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_Kiva
大家加油。
Topic Starter
Megurine Luka

_Kiva wrote:

大家加油。
之前的删掉重新下一下检查一下有什么要改的
loveFantasy
ok.

[General]
  1. spinner skin套件缺一個approach circle (spinner-approachcircle.png)
  2. tags加一下yuca和y_u_c_a
[Easy]
  1. need AR+1
  2. 00:31:695 (2,3) - 節奏上結合成一條1.5拍的repeat slider合音樂些, 前兩個點打finish最後一個點打whistle
  3. 00:54:469 (5) - 值得unstack+new combo..其實我想diff這麼多最簡單的難度乾脆都別用stack了
  4. 01:43:520 (6) - new combo吧
  5. 02:29:068 (4) - 試試repeat一次並把轉盤起點挪後到02:30:819
  6. 03:02:352 (6) - new combo
  7. 03:05:856 (1) - 似乎值個finish
  8. 03:18:119 (4,5) - 交換clap
[Normal]
  1. 00:56:440 (5,6) - 這可能unstack比較好打
  2. 01:30:600 (2) - 這個有點違合感, 後面的高白線該有東西, 因此改用1/2 repeat slider並且在高白線加個圈?
  3. 01:39:141 (5) - (Normal鬼畜疊XD)
  4. 02:22:060 (1,2,3) - 不太建議不同時間間距疊一起, 這整段其實不用那麼被DS限制, 因為節奏很鬆, 讓人看的懂就行
  5. 02:30:600 (1) - 同Easy..移到高白線
  6. 02:47:900 (8) - 建議unstack
  7. 03:15:053 (5,6) - 試試看三連finish, 不想的話至少都clap(6)一下
[Deepsea]
  1. 00:43:958 (2) - 我覺得這能new combo
  2. 00:54:031 (1) - 這突然換音效組感覺像硬插的, 用相同的音效組過去就好?
  3. 01:01:461 (T) - 雙綠線..其實這兩條綠線都不需要
  4. 01:29:287 (1) - 維持whistle pattern?
  5. 01:30:053 (4) - 挺怪的, 音效移白線吧
  6. 02:29:944 (1) - 感覺不太sync音樂..頭map到vocal完?
[Bless]
  1. 02:44:396 (5) - 後面的new combo移來這
  2. 02:58:958 (3) - how about del
[Pray]
  1. 00:37:279 (2,3,4) - 感覺clap串後這兩個白線顯得太弱了
  2. 00:48:119 (2) - add whistle?
  3. 00:52:498 (2) - ^
  4. 01:01:476 (11) - how about a finish
  5. 02:11:549 (5) - ^
  6. 02:24:469 (T) - 刪這條和後面那條綠線
  7. 02:50:748 (1) - unsnapped
Axey
moe 2个萌妹子的声音分不出来啊=w=
Pokie
SPOILER
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連著LKs的部份一併改了 不知道是怎麼安排的..應該是大哥統一改還是讓mapper自己決定T.T?
Topic Starter
Megurine Luka
@Pokie:自己决定=_=

mapper找不到的问题不大的我再手动
Nymph
酱油在此
General:
好像没

Easy:
Hitsound
03:26:878 (1) - 建议后面结尾也静音?

Normal:
Hitsound
03:26:878 (1) - 也同easy囧只有我觉得静音好么

迪东:
Beatmap design/suggestion
00:13:082 (X) - vocal在这开始的吧 三连打下这比较好 后面直接1个note过去了
00:26:440 (3) - 变速slider了要加nc不
00:32:571 (8) - 这也挺突然的变速(后面也建议减速都NC 不好认啊
01:38:046 (8) - 哎去这个note的approach circle跟后面紫色的小鱼SB颜色有点冲突不好认啊。。。

Hitsound
开头音量100好吵好吵
03:30:382 (17) - 。。那就是静音slider结尾?

Bless:
Beatmap design/suggestion
00:16:805 (3) - 碰血条了 虽然问题不大不过我还是蛋疼nazi下
01:56:768 (3) - 这spacing不太够让我判断是在蓝线上的 太近了
Hitsound
00:15:929 (1) - 这开始不大点音量么

Prey:
Issue
01:50:090 (X) - 2个timing线重叠了 切1条
没了

嗯酱油撤退 迪东fight!
Twice_old
0口0 哇!
Beren
你好/

[Easy]
00:40:454 (1) - S2 finish
01:29:506 (1) - ^
01:01:476 (4) - 删除clap
02:30:600 (1) - 从02:30:600开始?

