Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ Gamu chan ~ (Sorry for later mod)

Mod time for PM - In game ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

1. Don't forgot Remove OSB file ><. ok
2. Add tags same other diff in 'cRyo'. ^
3. Open phonic diff test file : SliderMultiplier:0.799999999999999.
   Need fixed this error,change 0.8 it's ok. ^
   
   

   [Gamu]

   
   
   1. 01:11:323 (4) - Add new combo to here and Remove 01:10:419 , 01:11:865. ok
   2. 01:32:287 (6,7) - Try this rhythm. ^
      
      SPOILER

      

[phonic]

1. 00:14:214 (1) - This is unrankable error,Add new combo here. ok
2. 00:37:347 (1) - ^ ^

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That's all ~ nice song and mapset ~

Good luck ~

thanks :3

---> Kawayi Rika short NC is fine for me so, no changes sry ><
Thx for mod ></

form mutual mod request

General
Please take note , ALL are suggestion. GOODLUCK!

phonic

00:39:516 (1,2,3) -

01:11:323 (1,2) - 2 land on red tick not good on easy diff ,It's better if you use slider instead like this

01:33:010 (1) - start at 01:32:829

*** next time please made a note that land on 2nd and 4th whiteline, so you can put hitsound that match snare drum.

(^ If you want to try just move all notes 1 beat forward or 1 beat backward and just check only finish sound and spinner no need to remap just change only a little bit )

h3k1

00:01:925 (2) - better without finish.
00:06:986 (1) - whistle
00:07:708 (1) - whistle move form tail to head.
00:08:431 (2) - whistle.
00:09:877 - whistle.
00:10:600 (2) - end slider at 00:11:142 i'll be match whistle sound better
00:30:841 (6) - whistle head
00:39:516 (1) - finish head
00:41:323 (5) - remove finish form end of slider ( this is your mistake maybe )
00:45:299 (1,2,3,4) - why these whistle not match the previous note? 00:42:407 (1,2,3,4) -
( to fix just move these note timing (00:45:660 (2,3,4) ) -362 ms
00:47:648 (1) - whistle
00:53:973 (1) - finish head
01:32:829 (1) - 01:32:829 add circle + finish and reduce spiner length 1/2 beat?

most are hitsound modding all are just suggestion. mass whistle is good in this diff.

cRyo

*** some note that use whistle like 00:17:648 (3,1,2,3,4,5) please increase volume at least 60 percent plz.
** there are some slider like 00:36:624 (3) - , 00:53:070 (3) - that use both whistle and tail, try to adjust whistle at head and tail only,not put all include body of slider it sound too quite and weird when the slider ball pass the body of slider, but if it's your intention it's fine.

00:13:311 - add note?
00:17:648 (3,1,2,3,4,5) - can increase volume can't here whistle clearly.
00:27:136 (2) - I think this is hard for Hard diff can you stack it? or use more Far distance.
00:49:998 use soft hitsound is better.
00:50:359 (1,2) - these anti jump is play hard if you want anti jump maybe stack it?

Gamu

00:41:504 (4) - finish head
00:42:046 (6) - finish
00:48:371 (4) - change to 2 circles
and
00:48:371 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - use little jump between each circle
sample

01:06:805 (5) - fin head
01:08:070 (3) - fin head
01:17:016 (8) - delete ?


星。

regenz wrote:

form mutual mod request

General
Please take note , ALL are suggestion. GOODLUCK!

Gamu

00:41:504 (4) - finish head ok
00:42:046 (6) - finish ^
00:48:371 (4) - change to 2 circles
and
00:48:371 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - use little jump between each circle ^
sample

SPOILER

01:06:805 (5) - fin head ^
01:08:070 (3) - fin head ^
01:17:016 (8) - delete ? no


星。

thanks :3

some fixes~

Download: Hashimoto Miyuki - to the sky (Short Ver.) (-Gamu-) [h3k1].osu

thanks >w<

all fixed

Download: Hashimoto Miyuki - to the sky (Short Ver.) (-Gamu-) [phonic].osu

regenz wrote:

cRyo

*** some note that use whistle like 00:17:648 (3,1,2,3,4,5) please increase volume at least 60 percent plz. 60% normal notes too loud for me
** there are some slider like 00:36:624 (3) - , 00:53:070 (3) - that use both whistle and tail, try to adjust whistle at head and tail only,not put all include body of slider it sound too quite and weird when the slider ball pass the body of slider, but if it's your intention it's fine. yep its mine intention, but changed smth

00:13:311 - add note? nope
00:17:648 (3,1,2,3,4,5) - can increase volume can't here whistle clearly. because its slider wistles
00:27:136 (2) - I think this is hard for Hard diff can you stack it? or use more Far distance. not that hard imo
00:49:998 use soft hitsound is better. i prefer normal hitsounds~
00:50:359 (1,2) - these anti jump is play hard if you want anti jump maybe stack it? fine for me

Thanks for mod
some changes~

Download: Hashimoto Miyuki - to the sky (Short Ver.) (-Gamu-) [cRyo].osu

from my queue
sorry for the huge delay

[General]
source should be "MagusTale - Sekaiju to Koisuru Mahoutsukai -" in cRyo diff
lead-in in h3k1 diff seems too huge , use 1000~1500 is better imo

[phonic]
00:37:347 (1) - change combo color here , it kinda blend into spinner
01:16:383 (1) - ^
this diff is really too easy , as this song I think Easy should at least 2 stars..

