Lissette wrote:

miau~

Disable countdown, looks bad >: ok~
Delete extra .osb i only see one ;___;

Insane
00:27:851 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - center it?
00:32:118 - add note? maybe stacked under 6
01:04:120 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - same
01:55:325 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - try this http://puu.sh/hJqi
02:11:682 (4) - reverse arrow is kinda hidden by prev hitburst
normal whistle are kinda loud to me, can you lower a bit?
i think i did all of that :/
Dark_Ai's Hard
00:04:204 - add note?
00:21:094 (9) - move to next red tick sounds better, you could make this with a slider too
00:37:451 (7) - remove note
00:58:609 - feels like you missing a note here?
01:40:746 (9) - same as 00:21:094 (9) -
01:35:412 - this part sounds better with normal sounds, like you did in the other part like this
Add a breaktime like in Insane and Lilac's Normal plz
i did most of that. but gonna ask dark_ai about 21:094 and 1:40:746
Lilac's Normal
same as Insane I found whistle to loud T.T
02:01:014 - delete timing section
~~
Easy
most of the notes of this diff aren't in the downbeat, which i think sounds better if they are
:/ meh
Nice map guys~<3

Lucy-Kaede wrote:

Okay, here we go!

General
You could add a kiai time between i don't like kiai time so i leave it out
00:27:139 ==> 00:38:518
01:04:120 ==> 01:16:922
02:12:393 ==> 02:25:194

At the start of the song where you switch from soft to normal hitsounds to place a clap/finish etc, have the normal volume set to 60% to better match the volume level of soft at 80% i guess that makes sense


Easy
00:08:649 (1,2,2) - The finishes on these notes do sound good using normal hitsounds instead of soft, but the volume increase due to soft>normal is pretty loud. I would make the hitsounds be 60% normal instead of 80% normal. yup

00:27:495 (1) - Should really move to 00:27:139.
And
00:30:340 (3) - to 00:29:984
Which would mean (2) moves to 00:29:273.

00:50:253 (1) - Start the spinner at this time. (Matches previous notes not being on the big white tick, and the lyrics)
00:52:742 (1) - Continue to end it at this point.

If you decide to add the above kiai, start a note at 01:04:120. (Imo, map this beat anyway)

01:29:723 (1,1) - I would remove combos, don't seem necessary but your call.
01:32:923 (1) - Move the spinner to this time, keep ending where it was.
02:12:393 (1) - Map this beat. (Again imo/kiai thing)
nop to everything else
Lilac's Normal
=>(Start) - same volume suggestion of 60% @ normal.

00:29:984 (4) -
00:35:674 (3) - These could suit new combos.yeah. kinda agree

01:07:676 (5) - Heeey. Move the end point up 1 grid to match the start. (Saw it ingame ._.) seems fine to me.
01:15:499 (6) - Could use 80% normal finish. Up to you nah

01:49:636 (4) - Same as at 0:24:xxx ~~
01:55:325 (3) - These could suit new combos. ~~
Actually, for this and the one at 24:
02:12:749 (2,1) -
02:19:505 (4,1) - You have a NC's here, which is very similar to the other times. Should NC the others, or remove this one ^^
(I like it with the nc )


Dark_Ai's Hard
00:05:804 (8) - move to x:232 y:240 to sit under (4), I know it's level with (1) now, but yeah nah. its better under (1) imo
00:41:719 (6) - NC
00:44:563 (4) - NC done both
NC's to match the combo's at 00:45:986 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3).

00:54:164 (7,8,9) - Replace these with a 1/1 repeating slider? (Sounds much better ) nop~

You would probably think of this, but hey why not

00:56:298 (3,4) - Ends of these sliders dont match up. You may need to turn off grid snap if you want them to. nazi modding o/
02:02:437 (7,8,9) - Same as above, and 1/1 repeating slider is nice. nop~
02:04:570 (3,4) - Also same as above, ends dont match up. tweaked as well

Insane
This is just me, but I prefer circle size (4) for insane's. Although, I can't play them anyway (//_-) didn't change /o/

00:12:738 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Do something with this stream. nop~

Example

This would look much nicer using grid level 4, and using less curves, but making them taller and wider.l

00:20:383 (2) - This note is under the accuracy, I would move it down a little to avoid. ....w/e
00:59:320 (1) - The end of this slider is under the hp bar. I would move it (and the combo ofc) down a little to avoid this. >_> moved i think?
02:08:126 (5,6) - Both of these notes are underneath the hp bar. barely >_< but w/e moved down a bit

Well, thats about it for now!