[Deepsea]
00:04:761 (X) - 加note
00:04:980 (6) - 删除
03:30:382 (17) - 静音?

[Bless]
01:11:878 (2) - 删掉或者移到01:11:659
01:18:776 (1) - 删除NC
01:56:768 (3) - 移到01:56:878

[Pray]
01:22:498 (1) - 结束在01:22:936
Vinolyte
Hi from our queue~

Really nice song! Star!
Because I really liked the song I (tried to) modded all the diffs :)

General:
Lol'd at the swimming fishies XD
Couldn't really find anything.

Easy:
¤ 01:52:279 (4) I dont find the clap at the end really fitting, personally I find it better without clap
¤ 01:53:155 (x) you could place a beat here

Normal:
¤ 02:59:177 (2) You might want to fix the spacing.

Deepsea:
¤ Circle size +1 , personally, I like it better that way.
¤ There are quiet a few spacing problems, if they were all ment that way, you might consider setting a different Distance Snap then x0.6. and use 0.6 only for the normal notes
To be honest, it doesn't really matter I guess, but I wanted to at least point a few things out, otherwise my mod would be just worthless, and kinda don't like that :)
¤ 00:59:725 (1-17) Suggestion: you might want to add a new combo in this stream, if you want all the colors, put one at circle 6-12-17 and otherwise at circle 9

Bless:
¤ 01:37:279 (4) if this note was ment to be this way, ignore this, otherwise you should make a line of these 3 notes.

Pray:
¤ 02:07:717 (4) I find myself liking this more without the clap here.

Well this was the best I could do. It's not much but better then nothing I guess :)
Really nice map! Already said it, but I'll star it :) Hope it gets ranked soon

Cheers 8-)
Topic Starter
Megurine Luka
Thanks all. > <
lovhin456
Hello! Everyone has work quite a lot and also eveless & qinche wow you two sing so well ~

General:
- Uh, you have 3 Insanes which is unrankable and too be honest they do seem like Insanes. Also the gap between Normal and Deepsea seems to be quite large.

Easy:
- 00:47:024 (4,5) >> Consider unstacking, stacks might be hard for novice players so that's why
- 02:37:827 (1,2,3) >> ^ but since these are more spaced in the timeline I guess it is a little easier
- 02:43:958 >> Add clap ?
- 02:48:388 >> New combo
- 03:22:936 >> End the slider here with a clap at the end ?

Normal:
- 00:24:688 >> New combo ?
- 00:35:199 >> ^
- 00:55:783 >> ^
- 01:45:710 >> ^
- 01:55:783 >> ^
- 02:32:571 >> Add whistle ?
- 02:46:586 >> New combo ?

Deepsea:
- 00:04:980 >> Move this note to 00:04:761
- 00:21:184 (1,2,3,4,5) >> Uh, I don't think that large jumps fit here, maybe reduce the space between each ?
- 00:48:338 >> New combo ?
- 01:11:017 >> ^
- 01:15:929 >> ^
- 01:52:279 >> ^
- 02:26:878 >> ^
- 02:57:097 >> ^
- 03:30:491 >> Change to soft hitsound set, with normal hitsound set you can hear a little pop when the slider ends
- Good but I'm a little worried about all the speed changes during the diff

Bless:
- 00:02:571 >> Add a note ?
- 01:51:622 >> Remove new combo ?
- 02:47:462 >> New combo

Pray:
- 00:50:965 >> Add finish ?
- 01:24:688 >> New combo ?
- 01:32:571 >> New combo for a nice effect ?

* Overall, everything is good!
Topic Starter
Megurine Luka

lovhin456 wrote:

Hello! Everyone has work quite a lot and also eveless & qinche wow you two sing so well ~

General:
- Uh, you have 3 Insanes which is unrankable and too be honest they do seem like Insanes. Also the gap between Normal and Deepsea seems to be quite large.

Easy:
- 00:47:024 (4,5) >> Consider unstacking, stacks might be hard for novice players so that's why fixed
- 02:37:827 (1,2,3) >> ^ but since these are more spaced in the timeline I guess it is a little easier hmm. I choose to remain it :3
- 02:43:958 >> Add clap ? genius!
- 02:48:388 >> New combo fixed
- 03:22:936 >> End the slider here with a clap at the end ? k.

