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Hisui Rika & Hotarubi Kakeru - Natsu no Hi (Short Ver.)

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cRyo[iceeicee]

xDeaTHcOrEx wrote:

i still owe you a mod so ill give you a mod for this now :D yay! thx :)

[cryo]:

  • another combo suggestion:
  1. 00:23:087 (1) - the combo before is pretty short why not deleting this combo and setting a new combo here 00:23:522 (3) - ?
  2. 00:25:044 (1) - if you do so delete nc here
  3. 00:25:261 (3) - and add nc here
  4. 00:25:913 (1) - delete nc
  5. 00:27:000 (6) - add nc
  6. 00:27:653 (1) - and delete nc here
  7. 00:36:348 (1) - delete nc here and add it at 00:36:566 (2) - as this new soudns starts here imo. and it makes the previosu combo longer
    ---
    Changed little bit #1,2,3 other seems fine for me o:
  8. 00:37:435 (6) - Nazi-mod on! you can make this overlap more precise ok~
  9. 00:56:457 (10) - Fix Spacing its x0.75 here in a x0.65 stream
yeah, dunno how this happened ..orz

I have an appointment now :( but ill edit the mod for h3ki when im back


btw. don't want to use kiai time ? o.o nope xD
Thx 4 mod (^^ )/
Topic Starter
cRyo[iceeicee]
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No_Gu
request from my queue

why not add kiai time?this song is only 1:10,
btw i can't find any problems.so only a star.
NatsumeRin
[Aleks]
00:09:392 (3) - delete?
01:00:044 (1) - consider a more..."regular" shape..?
very nice as easiest diff btw.

[h3k1]
00:35:261 (1,2) - switch new combo
00:40:913 (1) - the end point should have a louder voice?
00:48:087 (1) - change it into 1/2s to keep the clap pace?
01:03:522 (1) - volume decrease shouldn't include the beginning imo?
01:04:609 (2) - 2 circles would probably be better here
just saying, the spacing is a little larger than i expected...

[cRyo]
01:10:261 (7) - clap?
also want to say, some random spacing in the map is not really fit imo, such as:01:05:261 (1) -, i could understand it in the highest diff, but still don't like it because it's more like "just for a better placement, but has nothing to do with the rhythm or the beats"
Aleks719

NatsumeRin wrote:

[Aleks]
00:09:392 (3) - delete? ok
01:00:044 (1) - consider a more..."regular" shape..? ok
very nice as easiest diff btw. orz
Download: Hisui Rika & Hotarubi Kakeru - Natsu no Hi (Short Ver.) (cRyo[iceeicee]) [Aleks].osu
Gamu
hi- :)

request from my queue

[General]

●Add please "soft-sliderside (Silent)" http://puu.sh/bjXW

All suggestions

[Aleks]

●AR-1?
●00:00:914 (1) - whistle ⇒ finish change?(start)
●00:30:044 (2) - Move (x:152 y:144)

[h3k1]

●HP+1?
●00:00:914 (1) - whistle ⇒ finish change?(start)

[cRyo]

●HP+1?
●00:12:000 (4,5,6,7) - try this
256,56,12000,1,4
192,192,12218,1,0
168,88,12435,1,8
168,88,12653,2,0,B|113:149|33:136,1,150,4|0

Good map!!!!!!

that's all
Aleks719

-Gamu- wrote:

[Aleks]

●AR-1? hum, no ><
●00:00:914 (1) - whistle ⇒ finish change?(start) no ><
●00:30:044 (2) - Move (x:152 y:144) no ><
cRyo[iceeicee], update my diff from previous post B(
Topic Starter
cRyo[iceeicee]

-Gamu- wrote:

hi- :) hi ></
[General]

●Add please "soft-sliderside (Silent)" http://puu.sh/bjXW i dont like this default slider-slide too, but i dont hear it in this song ><

[cRyo]

●HP+1? ok~
●00:12:000 (4,5,6,7) - try this hmm, no i wanted 00:12:653 (7) - to be between note #4,5
256,56,12000,1,4
192,192,12218,1,0
168,88,12435,1,8
168,88,12653,2,0,B|113:149|33:136,1,150,4|0

Good map!!!!!!

that's all
thx for mod \:D/
Topic Starter
cRyo[iceeicee]

NatsumeRin wrote:

[cRyo]
01:10:261 (7) - clap? ok~
also want to say, some random spacing in the map is not really fit imo, such as:01:05:261 (1) -, i could understand it in the highest diff, but still don't like it because it's more like "just for a better placement, but has nothing to do with the rhythm or the beats" 2 of my favoirite maps have this "random spacing jumps" ]hi Sumisola wwww, so i decided to use the same pattern style. I think this "chaotic jumps" very interesting to play, and since its only 138 bpm i dont care about spacing too much.
Thx for mod

Aleks719 wrote:

cRyo[iceeicee], update my diff from previous post B(
sry ><
Kanari
Haiiitharr~ ;3
You requested in my queue~

Aleks
-00:30:044 (2) - Place it where the previous note was?

cRyo
-00:40:696 (1) - Remove new combo?
-00:40:913 (10) - New combo?

