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Mod request taken from #modreqs 
General:
here use this instead. i changed the BG to a jpeg file to reduce the filesize.
SL
00:01:593 - how about adding a slider that ends at 00:02:843? the ticks should follow "two" and "three"
01:19:926 - is there a reason why theres a green line here?
01:54:509 - add a slider and end it at 01:54:926. dont forget to remove the circle of u do so. the slider follows "ke te"
02:16:082(4,6) - it looks like u suddenly stopped with the claps here. so add the claps at (4,6) to continue the pattern
02:20:243(2,3) - remove the clap for (2) and add it at the end of (3) because the last 4 notes hav the same rhythm
02:23:018(2,3) - ^
why dont u replace some claps for whistles? didnt hear any whistles and IMO itd be nice if u replace some claps for whistles
tera's Normal:
00:01:593 - try This? it follows vocals accurately.
01:24:926(5) - hmm i think u forgot to add a clap at the repeat arrow. if yes add it at the repeat arrow. it suddenly stops and then it starts over.
01:31:593(5,6) - same as above but remove the clap at the end. it sounds inconsistent and it ruins the pattern and add a clap at the repeat arrow to keep the pattern going
01:34:509(3) - add a clap here. same reason as above
02:30:995(1) - ^ at the end. ^
03:11:313(1) - this spinner is unexpected because since this is a normal diff. some players wont expect this spinner at all. i suggest that u add a 1/1 slider and add a circle at 03:12:267
Hard:
00:17:843(7) - i think u forgot the clap here. again u suddenly stopped using the claps
00:19:509(10) - ^
00:22:218(6,7) - hidden repeat slider. this is unrankable.
00:30:551(3,4) - ^
03:22:498(1-11) - how about setting the spacing to 0.5 because its easier for players to do this stream.
Collab:
03:16:775(1) - move this down because its touching the hp bar. this may cause some players to be nervous during gameplay
this is the best i can do. GL
General:
here use this instead. i changed the BG to a jpeg file to reduce the filesize.
SL
00:01:593 - how about adding a slider that ends at 00:02:843? the ticks should follow "two" and "three"
01:19:926 - is there a reason why theres a green line here?
01:54:509 - add a slider and end it at 01:54:926. dont forget to remove the circle of u do so. the slider follows "ke te"
02:16:082(4,6) - it looks like u suddenly stopped with the claps here. so add the claps at (4,6) to continue the pattern
02:20:243(2,3) - remove the clap for (2) and add it at the end of (3) because the last 4 notes hav the same rhythm
02:23:018(2,3) - ^
why dont u replace some claps for whistles? didnt hear any whistles and IMO itd be nice if u replace some claps for whistles
tera's Normal:
00:01:593 - try This? it follows vocals accurately.
01:24:926(5) - hmm i think u forgot to add a clap at the repeat arrow. if yes add it at the repeat arrow. it suddenly stops and then it starts over.
01:31:593(5,6) - same as above but remove the clap at the end. it sounds inconsistent and it ruins the pattern and add a clap at the repeat arrow to keep the pattern going
01:34:509(3) - add a clap here. same reason as above
02:30:995(1) - ^ at the end. ^
03:11:313(1) - this spinner is unexpected because since this is a normal diff. some players wont expect this spinner at all. i suggest that u add a 1/1 slider and add a circle at 03:12:267
Hard:
00:17:843(7) - i think u forgot the clap here. again u suddenly stopped using the claps
00:19:509(10) - ^
00:22:218(6,7) - hidden repeat slider. this is unrankable.
00:30:551(3,4) - ^
03:22:498(1-11) - how about setting the spacing to 0.5 because its easier for players to do this stream.
