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我真的找不出什麼問題233
這張圖我覺得很不錯啊，射星
這張圖我覺得很不錯啊，射星
a little late. 
just suggestions...:
Combo 2 and 3 seem to look really similar... or maybe it's just my skin. Consider making one darker?
Rin
00:04:579 (1) - seems a little off from 00:03:409 (1) -. just stack it perfectly under it? It also makes the curve 00:04:140 (4,5,6,1) - more neat and smooth.
00:07:506 (4) - If i'm not mistaken the new combo should be here, and not at 00:07:652 (1). If you listen at 25%, you should hear that the guitar plays a descending melody at 00:07:067 (1,2,3), and then the guitar starts a new melody at a higher pitch note at 00:07:506 (4) -
00:12:189 (4) - ^
00:16:872 (4) - ^ (and etc... It should be obvious at which parts I'm pointing to, so I'm not going to mention it anymore.)
00:59:750 - aww no stream is mapped at all. oh well.
01:12:043 (3) - i have a sudden urge to end this slider at 01:12:262 (the blue tick), but idk why. It just feels so right to me ._. like http://puu.sh/ioen or something
01:26:558 (2,3) - small nazi, but move both these notes down a bit so that combo 1, 2, and 3 are equally spaced?
01:38:137 (1) - a slider works better here imo (that ends at 01:38:769 - ?) rather than a note. just my opinion tho. I'm not all that sure where to put it tho lol.
01:40:663 (1) - ^
02:09:298 (1) - same as first suggestion.
Hard
00:16:872 (3) - same as insane. Just seems to feel better when you have the new combo here, since the guitar starts a new phrase here. (and etc... same with the other similar parts)
00:33:994 (5) - new combo just seems to fit here. but that's just me.
02:31:104 (1) - erm why the new combo? Why not match 00:26:385 (4,5) - ?
02:44:421 - adding a note here sounds better to me because it matches 02:41:055 (1,2,3,4,1) - which has 1 slider and six 1/2 tick notes after it. If you add the note, it matches that 1 slider and six 1/2 tick notes after it and it just sounds good to me.
Scorpiour
00:58:579 (1,2,3,4) - doesn't really fit imo, and it's just a little unexpected. You never used anti-spacing in previous parts of this same section either.
01:07:213 - either add a note here or move 01:07:360 (3,4) - further away. It just looks like a jump to me, just due to the fact that you have all of this constant 1/2 tick stuff 01:04:433 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1), which just makes me believe that it will still be constant 1/2 ticks.
01:08:384 - if you decide to add a note above, then just for consistency purposes add one here.
01:55:400 (5,6) - what, why is this not a straight line? DDD:
03:27:738 - seems to work better if you added a note here to end the song with :/
Normal and Easy look fine, but kinda hard, but oh well.
nice map tho:3 and i hope this helps at least a bit ._.
good luck~~
just suggestions...:
Combo 2 and 3 seem to look really similar... or maybe it's just my skin. Consider making one darker?
Rin
00:04:579 (1) - seems a little off from 00:03:409 (1) -. just stack it perfectly under it? It also makes the curve 00:04:140 (4,5,6,1) - more neat and smooth.
00:07:506 (4) - If i'm not mistaken the new combo should be here, and not at 00:07:652 (1). If you listen at 25%, you should hear that the guitar plays a descending melody at 00:07:067 (1,2,3), and then the guitar starts a new melody at a higher pitch note at 00:07:506 (4) -
00:12:189 (4) - ^
00:16:872 (4) - ^ (and etc... It should be obvious at which parts I'm pointing to, so I'm not going to mention it anymore.)
00:59:750 - aww no stream is mapped at all
. oh well.01:12:043 (3) - i have a sudden urge to end this slider at 01:12:262 (the blue tick), but idk why. It just feels so right to me ._. like http://puu.sh/ioen or something
01:26:558 (2,3) - small nazi, but move both these notes down a bit so that combo 1, 2, and 3 are equally spaced?
01:38:137 (1) - a slider works better here imo (that ends at 01:38:769 - ?) rather than a note. just my opinion tho. I'm not all that sure where to put it tho lol.
01:40:663 (1) - ^
02:09:298 (1) - same as first suggestion.
Hard
00:16:872 (3) - same as insane. Just seems to feel better when you have the new combo here, since the guitar starts a new phrase here. (and etc... same with the other similar parts)
00:33:994 (5) - new combo just seems to fit here. but that's just me.
02:31:104 (1) - erm why the new combo? Why not match 00:26:385 (4,5) - ?
