spboxer3 wrote:

QUEEN

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1. duplicated green line:
   00:51:400 -

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Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)

1. 01:33:493 (1,1,1) - remove those finish? It's not suit for this part and It's inconsistent the other diff

no change

mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)

1. 00:24:400 (4,6) - stack issue~ it should be stack. fix
   
   
2. 00:29:650 (4,2) - ^ fix
   
   
3. 01:08:650 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - too confuse pattern. it's let player can't clear to read. I strongly recommended change this pattern

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spboxer3 wrote:

※ Notice

red is unrankable issue.
blue is recommended to fix.
Black is just suggestion.

general

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1. I think the osu diff kiai time should be universalize. ((QUEEN's diff it's different to other diff. I asked rein. It fix~

PAWN

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1. unused green line:
   01:27:306 fix

mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)

1. 00:28:525 (2,3) - actually you used curve pattern it's more consort flow. maybe rotate (selection center) 00:28:900 (3) - 12∘it's more pretty fix
   
   
2. 01:31:900 - I didn't hear any corresponding vocal/drum is present for this point. I suggest remove reverse and add note at 01:31:712 - fix

KNIGHT

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  Overlaps
  (Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap each other could space them farther apart. yep. It's just suggest and nazi. you can ignore this par)
  

1. 00:45:775 (1,2) - fix
2. 00:47:275 (4,5) - fix

mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)

1. 00:48:025 (5,2) - Umm... those shound be stack imo. fix
   
   
2. 01:45:400 (1,2) - It's looks awkward slider arc because it's not coincidence arc to 01:46:525 (2) - so I make the pattern and code for you. fix thanks
   
   photo and code

   your shape↓
   
   my code↓
   
   

   144,148,105400,70,0,B|96:124|88:76,2,89.9999999999999,4|0|8
   180,64,106525,1,0

ROOK

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1. unused green line:
   01:30:118 fix
   01:39:353 fix

Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)

1. 01:19:900 (1,2) - you can head drum at 01:20:275, it should add clap - but you used clap at 01:20:462 - :/ Hmm. I think the current is great...The timing of the clap is according to the sound. fix.

mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)

1. 00:16:712 (3,1) - rotate -4∘let arc conform the 00:16:712 (3) - fix
   
   
2. 01:47:650 (2) - reverse this selection slider? because you can see 01:45:400 (1,2) - (1.19x spacing) haven't used large spacing. but 01:46:900 (1,2) - it's used large spacing (1.70x spacing). fix

BISHOP

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1. unused green line:
   01:30:118 fix
   01:39:353 fix

Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)

1. 01:33:587 (1,1,1) - remove those finish? It's not suit for this part and It's inconsistent the other diff no change. i'll increase the number of spinners from this difficulty

mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)

• looks good~

KING

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1. unused green line:
   01:00:447 fix
2. unsnap green line (please snap those because it will affect your hitsound/SV):
   00:27:046 fix

mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)

1. 01:33:025 (1,2,3,1) - Umm... because it's suddenly 1/3 rhythm. so I recommended to used slider reverse to make this. I think is the best & fun. I ask a test to friends, however, don't have a bullshit.

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those wrote:

A Rook's value is more than a Bishop's value in the game of chess. Swap diff names?

those wrote:

A Rook's value is more than a Bishop's value in the game of chess. Swap diff names?

1. 01:06:400 (3) - Move clap from slider's end to slider's repeat

1. 00:24:400 (2,3,4) - Hmm, if you're aiming for symmetry I suggest something like this though:
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:48:400 (1) - Move to ~x:168 y:297 regardless of the spacing, it will make this slider perfectly centered while the jump isn't hard to catch :3

1. 01:02:462 (3) - Please move a bit further (~x:185) to avoid overlap, it won't hurt~
2. 01:21:025 (3) - ...sliderwhistle doesn't really fit here imo, I'd put a sliderwhistle on 01:19:900 (1) instead (:

1. 00:10:525 (1,2) - CTRL+R either (1) or (2)? Personally I'd like to see a circular jump here...
2. 01:32:837 (1,2) - I really think you'll need a manual stacking like this here to maintain the symmetry: (just move (2) a bit lower)
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:25:900 (1) - No whistles here? I'm very much sure a good whistle placement will fit this repeating slider :3
2. 00:41:368 (10) - The rhythm here really confuses me, I'd put this on 00:41:556 (11) instead to form a quintuple (it'll sound more intuitive with the song)
3. 01:51:775 (2,3,2,3) - Hmm, I think it's quite obvious that the claps should ONLY be on (3)'s start instead of (2), no need to force clap consistency here - in any way clap on (3)'s start sounds better for me (:

1. 00:13:712 (1) - Move the inherit section to slider's end (00:13:900) and add sliderwhistle to the slider's body, it fits xD
2. 00:41:557 (3,4,5,6) - The combo color here blends with the video orz... I'm having trouble reading it >_<
3. 01:08:650 (1,2) - Add some whistles to spice up this part? (there's a synth following though~)
4. 01:27:025 (4) - Please add new combo here, due to the slider velocity change
5. 01:38:837 (2) - Personally I'd like to see this is CTRL+R'ed (: (if you do this you might want to CTRL+R (4) also)

Niva wrote:

(:

[General]

-> You don't need lead-in time in PAWN and KNIGHT, really xD (that diffs starts way after) fix
-> Add "MagicMashMan" also to tags (I know you already have "magic mash man" but sakuzyo's YouTube account is using that name, without spaces) add~

[PAWN]

1. 01:06:400 (3) - Move clap from slider's end to slider's repeat fix

[KNIGHT]

1. 00:24:400 (2,3,4) - Hmm, if you're aiming for symmetry I suggest something like this though: fix
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:48:400 (1) - Move to ~x:168 y:297 regardless of the spacing, it will make this slider perfectly centered while the jump isn't hard to catch :3 fix

[BISHOP]

1. 01:02:462 (3) - Please move a bit further (~x:185) to avoid overlap, it won't hurt~ fix
2. 01:21:025 (3) - ...sliderwhistle doesn't really fit here imo, I'd put a sliderwhistle on 01:19:900 (1) instead (: fix

[ROOK]

1. 00:10:525 (1,2) - CTRL+R either (1) or (2)? Personally I'd like to see a circular jump here... fix
2. 01:32:837 (1,2) - I really think you'll need a manual stacking like this here to maintain the symmetry: (just move (2) a bit lower) fix
   
   SPOILER

   

[KING]

-> Make combo color 3 same as other diffs? fix

1. 00:13:712 (1) - Move the inherit section to slider's end (00:13:900) and add sliderwhistle to the slider's body, it fits xD fix
2. 00:41:557 (3,4,5,6) - The combo color here blends with the video orz... I'm having trouble reading it >_<
3. 01:08:650 (1,2) - Add some whistles to spice up this part? (there's a synth following though~) fix. btw, this is no relationship, it was found that 01:09:025 (2) is 1/3 timing. This also fix
4. 01:27:025 (4) - Please add new combo here, due to the slider velocity change fix
5. 01:38:837 (2) - Personally I'd like to see this is CTRL+R'ed (: (if you do this you might want to CTRL+R (4) also) no

I don't see any problems on TAIKO~

Niva wrote:

[QUEEN]

1. 00:25:900 (1) - No whistles here? I'm very much sure a good whistle placement will fit this repeating slider :3 ->fix
2. 00:41:368 (10) - The rhythm here really confuses me, I'd put this on 00:41:556 (11) instead to form a quintuple (it'll sound more intuitive with the song)->no change
3. 01:51:775 (2,3,2,3) - Hmm, I think it's quite obvious that the claps should ONLY be on (3)'s start instead of (2), no need to force clap consistency here - in any way clap on (3)'s start sounds better for me (:->fix

1. 00:41:368 (10) - Again, compared with the others this one's rhythm is VERY deceiving due to the basses around, once more I recommend a quintuple here (you can just arrange like this though: )
   
   SPOILER

   

Niva wrote:

Just one more thing...

[QUEEN]

1. 00:41:368 (10) - Again, compared with the others this one's rhythm is VERY deceiving due to the basses around, once more I recommend a quintuple here (you can just arrange like this though: )
   
   SPOILER

   

I still feel somewhat weird about that combocolor in KING though, but it's not that hard to read :3

Andrea wrote:

Hitsounds are way too quiet, I almost can't hear them