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AiRI - Eternity (Short Ver.)

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S o r d a
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年2月23日 at 2:54:51

Artist: AiRI
Title: Eternity (Short Ver.)
Source: Mashiro Summer
Tags: mana hinacle melophobia karenying alace sorda
BPM: 145
Filesize: 2575kb
Play Time: 01:50
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hinacle (4.85 stars, 279 notes)
  2. Karen (2.43 stars, 113 notes)
  3. Melophobia (3.71 stars, 140 notes)
  4. Pangko (4.94 stars, 516 notes)
  5. S o r d a (5 stars, 327 notes)
Download: AiRI - Eternity (Short Ver.)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#16
ましろサマー
片瀬亜季テーマソング Eternity

Insane S o r d a
Hard Hinacle
Normal Melophobia
Easy karenying
Taiko Alace
Last edited by S o r d a , edited 68 times in total.
Suzully
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Suzully
なるほど
S o r d a
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S o r d a
わああ上げたばっかなのに すずりさんありがとおおおお
Apricot
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Apricot
1st offset:
BPM :arrow: 145.000
offset :arrow: -227

2nd offset:
BPM :arrow: 145.000
offset :arrow: 9680

多分合ってる
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Apricot
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Apricot

Apricot wrote:

1st offset:
BPM :arrow: 145.000
offset :arrow: -227
2nd offset:
BPM :arrow: 145.000
offset :arrow: 9680

多分合ってる
Editと間違えてQuoteしたｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗ
Melophobia
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Melophobia
555555555555555555555555555555
kanpakyin
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kanpakyin
Timing Here:

  1. 1. Offset: 1,411ms
    BPM: 145.00
  2. Offset: 9,675ms
    BPM: 145.00
phonic
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phonic
がんばってー
inaba-tan
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inaba-tan
taikoMAP作っていいですか？
S o r d a
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S o r d a
>>Apricot,Melophobia,phonic
starありがとおおお！

>>inaba
ごめんなさい、入れる予定はないので見送らせていただきます
inaba-tan
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inaba-tan
わかりましたー
Hinacle
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Hinacle
遅れてすいません～；A；

完成！

Download: AiRI - Eternity (Short Ver.) (S o r d a) [Hinacle].osu
S o r d a
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S o r d a
Added ありがとうー！
Alace
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Alace
done

Download: AiRI - Eternity (Short Ver.) (S o r d a) [Pangko].osu
JoJo
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JoJo
(～￣▽￣)～★

baka
S o r d a
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S o r d a
thanks for Alace taiko diff Added!
thanks JoJo made taikoBG
also star thanks Hinacle and baka JoJo>w</
Melophobia
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Melophobia
Done.

Download: AiRI - Eternity (Short Ver.) (S o r d a) [Normal].osu
S o r d a
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S o r d a
added~ thanks for Normal diff!
Kotone
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Kotone
;)

Download: AiRI - Eternity (Short Ver.) (S o r d a) [Karen's Easy].osu
S o r d a
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S o r d a
so fast>_< added~ thanks!
Muya
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Muya
oszにEasyが入ってないみたいなのでfull submissionしてみたらいいかも
S o r d a
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S o r d a
多分入ってるはず！指摘ありがとうー
S o r d a
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S o r d a
Moved to pending. Ready for mod
Thanks Guest Diffs and stars!
Kitsuneko
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Kitsuneko
そーだちゃんついにShort譜面だ


[karenying]
00:20:019 (2,3) -move curve point http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/241425
00:24:157 (3) - ^ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/241426
00:57:261 (2,3) - try to move straight line
nice :3

[Melophobia]
00:27:054 (2) - X:336 Y136 位のほうが見栄えいいかな
00:42:157 - remove clap
00:51:881 - add clap
00:52:295 - ^
00:58:916 - ^
01:30:364 (4) - add whistle
good Normal