02:44:421 - adding a note here sounds better to me because it matches 02:41:055 (1,2,3,4,1) - which has 1 slider and six 1/2 tick notes after it. If you add the note, it matches that 1 slider and six 1/2 tick notes after it and it just sounds good to me.
Scorpiour
00:58:579 (1,2,3,4) - doesn't really fit imo, and it's just a little unexpected. You never used anti-spacing in previous parts of this same section either.
01:07:213 - either add a note here or move 01:07:360 (3,4) - further away. It just looks like a jump to me, just due to the fact that you have all of this constant 1/2 tick stuff 01:04:433 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1), which just makes me believe that it will still be constant 1/2 ticks.
01:08:384 - if you decide to add a note above, then just for consistency purposes add one here.
01:55:400 (5,6) - what, why is this not a straight line? DDD:
03:27:738 - seems to work better if you added a note here to end the song with :/
Normal and Easy look fine, but kinda hard, but oh well.
nice map tho:3 and i hope this helps at least a bit ._.
good luck~~
是誰叫我求個正義 粉碎泡泡
[General]
imo everydiff need 500~1000 audio lead-in ._. Considering you've already put 1500 for [Easy], 1500 for all diff would be fine.
You start the break for [Rin] at 01:45:716 - , so I prefer you do the same thing for [Easy] and [Normal] as both break starts before 01:45.
[Rin]
00:22:433 - just a little thought here: try to make it gradually louder?
00:47:165 (3,4) - just a bit confusing here as this is the 1/2 spacing throughout the diff and it's not yet in kiai time 0.0
01:26:769 (3) - [Nazi] Slider shape adjustment (symmetrical along the y-axis)
03:27:664 - duplicated timeline 0.0
...唔 想不到可以講啥
[Hard]
00:20:970 (1,2) - interchange NC
00:21:555 (1,2) - ^
00:35:165 (9) - the whole section's a bit too quiet imo, here the music sounds like a whistle so you may consider putting one here
02:31:104 (1) - don't see the reason to NC here comparing with 00:26:385 (4) -
[Scopiour]
OD 5 is tooooo low, try 6
01:00:628 (4) - imo this stacking is a bit confusing since it's 1/1 away from the last note orz
01:00:921 (1,2,3,4) - (3,4) 這樣放有點別扭 ._. 試試這01:20:531 (6,7,1) - 維持(1,2,3)的spacing？
02:31:689 (1) - feel odd because I hear no beats at the red tick and the vocal//drum's accent should be on the following white tick. You might want to add one more reverse tick here.
03:24:957 (4,1) - [Nazi] stack well
03:27:738 - I think we need a ending here orz
[Normal]
00:45:409 (1) - remove whistle here?
[Taiko]
00:08:092 - finish as you've done before
00:12:774 - ^
00:17:457 - ^
...投降
昨晚mod途中地震沒mod完 ;A;
EDIT: 嗯 忘記star.
[General]
imo everydiff need 500~1000 audio lead-in ._. Considering you've already put 1500 for [Easy], 1500 for all diff would be fine.
You start the break for [Rin] at 01:45:716 - , so I prefer you do the same thing for [Easy] and [Normal] as both break starts before 01:45.
[Rin]
00:22:433 - just a little thought here: try to make it gradually louder?
00:47:165 (3,4) - just a bit confusing here as this is the 1/2 spacing throughout the diff and it's not yet in kiai time 0.0
01:26:769 (3) - [Nazi] Slider shape adjustment (symmetrical along the y-axis)
328,312,86769,2,0,B|300:348|256:356|204:348|172:288,1,160,2|002:27:152 - same as 0:22
03:27:664 - duplicated timeline 0.0
...唔 想不到可以講啥
[Hard]
00:20:970 (1,2) - interchange NC
00:21:555 (1,2) - ^
00:35:165 (9) - the whole section's a bit too quiet imo, here the music sounds like a whistle so you may consider putting one here
02:31:104 (1) - don't see the reason to NC here comparing with 00:26:385 (4) -
[Scopiour]
OD 5 is tooooo low, try 6
01:00:628 (4) - imo this stacking is a bit confusing since it's 1/1 away from the last note orz
01:00:921 (1,2,3,4) - (3,4) 這樣放有點別扭 ._. 試試這01:20:531 (6,7,1) - 維持(1,2,3)的spacing？
02:31:689 (1) - feel odd because I hear no beats at the red tick and the vocal//drum's accent should be on the following white tick. You might want to add one more reverse tick here.
