Tianshi-Vegetable Juice (Po Pi Po)

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BeatofIke
Normal modding request from my modding queue. :|

[General]
-I don't understand your difficulty names. For your first map, you should start simple imo.
-Your Easy, Normal, and Hard difficulties have the same slider velocity. Interesting.
-If you want your sliders to be identical. Why not Copy/Paste? Make use of the Edit menu, it helps.
-To make your notes are readable, I recommend that you know about polarity (as a a start). Here's the link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=53PkFLrK8Ws

[Fuwafuwa]
-It's rare to see circle size 4 on easy difficulty. Maybe reduce circle size to 3? It's up to you though.

[Maroyaka]
-00:23:288 (4) - Insert break time after this slider.

[Shigure juice]
... :o

[Vegetable]
... :o

Map needs work overall, but it's getting closer to potential. I might have to recheck this map for an In-Depth modding.
Topic Starter
AngelEyE

BeatofIke wrote:

Normal modding request from my modding queue. :|

[General]
-I don't understand your difficulty names. For your first map, you should start simple imo. OK all changed to "E N H I"
-Your Easy, Normal, and Hard difficulties have the same slider velocity. Interesting. @@but hard diff has many many 1.5X slider veocity multiplier then should i still change the slider veocity? T_T
-If you want your sliders to be identical. Why not Copy/Paste? Make use of the Edit menu, it helps. I will use it more:D
-To make your notes are readable, I recommend that you know about polarity (as a a start). Here's the link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=53PkFLrK8Ws thank u:D i learned something from this vedio i will do more changes in these days

[Fuwafuwa]
-It's rare to see circle size 4 on easy difficulty. Maybe reduce circle size to 3? It's up to you though. OK fixed![Maroyaka]
-00:23:288 (4) - Insert break time after this slider. i think maybe you want me to insert break time in shigure's gd, if its like that,i have fixed!

[Shigure juice]
... :oT.T

[Vegetable]
... :oT.T

Map needs work overall, but it's getting closer to potential. I might have to recheck this map for an In-Depth modding. thank you for your helpful recormands and surpport:)
thank you for your nice modding and star in advance!:) i may change a lot in first 3 diffs these days
BeatofIke
Nah, you don't have to change the slider velocity.
...and don't worry, I will recheck your map eventually. That includes hard and insane difficulties.
Topic Starter
AngelEyE

BeatofIke wrote:

Nah, you don't have to change the slider velocity.
...and don't worry, I will recheck your map eventually. That includes hard and insane difficulties.
OK, i see,thank you!
ertyukjh010
2.29 Star ^^ 希望滿意

明天找您試玩(炸

記得別忘記在Tags裡填上我的ID QAQ




對囉,Kiai建議在 01:37:788 或者 01:38:888 結束,我也跟您就好了

總之一定要有一個結束Kiai的時間,不能無限延長XD




還有還有,我總是覺得您的BG失真有點嚴重(就是有點模糊,應該是您有將那張圖放大對吧??)

我找了原圖幫您切了張1024*768的(依足您的比例:3),如果您覺得需要就換這張和Full Submit一次吧
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Download: Tianshi - Vegetable Juice (Po Pi Po) (AngelEyE) [ERT's Easy].osu
Topic Starter
AngelEyE

ertyukjh010 wrote:

2.29 Star ^^ 希望滿意

明天找您試玩(炸

記得別忘記在Tags裡填上我的ID QAQ




對囉,Kiai建議在 01:37:788 或者 01:38:888 結束,我也跟您就好了

總之一定要有一個結束Kiai的時間,不能無限延長XD




還有還有,我總是覺得您的BG失真有點嚴重(就是有點模糊,應該是您有將那張圖放大對吧??)

我找了原圖幫您切了張1024*768的(依足您的比例:3),如果您覺得需要就換這張和Full Submit一次吧
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[attachment=0:762d9]BG.jpg[/attachment:762d9]
先用手機回複了 嗯乃做的肯定好 bg我會換的啦 辛苦咯
Flask
這邊有一些小小的建議 \w/

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ERT's Easy
[01:11:288]Slider改短一點 ? 我覺得太長的話要接下一個silder新手打不起來


Hard
[00:24:088]這邊的Break改成Spinner 比較有Hard的Fu

[00:56:588]
把下面四個滑條都移成這樣 ( 比較有規律~A~ )

[01:16:888]Spinner長一點

[01:29:688]Spinner一樣長點 ( 跟上面一樣 w )

Insane
[00:32:088]四個滑條簡直鬼蓄 .___. 距離近一點

[00:36:488]這個note可不可以+Finish 不要只有Clap

[00:38:688]這幾個note太混亂了 可以改成這樣嗎owo >

[01:02:088]一樣+Finish

[01:07:288] 神Mapper你好 OAO
(1)跟(3)對調位置

[01:26:888]四個滑條一樣鬼蓄 ... (2)跟(3)距離近點

[01:31:288]不用我說了吧 ... 距離近點

[01:33:888](6)(7)移出來 躲在裡面就不像繞冤圈了 owo


[01:36:088](1)~(8)改成這樣 >


天啊 ... Insane太鬼蓄了 !!!!

