Verdisphena wrote:

-Sekai- wrote:

Merry Kurismasu!~

1. 01:01:780 (1) - Please move this spinner forward to the red tick and shorten by 1/4, because it may cause confusion, it begins when there are active notes on the screen, check it~
2. 01:05:062 (2) - Considers remove the repeat to give an effect of suspense before to start the chorus, imo looks and sounds cool~
3. 01:52:791 (1) - Same as 01:01:780 (1), but here not result a big prob because before are a beat and not a slider, even so considers shorten by 1/4 and move 1/4 to forward
4. 02:34:519 (2) - This note may be too confused to the rookie player because suggest press it before (1/4 early), please move it to a place not stacked like down to the slider
5. Well it's all, I'm not a big fan of the whistle on the slidertrack and some sliders could be looks more curly, example: Before After

1. 00:26:054 (2) - Sounds better if you shorten by 1/2 the symmetry is nice but considers change it~
2. 00:30:179 (1) - Hmm this slider should start here 00:29:992, can you remove the repeat of 00:29:617 (3) and move to the red tick, after shorten by 1/2 and add a repeat
3. A important point about this diff is that some sliders should be begin in a red tick and not in white tick so follow more the voice and track, in conclusion: are moments in where you don't follow nothing (track and voice) the example of the before point can be help you
4. 00:36:181 (6) - new combo here~
5. 01:45:196 (1) - Remove new combo, is too short
6. 01:52:697 (5) - Add new combo
7. 02:20:266 (6) - This part need a new combo because are too long compared with others, maybe here are ok

1. 02:34:519 - Put a note with finish here?
2. Well made :3~

1. 00:45:183 - A decir verdad siento que quedaría mejor colocar unos jumps en vez del stream tal y como lo hiciste en 00:42:182
2. 02:32:456 (1) - imo estaría mejor agregarle un repeat y eliminar las dos notas que siguen, como lo hiciste con el anterior slider
3. Siempre excelente, no veo ningun problema que remarcar, recuerda, todas son solo sugerencias~

Kenezz wrote:

Meri Kurisumasu (8)
Kenezz's Bakamod~

Net's Merry Easy

1. 01:01:780 (1) - Please move this spinner forward to the red tick and shorten by 1/4, because it may cause confusion, it begins when there are active notes on the screen, check it~ ok
2. 01:05:062 (2) - Considers remove the repeat to give an effect of suspense before to start the chorus, imo looks and sounds cool~ ok
3. 01:52:791 (1) - Same as 01:01:780 (1), but here not result a big prob because before are a beat and not a slider, even so considers shorten by 1/4 and move 1/4 to forward ok
4. 02:34:519 (2) - This note may be too confused to the rookie player because suggest press it before (1/4 early), please move it to a place not stacked like down to the slider ok
5. Well it's all, I'm not a big fan of the whistle on the slidertrack and some sliders could be looks more curly, example: Before After nothing to do xD

Nymph's Hard

1. 02:34:519 - Put a note with finish here? ok
2. Well made :3~

Vicho

1. 00:45:183 - A decir verdad siento que quedaría mejor colocar unos jumps en vez del stream tal y como lo hiciste en 00:42:182 creo que no ^^'
2. 02:32:456 (1) - imo estaría mejor agregarle un repeat y eliminar las dos notas que siguen, como lo hiciste con el anterior slider prefiero dejarlo asi
3. Siempre excelente, no veo ningun problema que remarcar, recuerda, todas son solo sugerencias~ gracias \:D/

Bueno, es todo, espero que te ayude o/
Feliz Navidad \:D/ yay! Meri Kurisumasu~

Kenezz wrote:

Meri Kurisumasu (8)
Kenezz's Bakamod~

Rika

1. 00:26:054 (2) - Sounds better if you shorten by 1/2 the symmetry is nice but considers change it~ << Hmm.I think this is OK~ so no change
2. 00:30:179 (1) - Hmm this slider should start here 00:29:992, can you remove the repeat of 00:29:617 (3) and move to the red tick, after shorten by 1/2 and add a repeat <<Oh,good idea this ~ fixed
3. A important point about this diff is that some sliders should be begin in a red tick and not in white tick so follow more the voice and track, in conclusion: are moments in where you don't follow nothing (track and voice) the example of the before point can be help you
4. 00:36:181 (6) - new combo here~ <<fixed
5. 01:45:196 (1) - Remove new combo, is too short <<fixed
6. 01:52:697 (5) - Add new combo <<fixed
7. 02:20:266 (6) - This part need a new combo because are too long compared with others, maybe here are ok <<fixed

1. line.png might be too big (1920*480px). Maybe you could split the images into two?

1. 01:01:686 (1) - Fix the spacing here, it's too close to (7)
2. 02:20:266 (2) - Sorry to disturb your pattern but place this closer to (1) please

1. 01:52:697 (5) - please make the slider 1/2 longer (repeat point on white tick, endpoint as well)

happy30 wrote:

[SB]

1. line.png might be too big (1920*480px). Maybe you could split the images into two?

blissfulyoshi wrote:

A year has passed, so lets see how my comments have changed. (I hope most of the mappers are still here. If not..... do what you want)

Rika:
Normal/Aesthetics Mod:
00:19:677 (1) - align with previous slider? (It looks slightly strange during gameplay) looks fine IMO.
00:55:685 (1,2) - the middle of these curves look quite sharp, so I advise you adjsut it fixed a bit.
01:30:193 (6) - a slider with fewer red anchor points fits better here no issue here xD.

Combo mod:
01:10:688 (3) - new combo to be consistent with 01:22:691 (1) fixed.
02:13:702 (3) - ^ fixed.
02:19:703 (5,1) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 5 to follow the lyrics better fixed.

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Let's get this map rolling. I'll post this on the Christmas queue for you.