__Ag wrote:

嗨！~业界良心麻婆，不打算跟我一起犯2做爽图么？献上两个star，我拿着也没用，给你打打气，加油啊骚年（拍肩

NewRulerNA wrote:

original song title is "紅花ノ乙女唄". your title (红花ノ乙女呗) is little wrong. you should fix it.

Autumn wrote:

M4M~
老板 来一斤香菜

[General]
关于combo颜色：combo3和4的颜色太相近了！换个差别明显一点的换了一个颜色

关于音效：
S:C2的finish和底音一样有点浪费。我觉得soft的finish很好用啊，比如可以用在00:04:129之类的开头
另外有兴趣的话可以试试这个：http://puu.sh/1YLS9 （我是从http://osu.ppy.sh/b/121767里找的）
hard开头那段，把所有用了25%音量的保留，40%的换成这个clap.后面以此类推soft-finish和这个音效我都试过，感觉不太适合这首歌

[Normal]
00:28:504 - 25%？15%简直静音啦..这里背景音也没有，等于放空了...已修改
总之我觉得低于20%的音效除了刻意静音以外都不适用。后面有几处我几乎听不到音效了..


[Hard]
00:08:582 (3,5) - 可加whistle加上了
00:51:947 (1,2,3,1) -

SPOILER

感觉这样按照DS排下来有点太平淡了
00:58:498 (1) - 转盘结束后至少留个一拍比较好 不然会来不及打 推荐在00:59:904 结束已修改
02:42:083 (1) - ^。 不过为了制造和你想要的效果，可以在 02:44:427 结束，然后在02:45:130加个圈这里我想保留
01:31:771 (3) - NC从这里开始，提醒player接下来是个三角跳感觉没有必要
01:23:816 (3,4,5,6) - 直的不好看，试试弯的：

SPOILER

当初想弄成弯的，但是怎么弯都别扭，所以干脆弄成直的了
02:08:802 (3,4,5,6) - ^^

00:18:660 (4) - 这个可以不要鼓音这里音乐也是鼓音啊

00:21:238 和 00:21:707 -明显的鼓音。Add，和前面叠起来。

SPOILER

如果这样觉得太跳可以减小距离..这里打算和后面的部分保持一致

00:39:760 (1,2,1,2) - 还是弄弯好看..不过这个纯属个人观点已修改

That's all
我喜欢这种转圈圈式的flow..
射个星~

Xgor wrote:

[General]
I gotta say, I think a Easy is needed to this. Even with the slow relaxing SV the beat density on Normal is somewhat high and a easy shouldn't be too hard to do to on a song like this.


Just a little warning, the white colour makes it really hard to see some skins repeating sliders. Still this will be fixed in the next patch so it's not too much of an problem.

Quite a lot of hitsounds are barely audible, and some of them goes down as low as 15%! Please raise then so you can atleast hear them.
Fixed~

[Normal] All fixed~
00:43:266 (2) - The slider end isn't snapped correctly
00:52:416 (1) - The slider end isn't snapped correctly

[Hard]All fixed~
01:53:333 (1) - I think that 0,5x here feels just just plainly wrong and it's the only part you use it like that so it feels werid. 0,75 flows much better with this slider.

Well I can't find that much but those things really drag it down, will follow the map and see so you at least can get a easy to it.

Xgor wrote:

Um, there still isn't a easy on this, I can't push forward on the queue without it and the set really needs it.

1. Fine ~

1. 00:20:066 (2) - How about a whistle to catch the bells?
2. 00:52:416 (1) - This should have a whistle on the start to fit the bells.
3. 01:08:795 (2) - Same as on 00:20:066 (2) -
4. 01:11:629 (3) - To make this perfect, you should move it to make the end of this Slider stacking with the previous circle.
5. 01:44:896 (1) - Should also have a whistle on start to fit the bells.
6. 01:56:615 (1) - Whistle on the repeat to fit the bells?
7. 02:00:365 (1) - Finish on the start to emphasize the drum's sound?
8. 02:12:552 (2) - Missing whistle on the start.