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以上是一點建議 對不起都已經做好了才來Mod >A< !
Insane有如跳圖
ertyukjh010

ay6859 wrote:

ERT's Easy
[01:11:288]Slider改短一點 ? 我覺得太長的話要接下一個silder新手打不起來
喔這個沒關係,因為之前我已經換做轉盤了:P 只是還在等待上傳~=w=
Topic Starter
AngelEyE

ay6859 wrote:

這邊有一些小小的建議 \w/ 喔喔 ww
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ERT's Easy
[01:11:288]Slider改短一點 ? 我覺得太長的話要接下一個silder新手打不起來 這個ert已經換成了轉盤沒有問題ww

Hard
[00:24:088]這邊的Break改成Spinner 比較有Hard的Fu 嗯 好主意 其實這裡我也猶豫了很久是要break還是spinner 您是第一个吐槽这里的[00:56:588]
把下面四個滑條都移成這樣 ( 比較有規律~A~ ) fixed
[01:16:888]Spinner長一點 fixed
[01:29:688]Spinner一樣長點 ( 跟上面一樣 w ) fixed


Insane
[00:32:088]四個滑條簡直鬼蓄 .___. 距離近一點 都向中間移動了5格 距離小了很多了


[00:36:488]這個note可不可以+Finish 不要只有Clap fixed

[00:38:688]這幾個note太混亂了 可以改成這樣嗎owo fixed
>

[01:02:088]一樣+Finish fixed


[01:07:288] 神Mapper你好 OAO - =

(1)跟(3)對調位置 fixed

[01:26:888]四個滑條一樣鬼蓄 ... (2)跟(3)距離近點 fixed

[01:31:288]不用我說了吧 ... 距離近點 fixed

[01:33:888](6)(7)移出來 躲在裡面就不像繞冤圈了 owo fixed


[01:36:088](1)~(8)改成這樣 > fixed


天啊 ... Insane太鬼蓄了 !!!! T.T
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以上是一點建議 對不起都已經做好了才來Mod >A< ! 其實我的圖還早的很呢
Insane有如跳圖
謝謝您精彩的modding 和非常有用的建議www
Flask

ertyukjh010 wrote:

ay6859 wrote:

ERT's Easy
[01:11:288]Slider改短一點 ? 我覺得太長的話要接下一個silder新手打不起來
喔這個沒關係,因為之前我已經換做轉盤了:P 只是還在等待上傳~=w=
原來 :D !! 對不起小的不知道然後就 ... 亂Mod了 =w=
Flask

AngelEyE wrote:

ay6859 wrote:

這邊有一些小小的建議 \w/ 喔喔 ww
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ERT's Easy
[01:11:288]Slider改短一點 ? 我覺得太長的話要接下一個silder新手打不起來 這個ert已經換成了轉盤沒有問題ww

Hard
[00:24:088]這邊的Break改成Spinner 比較有Hard的Fu 嗯 好主意 其實這裡我也猶豫了很久是要break還是spinner 您是第一个吐槽这里的[00:56:588]
把下面四個滑條都移成這樣 ( 比較有規律~A~ ) fixed
[01:16:888]Spinner長一點 fixed
[01:29:688]Spinner一樣長點 ( 跟上面一樣 w ) fixed


Insane
[00:32:088]四個滑條簡直鬼蓄 .___. 距離近一點 都向中間移動了5格 距離小了很多了


[00:36:488]這個note可不可以+Finish 不要只有Clap fixed

[00:38:688]這幾個note太混亂了 可以改成這樣嗎owo fixed
>

[01:02:088]一樣+Finish fixed


[01:07:288] 神Mapper你好 OAO - =

(1)跟(3)對調位置 fixed

[01:26:888]四個滑條一樣鬼蓄 ... (2)跟(3)距離近點 fixed

[01:31:288]不用我說了吧 ... 距離近點 fixed

[01:33:888](6)(7)移出來 躲在裡面就不像繞冤圈了 owo fixed


[01:36:088](1)~(8)改成這樣 > fixed


天啊 ... Insane太鬼蓄了 !!!! T.T
---------

以上是一點建議 對不起都已經做好了才來Mod >A< ! 其實我的圖還早的很呢
Insane有如跳圖
謝謝您精彩的modding 和非常有用的建議www
不客氣 :D 希望趕快Ranked xD
DarknessAngel

ay6859 wrote:

Insane鬼觸,有如跳圖
恕我吐槽...我覺得你的見識有點淺呢lol
DarknessAngel
我...做出來啦~ ! \:D/
希望你喜歡 ~

Download: Tianshi - Vegetable Juice (Po Pi Po) (AngelEyE) [D.N.Angel's Hard].osu
ertyukjh010
Topic Starter
AngelEyE

DarknessAngel wrote:

我...做出來啦~ ! \:D/
希望你喜歡 ~
哇 做的真好 我很喜歡 謝謝


ertyukjh010 wrote:

我也來更改了一點東西
嗯 我這就換好啦www
Flask

DarknessAngel wrote:

ay6859 wrote:

Insane鬼觸,有如跳圖
恕我吐槽...我覺得你的見識有點淺呢lol
lol你才知道嗎 xd

我還是覺得滿跳的
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
Hi, from my queue


Easy

  1. 还好吧


Normal

  1. 00:58:488 (5) - 加个reverse
  2. 01:00:888 (4) - whistle


Hard

  1. 00:32:088 (4) - 没叠好


D.N.Angel's Hard

  1. 01:32:088 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这么大的四方眺@_@
  2. 感觉还好吧


Insane

  1. 00:26:888 (5) - 这个往前1/4拍
  2. 00:26:988 (6) - 这个往后1/4拍
  3. 00:55:388 (6,9) - spacing
  4. 01:28:088 (1) - 第二个点拉到(186,336)
  5. 01:32:888 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot277.jpg 这样吧
  6. 01:36:088 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot279-0.jpg
  7. sliders还可以拉得好一点


that's all

Good luck~
Topic Starter
AngelEyE

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

Hi, from my queuehi thank u for modding
Easy

  1. 还好吧 :D


Normal

  1. 00:58:488 (5) - 加个reverse done
  2. 01:00:888 (4) - whistle done


Hard

  1. 00:32:088 (4) - 没叠好 fixed


D.N.Angel's Hard

  1. 01:32:088 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这么大的四方眺@_@ 很大嘛QAQ
  2. 感觉还好吧:D


Insane

  1. 00:26:888 (5) - 这个往前1/4拍 关于这里我把节奏改成2 2 1了
  2. 00:26:988 (6) - 这个往后1/4拍 同上
  3. 00:55:388 (6,9) - spacing 先空出来吧 不知道会不会被吐槽orz
  4. 01:28:088 (1) - 第二个点拉到(186,336) fixed 可是为什么是这个点 要把girp snap 关了 才拉到的呢
  5. 01:32:888 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot277.jpg 这样吧 fixed
  6. 01:36:088 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot279-0.jpg fixed
  7. sliders还可以拉得好一点 嗯,我会再调整滑条的


that's all

Good luck~
谢谢您的 modding
SkyDevil
Po pipo pipo po pi po~~

ERT's Easy
00:52:888 Don't Overlap This slider with last slider :3
00:54:488 don't overlap this with next slider XD
01:38:888 hmm,, Maybe Finish? Although you dont hear anything it will give some changes in taiko

Shigure's Normal
00:25:699 Place at least something in this part, or else it would be empty
00:55:288 Slider 1 grid down >:U

i need to go now >w< I will finish this later

Hard
01:38:488 - Place somewhere else instead of stacking :3

D.N.Angel's Hard
00:29:688 - This part looks so bad D: Place circle 5 6 7 8 somewhere else D:
00:48:888 - ^

Insane
00:21:088 - Place this circle somewhere else :D
00:31:800 - ^
00:41:488 - Don't stack a slider under a triplet >w< Place slider somewhere else
01:23:488 - New combo here instead at the last circle?
01:25:288 - It looks pretty bad D:
01:34:488 - Put this slider farther away from the last circle :3

Anyway star for vegetable juice which i will never drink because it actually sounds kinda gross T.T
Topic Starter
AngelEyE

SkyDevil wrote:

Po pipo pipo po pi po~~

ERT's Easy
00:52:888 Don't Overlap This slider with last slider :3
00:54:488 don't overlap this with next slider XD
01:38:888 hmm,, Maybe Finish? Although you dont hear anything it will give some changes in taiko

Shigure's Normal
00:25:699 Place at least something in this part, or else it would be empty
00:55:288 Slider 1 grid down >:U

i need to go now >w< I will finish this later
OK take your time its not emergency:D
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