[Te][Amo] wrote:

Hi There here is my mod (I apologize for the late Mod Study doesn't want me to mod) fair enough. thanks for remembering

General:

- Add MarioBros777 to the tags since Lilac have ranked maps whit that name i dunno. the point of that was to help find a mapper who had recently changed their username. Lilac changed his name a while ago. none the less, i'll ask him anyway

- About the hitsounds i think it wold be great this clap http://puu.sh/kVQ3 its fits whit the song meh :/

Easy

00:12:916 (1) - Add finish ~
00:38:518 (3) - Add note whit finish or Start break there http://puu.sh/jKnx makes sense
00:49:897 (1) - Add soft finish or normal ~
01:28:300 (1,1,1) - Anti jumps uhmm maybe not so good idea try whit sliders http://puu.sh/jKsC no. i like it as it is. shouldn't be too confusing
01:32:567 (1) - Add finish ~

Lilac's Normal

Your diff have a unsnnaped inheriting sections at :

SPOILER

00:09:280
00:09:458
00:10:702
00:10:880
00:12:124
00:12:302
01:28:915
01:29:093
01:30:337
01:30:515
01:31:759
01:31:937

these have all ready been mentioned. it doesn't matter if they aren't snapped. the effect is still there so its fine
01:01:631 (1) - Add clap at the begin, remove clap at the end
01:02:343 (2) - Add clap
01:02:698 (3) - Remove clap claps done
01:15:499 (1) - Add finish
01:28:300 (1) - Add finish at the begin
01:35:412 (1) - Add finish finshes not done

Dark_Ai's Hard

Distance Snap is 0,0x :l lol. doesn't really matter

00:37:629 (1) - Add finish done
00:38:696 (x) - Remove Break i think its unnescesary nope o/
00:39:941 (1) - Add clap might of done
01:14:433 (7) - Remove Note ? nope o/
02:01:014 (1) - Add finish done
02:06:882 (x) - Add a Note for flow the vocals i'll ask her about that

Insane

00:12:738 (1,2) - confusing space whit the next note maybe i haven't seen anyone get confused by it before :/
01:01:809 (3) - Move 1 grid to the rightfor make a best star shape
01:01:987 (4) - Move 1 grid to the left for make a best star shape i think its fine as it is

The Mapset It good But maybe try to mix the music whit the hitsounds

Good Luck ! and Star !

Kawayi Rika wrote:

[Insane]

1. 00:23:050 (4,5,6) - Move 1 grid down(symmetry).
2. 00:27:851 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Make a symmetry.
3. 01:04:120 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
4. 01:05:543 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
5. 01:46:791 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
6. 00:35:674 (1,2,3,4) - ^and move to center?
7. 00:34:251 (4,5,6) - Move 1 grid right(symmetry).
8. 00:37:274 (2) - Move 1 grid left(symmetry).
9. 00:53:453 (4,3) - Try perfect stack end point.

i did a couple of them. but not all

[Dark_Ai's Hard]

1. AR+1 much better play with me. ok
2. 00:05:804 (8) - Move 1 grid left.
3. 00:07:227 (3) - ^
4. 00:38:696 - Remove too short Break time. ok
5. 00:53:275 (3) - This note should move to here 00:53:986.

That's all ~

Good luck

Lissette wrote:

Re-check~

Insane
00:21:806 - 00:27:495 - I like the finishes pattern you used, but i think you missed some....
00:23:228 (5) - add finish
00:24:650 (2) - start point ^
00:25:361 (1) - start point ^
00:26:073 (2) - ^ all added
00:49:719 (2,3) - I don't like how this finishes sounds i don't know why they were there :/
00:52:742 - 00:58:431 - in the other parts like this you used some soft-claps too, why you didn't here? an excellent question. sadly i have no idea xD
00:58:787 (2) - start point add finish
00:59:320 (1) - end point ^
01:01:987 (4) - add finish
01:03:054 (2) - ^
01:03:765 - ^ (those finishes are like the pattern you used at the start, that would be nice if you use here, since the song calls for it ^^) yeah. I gathered that much. all added
01:06:610 (6) - fix this wrong spacing this had all ready been noted in the last mod and has all ready been fixed
01:09:099 - add note
01:41:102 to 01:46:435 - this part should have the finishes too *.* yup~
01:54:614 (2) - move to the left so is centered with prev slider ok~
01:55:325 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - center this combo too? fair enough
02:15:949 (2) - remove reverse, if you do, place next note farther to fix spacing nah
forgot to ask if you wont add kiai?

