. You can see the example for this too
4. [Hitsounds], there are a couple of whistles that fit good, but most of hitsounds are done well. I added a few in the example
5. [Spacing] I don't suggest to use different slider velocitites in easies, or better, using SV changes in easies will means that the spacing of notes will be not so good for newbie, as it'll be like a change of spacing of an Hard. You can decide to adapt the spacing better and make it seems you're using only one Spacing.

Take this as an example on how to correct something

[Normal]

1. [Rhythm]
   
   1. Remember to not "skip" notes for the sake of difficulty, it'll still be a normal, even without notes deleted... Still, there are some harder parts and some easier, which are the one I'm pointing, so I can be non-generic
   2. Seeing if I can proceed the non-generic part, you can start fixing
2. [Graphic] You will refine you're graphics while mapping as it's somewhat a bit squary sometime, and it'll be better to do a check. There are some pattern that seem to overlap really badly and many shapes you can refine
3. [Hitsounds], there are a couple of whistles that fit good in the start ( the only under-hitsounded part...)
4. [Spacing] The Slider Velocity change do not feel that good there

[controlled fay]

1. [Rhythm]
   
   1. Nothing strange, should control more in depth.
2. [Graphic]
   
   1. I can suggest you how to change some pattern for a more good-looking map in the depth mod

[Chaos]

1. [Rhythm]
   
   1. 00:20:851 (4,5,6) - Overmapping when there aren't many sounds is just plain bad. (Delete (5) )
   2. Need in-depth control
2. [Graphic]
   
   1. Some part feel "concentrated" too much around the same point.
   2. The graphic style need to be refined, there isn't really much work put in some slider and shapes

Il complete this with the in-depth

good map star

~\(≧▽≦)/~支持

try to get this ranked.

加油, 快移Pending

hi~ from CLANNAD MODDING QUEUE >_<

[Normal]
-Setting-
Well.
-Mapping-
* 00:08:139 (1) - 移远一些？这spacing会迷惑normal玩家
* 00:10:851 (1) - 这个和前面的00:09:665 (1) overlap到了，改一改？
* 00:29:834 (1,2,3) - 感觉有些不好看，改一改？
* 00:32:546 (1,2,3) - ^
* 00:52:885 (1,2) - (1)和(6) overlap了，试着blanket? (2)的话也跟着blanket (1)
* 00:55:597 (2,3) - 迷惑normal玩家
* 00:58:309 (1) - 前2/3不错，但是后面的就略奇怪，修一下？
* 01:01:020 (2) - 创意不错，但是再修一下形状？不是特别好看
* 01:05:088 (2) - hmm..有的白点无用
* 01:30:512 (3,4) - overlap了
* 01:32:715 (2,3) - 很不适合normal
* 01:35:427 (2,3) - ^
* 01:53:563 (3,1) - 检查spacing
* 01:55:258 (3,7) - 重叠得太厉害了。。移开一些？
* 02:08:817 (5) - new combo
* 02:09:495 (1) - 去掉new combo
* 不建议单纯的CTRL+C, CTRL+V, CTRL+H, CTRL+J, 试着摆新的物件？
* 02:22:376 (1,2,3,4,1) - anti-jump不适合用在Normal里
* 02:29:156 (1) - 不好看

[controlled fay]
-Setting-
Well.
-Mapping-
* 00:38:478 (2) - 2的结尾和之前的2 stack？
* 00:54:241 (4) - 和后面的2重叠了一半。。改一改？
* 00:58:309 (1,2) - Overlap了，不好看
* 01:07:800 (1) - 用1/8的怎么样？
* 01:58:648 (5) - ^
* 02:45:427 (1) - 没对称

[Chaos]
-Setting-
Well.
-Mapping-
* 00:35:258 - 这里为什么有一大堆bookmark？
* 01:50:004 - 这里的短kiai太乱了。。
* 这张图的主要问题还是各种overlap。。尽量避免Overlap到一点点或者75%，最好blanket起来或者stack到

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一个Slider指南
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Good Luck!~ ↖(^ω^)↗加油！

@384059043：大部分都改好了,谢谢来MOD！

Yay from queue.

[General]
Why do you have 13% unused music at the end?