03:24:957 (4,1) - [Nazi] stack well
03:27:738 - I think we need a ending here orz
[Normal]
00:45:409 (1) - remove whistle here?
[Taiko]
00:08:092 - finish as you've done before
00:12:774 - ^
00:17:457 - ^
...投降
昨晚mod途中地震沒mod完 ;A;
EDIT: 嗯 忘記star.
thanks for modding~~
update~~~~
sorry no detailed reply for my fault >.<
generally, fixed a lot based on ur advices, including which for other diffs
Download: Megpoid GUMI - Justice Breaker (NatsumeRin) [Scorpiour].osu
update~~~~
sorry no detailed reply for my fault >.<
generally, fixed a lot based on ur advices, including which for other diffs
Download: Megpoid GUMI - Justice Breaker (NatsumeRin) [Scorpiour].osu
Topic Starter
winber1 wrote:
a little late.
just suggestions...:
Combo 2 and 3 seem to look really similar... or maybe it's just my skin. Consider making one darker? ehh it's the same to my previous wowaka maps... just assume it's fine.
Rin
00:04:579 (1) - seems a little off from 00:03:409 (1) -. just stack it perfectly under it? It also makes the curve 00:04:140 (4,5,6,1) - more neat and smooth. i changed the place a little bit, but stack is not a good idea imo
00:07:506 (4) - If i'm not mistaken the new combo should be here, and not at 00:07:652 (1). If you listen at 25%, you should hear that the guitar plays a descending melody at 00:07:067 (1,2,3), and then the guitar starts a new melody at a higher pitch note at 00:07:506 (4) - ahh i get your point, you're right! remapped this part!
00:12:189 (4) - ^ ^
00:16:872 (4) - ^ (and etc... It should be obvious at which parts I'm pointing to, so I'm not going to mention it anymore.) ^ totally got them.
00:59:750 - aww no stream is mapped at all
01:12:043 (3) - i have a sudden urge to end this slider at 01:12:262 (the blue tick), but idk why. It just feels so right to me ._. like http://puu.sh/ioen or something seems fun.
01:26:558 (2,3) - small nazi, but move both these notes down a bit so that combo 1, 2, and 3 are equally spaced? ok.
01:38:137 (1) - a slider works better here imo (that ends at 01:38:769 - ?) rather than a note. just my opinion tho. I'm not all that sure where to put it tho lol. ehh, in fact it happens to me too.. so no change.
01:40:663 (1) - ^ ^
02:09:298 (1) - same as first suggestion. done.
wmfchris wrote:
是誰叫我求個正義 粉碎泡泡
[General]
imo everydiff need 500~1000 audio lead-in ._. Considering you've already put 1500 for [Easy], 1500 for all diff would be fine. i don't know why it happens seriously... changed to all 1000.
You start the break for [Rin] at 01:45:716 - , so I prefer you do the same thing for [Easy] and [Normal] as both break starts before 01:45. changed.
[Rin]
00:22:433 - just a little thought here: try to make it gradually louder? nice idea.
00:47:165 (3,4) - just a bit confusing here as this is the 1/2 spacing throughout the diff and it's not yet in kiai time 0.0 not a much thing imo, the slider is obviously 3/4 anyway...
01:26:769 (3) - [Nazi] Slider shape adjustment (symmetrical along the y-axis) ok328,312,86769,2,0,B|300:348|256:356|204:348|172:288,1,160,2|002:27:152 - same as 0:22 did.
03:27:664 - duplicated timeline 0.0 fixed.
[Normal]
00:45:409 (1) - remove whistle here? no.
[Taiko]
00:08:092 - finish as you've done before personally i agree with you and added...
00:12:774 - ^ ^
00:17:457 - ^ ^
...投降
昨晚mod途中地震沒mod完 ;A; 地震dbl
EDIT: 嗯 忘記star.
after rechecking and asking some others I think it's fine enough to do this one...
bubbled!
bubbled!
Played through each difficulty.
Nothing seemed out of the ordinary.
Ranked.
Nothing seemed out of the ordinary.
Ranked.
Hurray it got ranked. Congrats Rin Rin 
yap
wa!!Rank了 恭喜了!!
好吧= =努力做好偽善正義
Congratz
Congratz
恭喜 :3
Congratz! >3<
grats!
Omedeto Rin sama ><
You're Justice Breaker!
Congratz!!~~
Rin chan omedeto!!!!!!!!