Normal: All fixed
- 00:24:688 >> New combo ?
- 00:35:199 >> ^
- 00:55:783 >> ^
- 01:45:710 >> ^
- 01:55:783 >> ^
- 02:32:571 >> Add whistle ?
- 02:46:586 >> New combo ?

Deepsea:
- 00:04:980 >> Move this note to 00:04:761
- 00:21:184 (1,2,3,4,5) >> Uh, I don't think that large jumps fit here, maybe reduce the space between each ?
- 00:48:338 >> New combo ?
- 01:11:017 >> ^
- 01:15:929 >> ^
- 01:52:279 >> ^
- 02:26:878 >> ^
- 02:57:097 >> ^
- 03:30:491 >> Change to soft hitsound set, with normal hitsound set you can hear a little pop when the slider ends
- Good but I'm a little worried about all the speed changes during the diff

Bless:
- 00:02:571 >> Add a note ? k
- 01:51:622 >> Remove new combo ? k
- 02:47:462 >> New combo k.

Pray:
- 00:50:965 >> Add finish ? k
- 01:24:688 >> New combo ? k
- 01:32:571 >> New combo for a nice effect ? k

* Overall, everything is good!

thanks >w<
GiNa
你好,你幾天前有來我的queue求過mod

我覺得這map已經很不錯了
我這渣modder只好丟顆星然後潛水了233
這歌moe
Topic Starter
Megurine Luka

GiNa wrote:

你好,你幾天前有來我的queue求過mod

我覺得這map已經很不錯了
我這渣modder只好丟顆星然後潛水了233
這歌moe
客气了>w<
YTYuyu
Alright let's see what I can find.

General:
Re-size the spinner BG. i saw a bit of black at the right side. i'm no SB expert so idk. up to you.

Easy:
00:15:929 (1) - add a finish at the beginning? sounds nice IMO
01:00:600 (2) - can you move it away from the stacked note at the previous combo because beginners won't expect this or are unable to find this note due to their lack of reaction.
01:11:987 (1) - same as 00:15:929
01:15:491 (1) - ^
02:02:790 (2,3) - hmm make this a curved slide since there's a 2nd point and move (3) to the point that (2,3) makes a blanket.
02:32:571 - add a green line here because the whistle is too loud IMO. 10% is good enough.
02:37:827 (1,2,3) - how about spacing these out? beginners might hit these notes too early or too late.
02:47:462 (4) - How about moving it so that'd (3,4) would look like a triangle? like this.

Normal:
00:13:301 (2) - this tricked me because i was expecting 1 repeat like (1). so make this repeat once and replace the end for a circle. players might get the idea that the 2 1/2 repeat sliders repeat the same. like now (1) is repeating once and (2) does the same thing.
00:15:929 (1) - add a finish at the beginning. same reason as easy.
01:08:484 (1) - ^
01:11:987 (2) - ^
01:54:031 (2) - extend this by 1 tick to follow vocals.
02:32:571 - same as easy.
02:48:338 (1,1) - for the 1st spinner 1 end it till 02:49:652 so that it'd follow "shi", and for the 2nd spinner: remove it and make a 1/1 slider so that it'd be easier for players.
03:22:498 (2) - hmm how about moving it here because this 1 is touching the score. i tried to move it down but it'll get in the way. this 1 looks nicer as it kind of arcs (1)

Deepsea:
if i see this right, some of the green lines are unsnapped. re-snap them unless you have a reason why it's unsnapped
00:04:761 - add a circle to follow vocals?
00:15:929 (4) - a NC here because the vocals start. (1,2,3) is following instrumental.
01:15:491 (5) - same as above but the stream is following instrumental.
01:57:316 (2) - do this instead as it follows vocals accurately.
02:29:944 (1) - add 3 circles at 02:30:163,02:30:381, and 02:30:600 and move the spinner to the big white tick and end it to where it originally ended.

Bless:
00:15:272 (4) - can you move this down because it's touching the Hp bar?
00:32:790 (3) - this would look better if this is stacked on the repeat arrow on (1)
00:35:199 (1) - same as above but on (5) at the previous combo.
lol i like wmfchris's part because the fish is moving across the screen. as if it's swimming in the sea.