Nice song~
Star~
Topic Starter
cRyo[iceeicee]

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Haiiitharr~ ;3
You requested in my queue~

Aleks
-00:30:044 (2) - Place it where the previous note was?

cRyo
-00:40:696 (1) - Remove new combo? i think it looks better when slider and notes have same color, no change sry ><
-00:40:913 (10) - New combo?

Nice song~
Star~
Thx for mod and star :)
al2e10
Nice song ~~~ Lets MOD it :D

----------------------------------------cRyo
00:06:131 (5,6,7) - Try to make the distance as same as 00:05:696 (4,5).
00:09:066 (X) - Lower to 50% at this timing section
00:52:435 (5) - NEw combo (Distance changed)
--Try to make the map fun but not making the map annoying. Those jump werent got the map into fun but others may get annoied by those jump.
--Nice Sound.

-----------------------------------------h3k1
00:32:218 (1) - REmvoe new combo
01:07:000 (1-1st) - Fnish
00:09:174 (2) - Lower this note to 50% (A bit strange to the music)
01:02:000 (1) - REmove new combo (Useless)

------------------------------------------Aleks
00:11:348 (2,3) - Hope you can chagne those slider not the cover the other
00:28:740 (1,2) - Put 2 perfectly under 1
00:40:913 (4-1st) - Fnish

===========Overall
Nice job :D
Good luck STAR
Topic Starter
cRyo[iceeicee]

KingsAL2 wrote:

Nice song ~~~ Lets MOD it :D

----------------------------------------cRyo
00:06:131 (5,6,7) - Try to make the distance as same as 00:05:696 (4,5). hmm, no
00:09:066 (X) - Lower to 50% at this timing section ok~
00:52:435 (5) - NEw combo (Distance changed) ok~
--Try to make the map fun but not making the map annoying. Those jump werent got the map into fun but others may get annoied by those jump.
--Nice Sound.
Thx for star & mod :)
Nymph
Hi Nymph here and request from my queue.

General:
no kiai? I personally think kiai fit this song pretty much~ at least use some kiai fountains instead. seems better for me.


Aleks:
Beatmap design/suggestion
01:01:783 (2) - maybe add a note here? feel a little empty for me. just suggestion.


h3k1:
all fine for me.


Hard:
Beatmap design/suggestion
00:39:066 (x) - maybe delete this section, seems useless.

Hitsound
00:04:827 (2,3,4) - I feel these notes volumn were too low, maybe consider to make them a little louder.
others all fine for me.

Yeah these are all for me~ pretty good so have my star~
Topic Starter
cRyo[iceeicee]
Thx for mod&star Nymph
Kenezz
Hii! oh oh a supah moe song!! ♥
from my queue
Kenezz's Bakamod~

General
  1. Maybe add moebono to the tags for the company of the game.
  2. Disable letterbox during breaks in all diffs.
  3. Why no kiai time? I think in this song fits good, if you agree add the first part here 00:42:653 end up at 00:56:131 and again in 00:56:566 to end up in 01:03:522.
Aleks
  1. 00:30:044 (2) - Stack this note with 00:28:740 (1)
  2. 00:32:218 (5) - Maybe new combo.
  3. 00:42:653 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try some like this http://puu.sh/dvDN to after put this beats 00:45:261 (4,5) in the center and finally make the next pattern symmetric to the first.
    SPOILER


