SakiK wrote:

リクエストがありましたのでー

が、全然問題見つかりませんでした；；ので全て好みの提案です
[General]
あまり自信がありませんが・・・曲名正しくは　beloved　かと
http://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E8%A5%BF% ... B%E3%83%8A
英題の頭文字についてはわからないので、間違っていたら笑ってやってください beloved に変えました！

[Easy]
00:57:811 (4) - 間のfinish削除？　ok

[Insane]
01:15:742 (3) - clap追加? ok
01:22:983 (4) - 頭にclap追加 ^

少なくてすみません・・・頑張ってください！

Natteke wrote:

Great mapset! Good job.

Nothing really to mod here except new combos are a bit random, try to keep them consistent!

Insane:

01:19:363 (5) - New combo ok, add
01:19:880 (1) - Revome new combo ok,
01:20:569 (5) - New combo ok, add
01:26:087 (3) - New combo ok, add

SakiK wrote:

[Bless' Hard]

00:26:868 - New combo? ok
00:47:466 (5) - ＾ok

y u c a wrote:

Bless's Hard
oh you really love this song xD yes, i really love this xD

00:03:328 (4) - add default normal finish no change
00:06:087 (4) - ^ no change
00:08:845 (4) - ^ no change
00:14:363 (1) - ^and remove whistle no change
00:50:225 (1) - ^ i add a default soft finish, i think it's better

y u c a wrote:

Normal

00:03:328 - のーまるデフォルトフィニッシュ ok
00:06:087 (3) - ^ ok
00:08:845 (3) - ^ ok
00:28:156 - ^ ok
00:50:225 (4) - ^ ok
01:01:259 (5) - ^ ok


Insane

00:03:328 (1) - のーまるデフォルトフィニッシュ追加 ok
00:06:087 (1) - ^ ok
00:08:845 (1) - ^ ok
00:14:363 (1) - ^ ok
00:17:121 (1) - ^ok
00:19:880 (1) - ^ ok
00:28:156 (5) - ^(音量50%じゃおっきいかもなので40%くらいがいいかもです) 変えました！
00:34:707 (6) - 00:34:535に移動のほうが合ってると思います！ ^
00:40:397 (2) - ｽﾗｲﾀﾞｰの頭にSC1フィニッシュ add
00:40:914 (3) - SC1フィニッシュ add
00:42:983 (8) - 00:42:811に移動のほうが合ってるかもー 変えました！
00:43:156 (x) - note追加 add
00:50:225 (7) - ﾆｭｰｺﾝﾎﾞ、のーまるデフォルトフィニッシュ ok
01:25:397 (2) - これの方があってるかも？ 2番目の使います！

SPOILER

はじまりが01:25:225それか

01:28:156 (2) - ^　^


ganbare~~

val0108 wrote:

[Insane]
00:13:328 (1) - これと左右対称に00:11:949 (1) - ok
01:25:052 (2,4) - これと重ねよう01:23:673 (2) - ^

[normal]
01:34:363 - Re new combo ok
01:28:845 (2) - new combo add

いい譜面

val0108 wrote:

[Bless's Hard]
00:06:087 (4) - x256 y64 ok
00:08:845 (4) - ^ ok
01:34:363 - add note sorry~ sounds strange

vivicat wrote:

Hi~
Come here from Bless.

All suggestion:
[Bl] what?! D:
00:11:949(1) - the 2nd point up 2 gird =-= ok
00:14:363(1) - normal-hitfinish at beginning? add default soft-finish at beginning
00:41:604(8) - finish at end no change
01:30:225(4) - remove clap ok

nice song and map >~</// がんばってください☆

vivicat wrote:

Hi~
Come here from Bless.