Pray:
00:20:527(5) - same as 00:15:272 in bless.
00:54:031(1) - add a clap at the beginning to keep consistency.
same as bless but bakabaka's part.

this is the best i can do. GL :D
Topic Starter
Megurine Luka
Fixed some in easy :3 Thanks
lovhin456
Everything looks fine, I totally understand the fact that deepsea is unable to fix the diff right now and I think the mapset is ok as how it is now.
Bubbled
tutuhaha
lol
Topic Starter
Megurine Luka

lovhin456 wrote:

Everything looks fine, I totally understand the fact that deepsea is unable to fix the diff right now and I think the mapset is ok as how it is now.
Bubbled

Thanks!!!
Kagamine_Rin__old
怒顶大哥的图
每天膜拜大哥
力保大腿不失
不顶大哥
轮椅做穿
fanzhen0019
哇泡了
Snowy Dream
哟ww E姐+呆澈 好组合
Mitsuneko
My god,how I adore this map.
Couldn't find anything,looks fine to me.
Sallad4ever
First of all I want to say sorry that I'm late in modding this and I feel really2 bad, but I have to pop this bubble because of some technical problem that lovhin seems to miss

  1. On Pray diff there are 2 offset on it (and they are the same too) I know that they are very trivial but you have to fix it.
  2. There also a slight error on the SB (not really an error, maybe a bug/glitch?), on deepsea's diff the BG appear slightly after the credit SB. This happen because Deepsea diff ends a bit later than the others, hence it push the time the score screen appear to be later than the SB. It's very easy to fix this, just extend Black, 3Q, & circle SB to 03:35:637 the BG won't be visible
  3. Why no kiai in taiko?
  4. There are some issue in deepsea's diff that I might as well mention here (and maybe you can fix it too). First is the hidden repeat at 03:16:367 (1) to fix it maybe remove 1 repeat then add another circle. The second is the slider tick rate, because of the slider speed change I suggest to use 2 tick rate so the player won't get confused by the 0.5 speed slider
I understand the condition deepsea have right now, but maybe if you can pay him a visit and ask his confirmation for the change on his map while you're at it. If you can't fix them then it's ok. Call me again later then I'll re-bubble it again

In case that anyone want to curse me for popping the bubble, please send it to my inbox, DO NOT POST IT HERE. This thread is a tribute to deepsea so please keep it clean
Topic Starter
Megurine Luka

Sallad4ever wrote:

First of all I want to say sorry that I'm late in modding this and I feel really2 bad, but I have to pop this bubble because of some technical problem that lovhin seems to miss

  1. On Pray diff there are 2 offset on it (and they are the same too) I know that they are very trivial but you have to fix it. Fixed Thanks
  2. There also a slight error on the SB (not really an error, maybe a bug/glitch?), on deepsea's diff the BG appear slightly after the credit SB. This happen because Deepsea diff ends a bit later than the others, hence it push the time the score screen appear to be later than the SB. It's very easy to fix this, just extend Black, 3Q, & circle SB to 03:35:637 the BG won't be visible Fixed
  3. Why no kiai in taiko? Fixed
  4. There are some issue in deepsea's diff that I might as well mention here (and maybe you can fix it too). First is the hidden repeat at 03:16:367 (1) to fix it maybe remove 1 repeat then add another circle. The second is the slider tick rate, because of the slider speed change I suggest to use 2 tick rate so the player won't get confused by the 0.5 speed slider
hidden slider change. I would like to remain the current slidertick rate :3 Thanks!

I understand the condition deepsea have right now, but maybe if you can pay him a visit and ask his confirmation for the change on his map while you're at it. If you can't fix them then it's ok. Call me again later then I'll re-bubble it again

In case that anyone want to curse me for popping the bubble, please send it to my inbox, DO NOT POST IT HERE. This thread is a tribute to deepsea so please keep it clean
Sallad4ever
Sorry for the wait :3
Re-check & Re-Bubble!!!

Let's pray for deepsea's health
Topic Starter
Megurine Luka
:3 Thanks!!
Akiyama Mizuki
Go Rank :D
Shinkai Shoujo :D
Deepsea Shoujo :D
abalee
eveless & qinche - Deepsea is Girl
ganbare!
Ibuki Suika
first
tutuhaha
抢!
Anticloud
third!
Garven
Aaah, been busy, sorry. Congrats either way~
Topic Starter
Megurine Luka

Garven wrote:

Aaah, been busy, sorry. Congrats either way~
大丈夫desu >3<


thanks abalee, thanks all mappers and modders involved and thanks for everyone support it :3

加油迪西!
pieguyn
congrats :)

deepsea fight!
suzutsukikanade
congrats
fanzhen0019
;_; gratz
Rasis
恭喜rank 另外祝迪西早日康复
AoiX
迪西少女。。。大哥少女
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