Collab:
03:16:775(1) - move this down because its touching the hp bar. this may cause some players to be nervous during gameplay
this is the best i can do. GL
thank you for mod~~Byakugan249 wrote:
tera's Normal:
00:01:593 - try This? it follows vocals accurately. ok,change it
01:24:926(5) - hmm i think u forgot to add a clap at the repeat arrow. if yes add it at the repeat arrow. it suddenly stops and then it starts over. Fixed
01:31:593(5,6) - same as above but remove the clap at the end. it sounds inconsistent and it ruins the pattern and add a clap at the repeat arrow to keep the pattern going Fixed
01:34:509(3) - add a clap here. same reason as above Fixed
02:30:995(1) - ^ at the end. ^ Fixed
03:11:313(1) - this spinner is unexpected because since this is a normal diff. some players wont expect this spinner at all. i suggest that u add a 1/1 slider and add a circle at 03:12:267 Remove spinner and add acircle 03:12:267
Download: Nico Nico Chorus - Ten faced (Kuma-san) [tera's Normal].osu
yo /o/
General
01:09:926 (1) remove clap in slider's end. I heard weird in here since in (2) is already added clap
01:19:926 (green timing points) delete that? I think that isn't use o:
01:54:926 (1) (nazi) this circle can stack more better
02:16:082 (4,6) add clap in there? this is following before hitsound imo also same rhythm in here too.
02:50:070 (1) I know you following the vocal. but this pattern is too hard for read by beginner players. I suggest to change this slider into just a circle.
02:57:353 (4) add new combo in here?
03:10:879 (2) add clap in here is not bad too imo
03:11:226 (3) ^ but in slider's end
03:23:712 (1) add finish to this slider is better too.
tera's normal
01:22:010 (2) add clap in here? I think just add (3)'s tail is weird to heard because this.
01:23:260 (1) add finish in slider's end? high vocal and the new rhythm is begin in here
01:39:509 (6,7,1) I think this pattern is hard to read and so fast for following by newbie players imo. I suggest to change another pattern
02:39:319 (6) from (5) to (6) is very far and not consistent spacing. please fix the spacing
Hard
00:37:530 (2,3) the spacing is weird to play imo. and put note in blue tick is little hard.consider to change them into 1 slider
00:40:863 (2,3) ^
00:49:926 (1) add finish in here more give effect with the song imo
00:50:759 (2) the spacing is too close from (1), please use usually spacing
02:12:613 (x) the vocal is still running in here, add circle in here also add clap too for following the flow song
02:14:347 (6) new combo in here. too long combo orz
02:20:677 (2,3) same think as 00:37:530
02:29:001 (2,3) ^
02:34:550 (4,5) ^
02:34:983 (6) add new combo
03:22:498 (1....11) not good put stream like this in hard difficulty I think. the stream will make the players shock imo :b
That's all. Sorry I can't mod collab :'<
Good luck~
General
- I think will be better if disabled countdown setting
- Disabled "Letterbox during breaks" ?
- Inconsistency Kiai time in taiko diff. make same please
- Unsnapped green timing points in 01:09:907. check in timing setup with push F6 or select timing tab
01:09:926 (1) remove clap in slider's end. I heard weird in here since in (2) is already added clap
01:19:926 (green timing points) delete that? I think that isn't use o:
01:54:926 (1) (nazi) this circle can stack more better
02:16:082 (4,6) add clap in there? this is following before hitsound imo also same rhythm in here too.
02:50:070 (1) I know you following the vocal. but this pattern is too hard for read by beginner players. I suggest to change this slider into just a circle.
02:57:353 (4) add new combo in here?
03:10:879 (2) add clap in here is not bad too imo
03:11:226 (3) ^ but in slider's end
03:23:712 (1) add finish to this slider is better too.
tera's normal
01:22:010 (2) add clap in here? I think just add (3)'s tail is weird to heard because this.
