Alace wrote:

I think offset -15ms better

Shana Aisaka wrote:

Hi ~ I just wanna help your map ~

[General]
Your Mp3 is too big. Please change it to 192kbps or 128kbps. :3
I think your normal must have 3 star??
I love this song~

[~Tomodachi~]
Overall Difficult - 1

[~Daisuki~]
Approach Rate + 1
Overall Difficult + 1
00:32:906(1) = this part doesn't look good. change it to something?
01:53:031(4) = ^ http://puu.sh/gnSZ
04:09:878(5) = object isn't snapped yet.

If you want a smaller mp3 here is it. http://puu.sh/gnYd

PS/ if you want Normal or Easy Diff I can help you make it . >w<" just tell me.

kjwkjw wrote:

Hi, I hope this helps! ^.^

[~Tomodachi~]
01:13:531 (1) - no new combo here >>> ok
01:14:031 (2) - new combo? >>> ok
02:22:031 (6) - I think it'd be alright for you to remove this note and start the spinner here. (Or maybe extend the spinner so it starts on 02:22:281?) >>> ok
02:41:531, 02:41:781 (3) - remove finish hitsounds. >>> nope

[~Daisuki~]
Offset - 31 >>> nope (since my offset is a only wrong in ~Tomodachi~ map because i just changed mp3 yesterday.)
00:52:406 (7,8) - space these slightly away from the slider? >>> ok
01:06:131 (1) - finish hitsound here. >>> ok
02:08:031 (4) - I'm not sure why there's a whistle sound here x3 >>> ok

Good luck!

Shana Aisaka wrote:

why the file is still big..

mp3

• [General]

1. There's a little difference with the kiai's of the two diffs. Please make it consistent as much as possible.
2. The approach circle weird though there are maps using this kind of approach circle. meh
3. The sliderfollowcircle that you're using smaller compared to default. Yes the resolutions are identical, but the circle is far smaller.
4. I don't really know how to mod SB's, but your lyrics appear to a bit late to show up. If you have time to adjust these things, please do.
5. Add "Millhiore Firianno Biscotti" to the tags? She's the character who's singing of course voiced by Horie Yui.
   
   [~Tomodachi~]
6. Why are you using 1/8 BSD here? Well it won't affect the diff though, but use at least 1/4. Also this is just a normal diff.
7. 01:52:343 (2) - The "finish" here sounds really awkward. Remove it.
   
   [~Daisuki~]
8. 00:13:331 (4,5) - Remove "whistle".
9. 00:34:081 (10) - Add NC. If you did, remove NC on the following hitcircle.
10. 00:54:081 (5) - Add SC1 "finish".

Kirino Kousaka wrote:

Chao!~ Here's my mod!~ Sorry for some delay ._. (In-game PM request)

• [General]

1. There's a little difference with the kiai's of the two diffs. Please make it consistent as much as possible.
2. The approach circle weird though there are maps using this kind of approach circle. meh
3. The sliderfollowcircle that you're using smaller compared to default. Yes the resolutions are identical, but the circle is far smaller.
4. I don't really know how to mod SB's, but your lyrics appear to a bit late to show up. If you have time to adjust these things, please do.
5. Add "Millhiore Firianno Biscotti" to the tags? She's the character who's singing of course voiced by Horie Yui.
   
   [~Tomodachi~]
6. Why are you using 1/8 BSD here? Well it won't affect the diff though, but use at least 1/4. Also this is just a normal diff.
7. 01:52:343 (2) - The "finish" here sounds really awkward. Remove it.
   
   [~Daisuki~]
8. 00:13:331 (4,5) - Remove "whistle".
9. 00:34:081 (10) - Add NC. If you did, remove NC on the following hitcircle.
10. 00:54:081 (5) - Add SC1 "finish".

That's all~ Very nice map Yuki-kun~ >w<
I like the song too, it's so relaxing :3
Staaaar!~ >w<

Yoru-SAN wrote:

Hi! from my mod queue~

General:

Use Grid Level 4. Snap Divisor 1/8 ? hm..

~Tomodachi~:

SPOILER

Approach Rate to 4.

04:48:051 - not sure, this kiai time really needed?

~Daisuki~:

SPOILER

00:25:706 - add note.

00:36:581 (1) - old combo.

00:48:956 - add note?

Try this http://puu.sh/JWhU ( 01:12:956 - add note , 01:13:081 (4) - move on 2 ticks right.)

