Suzully wrote:

From my modding queue.

[General]

• 
  マッピング部分が全体の80%に達していないので、mp3をカットする必要があります。

あと2,30秒くらいでfullなのでもう作っちゃうことにしました!
[Easy]

• 
  HPとODの設定がNormalと一緒です。それぞれ1ずつ下げてください。fixed

1. 01:59:527 (1,2) - ちょっと音楽とずれていて、初心者は戸惑うと思います。(2)を削除して、(1)を01:59:690に移動させてください。 fixed
2. 02:21:864 (2) - 少しだけ形を整えたい。 fixed
3. 02:23:820 (2) - ^

fixed

[Normal]

1. 01:00:913 (T) - ちょっと音量が下がりすぎているので上げた方がヒットサウンドを聞きやすいです。 fixed
2. 01:05:723 (4,5) - Normalとしてはわかりづらいパターンです。折り返しスライダーに変えて配置を下のようにするなど。 fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 02:15:261 (T) - こちらも音量上げを。 fixed
4. 02:20:070 (4,5) - (5)の音はバックサウンドになくて音が浮いてしまっているので、削除してはどうでしょう。先のパターンではスライダーに変えられたので大丈夫でしたが、こちらはスペーシング的に変えられなさそうなので。 fixed
5. 02:23:820 (2) - Ctrl+Shift+RでOrigin=Selection Centreで-7度くらい回転させるとちょうど(1)が真ん中にきます。

fixed

[Insane]

• 
  うーん、熟練プレイヤーにはこのBPMはAR9の方がいいのかもしれないけど・・・個人的には、この譜面ならAR8の方が合っているような・・・。
  普通レベルのプレイヤーにとっては無駄に難しくなってしまっている感じがあります。でもマッパーの意思を尊重したいしAR9はてぃとさんの持ち味でもあるので、AR9のままで問題ないです。了解ですー

1. 00:02:951 (2) - finishは終端より始端の方が合っていると思います。 fixed
2. 01:05:886 (6) - 折り返し部分の音が浮いてる感じです。折り返しを無くして、終端にfinishを加えてみてはどうでしょう。 fixed
3. 01:06:865 (3) - こちらも終端よりは始端の方が合っていると思います。fixed
4. 01:16:974 (1) - 終端finishつけ忘れ？ fixed
5. 01:45:832 (4,5) - 近いです1grid右。 fixed
6. 02:14:039 (6) - 終端にもfinish欲しいー。 fixed
7. 02:20:396 (6,7) - 1サビ前と同じ理由で、(7)を削除して(6)にfinish追加しては。 fixed
8. 02:21:213 (3) - 同じくfinish始端にー。

fixed

もう少しmodしてもらってくださいー。それからリチェックに呼んでもらえればまた来ます。
Star for now.

modありがとうございますー

Alright lets see wat i can find.

General:
no problems here

Easy:
00:02:951(2,3) - replace the clap for a finish for (2)? sounds better IMO and move the clap at the end if u add a finish at (2)
00:08:820(2) - add a clap at the beginning and the end if u want to keep a steady flow in claps
00:10:777(1,2) - add a clap at the end for (1). same reason as above and delete the clap at (2). sounds odd IMO
00:52:516(1,2) - ^
01:00:994(1,2) - add a clap at the beginning since the repeat arrow (2) has a clap and remove the clap at the end of (2).
01:02:299(3) - add a clap at the end same reason as the 2nd
01:06:538(1,2) - remove the clap at the repeat arrow and add it at the beginning and end. same reason as above
01:12:733(2) - ^
01:15:994(3) - i think itd sound nice if u add a clap at the end.
01:56:755(1) - is there a reason why a whistle is here?
overall the note placement is good, the clap hitsounds needs a bit of work. i understand wat ur rhythm ur going for, the thing is that some claps sound inconsistent and others r dead on as in a flowy pattern.

Normal:
01:00:342(3) - move it down because its touching the score. since this is a normal diff, players may get nervous leading to a miss or a fail.
01:00:994(1) - i think u forgot to add a clap at the end? if yes then add it at the end to continue the pattern
01:41:755(1) - ^
01:45:668(1) - i think itd sound nice if u add a clap at the beginning and the end,
01:46:646(2) - add a clap at the end to continue the pattern
again with the hitsounds.

wring's Hard:
00:51:701(3) - im guessing ur trying to make this look the same as (1) but the turn is completely different. so try to make this look the same as (1)
01:18:929(3) - i think itd look nice if u can make this a curved slider to make a blanket around the end of (2)
02:33:929(1) - ^
overall i enjoyed this diff.

