eveless & qinche - Deepsea Girl

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Lan wings

Selee wrote:

治愈系
祝好运
卧槽selee快来治愈下我
Pokie
改了點東西o.o 等要Pending再更新也行

另外01:01:406 - 這邊中間HP掉的挺快的, 感覺應該加個break

Download: eveless & qinche - Deepsea Girl (Megurine Luka) [Po_fix].osu
Topic Starter
Megurine Luka

Pokie wrote:

改了點東西o.o 等要Pending再更新也行

另外01:01:406 - 這邊中間HP掉的挺快的, 感覺應該加個break
收到~那我暂时先不改了w

等最后搞定了再放进去>3<
Alace
loveFantasy
Overall bit rate : 210 Kbps (!?

還有你Easy難度的00:04:472 (4)那根slider壞掉了 (尾巴沒snap)

建議全難度audio lead-in 1000~1500

不知道你要開始找modder了沒, 有需要的話forum PM我
Topic Starter
Megurine Luka
好的嗯最近比较忙一直没空回来看Ouo今天下午争取Pending掉他……谢谢嗯> <
ZHSteven
抱歉KD不多,留下2颗星飘走~
迪西加油
Topic Starter
Megurine Luka
非常感谢TAT。

EDIT: Pending.
_Kiva
大家加油。
Topic Starter
Megurine Luka

_Kiva wrote:

大家加油。
之前的删掉重新下一下检查一下有什么要改的
loveFantasy
ok.

[General]
  1. spinner skin套件缺一個approach circle (spinner-approachcircle.png)
  2. tags加一下yuca和y_u_c_a


[Easy]
  1. need AR+1
  2. 00:31:695 (2,3) - 節奏上結合成一條1.5拍的repeat slider合音樂些, 前兩個點打finish最後一個點打whistle
  3. 00:54:469 (5) - 值得unstack+new combo..其實我想diff這麼多最簡單的難度乾脆都別用stack了
  4. 01:43:520 (6) - new combo吧
  5. 02:29:068 (4) - 試試repeat一次並把轉盤起點挪後到02:30:819
  6. 03:02:352 (6) - new combo
  7. 03:05:856 (1) - 似乎值個finish
  8. 03:18:119 (4,5) - 交換clap


[Normal]
  1. 00:56:440 (5,6) - 這可能unstack比較好打
  2. 01:30:600 (2) - 這個有點違合感, 後面的高白線該有東西, 因此改用1/2 repeat slider並且在高白線加個圈?
  3. 01:39:141 (5) - (Normal鬼畜疊XD)
  4. 02:22:060 (1,2,3) - 不太建議不同時間間距疊一起, 這整段其實不用那麼被DS限制, 因為節奏很鬆, 讓人看的懂就行
  5. 02:30:600 (1) - 同Easy..移到高白線
  6. 02:47:900 (8) - 建議unstack
  7. 03:15:053 (5,6) - 試試看三連finish, 不想的話至少都clap(6)一下


[Deepsea]
  1. 00:43:958 (2) - 我覺得這能new combo
  2. 00:54:031 (1) - 這突然換音效組感覺像硬插的, 用相同的音效組過去就好?
  3. 01:01:461 (T) - 雙綠線..其實這兩條綠線都不需要
  4. 01:29:287 (1) - 維持whistle pattern?
  5. 01:30:053 (4) - 挺怪的, 音效移白線吧
  6. 02:29:944 (1) - 感覺不太sync音樂..頭map到vocal完?


[Bless]
  1. 02:44:396 (5) - 後面的new combo移來這
  2. 02:58:958 (3) - how about del


[Pray]
  1. 00:37:279 (2,3,4) - 感覺clap串後這兩個白線顯得太弱了
  2. 00:48:119 (2) - add whistle?
  3. 00:52:498 (2) - ^
  4. 01:01:476 (11) - how about a finish
  5. 02:11:549 (5) - ^
  6. 02:24:469 (T) - 刪這條和後面那條綠線
  7. 02:50:748 (1) - unsnapped
Axey
moe 2个萌妹子的声音分不出来啊=w=
Pokie
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連著LKs的部份一併改了 不知道是怎麼安排的..應該是大哥統一改還是讓mapper自己決定T.T?
Topic Starter
Megurine Luka
@Pokie:自己决定=_=

mapper找不到的问题不大的我再手动
Nymph
酱油在此
General:
好像没

Easy:
Hitsound
03:26:878 (1) - 建议后面结尾也静音?