01:23:260 (1) add finish in slider's end? high vocal and the new rhythm is begin in here
01:39:509 (6,7,1) I think this pattern is hard to read and so fast for following by newbie players imo. I suggest to change another pattern
02:39:319 (6) from (5) to (6) is very far and not consistent spacing. please fix the spacing
Hard
00:37:530 (2,3) the spacing is weird to play imo. and put note in blue tick is little hard.consider to change them into 1 slider
00:40:863 (2,3) ^
00:49:926 (1) add finish in here more give effect with the song imo
00:50:759 (2) the spacing is too close from (1), please use usually spacing
02:12:613 (x) the vocal is still running in here, add circle in here also add clap too for following the flow song
02:14:347 (6) new combo in here. too long combo orz
02:20:677 (2,3) same think as 00:37:530
02:29:001 (2,3) ^
02:34:550 (4,5) ^
02:34:983 (6) add new combo
03:22:498 (1....11) not good put stream like this in hard difficulty I think. the stream will make the players shock imo :b
That's all. Sorry I can't mod collab :'<
Good luck~
Topic Starter
Yasora-chan wrote:
yo /o/
GeneralHard
- I think will be better if disabled countdown setting
- Disabled "Letterbox during breaks" ?
- Inconsistency Kiai time in taiko diff. make same please
00:37:530 (2,3) the spacing is weird to play imo. and put note in blue tick is little hard.consider to change them into 1 slider
00:40:863 (2,3) ^
00:49:926 (1) add finish in here more give effect with the song imo
00:50:759 (2) the spacing is too close from (1), please use usually spacing
02:12:613 (x) the vocal is still running in here, add circle in here also add clap too for following the flow song
02:14:347 (6) new combo in here. too long combo orz
02:20:677 (2,3) same think as 00:37:530
02:29:001 (2,3) ^
02:34:550 (4,5) ^
02:34:983 (6) add new combo
03:22:498 (1....11) not good put stream like this in hard difficulty I think. the stream will make the players shock imo :b
some moments fixed.Thanks
That's all. Sorry I can't mod collab :'<
Good luck~
tera's normalsorry,no change
01:22:010 (2) add clap in here? I think just add (3)'s tail is weird to heard because this.
01:23:260 (1) add finish in slider's end? high vocal and the new rhythm is begin in here
01:39:509 (6,7,1) I think this pattern is hard to read and so fast for following by newbie players imo. I suggest to change another pattern
02:39:319 (6) from (5) to (6) is very far and not consistent spacing. please fix the spacing
but thank you for mod~~<3[General]
00:34:405 (6,1) - I found this overlap of sliders a bit distasteful...
[Hard]
*Side note: 00:43:259 (1) - http://puu.sh/hoyi What is up with the anchors here...? O_o
00:13:884 (5,6,7) - Change this to a short return slider?
00:14:301 (8,9,10) - ^
03:22:324 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - ... D: This, on a Hard? Please turn these into some short return sliders. I find this kind of silly to see on a Hard difficulty...
[tera's Normal]
Nothing to poke at.
[SL]
Nothing to poke at.
- I'd recommend the use of more noticeable colours for the SB names. It's hard to see them with this BG.
- Unused image files: black.jpg, white.jpg
00:34:405 (6,1) - I found this overlap of sliders a bit distasteful...
[Hard]
*Side note: 00:43:259 (1) - http://puu.sh/hoyi What is up with the anchors here...? O_o
00:13:884 (5,6,7) - Change this to a short return slider?
00:14:301 (8,9,10) - ^
03:22:324 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - ... D: This, on a Hard? Please turn these into some short return sliders. I find this kind of silly to see on a Hard difficulty...
[tera's Normal]
Nothing to poke at.
[SL]
Nothing to poke at.
From #modreqs
[General]
I'm not sure, but I think "Megpoid Gumi" should go in the tags instead of "Gumi".
[SL]
Remove the countdown from this difficulty. Doesn't really fit.
Throw +1 at OD, HP drain, and AR. 1 for every stat is currently way too low.
1:54:926 - Stack this note more visibly for newbies to see easier.
2:50:070 - How about a pattern like this -
It has a nice flow and plays out much better. If you do this, put a clap at 2:50:764.
[tera's Normal]
00:03:259 to 00:29:509 - There are alot of un-aligned notes here. Instead of listing all of them, I've provided a screenshot example.
If this is un-intentional, I highly recommend revising this.
00:16:593 - Starting here is just a copy-paste of the previous verse. Mix things up a little. (just a suggestion)
1:07:947 - Instead of starting the spinner here, start it at 1:08:259. I find this much better.
[Hard]
00:28:259 - What an odd place to start a break. I think you should just map this part out.