[Hinacle]
yes god

[S o r d a]
00:09:675 (9) - X444 Y184 辺りかな
00:15:881 - Whistle
00:15:675 (1) - RNC and 00:16:088 (2) - こっちにNC
00:20:847 (1,2) - こういう部分はディスタンス無視していいと思うな http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/241442
00:44:226 (6) - ちょっと離して形整える http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/241444
00:48:778 (3,1) - X164 Y292
00:51:881 (5) - スライダーの腹に00:52:709 (1) - の終わりが入る様に上に移動か(3)と共に形修正かな http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/241450
01:03:261 (2) - ポイント真ん中でいいと思う
01:04:088 (4) - (2)直してから反転でいいかなー どうも歪に見える
01:26:019 (9) - 折り返しスライダーに変更かな
01:38:019 (2,3,4) - 2の終わり、(3,4)で三角になるように調整
01:50:226 (2) - whistle
Melophobia
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> Kitsuneko
Mod thanks~

Download: AiRI - Eternity (Short Ver.) (S o r d a) [Melophobia].osu
hoLysoup
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hoLysoup
:>

[General]
なんでeveryone kiai is unsnapped except for Alace's Taiko??
/me eats sorda! x2!
Kiai: Start on 01:10:916, end on 01:37:399

[sorda!]
HP Drain 8 大丈夫？ use HP7?
00:01:411 - why no SC:2 for silent slider? :>
00:48:778 (3) - this beat is not stacked properly?
01:01:399 (4) - clap on this beat
01:13:606 (3) - clap on repeat
01:14:226 (4) - clap on slider end
01:19:192 (1) - ^?
01:24:157 (4) - NC here~
01:26:847 (1) - clap on slider end
01:30:364 (7) - add clap
01:36:571 (1) - move this to: x:156 y:288 ? like this: http://puu.sh/gBpY
01:50:433 (3) - maybe add whistle..?
That's it! very nice

[Hinacle]
maybe OD6?
00:01:411 - Why no SC:2? for silent slider? :>
01:10:916 (3) - NC for chorus?
01:15:881 (4) - just a suggestion: ctrl+r?
01:16:709 (6) - ^
01:50:433 (3) - remove finish? I think there's too many finish.. just my opinion
very nice diff

[Melophobia!]
00:01:411 - Why no SC:2? for silent slider? :>
00:27:881 (3) - stack this on the (1) slider head?
01:07:399 (1) - silence spinner?
really good! claps are not used a lot? :>

[bakaying?]:>!
01:07:606 (1) -要不要silence spinner?
萌

よし～終わり
:>
4GD.. 大丈夫?
Melophobia
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> hoLysoup

thanks mod~


Download: AiRI - Eternity (Short Ver.) (S o r d a) [Melophobia].osu
S o r d a
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S o r d a
>>Kitsuneko,hoLysoup
Almost fixed
Also,osu standard All diff KIAI time changed
thanks both!
too lazy me T_T

>>Melophobia
uploaded
Kotone
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Kotone
fixed something and change diff name to Karen lol

Download: AiRI - Eternity (Short Ver.) (S o r d a) [Karen].osu
Sure
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Sure
Hi there :D


[General]
  1. soft-sliderslide2.wav is only 0 bytes large. Please use the blank.wav which is 44 bytes large.
  2. There is unsnapped kiai(01:10:923) in Sorda, Karen and Hinacle diff.
  3. Consider to use silenced sliderslide in intro section. That slide sound bothers my ear.

[Sorda]
00:21:468 (3) - Add finish to end
00:28:916 (1) - Remove new combo. It's still in the piano part.
00:29:743 (5) - New combo
00:39:468 (10) - New combo then remove new combo from next note
01:01:812 (8) - I suggest x0.75. Because 01:01:399 (4,5,6,7) - That spacing of streams looks like speed up. Also x0.75 will be buffer for next x1.00 section.
01:19:192 (1) - Remove clap
01:20:847 (5) - Move clap from head to tail
01:26:019 (6) - Add clap to reverse arrow


[Hinacle]
01:37:192 (4,5,1) - Maybe add new combo to 4? I've never seen this comboing pattern.
01:45:675 (1) - Remove new combo


[Melphobia]
00:21:881 (4) - Add finish to start


[Karen]
00:07:204 (1) - End is not snapped to new offset. End point should be 9675, not 9686. You can confirm it in .osu


Pretty nice mapset, enjoy star! ;D
Kotone
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Kotone
fixed~

Download: AiRI - Eternity (Short Ver.) (S o r d a) [Karen].osu
xsrsbsns
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xsrsbsns
Suggestions only~