Normal:
Hitsound
03:26:878 (1) - 也同easy囧只有我觉得静音好么

迪东:
Beatmap design/suggestion
00:13:082 (X) - vocal在这开始的吧 三连打下这比较好 后面直接1个note过去了
00:26:440 (3) - 变速slider了要加nc不
00:32:571 (8) - 这也挺突然的变速(后面也建议减速都NC 不好认啊
01:38:046 (8) - 哎去这个note的approach circle跟后面紫色的小鱼SB颜色有点冲突不好认啊。。。

Hitsound
开头音量100好吵好吵
03:30:382 (17) - 。。那就是静音slider结尾?

Bless:
Beatmap design/suggestion
00:16:805 (3) - 碰血条了 虽然问题不大不过我还是蛋疼nazi下
01:56:768 (3) - 这spacing不太够让我判断是在蓝线上的 太近了
Hitsound
00:15:929 (1) - 这开始不大点音量么

Prey:
Issue
01:50:090 (X) - 2个timing线重叠了 切1条
没了

嗯酱油撤退 迪东fight!
Twice
0口0 哇!
Beren
你好/

[Easy]
00:40:454 (1) - S2 finish
01:29:506 (1) - ^
01:01:476 (4) - 删除clap
02:30:600 (1) - 从02:30:600开始?

[Deepsea]
00:04:761 (X) - 加note
00:04:980 (6) - 删除
03:30:382 (17) - 静音?

[Bless]
01:11:878 (2) - 删掉或者移到01:11:659
01:18:776 (1) - 删除NC
01:56:768 (3) - 移到01:56:878

[Pray]
01:22:498 (1) - 结束在01:22:936
Vinolyte
Hi from our queue~

Really nice song! Star!
Because I really liked the song I (tried to) modded all the diffs :)

General:
Lol'd at the swimming fishies XD
Couldn't really find anything.

Easy:
¤ 01:52:279 (4) I dont find the clap at the end really fitting, personally I find it better without clap
¤ 01:53:155 (x) you could place a beat here

Normal:
¤ 02:59:177 (2) You might want to fix the spacing.

Deepsea:
¤ Circle size +1 , personally, I like it better that way.
¤ There are quiet a few spacing problems, if they were all ment that way, you might consider setting a different Distance Snap then x0.6. and use 0.6 only for the normal notes
To be honest, it doesn't really matter I guess, but I wanted to at least point a few things out, otherwise my mod would be just worthless, and kinda don't like that :)
¤ 00:59:725 (1-17) Suggestion: you might want to add a new combo in this stream, if you want all the colors, put one at circle 6-12-17 and otherwise at circle 9

Bless:
¤ 01:37:279 (4) if this note was ment to be this way, ignore this, otherwise you should make a line of these 3 notes.

Pray:
¤ 02:07:717 (4) I find myself liking this more without the clap here.

Well this was the best I could do. It's not much but better then nothing I guess :)
Really nice map! Already said it, but I'll star it :) Hope it gets ranked soon

Cheers 8-)
Topic Starter
Megurine Luka
Thanks all. > <
lovhin456
Hello! Everyone has work quite a lot and also eveless & qinche wow you two sing so well ~

General:
- Uh, you have 3 Insanes which is unrankable and too be honest they do seem like Insanes. Also the gap between Normal and Deepsea seems to be quite large.

Easy:
- 00:47:024 (4,5) >> Consider unstacking, stacks might be hard for novice players so that's why
- 02:37:827 (1,2,3) >> ^ but since these are more spaced in the timeline I guess it is a little easier
- 02:43:958 >> Add clap ?
- 02:48:388 >> New combo
- 03:22:936 >> End the slider here with a clap at the end ?

Normal:
- 00:24:688 >> New combo ?
- 00:35:199 >> ^
- 00:55:783 >> ^
- 01:45:710 >> ^
- 01:55:783 >> ^
- 02:32:571 >> Add whistle ?
- 02:46:586 >> New combo ?

Deepsea:
- 00:04:980 >> Move this note to 00:04:761
- 00:21:184 (1,2,3,4,5) >> Uh, I don't think that large jumps fit here, maybe reduce the space between each ?
- 00:48:338 >> New combo ?
- 01:11:017 >> ^
- 01:15:929 >> ^
- 01:52:279 >> ^
- 02:26:878 >> ^
- 02:57:097 >> ^
- 03:30:491 >> Change to soft hitsound set, with normal hitsound set you can hear a little pop when the slider ends
- Good but I'm a little worried about all the speed changes during the diff

Bless:
- 00:02:571 >> Add a note ?
- 01:51:622 >> Remove new combo ?
- 02:47:462 >> New combo

Pray:
- 00:50:965 >> Add finish ?
- 01:24:688 >> New combo ?
- 01:32:571 >> New combo for a nice effect ?

* Overall, everything is good!
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