1:08:051 - Replace this slider with 2 notes instead. It makes it consistent with the previous parts of the maps.
1:13:259 - Extend this slider by two 1/4 beats. In order to follow the distance snap if you do this, curve the slider like this -
1:16:801 - Try ending this spinner here at 1:19:926 (just a suggestion)
1:23:259 - Remove all the finishes from this slider. It doesn't sound very good at all.
2:06:891 to 2:08:278 - The pattern beginning here really confused me. I couldn't read it and did not see it coming.
2:12:440 to 2:13:134 - ^
[Collab]
Remove the countdown from this difficulty. Same as [SL], it really doesn't fit to me.
1:16:801 - Where this spinner ends currently doesn't sound very good. I suggest ending it at 1:18:259 or 1:19:926. Also, making the end silent would also sound nice, especially if you use the latter of my suggestions.
[General]
I'm not sure, but I think "Megpoid Gumi" should go in the tags instead of "Gumi".
[SL]
Remove the countdown from this difficulty. Doesn't really fit.
Throw +1 at OD, HP drain, and AR. 1 for every stat is currently way too low.
1:54:926 - Stack this note more visibly for newbies to see easier.
2:50:070 - How about a pattern like this -
It has a nice flow and plays out much better. If you do this, put a clap at 2:50:764.
[tera's Normal]
00:03:259 to 00:29:509 - There are alot of un-aligned notes here. Instead of listing all of them, I've provided a screenshot example.
If this is un-intentional, I highly recommend revising this.
00:16:593 - Starting here is just a copy-paste of the previous verse. Mix things up a little. (just a suggestion)
1:07:947 - Instead of starting the spinner here, start it at 1:08:259. I find this much better.
[Hard]
00:28:259 - What an odd place to start a break. I think you should just map this part out.
1:08:051 - Replace this slider with 2 notes instead. It makes it consistent with the previous parts of the maps.
1:13:259 - Extend this slider by two 1/4 beats. In order to follow the distance snap if you do this, curve the slider like this -
1:16:801 - Try ending this spinner here at 1:19:926 (just a suggestion)
1:23:259 - Remove all the finishes from this slider. It doesn't sound very good at all.
2:06:891 to 2:08:278 - The pattern beginning here really confused me. I couldn't read it and did not see it coming.
2:12:440 to 2:13:134 - ^
[Collab]
Remove the countdown from this difficulty. Same as [SL], it really doesn't fit to me.
1:16:801 - Where this spinner ends currently doesn't sound very good. I suggest ending it at 1:18:259 or 1:19:926. Also, making the end silent would also sound nice, especially if you use the latter of my suggestions.
thank you for mod~~Jacob wrote:
[tera's Normal]
00:03:259 to 00:29:509 - There are alot of un-aligned notes here. Instead of listing all of them, I've provided a screenshot example.
If this is un-intentional, I highly recommend revising this.
This is intentional~
00:16:593 - Starting here is just a copy-paste of the previous verse. Mix things up a little. (just a suggestion)
I like copy-paste.I think it is to improve the flow.
1:07:947 - Instead of starting the spinner here, start it at 1:08:259. I find this much better.
That's right. I change it.
Download: Nico Nico Chorus - Ten faced (Kuma-san) [tera's Normal].osu
Hi ~ Kuma-san ~
Mod time for my Queue ~
Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions
That's all ~
Good luck ~
Mod time for my Queue ~
Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions
[General]
- You are missing load collab creator's names.
[Collab]
- 00:04:926 (1,2,3,4,5) - Move 1 grid left.
- 00:49:093 (6) - Move to this slider pls,Hidden by 00:49:926 (1) arrow.
This is unrankble,like this. - 01:20:134 - Remove too short Break time.
- 02:47:122 - ^
- 03:23:018 (1) - Remove too short new combo.
[Hard]
- 00:28:468 - Remove too short Break time.
- 01:20:134 - ^
[tera's Normal]
- Remove Enable coutdown pls.
[SL]
- Try reduce star rating 3 star following or make a easy diff.