01:22:281 - the break here is 15050 ms long, which is longer than the recommended 15000 ms, so.. please fix this.

01:53:081 (4) - new combo.
02:09:081 (8) - ^

02:11:331 (6,7,8,9) - follow the Distance Snap, please.

02:58:331 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - as for me, need change, but you can leave it.

03:51:831 (8) - new combo?

04:20:216 (1) - this spinner is 7750 ms long, which is longer than 7500 ms. you must change this or fix,whatever.

04:48:051 - not sure, this kiai time really needed?

Good Luck!

344,80,12581,5,0
416,144,13081,1,2
416,240,13581,1,0
344,304,14081,1,4
248,320,14581,6,0,B|248:264|192:248,1,90,0|2
104,216,15581,2,0,B|56:216|56:208,2,45,0|0|2

384,136,51581,2,0,B|392:248|272:264,2,180

344,184,21831,1,0
280,112,22081,1,0
344,184,22331,1,0
392,104,22581,1,0

Chewin wrote:

Hi Yuki-kun, mod request from my modding queue.

[General]
You may want to include an epilepsy warning since there are some flashes in your SB.
I don't like the approach circle you used here s:

[~Tomodachi~]
00:06:081 (3) - Remove finish and use SC1 whistle here to keep consistency also because this finish sounds too loud for me
00:13:581 (3) - 1 grid left
00:12:581 (1,2,3,4,1) - I don't like how you placed these elements, it would be much better if you move them in this way to keep a symmetry: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/377760

344,80,12581,5,0
416,144,13081,1,2
416,240,13581,1,0
344,304,14081,1,4
248,320,14581,6,0,B|248:264|192:248,1,90,0|2
104,216,15581,2,0,B|56:216|56:208,2,45,0|0|2

00:16:581 (1) - Ugly slider. You could make it more curved in the center: http://puu.sh/Ktex
00:26:081 (5) - Add new combo and remove it from 00:26:581 (1), it flows better since you used a finish hitsound here and a SB effect
00:33:581 (4) - x:288 y:208 is better so you don't need to use distance snap between 00:33:581 (4,1)
00:44:081 (3) - Move to x:248 y:272 to create a better curve with 00:43:581 (2,4,5)
00:51:081 (2,3) - Bad blanket, use this code. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/377770

384,136,51581,2,0,B|392:248|272:264,2,180

00:56:581 (1) - Overlap with 00:54:581 (2)
01:06:081 (1) - Add finish
01:18:081 (2) - Really ugly slider. Fix it plz http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/377823
01:54:581 (5) - New combo and remove it from 01:55:081 (1)
04:48:051 / 04:48:119 Kiai Times Not On Downbeat.

[~Daisuki~]
00:21:831 (4,5,6,7) - Move them in this way: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/377834

344,184,21831,1,0
280,112,22081,1,0
344,184,22331,1,0
392,104,22581,1,0

00:28:581 (1,2,3,4,5) - Select them and move to x:88 y:192 for symmetry
00:29:331 (4) - 1 grid up for symmetry with 00:28:831 (2)
00:30:581 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Select them and move to x:432 y:191 to overlap the 00:30:581 (1,2,3) with 00:29:581 (5)
04:48:051 / 04:48:119 Kiai Times Not On Downbeat.

That's all, I think you need more work on them <w<
Good luck ;3

The mapset must have a well-designed spread of difficulties, containing at least an Easy or a Normal difficulty (based on how the map feels): this is so that players of all levels of experience are able to enjoy maps of the songs they love. It's really hard to define how a specific spread could work in a specific song beforehand, but here's a list of things to consider: the difficulties in the mapset must be in a consecutive order and/or with a reasonable gap between them; there should be at least one difficulty around ~2.5/3 star difficulty level; if your mapset has two difficulties, one of them cannot be insane (this basically means that it's highly recommended to have 3 difficulties unless the song itself doesn't allow much variety); if your mapset has three difficulties, one of them should be about ~2.5/3 star difficulty level, and the second should not be Insane; if your map has four or more difficulties, at least two should be something other than Insane. The difficulty level of Taiko-specific difficulties does not follow this."

Natsu wrote:

General

Inconsistency in EpilepsyWarning:
- [~Daisuki~] : 1
- [~Tomodachi~] :

Inconsistency in Tags:
- [~Daisuki~] : Shana Aisaka
- [~Tomodachi~] : Horie Yui Dog Days


- [~Daisuki~]
04:47:983 slider should finish here