[h3k1]
HP+1 plz , this is too low for this diff imo
this diff itself is fine , but this is too hard as a Normal diff imo

[cRyo]
OD-1? it is kinda high imo
00:00:480 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this is too hard to play as a Hard diff , I strongly suggest you change easier pattern here , and use sliders first to let players know the song's rhyme
00:12:226 (1,2,3,4) - here sound kinda odd , the rhyme in Gamu diff is much more better to fit the song
00:26:865 (1,2,3) - I suggest you reduce spacing here , like what you did at 00:23:070 (2,3,4) -

[Gamu]
OD-1? it is kinda high imo
00:00:480 (1,2,3,4) - I suggest you use sliders here , circles at song's beginning is hard to play cuz players don't know the song's rhyme here
00:48:010 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - here is kinda odd to play , I suggest remove (1) and slider end at 00:48:371 - , and move claps to white line(1/1 beat) , whistle to read line(1/2 beat) , much better imo
01:33:010 - add a spinner?
I feel this diff's pattern is kinda mess.. without too much flow :/

diffs themselves are fine but the mapset is not good , there are a huge difficulty distance between phonic and h3k1 diffs
I suggest to make phonic harder and h3k1 easier , or add a diff between them , for better diff spread
I'm glad to come back when you did ^

wcx19911123 wrote:

[cRyo]
OD-1? it is kinda high imo always using OD-6 in [Hard] diff (150-190 bpm) ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
00:00:480 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this is too hard to play as a Hard diff , I strongly suggest you change easier pattern here , and use sliders first to let players know the song's rhyme ok, changed to sliders~
00:12:226 (1,2,3,4) - here sound kinda odd , the rhyme in Gamu diff is much more better to fit the song removed this part, placed spiner instead
00:26:865 (1,2,3) - I suggest you reduce spacing here , like what you did at 00:23:070 (2,3,4) - changed this part~

Thx for mod wcx~ ></

Download: Hashimoto Miyuki - to the sky (Short Ver.) (-Gamu-) [cRyo].osu

wcx19911123 wrote:

[h3k1]
HP+1 plz , this is too low for this diff imo

i've used HP2 to keep diff to 4 stars, star rating troll

wcx19911123 wrote:

lead-in in h3k1 diff seems too huge , use 1000~1500 is better imo

its the same as other diffs

no changes ><

wcx19911123 wrote:

from my queue
sorry for the huge delay

[General]
source should be "MagusTale - Sekaiju to Koisuru Mahoutsukai -" in cRyo diff ok

[Gamu]
OD-1? it is kinda high imo ok
00:00:480 (1,2,3,4) - I suggest you use sliders here , circles at song's beginning is hard to play cuz players don't know the song's rhyme here ^
00:48:010 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - here is kinda odd to play , I suggest remove (1) and slider end at 00:48:371 - , and move claps to white line(1/1 beat) , whistle to read line(1/2 beat) , much better imo ^
01:33:010 - add a spinner? ^
I feel this diff's pattern is kinda mess.. without too much flow :/ uh..I think I have been with the flow.

diffs themselves are fine but the mapset is not good , there are a huge difficulty distance between phonic and h3k1 diffs
I suggest to make phonic harder and h3k1 easier , or add a diff between them , for better diff spread
I'm glad to come back when you did ^

thanks ></

waiting for "phonic"

wcx19911123 wrote:

[phonic]
00:37:347 (1) - change combo color here , it kinda blend into spinner Fixed
01:16:383 (1) - ^ Fixed
this diff is really too easy , as this song I think Easy should at least 2 stars.. Was performed as was told to you

Download: Hashimoto Miyuki - to the sky (Short Ver.) (-Gamu-) [phonic].osu

ok. All diff Updated!

Sorry for the late mod but I got a bunch of things in real life ;w; Again, I'm sorry

General:
- Fine

phonic:
- Nice

h3k1:
- 00:26:865 >> New combo
- 01:10:058 >> Instead of the slider just put a note here ?
- 01:28:853 >> New combo ?
- 01:31:745 >> Remove a repeat

cRyo:
- 01:31:745 >> This is an extra note, it means that it doesn't contribute to the rhythm or that it isn't that necessary, I suggest to delete it
- Good diff

Gamu:
- Ok, so about the thing that you asked me to check ... I think this diff is fine really overall is fine imo. It plays well and about the flow yeah I think it has a good flow. Yes, I guess it could be improved but that doesn't mean is bad right now it is pretty good.
- 00:05:901 >> New combo ?
- 00:13:130 >> ^
- 00:59:757 >> Remove new combo and add new combo at 01:00:299

* That's all

lovhin456 wrote:

Sorry for the late mod but I got a bunch of things in real life ;w; Again, I'm sorry

General:
- Fine

Gamu:
- Ok, so about the thing that you asked me to check ... I think this diff is fine really overall is fine imo. It plays well and about the flow yeah I think it has a good flow. Yes, I guess it could be improved but that doesn't mean is bad right now it is pretty good. ok. Thank you very much
- 00:05:901 >> New combo ?
- 00:13:130 >> ^
- 00:59:757 >> Remove new combo and add new combo at 01:00:299

* That's all

All fixed!

thank you ></

lovhin456 wrote:

h3k1:
- 00:26:865 >> New combo alright
- 01:10:058 >> Instead of the slider just put a note here ? no
- 01:28:853 >> New combo ? yup
- 01:31:745 >> Remove a repeat no, redused volume tho

thx for mod~

Download: Hashimoto Miyuki - to the sky (Short Ver.) (-Gamu-) [h3k1].osu

lovhin456 wrote:

cRyo:
- 01:31:745 >> This is an extra note, it means that it doesn't contribute to the rhythm or that it isn't that necessary, I suggest to delete it ....no...it fits perfectly with background music.....
- Good diff

Thx for mod lovhin~

missed 1 finish

Download: Hashimoto Miyuki - to the sky (Short Ver.) (-Gamu-) [cRyo].osu

ok. All diff Updated!

ok , fine now
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wcx19911123 wrote:

ok , fine now
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thank you ><//

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