That's all ~
Good luck ~
Topic Starter
ThanksKawayi Rika wrote:
Hi ~ Kuma-san ~
Mod time for my Queue ~
Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestionsAbalee said its rankable[SL]
- Try reduce star rating 3 star following or make a easy diff.
That's all ~
Good luck ~
Go go rank it already! D:
So I'm finally here. Didn't get around to modding this as a MAT, so I finally arrive. (This song is great, by the way)
[Collab]
Saten-san
00:30:551 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I'm not sure about having a stream here, it doesn't really fit the rhythm of the vocals. Try to match those more closely, maybe?
Kuma-san
01:42:843 (1,2) - (Kuma-san) There doesn't seem to be any reason for the decreased spacing here, why not space it more normally so it's more readable?
Saten-san
01:54:926 (1) - (Saten-san) I think this would be a good place for a finish hitsound.
02:18:509 (1,2,3) - (Saten-san) These would look nicer spaced out just a bit more to avoid overlap.
02:22:324 (6) - (Saten-san) You could take this out from under the slider so the player isn't tempted to hit it early. (The previous note under a slider is 1/4 earlier.)
[Hard]
01:18:572 - Move this inheriting section to somewhere that makes more sense.
01:19:926 - The break here is really short and interrupts the flow, I'd say just remove it.
01:37:634 (3,4) - The spacing here is confusing, just use 1.0x as usual.
[tera's Normal]
- Looks good here.
[SL]
- Might want to indicate this is an [Easy] in the difficulty name, I don't know.
01:21:593 (1,1) - There's not enough time for a new player to finish the spinner before the next note appears here, try to map through the spinner or something like that.
01:53:259 (5,1) - Hm. Interesting idea, but it could be confusing at this Approach Rate, so you might want to change it.
Yay, I'm modding stuff again. PM me after fixes.
[Collab]
Saten-san
00:30:551 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I'm not sure about having a stream here, it doesn't really fit the rhythm of the vocals. Try to match those more closely, maybe?
Kuma-san
01:42:843 (1,2) - (Kuma-san) There doesn't seem to be any reason for the decreased spacing here, why not space it more normally so it's more readable?
Saten-san
01:54:926 (1) - (Saten-san) I think this would be a good place for a finish hitsound.
02:18:509 (1,2,3) - (Saten-san) These would look nicer spaced out just a bit more to avoid overlap.
02:22:324 (6) - (Saten-san) You could take this out from under the slider so the player isn't tempted to hit it early. (The previous note under a slider is 1/4 earlier.)
[Hard]
01:18:572 - Move this inheriting section to somewhere that makes more sense.
01:19:926 - The break here is really short and interrupts the flow, I'd say just remove it.
01:37:634 (3,4) - The spacing here is confusing, just use 1.0x as usual.
[tera's Normal]
- Looks good here.
[SL]
- Might want to indicate this is an [Easy] in the difficulty name, I don't know.
01:21:593 (1,1) - There's not enough time for a new player to finish the spinner before the next note appears here, try to map through the spinner or something like that.
01:53:259 (5,1) - Hm. Interesting idea, but it could be confusing at this Approach Rate, so you might want to change it.
Yay, I'm modding stuff again. PM me after fixes.
I was following both the music and vocals here kinda (Maybe I went too deep?)SapphireGhost wrote:
[Collab]Saten-san
00:30:551 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I'm not sure about having a stream here, it doesn't really fit the rhythm of the vocals. Try to match those more closely, maybe?
Download: Nico Nico Chorus - Juu Mensou (Kuma-san) [Collab].osu
This is long overdue.
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Topic Starter
THAAAANKSSSapphireGhost wrote:
This is long overdue.
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Watashi no naka no juunin ga~~Kuma-san wrote:
THAAAANKSSSapphireGhost wrote:
This is long overdue.
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Go Kuma-San~!!!
I always wanted to say that :3
EDIT: I just noticed that this is mah 600th post \:D/
I just have little concern on the unused and different name on the .osb file. :/
Topic Starter
Oh Shi- D:abalee wrote:
I just have little concern on the unused and different name on the .osb file. :/
Fixed
.osb issue should be addressed now. It's a tiny change so we can rebubble it here.