Insane:
00:14:853(1) - try to move this down away from the score. this may get players off-guard causing them to mess up.
00:17:951(2,3) - same as above but its touching the hp bar. same reason as above
00:19:255(2) - ^
00:31:320(2) - ^
00:35:070(2) - ^
00:38:820(4) - ^
00:56:103(7) - ^
02:04:744(1) - ^
02:33:277(3) - ^
03:18:603(2) - ^

this is the best i can do. Star and GL

Byakugan249 wrote:

Alright lets see wat i can find.

General:
no problems here

Easy:
00:02:951(2,3) - replace the clap for a finish for (2)? sounds better IMO and move the clap at the end if u add a finish at (2)
00:08:820(2) - add a clap at the beginning and the end if u want to keep a steady flow in claps fixed
00:10:777(1,2) - add a clap at the end for (1). same reason as above and delete the clap at (2). sounds odd IMO
00:52:516(1,2) - ^
01:00:994(1,2) - add a clap at the beginning since the repeat arrow (2) has a clap and remove the clap at the end of (2).
01:02:299(3) - add a clap at the end same reason as the 2nd fixed
01:06:538(1,2) - remove the clap at the repeat arrow and add it at the beginning and end. same reason as above
01:12:733(2) - ^
01:15:994(3) - i think itd sound nice if u add a clap at the end. fixed
01:56:755(1) - is there a reason why a whistle is here? fixed
overall the note placement is good, the clap hitsounds needs a bit of work. i understand wat ur rhythm ur going for, the thing is that some claps sound inconsistent and others r dead on as in a flowy pattern.

Normal:
01:00:342(3) - move it down because its touching the score. since this is a normal diff, players may get nervous leading to a miss or a fail. fixed
01:00:994(1) - i think u forgot to add a clap at the end? if yes then add it at the end to continue the pattern fixed
01:41:755(1) - ^ fixed
01:45:668(1) - i think itd sound nice if u add a clap at the beginning and the end, fixed
01:46:646(2) - add a clap at the end to continue the pattern fixed
again with the hitsounds.

Insane:
00:14:853(1) - try to move this down away from the score. this may get players off-guard causing them to mess up.
00:17:951(2,3) - same as above but its touching the hp bar. same reason as above fixed
00:19:255(2) - ^
00:31:320(2) - ^
00:35:070(2) - ^
00:38:820(4) - ^
00:56:103(7) - ^
02:04:744(1) - ^
02:33:277(3) - ^
03:18:603(2) - ^
some of them fixed
this is the best i can do. Star and GL

mod and star really thanks~

Hi~
From my queue

[Easy]
00:02:299 (1) - Remove NC
00:02:951 (2) - Add Finish
00:07:842 (1) - Add Finish to repeat
00:25:125 (2) - Spacing error a little.put in x:356 y:316(Grid size:Tiny)
00:32:625 (3) - ^ x:108 y:136 (Grid size:Tiny)
00:34:255 (1) - Add Finish at the beginning
00:39:473 (1) - Add finish
00:48:603 (2) - Add finish the end
00:51:049 (2) - Spacing error a little.Put in x:432 y:284 (Grid size:Tiny)
00:57:244 (3,1) - Generally ,Easy diffs don`t put the jump
00:57:733 (1) - Add Finish at the beginning
01:02:951 (1) - ^
01:06:538 (1) - ^(because start Kiai Time)
01:11:755 (1) - Add Finish to repeat
01:16:973 (1) - ^
01:22:190 (1) - ^
01:48:603 (1) - Add Finish at the beginning
01:53:820 (1) - Add Finish
02:17:299 (1) - Add Finish at the beginning
02:20:886 (1) - ^
02:23:820 (2) - How about like this?
02:26:103 (1) - Add Finish to repeat
02:31:320 (1) - ^
02:36:864 (2) - Add Finish at the beginning
03:07:842 (1) - Add Finish to repeat

[Normal]
add finish to where piinted out on Easy
Circle Size -1?

00:02:299 (1) - Remove NC
00:25:940 (1) - Spacing error a little,put in x:308 y:192 (Grid Size:Tiny)
01:06:538 (1) - ^ x:436 y:140 (Grid Size:Tiny)
01:12:733 (2) - 1 grid up plz~
02:34:255 (2) - ^

[Insane]
add finish to where piinted out on Easy

other looks good to me
Good luck~
☆

[Ranger] wrote:

Hi~
From my queue

[Easy]
00:02:299 (1) - Remove NC
00:02:951 (2) - Add Finish
00:07:842 (1) - Add Finish to repeat
00:25:125 (2) - Spacing error a little.put in x:356 y:316(Grid size:Tiny)
00:32:625 (3) - ^ x:108 y:136 (Grid size:Tiny) fixed
00:34:255 (1) - Add Finish at the beginning fixed
00:39:473 (1) - Add finish fixed
00:48:603 (2) - Add finish the end
00:51:049 (2) - Spacing error a little.Put in x:432 y:284 (Grid size:Tiny)
00:57:244 (3,1) - Generally ,Easy diffs don`t put the jump fixed
00:57:733 (1) - Add Finish at the beginning fixed
01:02:951 (1) - ^
01:06:538 (1) - ^(because start Kiai Time)
01:11:755 (1) - Add Finish to repeat
01:16:973 (1) - ^
01:22:190 (1) - ^
01:48:603 (1) - Add Finish at the beginning fixed
01:53:820 (1) - Add Finish fixed
02:17:299 (1) - Add Finish at the beginning fixed
02:20:886 (1) - ^
02:23:820 (2) - How about like this?

fixed
02:26:103 (1) - Add Finish to repeat
02:31:320 (1) - ^
02:36:864 (2) - Add Finish at the beginning fixed
03:07:842 (1) - Add Finish to repeat

[Normal]
add finish to where piinted out on Easy fixed
Circle Size -1? fixed

00:02:299 (1) - Remove NC
00:25:940 (1) - Spacing error a little,put in x:308 y:192 (Grid Size:Tiny) fixed
01:06:538 (1) - ^ x:436 y:140 (Grid Size:Tiny)
01:12:733 (2) - 1 grid up plz~ fixed
02:34:255 (2) - ^ fixed

[Insane]
add finish to where piinted out on Easy fixed

other looks good to me
Good luck~
☆

thanks mod and star~

>>virginiamx
star thanks

>>NewRulerNA
Thankssssssss~

As recheck. (遅くなってすみません )

[General]

• 
  HardとInsaneのKIAIを、Easy・Normalのものと統一してください。

[Easy]

1. 00:59:038 (2) - 出来れば、前のスライダーと触れない形の方が好ましいです。

[Normal]

1. 02:52:190 (1) - 折り返しを加えて、02:57:407 (1)と同じリズムにした方がいいと思います。

[Hard]

1. 03:07:844 (1) - スナップされていません。
2. 03:08:496 (2) - ^
3. 03:24:962 (4) - Finish。

Suzully wrote:

As recheck. (遅くなってすみません )

[General]

• 
  HardとInsaneのKIAIを、Easy・Normalのものと統一してください。

fixed

[Easy]

1. 00:59:038 (2) - 出来れば、前のスライダーと触れない形の方が好ましいです。

fixed

[Normal]

1. 02:52:190 (1) - 折り返しを加えて、02:57:407 (1)と同じリズムにした方がいいと思います。

fixed

[Hard]

1. 03:07:844 (1) - スナップされていません。 fixed
2. 03:08:496 (2) - ^ fixed
3. 03:24:962 (4) - Finish。

fixed
all fixed~ thanks!!

All stuff are fine now.
Bubbled!

ありがとうございます

頑張ってください

応援です！rank頑張ってください！！

ありがとうございます

Someone do something.

ヾ(。｀Д´。)ノ

Stop posting so I can easily see that this is an old bubble. ヽ(｀⌒´メ)ノ

Uhh I can't quite remember what I had modded. Was mostly kiai time changes and some spinner length changes. And a bunch of changes (1/4 rhythm use, I think) in the Insane.

Lookin' good after the redesigns though.

Rebubbled!

Garven wrote:

Stop posting so I can easily see that this is an old bubble. ヽ(｀⌒´メ)ノ

Uhh I can't quite remember what I had modded. Was mostly kiai time changes and some spinner length changes. And a bunch of changes (1/4 rhythm use, I think) in the Insane.

Lookin' good after the redesigns though.

Rebubbled!

thanks mod, i changed almost all~

We did IRC modding and fixed the wrong spacing in Normal and some hitsounds and new combos.

This map has waited long time since the last time I had bubbled. Finally it's time to rank this!
Ranked!

Congratsssss

Suzully wrote:

We did IRC modding and fixed the wrong spacing in Normal and some hitsounds and new combos.

This map has waited long time since the last time I had bubbled. Finally it's time to rank this!
Ranked!

thanks~~

Congrats!
And congrats to Suzully for first rank. o3o
Nevermind, didn't saw the map before. lol

やったあああああああああ

TheNutritiousGuy wrote:

Nevermind, didn't saw the map before. lol

Lol, thanks anyway

Hurray Suzu's 1st rank 2nd rank, and congratz on the Rank been waiting for this to get ranked

Congratz~

おめでとー！

♥Thite♥ \></

おめでとう～

gratz ^-^

わーおめでとです

Awesome map! grats

wa~!

thanks~!

おめでとう！

Gratz~ Take me too much time to FC it lol

gratz Thite >w<//

thanks~

Congratz

finally
congratz