As requested
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General]
- Artist isn't spaced out properly, please fix so copy and paste this to the title of all diffs
Hanazawa Kana, Toyosaki Aki & Horie Yui Just incase, read this before title changes
viewtopic.php?f=56&t=24443.
- No tags? Try to think of some if possible
- Keep breaks consistent, if you're going to map a part in Hard, map it in Normal as well, this is nicer for difficulty spread and make it fun for those who play Normal as well.
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Normal]
- -1 od for slightly lower star rating
00:09:050 (3,4) - I suggest just doing a short slider like the previous patterns for consistency.
00:10:222 (2,3,4,5) - Repeating slider (repeat on 00:10:691, ends on 00:11:160) to follow the whistle sound is better, this rhythm is quite difficult to play because of the low spacing. Idea for placement
http://puu.sh/bzNY.
00:16:316 (2,3) - Slider like the previous pattern is better since (3) isn't really following anything so it felt weird to play it.
00:18:660 (5,6) - You may want to do a repeating slider like at 00:17:253. Fits with the drum much better and leads nicer to the break. You could also do a slider as well.
00:25:925 (5) - Moving this to 00:26:160 will make it play better and you don't need to remove the finish hitsound, I think it sounds good like this.
00:26:628 (1,2) - Just simplify this since this is the easiest diff, so remove (2) and make (1) end there instead.
00:36:941 (4) - Don't do kick slider on the easiest diff, I'm sure most beginner will stop holding the note after the 2nd repeat so I suggest removing two repeat and make the slider bigger.
http://puu.sh/bzP800:46:785 (5,6,7) - I really feel you should do a long slider and make it like this
http://puu.sh/bzPs00:49:831 (2) - I don't think these pattern is nice to play due to spacing. I think you should try to refrain from putting notes 1/2 next to each other. I suggest removing this note.
00:50:769 (2) - ^ Put the finish at the end of every slider instead.
00:51:003 (1) - Finish at the end as well if you follow previous suggestions.
00:51:706 (2,3) - Why not keep consistency with Hard a bit. I would remove (2) and make a slider on (3) that end at 00:52:878 (same as Hard).
01:04:597 (2,3,4) - I feel hit circles is a little counter intuitive to the singing here and feel here. A long slider feel much better. Try this for slider shape
http://puu.sh/bzRL.
01:14:441 (5,6,7) - Just a slider (start on 5, end on 7) feel better.
01:16:785 (3,4) - Again suggest a long slider (start where 3 is, ends where slider 4 end), fit much nicer with the flow.
01:21:003 (3,4) - Just do a repeating slider like all the other sliders here.
01:26:628 (5) - For some reason, I find this note really hard to hit, since you didn't put anything here in Hard, just remove it?
01:34:128 (4) - Similar to 00:36:941, I suggest removing two repeats and make the slider longer here as well.
01:42:097 (2,3,4) - I like it more if you rotate (2) & (4) by 45 degrees like this
http://puu.sh/bzSN01:49:128 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I assume you did h it circles to make this part more intenser? I don't think 6 hit circles play too well. I think doing a repeating slider for (1,2,3) and (4,5,6) will give off a similar feel while making it nicer to play.
02:04:128 (1,2,3) - Repeating slider for these as well, similar reason to above.
02:14:441 (5,6,7) - Repeating slider/ slider instead, hit circles 1/2 next to each other with this spacing isn't nice to play.
02:32:253 (1,2,3,4) - Just follow the violin instead, so a repeating slider + hit circle
http://puu.sh/bzTu02:36:472 (4,5) - 1/2 notes next to each other again. Hmm, try a short slider instead for this. A long repeating slider starting on (4) and ends (6) end may also work.
02:40:222 (4,5,6) - ^ short slider for (4,5) on repeating slider instead for (4,5,6).
If you follow most of my suggestion, star rating will be below 3 star.
[
Hard]
- ar 7 fits better with the song feel to me. Do -1 od as well, if you change for Normal.
00:17:019 (3,4) - Slider for this, felt weird to play hit circles again after playing a long slider and a long repeating slider. The music also doesn't feel like I should be hitting hit circle here.
00:19:597 (2,3,4,5,6) - Instead of hit circles, you could try sliders that end on the red tick instead. May give a nicer flow.
00:23:347 (1,2) - Slider instead, similar reason as 00:17:019
00:42:097 (1) - Slider that end on the red tick fits much better with the vocal here.
00:42:566 (2) - ^
00:45:378 (1,2,3,4,5) - A bit more circular feel nicer to me
http://puu.sh/bzVa.
00:47:722 (1,2) - I feel the jump is too big, lower the spacing for this, I suggest 2.5x to be consistent with the spacing of the jump on (3).
01:01:550 (3,4) - I feel hit circle doesn't fit with the flow at all (partly because of the vocal), I highly suggest a slider instead.
01:14:441 (1,2) - Remove and add a repeat to (1). Just felt weird to play (2) since it isn't really following anything.
01:18:894 (8) - I recommend removing this note, it isn't following anything.
01:30:847 (1,2) - Same as 00:42:097 & 00:42:566
01:33:660 (6) - Slider that ends on the red tick as well, will make the next note feel less weird.
01:42:097 (2,3,2,3,2,3) - I suggest doing slider like the previous time that this part appear. Feel really weird to play this.
01:49:128 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Accelerated spacing plays really weird, and hitting just hit circles here feel weird as well. Mix more slider/repeating slider here and remove the accelerated spacing.
01:54:519 (4,5) - Slider instead, similar reaosn to before, (holding a long slider then playing hit circle feel weird).
01:56:394 (10) - Stack this with the begin for slider (9), plays much better and it properly accent the right note (only 11 is accented here, not 10).
02:13:972 (3,4,5,6,7) - Since this is a Hard and the difficulty of the map feel like a Hard for the most part. I highly recommend to reduce the spacing for this part, as the spacing here looks like an Insane.
02:19:597 (1,2) - Same as 01:30:847.
Solid map.
Even through this is a long mod, don't worry too much about it, I think this beatmap is good and you get a star from me. Even through there is just two diffs, I feel difficulty spread is fine and if you follow my suggestion for Normal, you'll have a diff with a star rating below 3 star.
Well, good luck!