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NicoNicoDouga - Lucky Star x Paffendorf Mix

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Fwenny
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Fwenny
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, November 28, 2008 at 1:10:01 PM

Artist: NicoNicoDouga
Title: Lucky Star x Paffendorf Mix
BPM: 167.91
Filesize: 1536kb
Play Time: 00:34
Difficulties Available:
  1. Crazy (5 stars, 156 notes)
  2. Hard (4.77 stars, 74 notes)
Download: NicoNicoDouga - Lucky Star x Paffendorf Mix
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This is my first map. Be gentle. D:

Paffendorf Mix - Under my skin, with Konata as the main singer. =p

Thanks to Card n'Force, SecksyJennie and peppy for helping setting up BPM/Offset.
Thanks to Card n'Force, DawnII and m980 for beatmap checking.
Last edited by Fwenny , edited 18 times in total.
Card N'FoRcE
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Card N'FoRcE
Timing is good (i provided it XD)
Then:

00:04:38 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - spacing is all wrong: 7 should be closer to 6, 8 closer more to 7, 9 far from 8 and equally spaced with 10,11,12 (spaced like 00:03:31 (2,3,4))
00:22:44 (1) - omg why the new combo here? XD I think gere 00:20:11 (10) is better
00:25:84 (1) - so cruel spacing... D:
00:27:27 (1) - ^
00:30:04 (10) - deleting it is better, imho.
00:31:47 (10) - ^
00:31:56 (1) - cruel spacing again D:
00:32:27 (1) - ^
00:32:99 (1) - just reverse it with the 00:33:35 (3) and it should be good.

I think after your last beat there should be a break until 0:40:144 and the song end should be at 0:56:951. Your choice, anyway.
Fwenny
47 posts
Joined July 2008
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Fwenny
Lol. Lets see, I fixed most (if not all) of those stuff even before I read your comment, so you should check it out once you come back.

About some stuff you said, the new combo IMO fits, due to 'new sounds' sorta thing, I dont think it should be changed.

Some spacing Ive fixed, some I think they are fine, and I fixed the first thing you said, but differently, I think it fits, let me know what do you think.


P.S. Yes, I played this and FC'd this, in case you wonder.

Also, this mp3 has the same song twice, so I though I'd map the first, and thats it. I'll think about that one.
DawnII
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DawnII
00:18:68 (4,5,6) - For this section I suggest making each triplet a new combo
00:26:02 (2,3,1,2,3,1) - This just looks kind of weird to me. I think starting a new combo at the start of each triplet would look better.

Also I want to see more mapped, even though it is repeated. I think you can come up with some new and interesting things. ^^
Other than that no real issues. Crazy spacing is crazy. XD
Fwenny
47 posts
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Fwenny
Followed your advice about #1,

however #2, if you listen to the sounds, you'll understand it fits that way. :3

Thanks.
Card N'FoRcE
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Card N'FoRcE
Ok, Fwen =3

Waaay better, but:
00:02:41 (11) - closer to 10
00:05:10 (11,12) - same, make the spacing equal or it will be confusing.
00:22:62 (2) - thinking about what you said, then make this also a new combo. It looks better =3

Ok, i'll approve other crazy spacing, but i don't like it because it makes me phail... :<
Fwenny
47 posts
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Topic Starter
Fwenny
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Sinistro
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Joined January 2008
Sinistro
Restored to Help upon beatmapper's request.
Fwenny
47 posts
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Fwenny
Finished both difficulties, now I need some one to check them.
Loginer
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That's a pretty short beatmap. Are you sure you can't come up with anything for the rest of the song?

Hard: Looks good. The beatspacing is not a problem here, since the beatmap is so slow.
Crazy: The only thing I can find is the difference in beatspacing on two parts (00:10:286 - 00:11:180 and pretty much all beats from 00:25:126), but it's not confusing, so I guess this beatmap is fine too.

The BPM is OK, can't test the offset properly due to lag.
Gens
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Gens
Noes! I'm also working on it! Noes!
Well, whatever. Two Versions of the same song are "Accepted and Welcome".

Also, picked up BPM. Mine was wrong, ugh. Need to practice BPMs.
Fwenny
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Fwenny
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
m980
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Hard
00:20:11 (5) - I don't really like when sliders are concealed under 300s and 100s and stuff like that. So maybe move this?
00:17:25 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Actually.. I'd redo this combo. But that's just me
00:25:12 (2) - Maybe make this repeat less.
00:25:84 (1,2,3) - Maybe you should overlap these sliders. So the end of 1 is ontop of the start of 2 and the end of 2 etc.
00:27:98 (4) - Move this abit up. Or put it on top of 3.
00:30:84 (2) - Maybe make this repeat less.

00:22:98 (1,1) - These Spinners. I'm not sure what to say to these. But your going to need to spin reallly fast to get 300s on these. I'd replace them with 1 spinner.
00:32:99 (1) - >:( - It's probably just me.

Crazy
00:02:41 (11) - Move this closer to 10.
00:05:27 (12) - Move this closer to 11.
00:22:98 (1,1) - Not happy with these spinners.
Very VERY minor.. but..
00:25:84 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - Any reason why this pattern has new combos and..
00:27:27 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Dosent?
00:30:04 (10) - I'd get rid of this.


Your going to have to make an easier difficulty.

Star'd.
Fwenny
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Fwenny
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
peppy
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1. Offset: 134ms BPM: 167.908

needs an easier difficulty.
Gens
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Gens
I have a higher-quality MP3. Want?
Though it will probably mess up the Offset...
Mafiamaster
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Mafiamaster
You should totally add this vid to your beatmap! xD (Although its twice the length in playing time.)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pLcOrpxRKJM&fmt=18
FurukawaPan
649 posts
Joined August 2008
FurukawaPan
No, the video needs to be *authentic*
http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm3913273

If you can't rip from niconico I don't mind doing it myself and posting a flv. PM if interested.
Fwenny
47 posts
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Fwenny
Nah, I dont want to add a video, and posting a different mp3 will probably mess everything, so no needed, thanks guys.

I should get my motivation to finish mapping this, but meh.. Lazy. :(
whymeman
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whymeman
The files for both beatmap difficulties are not working. :o :cry:
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