1. 00:20:066 (2) - High tone here, so how about using a whistle on the start?
2. 00:19:597 (1) - Same here.
3. 00:51:478 (4) - The repeat should also have a whistle if you listen to the bells.
4. 01:03:660 (5) - Looks really strange at the moment, please stack it with 2.
5. 01:06:004 (3) - Listening to the bells, I think the repeat needs a whistle.
6. 01:08:327 (1,2) - Same about whistling for those two.
7. 01:27:083 (2) - Whistle at the start to follow the bells.
8. 01:27:786 (3) - Whistle at the end to follow the bells.
9. 01:36:458 (3) - If you listen closely, you can hear the bell, so I'd like a whistle on the end to fit this.
10. 01:37:161 (4) - Same as above.
11. 01:38:802 (2) - Whistle, since here is a bell sound.
12. 01:40:677 (5) - Whistle on the repeat and end for the same reason as everything above.
13. 01:58:490 (4) - NC to signalize the regoing of the pattern?
14. 02:00:365 (1) - Start is missing finish and whistle.
15. 02:15:833 (2) - Whistle on every part of the Slider to fit the bells.
16. 02:28:958 (6) - Whistle on Slider's end to fit the bells.
17. 02:31:302 (2) - Whistle to fit the bells.
18. 02:40:677 (6) - Finish on the end for emphasizing the strong drum?

1. 00:20:066 (2,3) - Whistle for the up going tone?
2. 00:25:925 (6) - Plays weird and looks uncreative. How about moving this into the mid and above 3?
3. 00:38:353 (1) - Start should have a whistle to follow the bells.
4. 00:40:697 (1) - Add a whistle to the end aswell for the same reason.
5. 00:42:548 (2,3) - Same as 00:20:066 (2,3) - ?
6. 01:07:879 (7) - Make this perfect by moving 7 a grid to the right.
7. 01:08:795 (2,3) - Same as 00:20:066 (2,3) - ?
8. 01:24:754 (1,1,1,2) - This Slowdown doesnt really fit the music. I recommend you to remove it and think of an alternative pattern, since the music isn't really slowing here, you know?
9. 01:53:333 (1) - Whistle on the start due to the high vocal?
10. 01:57:552 (2,3) - Same as 00:20:066 (2,3) - ?
11. 02:13:490 (1,1,1,2) - Unlike the other one, I'm actually fine with this, since I can feel how the music somehow becomes more intensive, just to let you know
12. 02:15:833 (1) - Uh, missing whistle on the start?
13. 02:16:302 (2) - Same as above?
14. 02:26:380 (6) - You are better to move this some grids down and to the right to make this perfect.
15. 02:41:615 (1) - Finish to make this more intensive? Seems really good to me.

Konei wrote:

Hellow, modding this :>


[General]

1. Fine ~

[Easy]

1. 00:20:066 (2) - How about a whistle to catch the bells?
2. 00:52:416 (1) - This should have a whistle on the start to fit the bells.
3. 01:08:795 (2) - Same as on 00:20:066 (2) -
4. 01:11:629 (3) - To make this perfect, you should move it to make the end of this Slider stacking with the previous circle.No change
5. 01:44:896 (1) - Should also have a whistle on start to fit the bells.
6. 01:56:615 (1) - Whistle on the repeat to fit the bells?
7. 02:00:365 (1) - Finish on the start to emphasize the drum's sound?
8. 02:12:552 (2) - Missing whistle on the start.

[Normal]

1. 00:20:066 (2) - High tone here, so how about using a whistle on the start?
2. 00:19:597 (1) - Same here.
3. 00:51:478 (4) - The repeat should also have a whistle if you listen to the bells.
4. 01:03:660 (5) - Looks really strange at the moment, please stack it with 2.
5. 01:06:004 (3) - Listening to the bells, I think the repeat needs a whistle.
6. 01:08:327 (1,2) - Same about whistling for those two.
7. 01:27:083 (2) - Whistle at the start to follow the bells.
8. 01:27:786 (3) - Whistle at the end to follow the bells.
9. 01:36:458 (3) - If you listen closely, you can hear the bell, so I'd like a whistle on the end to fit this.
10. 01:37:161 (4) - Same as above.
11. 01:38:802 (2) - Whistle, since here is a bell sound.
12. 01:40:677 (5) - Whistle on the repeat and end for the same reason as everything above.
13. 01:58:490 (4) - NC to signalize the regoing of the pattern?
14. 02:00:365 (1) - Start is missing finish and whistle.
15. 02:15:833 (2) - Whistle on every part of the Slider to fit the bells.
16. 02:28:958 (6) - Whistle on Slider's end to fit the bells.
17. 02:31:302 (2) - Whistle to fit the bells.
18. 02:40:677 (6) - Finish on the end for emphasizing the strong drum?