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[All difficulties]
Tick rate 2 fits this song best
02:50:417 - Start kiai here
[SL's Easy]
01:23:259 (1) - This is a little soon after a spinner for an Easy of this level imo.
01:27:843 (2) - Not a fan of short sliders with more than one repeat on them - especially in Easy difficulties.
01:35:759 (2,3,1) - This is more something I'd expect to see in a Normal.
02:07:411 (3,4) - Whoa, way too close
[Normal]
01:50:343 (1) - Way too soon after a spinner for a Normal.
02:42:440 (1) - ^
The kiai section feels -really hard- for a Normal.
The hitsounding was really really bland. As in it was mostly just claps on 2 and 4. The entire map. Spruce it up a bit. There are plenty of areas that you could easily add finishes, at least.
[Hard]
01:20:134 (1) - I'd consider 1/2 after a spinner more of an Insane technique rather than a Hard one.
01:34:509 (4,1) - Strange to finally see a jump here.
This feels like it's fairly light on the hitsounding as well. See if you can spruce it up a bit!
[Taiko]
03:37:584 (4) - Eh, this feels better as just a finish, not a drum roll.
Really nice work on this
[Collab]
Saten
00:31:072 (8,9) - This rhythm is weird when going against the vocals. It might be better to start the slider where 8 is, then end the slider at 00:31:384 - and -maybe- add a circle at 00:31:593 - if you really want a beat there
02:18:076 (6) - Same thing here. Start the slider here and end at 02:18:336 -
Kuma
01:38:885 (8,1) - This spacing is way too close
The Normal and Hard felt... really random in terms of hit object placement. There was almost zero structure at all which pretty much makes the map forgettable. See if you can make your maps better in terms of presentation for a much higher enjoyment experience for players!
Tick rate 2 fits this song best
02:50:417 - Start kiai here
[SL's Easy]
01:23:259 (1) - This is a little soon after a spinner for an Easy of this level imo.
01:27:843 (2) - Not a fan of short sliders with more than one repeat on them - especially in Easy difficulties.
01:35:759 (2,3,1) - This is more something I'd expect to see in a Normal.
02:07:411 (3,4) - Whoa, way too close
[Normal]
01:50:343 (1) - Way too soon after a spinner for a Normal.
02:42:440 (1) - ^
The kiai section feels -really hard- for a Normal.
The hitsounding was really really bland. As in it was mostly just claps on 2 and 4. The entire map. Spruce it up a bit. There are plenty of areas that you could easily add finishes, at least.
[Hard]
01:20:134 (1) - I'd consider 1/2 after a spinner more of an Insane technique rather than a Hard one.
01:34:509 (4,1) - Strange to finally see a jump here.
This feels like it's fairly light on the hitsounding as well. See if you can spruce it up a bit!
[Taiko]
03:37:584 (4) - Eh, this feels better as just a finish, not a drum roll.
Really nice work on this
[Collab]
Saten
00:31:072 (8,9) - This rhythm is weird when going against the vocals. It might be better to start the slider where 8 is, then end the slider at 00:31:384 - and -maybe- add a circle at 00:31:593 - if you really want a beat there
02:18:076 (6) - Same thing here. Start the slider here and end at 02:18:336 -
Kuma
01:38:885 (8,1) - This spacing is way too close
The Normal and Hard felt... really random in terms of hit object placement. There was almost zero structure at all which pretty much makes the map forgettable. See if you can make your maps better in terms of presentation for a much higher enjoyment experience for players!
http://puu.sh/NzANGarven wrote:
[All difficulties]
[Normal] All fixed
01:50:343 (1) - Way too soon after a spinner for a Normal.
02:42:440 (1) - ^
The kiai section feels -really hard- for a Normal.
The hitsounding was really really bland. As in it was mostly just claps on 2 and 4. The entire map. Spruce it up a bit. There are plenty of areas that you could easily add finishes, at least.
Added a lot of finishes. and some change hitsound.
to Kuma-san
I am so busy since 05/8.
