1. 00:33:749 (1,2) - stack them?
2. 02:46:338 (2,3) - change it to slider, it's hard to read with newbie players imo.

1. 00:55:713 (5) - Should start new combo here imo. because, 00:53:838 (1,2,3,4) is same as previous new combo part.
2. 01:47:677 (2) - start new combo here.
3. 02:08:035 (6) - stack to 02:06:427 (4) or add new combo.

1. 00:17:945 (2) - move 1grid left the endpoint. (Grid level4)
2. 00:21:160 (4) - add clap to end of the slider.
3. 00:25:981 (6) - add finish to start of the slider.
4. 00:35:088 (5) - move 1grid down the endpoint. (Grid level4)
5. 00:36:160 (8) - move 2grid down and 1grid up the endpoint. (Grid level4)
6. 00:26:517 (1,2,3) - It is a bit messy. move down (2,3) a bit.
7. 01:12:320 (4,5,6) - add hitsounds like 00:25:177 (4,5,6).
8. 02:09:106 (7) - add whistle

spboxer3 wrote:

[genenal]
This folder's size is 12.4 MB It's over the 10MB without video~fix it?
The size is fine with the skin included.
remove letterbox during break
Removed

Evil_Twilight wrote:

[Genenal]
slider tick rate can't be 0.5 now.
Let's see :3
delete OSB file.
Not a big problem, its size is very small.

[Insane]
01:26:115 (1) - remove NC
X
01:26:249 (2) - add NC
X

[Hard]
00:49:552 (1) - remove NC
X
00:49:820 (2) - add NC
X
01:47:409 (1) - remove NC
X
01:47:677 (2) - add NC
X

[Normal]
02:30:802 (3) - delete note?
X
02:31:874 (6) - ^
X

Apricot wrote:

Normal

1. 00:33:749 (1,2) - stack them?
   Fixed
2. 02:46:338 (2,3) - change it to slider, it's hard to read with newbie players imo.
   Fixed

Hard

1. 00:55:713 (5) - Should start new combo here imo. because, 00:53:838 (1,2,3,4) is same as previous new combo part.
   Fixed
2. 01:47:677 (2) - start new combo here.
   Fixed
3. 02:08:035 (6) - stack to 02:06:427 (4) or add new combo.
   Fixed

Insane

1. 00:17:945 (2) - move 1grid left the endpoint. (Grid level4)
   Fixed
2. 00:21:160 (4) - add clap to end of the slider.
   X
3. 00:25:981 (6) - add finish to start of the slider.
   X
4. 00:35:088 (5) - move 1grid down the endpoint. (Grid level4)
   Fixed
5. 00:36:160 (8) - move 2grid down and 1grid up the endpoint. (Grid level4)
   Fixed
6. 00:26:517 (1,2,3) - It is a bit messy. move down (2,3) a bit.
   Fixed
7. 01:12:320 (4,5,6) - add hitsounds like 00:25:177 (4,5,6).
   X
8. 02:09:106 (7) - add whistle
   X

1. Unfortunately,Tick rate 0.5 is not allowed at now,see Derekku edit here.Maybe change it to 1?It sounds great for me xD

1. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 02:07:231 (x) - I think it should have a note here becuase the vocal still singing here, so just going to follow that.Also it sounds cool after added.
2. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:25:177 (3,4) - Probably add a clap on it?

1. Difficulty setting
   (I suggest the difficulty setting for better gameplay.)
   
   1. How about +1 on HP?
2. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:35:356 (x) - How about add a note here?Because it can follow the drum sound and vocal,so I found no reason that didn't add it :p also,please add a clap sound on it and place that at (256.304) (btw,a small jump is acceptable in Hard diff)
   2. 00:36:427 (x) - ^Same.
   3. 00:39:642 , 00:40:713 - ^Same.
   4. 02:08:035 (1) - I would add a new combo here if I were you because I can hear a new accent here :p
3. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:27:320 (3) - Add a whistle at the beginning of the slider and the reverse of the slider?Sure they fit the music.

