mostly just suggestions and personal opinions
Hard00:09:301 (4,5) - move these two notes back 1/4 tick. Having them on blue ticks just doesn't fit at all imo. Some times it works when there is some background drumming or music, but the only thing playing is the vocals and it's just awkward to do this.
00:14:102 (2) - move this note to 00:14:252 for a similar reason to above. I don't find it necessary to do this. It just doesn't fit this song at this certain point in time.
00:25:204 - add note
00:26:404 (4) - move this note to 00:26:554
00:37:357 (3) - there needs to be another slider here imo.
http://puu.sh/fC7d I don't know if you like the overlap, but this just sounds better to me
00:51:009 - add a note?
00:51:609 - ^? it could be a little confusing, but i think it's ok. You always rearrange spacing tho. I think these notes here sound better as it follows what you previously did
00:56:260 (1,2,3) - i would space these notes a little furthe raway from the previous note, or you could alternatively add a note at 00:56:110 -
01:00:461 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern doesn't make sense here imo. a note needs to be at 01:00:761 for this to work imo
01:05:862 (3,4) - ^
01:40:519 (4,5) - move back 1/4 tick
01:57:623 (4) - move note 1/4 tick forward. follows vocals better and makes more sense to me. the way it is right now feels awkward.
02:18:177 - this section is basically the same thing as the other, so perhaps you could add some notes as i had previously suggested.
03:01:986 (7) - new combo
03:07:237 (3) - i wouldn't stack this
--i guess the adding notes stuff is more personal opinion. I don't really like the completely made up rhythm that much. THis type of rhythm usually makes a song more fun and more interesting if you don't spam it everywhere. I feel it's just used way too much in places where the music doesn't play those notes. In a sense, it's overmapped, but not that much.
Normal00:30:755 (4,5,6) - might as well use the same spacing as you did before (use 1.0x spacing. RIght now, it's .9x) This applies until 00:40:057 -
00:32:556 (6,1) - would look neater if you didn't put this jump here
00:37:357 (3,4,5) - don't put this jump here plz.
01:37:969 (3,4) - i wouldn't really put this jumps here
01:40:369 (5) - a new combo fits here to emphasize what's happening in the music, but thats just me
01:59:273 (4) - new combo
02:01:373 (1) - remove combo
02:01:974 (2) - new combo (these combos are to match 03:30:491 (1,2,3) - )
02:38:582 (4,5) - spacing is different.
02:40:681 - add break
02:44:582 (1,2) - i would delete these two notes
03:09:187 (4,5) - i wouldn't make these jumps.
there's nothing really wrong, but i guess some pattern are a little iffy.
good luck.~~