Unranked, no...just no
Rin
01:25:506 (1) - Burai slider, MUST be changed
02:05:927 (1) - Burai slider, MUST be changed
01:16:067 (6,1,2,3) - the slider ends on (1,3) need moving away from the slider more, they look too much like burai sliders as they are
03:18:518 (1,2,3) - same
these things MUST be fixed, and should never of been ranked
Rin
01:25:506 (1) - Burai slider, MUST be changed
02:05:927 (1) - Burai slider, MUST be changed
01:16:067 (6,1,2,3) - the slider ends on (1,3) need moving away from the slider more, they look too much like burai sliders as they are
03:18:518 (1,2,3) - same
these things MUST be fixed, and should never of been ranked
Everything jeri said but instead of the "no just no" I will say this.
Your map in its current state it is breaking one of the oldest and well know rules. Slider paths should not overlap into themselves no matter how easy it is to read. Even if you don't have to move the mouse to play it. This is mostly a cosmetic rule but it also has to do with how a map is read/played. Of course most of you might be able to read this, but it doesn't change the fact that the slider in question is bad and there are a ton of better things you could do with it.
Your map in its current state it is breaking one of the oldest and well know rules. Slider paths should not overlap into themselves no matter how easy it is to read. Even if you don't have to move the mouse to play it. This is mostly a cosmetic rule but it also has to do with how a map is read/played. Of course most of you might be able to read this, but it doesn't change the fact that the slider in question is bad and there are a ton of better things you could do with it.
;_; I had such a good record on this...
lol to be another freestyle?
.________.
Topic Starter
1.
2.
3.
So I think the better way is throw that odd rule into garbage and totally change to this to a case-to-case thing as it's very easy to be so. If the only thing you can think about is "no just no" but not something could really benefits players, i don't think it's going good. Or at least, make [Insane] diffs an exception as Insane players could easily recognize them (as we have another similar rules there), and this map could still be in handle, right?
A little off-topic but: This map is called: Justice Breaker.
Of course most of you might be able to read thisThis means, even you could admit, it's readable and playable. And also, i think it's easy for BAT/MAT to judge if a slider is readable/playable.
2.
This is mostly a cosmetic rule.This means, even you could admit, it's not that useful, if a rule is there only because it's a rule, is it a bit odd? Then why should we have it there? Plz, we have ranking rules/guidelines to ensure players can enjoy playable maps, if one has nothing to do with them or even prevent some fun things happen, we should totally forbidden it.
3.
There are a ton of better things you could do with itNot really. (1) The sliders need to be long for obvious reason. (2) The sliders need to be creative to fit the rhythm. (3) The sliders need to be readable and playable.
So I think the better way is throw that odd rule into garbage and totally change to this to a case-to-case thing as it's very easy to be so. If the only thing you can think about is "no just no" but not something could really benefits players, i don't think it's going good. Or at least, make [Insane] diffs an exception as Insane players could easily recognize them (as we have another similar rules there), and this map could still be in handle, right?
A little off-topic but: This map is called: Justice Breaker.
your not going to turn this in to a "is this right?" post. It is not allowed so you must fix it. it is really as simple as that.
These are rules without sense men, the sliders seems very good and are completely readable, you are just crying for nothing.ztrot wrote:
your not going to turn this in to a "is this right?" post. It is not allowed so you must fix it. it is really as simple as that.
Topic Starter
Man, i hope you could think a bit before posting, what you said is better than "no just no" but not that much. Why we need to keep a rule there just because it's a rule and sadly, many fun things can't exist because of this?
If there's a rule saying: you need to change your avatar to NatsumeRin before getting a map ranked, you of course won't follow it, because it's benefits nothing to the players. But well, why should another rule even worse could happen?
I hope this thing could be a chance for use to fix some odd things in the rules and let future things get better.
If there's a rule saying: you need to change your avatar to NatsumeRin before getting a map ranked, you of course won't follow it, because it's benefits nothing to the players. But well, why should another rule even worse could happen?
I hope this thing could be a chance for use to fix some odd things in the rules and let future things get better.
Yes. I'm sick of senseless rules.NatsumeRin wrote:
I hope this thing could be a chance for use to fix some odd things in the rules and let future things get better.
02:05:927 (1) - I'd like to hear your specific thoughts over why you made this loop over itself very sharply when the music itself is simply a fading riff.
This will not become a 10 page fight locked if you want to make changes or talk about this contact Jericho or myself in-game.
unlocked now that rin has agreed to fix the unrankable stuff in this map
Topic Starter
结果NTR又出现了
呵呵。
呵呵。
o((⊙﹏⊙))o. [抖].....
呵呵.....好恐怖←_←....
呵呵.....好恐怖←_←....