1. Difficulty setting
   (I suggest the difficulty setting for better gameplay.)
   
   1. HP and OD both can consider +1
2. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:42:856 (3) - Probably you can move this note to (136,192) , then it can make this pattern more fun and more variation.
   2. 01:34:284 (3) - ^Same,but this time move this note to (144.132)
   3. 01:54:106 (7) - I would add a new combo here.
   4. 01:58:392 (7) - ^
3. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 01:13:124 (6) - I guess you forget to add a whistle at the beginning of the slider, also you can add the whistle at the end.

Metro wrote:

DJPOP I LOVE YOU PLEASE MARRY ME AND LET'S HAVE KIDS


General
tag christmas is not needed as the word is in the title
Removed

Normal
00:47:677 (3) - 1 grid left or up? (lvl 4)
X

Hard
02:43:124 (6) - 1 grid up? (lvl 4)
X

kanpakyin wrote:

[General]

1. Unfortunately,Tick rate 0.5 is not allowed at now,see Derekku edit here.Maybe change it to 1?It sounds grate for me xD
   Fixed ;__;

[Normal]

1. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 02:07:231 (x) - I think it should have a note here becuase the vocal still singing here, so just going to follow that.Also it sounds cool after added.
      I want to keep it like the other parts.
2. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:25:177 (3,4) - Probably add a clap on it?
      X

[Hard]

1. Difficulty setting
   (I suggest the difficulty setting for better gameplay.)
   
   1. How about +1 on HP?
      OK
2. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:35:356 (x) - How about add a note here?Because it can follow the drum sound and vocal,so I found no reason that didn't add it :p also,please add a clap sound on it and place that at (256.304) (btw,a small jump is acceptable in Hard diff)
      Fixed.
   2. 00:36:427 (x) - ^Same.
      Fixed.
   3. 00:39:642 , 00:40:713 - ^Same.
      Fixed.
   4. 02:08:035 (1) - I would add a new combo here if I were you because I can hear a new accent here :p
      Added.
3. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:27:320 (3) - Add a whistle at the beginning of the slider and the reverse of the slider?Sure they fit the music.
      Add just only this part feels weird.

[Insane]

1. Difficulty setting
   (I suggest the difficulty setting for better gameplay.)
   
   1. HP and OD both can consider +1
      Fixed.
2. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:42:856 (3) - Probably you can move this note to (136,192) , then it can make this pattern more fun and more variation.
      Fixed.
   2. 01:34:284 (3) - ^Same,but this time move this note to (144.132)
      Fixed.
   3. 01:54:106 (7) - I would add a new combo here.
      Fixed.
   4. 01:58:392 (7) - ^
      Fixed.
3. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 01:13:124 (6) - I guess you forget to add a whistle at the beginning of the slider, also you can add the whistle at the end.
      I didn't add any in this part.

1. As you have a cursortrail.png, you need a cursor.png
2. spinner-circle.png is 667x667, the maximum allowed is 666x666, so you have to resize it !
3. You need a hit0.png to complete the skin even if it's the default one.
4. scoresliderpoint.png is white and you're using a white combo color. It means that the tick will blend in the white slider tracks like this :
   
   So 2 solutions :
   
   1. Make the scoresliderpoint.png black, it will fit with the slider borders and it will be visible on the white slider tracks
   2. Change the white combo color into something else.

1. Consider adding "Xmas" in tags ? >w<

Mok wrote:

[Normal]
01:26:249 (1,2,3) - I don't really think those fills the first difficulty of a map.
01:30:535 (1,2,3,4) - ^.
They're fine.

From Here on, most can be nazi/graphic.
[Hard]
00:10:981 (3) - Do it better.
00:18:749 (4) - Wtf.
00:23:035 (4) - And his son.
01:39:106 (2,4) - Relatives?
All fixed.

KuraiPettan wrote:

Skin

1. As you have a cursortrail.png, you need a cursor.png
2. spinner-circle.png is 667x667, the maximum allowed is 666x666, so you have to resize it !
3. You need a hit0.png to complete the skin even if it's the default one.
4. scoresliderpoint.png is white and you're using a white combo color. It means that the tick will blend in the white slider tracks like this :
   
   So 2 solutions :
   
   1. Make the scoresliderpoint.png black, it will fit with the slider borders and it will be visible on the white slider tracks
   2. Change the white combo color into something else.
   Added & fixed.

General

1. Consider adding "Xmas" in tags ? >w<
   Added.

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

I wanna rank my maps in 2 days, too.