[Hard]

1. 00:20:066 (2,3) - Whistle for the up going tone?
2. 00:25:925 (6) - Plays weird and looks uncreative. How about moving this into the mid and above 3?No change
3. 00:38:353 (1) - Start should have a whistle to follow the bells.
4. 00:40:697 (1) - Add a whistle to the end aswell for the same reason.
5. 00:42:548 (2,3) - Same as 00:20:066 (2,3) - ?
6. 01:07:879 (7) - Make this perfect by moving 7 a grid to the right.
7. 01:08:795 (2,3) - Same as 00:20:066 (2,3) - ?
8. 01:24:754 (1,1,1,2) - This Slowdown doesnt really fit the music. I recommend you to remove it and think of an alternative pattern, since the music isn't really slowing here, you know?I want to keep this
9. 01:53:333 (1) - Whistle on the start due to the high vocal?
10. 01:57:552 (2,3) - Same as 00:20:066 (2,3) - ?
11. 02:13:490 (1,1,1,2) - Unlike the other one, I'm actually fine with this, since I can feel how the music somehow becomes more intensive, just to let you know
12. 02:15:833 (1) - Uh, missing whistle on the start?
13. 02:16:302 (2) - Same as above?
14. 02:26:380 (6) - You are better to move this some grids down and to the right to make this perfect.
15. 02:41:615 (1) - Finish to make this more intensive? Seems really good to me. Added finish at 02:41:146 (7) -

And that's about it for me.
Only hitsound suggestions and pattern nazing.
Very nicely done map, take a star from me

Good luck!

Gabe wrote:

Make sure to call me back, again, after!

There's an unsnapped object on Easy: 00:42:083 (1) - Make sure to resnap this slider and the end of it.
On Hard, two minors things, these timing points are unsnapped: 00:04:133 - ; 00:48:664 -

1. Remove audio lead-in since you have enough space already~

1. 00:30:613 - add a note here for vocal?
2. 00:38:119 - also suggest a note here since here's a drum
3. 00:38:353 (1,2) - the beat here is heard like
   
4. 01:28:841 - here's a triplet in music so how about this kinda beat?
   
5. 01:36:927 (3) - move to 256:32? and also move 01:37:161 (4) - to 136:64 for average spacing due to chaning spacing is weird here where music is flat~
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 02:17:474 - add a 1/4 repeat slider here and remove 02:17:708 (2) - ?
   
7. 02:31:771 (6) - an 1/2 slider here is much better than only a note imo

1. AR+1 for balance the difficulty across the mapset?
2. 00:43:266 (2) - unsnapped slider
3. 00:52:416 (1) - unsnapped slider

1. 00:36:941 (4) - unsnapped slider
2. 00:42:083 (1) - unsnapped slider

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~ mod from queue

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions

[General]

• Fixed

1. Remove audio lead-in since you have enough space already~

[Hard]

1. 00:30:613 - add a note here for vocal?I tried,but I prefer to keep this
2. 00:38:119 - also suggest a note here since here's a drum^
3. 00:38:353 (1,2) - the beat here is heard like Fixed
   
4. 01:28:841 - here's a triplet in music so how about this kinda beat?I tried,but I prefer to keep this
   
5. 01:36:927 (3) - move to 256:32? and also move 01:37:161 (4) - to 136:64 for average spacing due to chaning spacing is weird here where music is flat~I tried,but I prefer to keep this
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 02:17:474 - add a 1/4 repeat slider here and remove 02:17:708 (2) - ?^
   
7. 02:31:771 (6) - an 1/2 slider here is much better than only a note imoFixed

[Normal]

• All fixed

1. AR+1 for balance the difficulty across the mapset?
2. 00:43:266 (2) - unsnapped slider
3. 00:52:416 (1) - unsnapped slider

[Easy]

• All fixed

1. 00:36:941 (4) - unsnapped slider
2. 00:42:083 (1) - unsnapped slider

Scorpiour wrote:

rebubbled~~

NoHitter wrote:

[Hard]
- 01:32:943 (1,2,3) - The spacing between (2) and (3) is too similar to the one between (1) and (2). I suggest you space (3) further apart from (2).
- 01:53:333 (1) - What's this new combo for? It's unneeded IMO.

That's all.

NoHitter wrote:

Ranked!