    Code of 00:42:653 to 00:48:740

    236,192,42653,6,0,B|284:184|284:184|320:144,1,96.0000022888184,4|8
    404,76,43522,2,0,B|396:123|396:123|423:165,1,96.0000022888184,0|8
    440,276,44392,2,0,B|392:280|392:280|361:243,1,96.0000022888184,0|8
    256,192,45261,1,0
    256,192,45696,1,8
    150,140,46131,6,0,B|119:103|119:103|72:108,1,96.0000022888184,2|8
    89,220,47001,2,0,B|115:260|115:260|108:308,1,96.0000022888184,0|8
    196,235,47870,2,0,B|228:200|228:200|276:192,1,96.0000022888184,2|8
    280,308,48740,2,0,B|249:345|249:345|198:348,1,96.0000022888184,0|8
  4. 01:03:522 (4) - New combo, if you agree remove the nc of the next note and put it in 01:07:000 (5), something like this http://puu.sh/dvKr
h3k1
  1. 01:09:283 - The track suggest a note here, add it to make a stacked triplet.
  2. Nice :3~
cRyo
  1. 00:14:500 - Add a beat to make a triplet like 00:55:696
  2. 00:34:609 (4) - Put this note stacked to the begin of 00:33:522 (3) http://puu.sh/dvSZ, after make 00:34:174 (2) symmetric to this http://puu.sh/dvTn.
  3. 00:33:957 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - After the before changes try this to make the pattern a bit more jumpy, 00:34:609 (4,5) Ctrl + R http://puu.sh/dvU0.
  4. 00:49:609 (6) - New combo here and remove to the next note.
  5. I think in is all.
Ok, I hope to helps you
>w< moe song <3~
Aleks719

Kenezz wrote:

Aleks
  1. 00:30:044 (2) - Stack this note with 00:28:740 (1) *MADFACE* NO.
  2. 00:32:218 (5) - Maybe new combo. maybe, but if i'll add here, i'll have to add nc in other places and it will be new combos for only one slider. so, no.
  3. 00:42:653 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try some like this http://puu.sh/dvDN to after put this beats 00:45:261 (4,5) in the center and finally make the next pattern symmetric to the first. Sorry, no. I prefer my patterns without symmetry more
  4. 01:03:522 (4) - New combo, if you agree remove the nc of the next note and put it in 01:07:000 (5), something like this http://puu.sh/dvKr no, because of same reason as before.
Thanks~ But without changes.
Topic Starter
cRyo[iceeicee]

Kenezz wrote:

Hii! oh oh a supah moe song!! ♥ Hihiiii :)
from my queue
Kenezz's Bakamod~

General
  1. Maybe add moebono to the tags for the company of the game. done~
  2. Disable letterbox during breaks in all diffs. disabled ><!
  3. Why no kiai time? I think in this song fits good, if you agree add the first part here 00:42:653 end up at 00:56:131 and again in 00:56:566 to end up in 01:03:522.
dont like kiai sry ><, but added few fountains wwww \></


cRyo
  1. 00:14:500 - Add a beat to make a triplet like 00:55:696 i dont hear triplet here....
  2. 00:34:609 (4) - Put this note stacked to the begin of 00:33:522 (3) http://puu.sh/dvSZ, after make 00:34:174 (2) symmetric to this http://puu.sh/dvTn. slider stacked, but didnt change notes position
  3. 00:33:957 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - After the before changes try this to make the pattern a bit more jumpy, 00:34:609 (4,5) Ctrl + R http://puu.sh/dvU0. i am afraid of jumps (/ω\)
  4. 00:49:609 (6) - New combo here and remove to the next note. ok~
  5. I think in is all.
Ok, I hope to helps you
>w< moe song <3~
Thx for mod Kenezz~ :)
Kenezz
Kabuum!
Cherry Bubble~

Good Luck with the rank >w<
Topic Starter
cRyo[iceeicee]

Kenezz wrote:

Kabuum!
Cherry Bubble~

Good Luck with the rank >w<
Thx Kenezz~ ></
IceBeam
ranked
h3k1ru
^w^
Topic Starter
cRyo[iceeicee]

IceBeam wrote:

ranked
Thank you ♥ IceBeam:)
Topic Starter
cRyo[iceeicee]

h3k1ru wrote:

^w^
uti puti >///<
Hinacle
yeah~!!

lolicon cRyo :)
Aleks719
Congrats~ :P
Melophobia
gratz ~ ^^
Topic Starter
cRyo[iceeicee]
Hinacle, Aleks, Melophobia \:D/
wcx19911123
oh , I hope this song is longer
and congrats :3
xsrsbsns
Graats!~
Topic Starter
cRyo[iceeicee]
Thx wcx~, xsr~ :)
KayeSara
/me eat you XDXDXDXD
merchat7
Late, but grats on rank! :D
Topic Starter
cRyo[iceeicee]
Stop eatiiiiiing meeeeeeeeeee wwwww Thx KaySara~, merchat7~ :)
Linzx_old
Why I couldnt find this song on web awwwww D;
[HIToMe]
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