If you need change my map , you can free to change for my map.
sorry~~
Topic Starter
FixedGarven wrote:
[All difficulties]
Tick rate 2 fits this song best
02:50:417 - Start kiai here
[SL's Easy]
01:23:259 (1) - This is a little soon after a spinner for an Easy of this level imo.
01:27:843 (2) - Not a fan of short sliders with more than one repeat on them - especially in Easy difficulties.
01:35:759 (2,3,1) - This is more something I'd expect to see in a Normal.
02:07:411 (3,4) - Whoa, way too close
[Normal]
01:50:343 (1) - Way too soon after a spinner for a Normal.
02:42:440 (1) - ^
The kiai section feels -really hard- for a Normal.
The hitsounding was really really bland. As in it was mostly just claps on 2 and 4. The entire map. Spruce it up a bit. There are plenty of areas that you could easily add finishes, at least.
[Hard]
01:20:134 (1) - I'd consider 1/2 after a spinner more of an Insane technique rather than a Hard one.
01:34:509 (4,1) - Strange to finally see a jump here.
This feels like it's fairly light on the hitsounding as well. See if you can spruce it up a bit!
[Taiko]
03:37:584 (4) - Eh, this feels better as just a finish, not a drum roll.
Really nice work on this
[Collab]
Saten
00:31:072 (8,9) - This rhythm is weird when going against the vocals. It might be better to start the slider where 8 is, then end the slider at 00:31:384 - and -maybe- add a circle at 00:31:593 - if you really want a beat there
02:18:076 (6) - Same thing here. Start the slider here and end at 02:18:336 -
Kuma
01:38:885 (8,1) - This spacing is way too close
The Normal and Hard felt... really random in terms of hit object placement. There was almost zero structure at all which pretty much makes the map forgettable. See if you can make your maps better in terms of presentation for a much higher enjoyment experience for players!
that was quick 
[Collab]
00:09:301 (3) - move down 1 grid
00:12:426 (3,4) - improve your blanket
00:18:885 (8,9) - ....try to make them like this
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3017593
00:22:218 (6) - overlap with 00:21:385 (4) -
00:25:551 (2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3017595
00:26:176 (3) - ^when you finish to do this, move 00:26:176 (3) - to x240 y112
00:46:593 (2,3) - use the same shape
00:54:509 (5,6) - improve your blanket
01:22:843 (5) - ...make it more smooth please
01:24:509 (x) - add note
01:39:301 (x) - add note
01:39:509 (1,2) - fix the overlap issue
02:10:879 (10,11,12,13,14) - ..could you move those on x444 y24？
02:11:573 (1,2,3) - ...improve your blanket
02:12:093 (3,4) - I dont think the overlap is a good idea
02:35:504 (2) - move to x220 y108
02:35:850 (3) - move to x184 y24
02:36:544 (1) - improve this shape
02:52:845 (1,2,3) - use same space
eh...........because it is really old map so...better rebuild some shape about slider
[Hard]
first I want to say
unified your distance
00:09:301 (3) - move down 1 grid
00:12:426 (3,4) - improve your blanket
00:18:885 (8,9) - ....try to make them like this
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3017593
00:22:218 (6) - overlap with 00:21:385 (4) -
00:25:551 (2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3017595
00:26:176 (3) - ^when you finish to do this, move 00:26:176 (3) - to x240 y112
00:46:593 (2,3) - use the same shape
00:54:509 (5,6) - improve your blanket
01:22:843 (5) - ...make it more smooth please
01:24:509 (x) - add note
01:39:301 (x) - add note
01:39:509 (1,2) - fix the overlap issue
02:10:879 (10,11,12,13,14) - ..could you move those on x444 y24？
02:11:573 (1,2,3) - ...improve your blanket
02:12:093 (3,4) - I dont think the overlap is a good idea
02:35:504 (2) - move to x220 y108
02:35:850 (3) - move to x184 y24
02:36:544 (1) - improve this shape
02:52:845 (1,2,3) - use same space
eh...........because it is really old map so...better rebuild some shape about slider
[Hard]
first I want to say
unified your distance
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