Easy
01:04:476 (1,2,3,4) - center it? tehehe no

EDIT: haven't check other two diffs~ have to go T.T thats ok. i can wait

Lissette wrote:

rest of re-check

Dark_Ai's Hard
00:16:827 (1) - remove new combo hai~
00:43:496 (2) - remove slider whistle
00:44:919 (2) - same did both
Same suggestions about finishes as Insane diff i dunno. maybe later if its brought up again
01:28:300 - add note? i'll keep that part to the vocals only
01:36:479 (1) - remove new combo hai~
01:57:459 (1) - same :3

roxkyuubiforever wrote:

Easy
00:16:472 - Can't help but to feel that there should be a note here... And don't worry, I don't think newbies will have any trouble hitting it. True. If its mentioned again, I'll consider it, But for now, I like it as it is all ready. Same with the rest of these suggestions
00:21:450 - I think that a note here will help new players to identify the rhythm transition... same with 01:41:102 The hell, I thought I all ready did that o.O Re-added
00:53:453 - Same as 00:16:472
01:36:123 - ^
02:21:994(1) - Please, remove the New Combo. ~~

Lilac's Normal
00:58:787 (2) - It feels misplaced... Move it up 1 or 2 level 3 grids, maybe? I think its fine
01:06:965 (3) - On the other chorus you used New Combos on parts like this, so I think that you should start combos on these parts on the whole song, or remove from all of them. Fixed
01:58:170 (1) - Remove New Combo. Left it as it was. I like it better as its own combo

Insane
00:34:962 (1) - remove New Combo. The other similar parts are like this. All most denied that, then looked again. So fixed that and also changed another part as well

yey

Azure_Kite wrote:

Here's my mod, sorry it took a while >< its ok

Suggestion
Issue. Please Fix

[Dark_Ai's Hard]

00:06:160 (1,2) - These days I wouldn't recommend putting a note at the end of a slider like this, as it's confusing and misleading. I've left this as it is. I think theres enough time between the notes so people shouldn't get confused. and if they do......hard rock >_>

Nexy wrote:

These are all suggestions. Do what you want with them.

Easy:
00:21:450 (3) - Whistle ok

Why did you stop using normal-hitnormal after the 2nd break? i did?? lol

Lilac's Normal:
00:27:495 (2) - Whistle on whole slider? left these as they are
00:33:184 (2) - ^
00:50:608 (3) - The claps sound bad here. You can try replacing them with soft whistles. If you do, try adding a note on 00:52:386 with a soft whistle. left as it is
01:47:147 (2) - Whistle on whole slider?
01:52:836 (2) - ^
Dark Ai's Hard:
00:02:960 (1) to 00:13:272 (3) - Soft whistles sound better than the claps here.
00:39:941 (1) to 00:50:253 (3) - ^
01:28:656 (1) to 01:32:923 (3) - ^ done~

Insane:
Didn't find anything. D: \:D/

-Bakari- wrote:

hai~hai!

[General]
:3

[Easy]
00:21:806 (1,3,1) - can confuse some beginners? overlaps with hitbursts ~_~ its fine
00:54:164 (1) - a bit too far away from spinner? i'm assuming you mean time wise? meh
01:11:588 (3,4) - can you avoid overlap? not a big problem.. but w/o overlap looks much better, imo keeping
01:58:170 (1) - whistle? hitsounds are good enough to me
02:23:772 (1) - a bit nazi but i still want to point this thing out. can you avoid overlap of sliders end and start? like this? nope \:D/

[Normal]
tickrate 1? ~_~ ok
01:15:499 (5) - maybe clap or finish here? same as before

[Hard]
clear >.<

[Insane]
00:47:052 (6) - finish? nope~

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

blah-blah-blah. here's your

Lizbeth wrote:

Hellow ~~


[Insane]
shit..i should of check this off as i was going x.x
00:02:960 (1,2,1,2,3) - center this pattern in the chart maybe, looks kinda randomly placed right now... also you could center next slider. yeah ok
00:10:427 (3) - make a similar curve as prev slider? just to keep consistence, and unstack it maybe for the same reason. ^
00:11:849 (2) - This overlapping looks a bit weird, why not do the same you did here: 00:07:049 (1) - also too keep a consistent set pattern. And also this slider should be in normal hitsound like others you did before. ^
00:16:827 (1) - remove new combo, all this circles belong to same pattern so should be in the same combo aswell nah, i added that nc there on purpose and so it shall stay :3
00:22:517 (1) - same as above ok
00:23:939 (7,8) - why not put his in jumps as you did here: 00:18:250 (1,2) - laziness?? i dunno. changed though
00:25:361 (1) - remove new combo, same reason i mention before ok
00:46:697 (4) - remove note
00:50:075 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This should have normal hitsounds
00:53:808 (1) - remove new combo, same reasons I said before
00:57:009 (1) - same as above
00:59:320 (1) - ^
01:03:409 (3) - Doesn't really fits, replace with two circles at 01:03:409 and 01:03:765
01:10:521 (2,3,4) - The placement of this 3 circles always bug me while playing, could you separate it from slider starts? http://puu.sh/V3zK <--looks messy like this
01:14:610 (1) - remove new combo nop
01:32:745 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - normal hitsounds oops fixed
01:36:479 (1) - remove new combo
01:42:168 (1) - ^
01:45:013 (1) - ^did all 3....i think
01:46:258 (6) - delete note, and unstack the next circle no change
01:46:791 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - Why stacked? you unstacked before, I recommend to unstack this too, is nicer to play aswell. >_<" i'm happy with it stacked like that
01:48:213 (1) - remove new combo and add it here 01:48:924 (4) - i think i did that
01:49:813 (2) - remove note nop
02:02:259 (1) - remove new combo
02:04:926 (1) - ^
02:05:993 (1) - ^
02:10:615 (1) - ^ i think i did all those
02:15:949 (2) - remove a repeat nah, i like that repeat
I think you should improve hitsounds, making a consistent pattern through the map. all ready talked to your sister about hitsounds. i just really don't care about the hitsound quality to bother making an effort to have them sound nice. it all sounds like ear rape to me >_<

[Dark_Ai's Hard]
Dunno, I'd prefer a SV slower, but oh wellp.
00:07:049 - add note yeah ok
00:27:495 (3) - I dont like long sliders with reverse in the most dynamic part of the song, I'd prefer to see a pattern with more movement. mmmmmm...i think this one is out of my judgement. i'm gonna leave but i'll talk to Ai about it
00:59:142 (2,3,4) - align those better, I'm not really picky with stuff like this, but I noticed this while playing. so (2) 1 grid to the left :/ changed
01:04:476 (2) - same of the long sliders I mentioned before (same for all like this) Same as before
01:08:210 (6,7,8) - mmm Doesnt fit well imo, why not do the same as Insane errrr..maybe i should talk to her about that as well ._.
01:28:300 - add note here i kinda like that part as it is
02:07:415 (2,3,4) - Align those aswell~ yeah ok

[Lilac's Normal]
Same thing about the long sliders with reverse in the chorus, I didn't like it. not as fussed about that here since its a Normal
01:43:235 (5) - should be farther yeah ok
Nothing else here

[Easy]
I think distance between objects should be smaller, 0.8x would work perfectly in my opinion. yeah i like my maps with 1.0x the sliders and circles have the same 1/1 spacing if that makes sense
00:27:495 (1) - that whistle in the entire slider sounds noisy @_@, lower the volume or just remove the whistle from the slider body. removing them is easier
00:30:340 (3) - same and for all like this, wont point them all. well i'll have no idea which is bad so i'm gonna make it easy for myself and just remove whistles i see on slider bodies
01:04:476 (1,2,3) - align them better, I noticed on gameplay >_<
01:07:321 (1,2) - Dunno, I don't like overlaps in easy its not that bad imo
01:11:588 (3,4) - same as above again, i think its fine
01:28:300 (1,1,1) - put them in same combo oh right, whoops. fixed
01:41:102 (4,1) - that was confusing to play, maybe just remove 4 (4) is there for the lead-in to the off beat
01:47:147 (1,2) - same of the overlapping again, i think its fine
You should have the same sections with normal hitsounds as Insane here. D:

That's all for now ~ hope it helps <: it did <3 thanks a lot

deadbeat wrote:

Lizbeth wrote:

I think you should improve hitsounds, making a consistent pattern through the map. all ready talked to your sister about hitsounds. i just really don't care about the hitsound quality to bother making an effort to have them sound nice. it all sounds like ear rape to me >_<

1. Increase OD by 1 tick to balance with the difficulty settings.

1. 00:58:431 (4,1) - I would try to avoid such kind of stacks since they might be confusing for beginners.
2. 01:49:991 (1,2) - So many slider repeats might be confusing to read for beginners and also boring to play, try to make something else instead.

1. Increase OD by 1 tick to balance with the difficulty settings.

1. 01:42:168 (3,4) - Spacing is wrong here, check it out.

1. Reduce OD by 2 or 3 ticks, it's extremely high right now.

1. 00:11:316 (1,2) - Stack here could be improved.
2. 00:56:653 (5) - Add a NC here due to the jumpy pattern, so it's easier to notice.
3. 01:03:409 (3) - CTRL+G on this slider would improve the flow a lot.