[Karen]
挑不到啥 只是发现一些打横的slider不是0.00度
01:19:606 (4) - 01:22:916 (3) - 01:27:881 (1) - 01:47:743 (2)
嘛不重要啦 如果要改还需要改之前stack的slider

[Melophobia]
00:21:881 (4) - Add finish to start
01:07:399 (1) - Better to end this at 01:09:054

[Hinacle]
00:21:468 (2) - Add finish to end (since you like to use finishw)
00:39:468 (1) - Felt that this finish is unneeded
00:42:054 (5) - Add S:C1 clap

[S o r d a]
00:05:135 (5) - Move to x:212 y:80? Right now (3-4-5) spacing is different, not very pretty
00:08:238 (6) - Add whistle to tail?
00:09:273 (5) - Add whistle?
00:22:916 (1) - Add finish
01:04:709 (6) - Missed a clap here
01:35:743 (1) - I suggest using claps here. If you want, try removing whistle at 01:35:743 (1), add claps (and reduce volume) to 01:35:743 (1,2,4) and 01:36:985 (5).
01:43:606 (9) - Missed a clap here

Nice mapset, good luck on ranking!
rui
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rui
from Irc mod reqs
これは私の感覚によるmodです、気に入らなければ無視してください。(In my mod. You can ignore me)(っ´ω｀c)

[General]
  1. kiai time start is 01:10:916 (Melophobia diff okay as it is)
[karenying]
  1. 00:10:088 (1) - add note?
  2. 00:11:330 (1) - ^
  3. 00:12:157 (1) - ^
  4. 00:56:847 (1,2) - What about this rhythm? http://puu.sh/gJ7L
  5. 01:07:606 (1) - spinner finish is 01:09:261
  6. 01:19:606 (4) - What about this rhythm? http://puu.sh/gJ9V
  7. 01:31:399 (2,4) - This two slider is overlap, http://puu.sh/gJam. it is bad in easy diff. please shift (4)
[Melophobia ]
  1. 00:04:307 (X) - このままだと赤→白になるからadd noteしてもいいかも
  2. 00:15:881 (X) - 同上
  3. 00:35:123 (X) - リバースをやめて 00:35:743まで伸ばす
  4. 00:36:157 (X) - 上を直したのならここにadd note
[Hinacle]
  1. 00:01:411 (1) - 先頭にadd finish?
  2. 00:04:721 (1) - ^
  3. 01:09:054 (1) - remove finish 01:09:261 にadd noteしてそれにadd finish
  4. 01:50:226 (2) - remove whistel add finish?
[Sorda]
  1. 00:01:411 (1) - 先頭にadd finish?
  2. 00:04:514 (2) - 末尾にadd finish?
  3. 00:05:548 (X) - add note
  4. 00:09:273 (5) - gridを3~4下げると全体がより綺麗に見えると思う (nazi)
  5. 00:10:088 (1) - distance1.2からいきなり0.6は個人的に引っ掛けにすら思える。これはdistance1.0ぐらいの場所におくべき http://puu.sh/gIEL
  6. 00:48:157 (6,1,2,3,4,5,1) - ここすごくやりにくく感じた。もう少し規則性を持たしていいかも。いい配置案は思いつかなかった http://puu.sh/gINB
    もし、変えないでいく場合でも飛びからの00:49:399 (1)のdistanceはやりにくい、もう少し飛ばすべきだと思います
  7. 00:51:675 (X) - add note
  8. 00:55:812 (X) - ^
  9. 00:57:261 (X) - ^
  10. 00:58:295 (X) - ^
  11. 00:59:123 (X) - ^
  12. 01:01:502 (5) - delete note
  13. 01:02:433 (X) - add note
  14. 01:05:950 (3) - 先頭にadd finish
  15. 01:08:640 (4,5) - (4)を01:09:054まで伸ばして(5)は01:09:261にシフト
  16. 01:17:537 (2) - 先頭にadd finish
  17. 01:27:468 (3) - ^
  18. 01:30:571 (1,2) - (1)にadd newcombo (2)をremove newcombo
  19. 01:40:709 (1) - add finish
  20. 01:50:226 (2) - ^
  21. 01:50:433 (3) - ^
以上です、頑張って下さいヽ(´ー｀)ノ
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