[Easy]
Slider tick rate 1?
00:09:665 (2) - Kinda hard to judge timing (half-beat on Easy)
00:12:376 (2) - ^
00:49:495 (4) - Might be confusing; preferably direct the 3 to the 4 (currently the 3 is facing away from the 4)
00:52:207 (4) - ^
01:06:105 (4) - Might be hidden by 2
01:07:461 (6) - ^
01:09:156 - Abuse of kiai fountain? Next kiai comes at 01:14:580.
01:41:698 (1,2,3) - Half-beat gaps are not good in Easy
01:49:834 - 01:52:546 - Abuse of kiai fountain
01:49:834 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - Too hard for Easy: half-beat gaps, inconsistent spacing (3,1)
02:00:004 (1) - Might be unexpected and too short for Easy
Intentionally end here?

[Normal]
Seems like a Hard for me due to the large amount of half-beat gaps...
00:16:275 (1) - Hidden slider-end?
00:26:444 (5) - Rhythm might be confusing (3/4-beat within 1/2-beat objects)
00:29:156 (5) - ^
00:31:868 (5) - ^
01:53:054 (1) - Hidden?
02:10:851 (3) - Might be unexpected?
02:21:020 (6,7,8) - Maybe unstack?
02:22:376 (1,2,3,4,1) - Unexpected spacing change?
03:03:416 (1) - Unexpected number of repeats (expecting 12, getting 8)

[controlled fay]
01:14:580 (1,2,3,4) - Unexpected spacing change?
01:18:648 (1,2) - Same spacing change as above but I still somehow expect this to be regular speed...oh well.
01:25:427 (5) - Unexpected number of repeats? (expecting 12, getting 16)
01:31:529 (4) - Might be misleading? (expecting 1 repeat, getting 2 repeats)
01:54:241 (1) - Irregular spacing on irregular gap (expecting gap to be 1-beat, getting 2-beat)
02:29:495 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Might be unexpected (expecting gaps on stacks to be 1/4-beat, getting 1/2-beat)

[Chaos]
AR -1 (to 8)? If you do, the following may be ignored (because they are mostly about having not enough time to react).

00:20:512 (2) - Hidden under 2
00:30:512 (3) - Hidden under 4 (expecting slider length to be 1/2-beat)

Hm that's all. A pretty fun song to play actually, only that you might need to change some minor stuffs so things are not too unintuitive.

[Easy]
00:16:275 (1) - 可以改圆滑或者好看一点，略丑
00:23:732 (3) - 这个前后间距一看就不对
00:36:614 (3) - 提前一个白线结束再加个note?感觉那样一个slider带过略没有体现音乐在这里加重的感觉
69198[T]这根绿线其实可以不要……kiai可以直接结束在在01:09:156
97673[T]^
01:38:987 (1) - 这样结束感觉和节奏无关了……毕竟你盖不住背景音效
01:42:376 (3) - ^
01:49:834 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - 这边有很多多余的绿线，最好删掉

[Normal]
00:34:580 (5) - 间距不对
00:26:444 (5) - 不鼓励这么干，毕竟音乐是在红白红线上
00:56:105 (3) - 这后面空掉这么多是什么意思？
01:38:987 (1) - 这后面开始的部分不太好打，建议remap……
01:55:258 (3) - 不知道该说什么……
02:06:105 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 其实你把这部分按照前面的节奏来排会比较有整体感，说真的。
02:45:427 (1) - 这前面的break有点莫名其妙。
02:46:106 (2) - 不知道怎么下的最好办法不是勉强下，而是空掉。你这个明显不合节奏……
02:50:879 (1) - 感觉没有必要
03:03:416 (1,2) - 听不出节奏

[controlled fay]
00:34:580 (2) - 间距
00:37:970 (1,2,3,4) - 不懂为什么前面明明塞满了这里又突然空出来，没有整体感，略突然。
00:52:376 (5) - 发现挺多次这样的节奏，一句话，考虑下整体感
01:17:292 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 主旋律钢琴突然又白线后面又回到主旋律钢琴，求原因。
01:42:207 (2) - 尾巴上的finish请去掉加在头上谢谢……
01:50:342 (x) - 不明白这里为什么空掉
01:53:054 (x) - ^同理
02:11:529 (4) - clap去掉行吗。

[Chaos]
00:20:342 (1,2,3,4) - 可以摆的更有形状更美观一点。
00:21:190 (7) - 显而易见的间距问题……
00:26:444 (1) - 考虑到小节NC应该在00:25:766 (6)，考虑到音乐也是在00:26:275 (8) 。因为摆法问题推荐后者。
01:05:766 (1,2,3,4) - 感觉可以摆再开一点，主要是你后面1的位置不太好……
01:14:580 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4) - 梗不错，但是可以再摆开一点，挤一起不太大方。
03:05:811 (1) - 还……是换个位置吧。

感觉有很长的路要走……加油。

Amazing Map <3

Very good map, dunno why it's abandoned

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