All suggestion:
[Insane]
00:40:387(2) - the 2nd point up 2 gird ok
01:15:052(2) - remove clap ^
01:15:742(3) - clap ok, add
01:27:121(7) - whistle ^
01:31:604(1) - clap at beginning ^
01:34:190(6) - clap at end ^

[Normal]
00:06:087 (3) - tune the hitsound lines a little early then the note ok, change
00:08:845 (3) - ^ ^
00:50:225 (4) - ^ ^

nice song and map >~</// がんばってください☆

• Tagにloveが入ってる難易度と入ってない難易度があるので統一してください

1. 00:55:052 (2) - move 1 grid under
2. 01:11:259 (1) - remove new combo
3. 01:13:673 (3) - まだ対称形に見えないのでgrid snapをlv4もしくは外して調整してみては？
4. 01:27:466 (1) - remove new combo
5. 01:34:363 (T) - 緑線のresnap

1. 01:34:363 (T) - 緑線のresnap

1. 00:30:914 (7) - まだ対称形に見えないのでgrid snapをlv4もしくは外して調整してみては？
2. 01:03:673 (1) - ^
3. 01:23:673 (2,4) - remove whistle
4. 01:34:363 (T) - 緑線のresnap

banvi wrote:

[General]

• Tagにloveが入ってる難易度と入ってない難易度があるので統一してください 統一しました。

[Normal]

1. 00:55:052 (2) - move 1 grid under ok
2. 01:11:259 (1) - remove new combo ok
3. 01:13:673 (3) - まだ対称形に見えないのでgrid snapをlv4もしくは外して調整してみては？ 対称系にしました。
4. 01:27:466 (1) - remove new combo ok
5. 01:34:363 (T) - 緑線のresnap ok

[Bless' Hard]

1. 01:34:363 (T) - 緑線のresnap ok

[Insane]

1. 00:30:914 (7) - まだ対称形に見えないのでgrid snapをlv4もしくは外して調整してみては？ 対称系にしました。
2. 01:03:673 (1) - ^ ^
3. 01:23:673 (2,4) - remove whistle ok
4. 01:34:363 (T) - 緑線のresnap ok

良い譜面　(:
fight~

spboxer3 wrote:

[Normal]
00:25:397 (1,1) - too far spacing for the new player~so I think you need let it be among~ ok,

fine~
good map >w<!!
star and good lucky~

S h i a wrote:

Kana <3

I guess your mp3 need a fade out effect like this XD

I tested in your map and, no offset changes. everything works well

nice map set. hope it's ranked soon

vivicat wrote:

がんばってください

-Gamu- wrote:

hi-

request from my queue

[General]

●lead-in 1500 ⇒ 2000 ? ノーチェンジで
●Bless' Hardという難易度名を　Bless's Hard にしてみては？ ok

All suggestions

[Normal]

●00:22:983 (1,2) - 個人的に　http://puu.sh/bkWx ok


[Insane]

●なにもない (ﾉ)・ω・(ヾ)

Good map!!!!!!

kudosはいらないです

Kite wrote:

Heyy >w<
Just some suggestions

[Normal]
00:50:914 (1) - shorten this slider 1/2? (sounds better to me) sorry~
01:02:294 (2) - Hm, maybe try to remove this and add a single beat 01:02:638 Because a person with now on thinks a sound to be correct, I do not change it

[Insane]
very very very awesome difficulty the only thing that sounded weird to me was
01:29:018 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7); you should remap this part to follow the vocals atm it feels off ;w; okay, change

Overall really awesome mapset, theres a slightly big difficulty jump from Normal to Hard, as I stated would have been nicer to stricly follow vocals on that diff. Maybe you can find someone to map a slightly easier Hard difficulty which focuses on vocals :3
If I was MAT I'd bubble this ;w; I am glad when said to you

Kite wrote:

[Bless' Hard]
I was hoping you would map the vocals mainly in this difficulty ;w; Oh well, its good anyways
00:16:604 (6) - remove and add repeat to 00:16:087 (5)
00:19:190 (7) - add repeat
00:22:294 - add beat

Breeze wrote:

西野カナの歌は本当にとても良い聴いですね(๑＞ڡ＜)☆~k

Red : Unrankable/error staff
Blue : Important things that I think you'd better fix
Black : Just suggestions

General

1. SBはありませんですから、Ｆｕｌｌ－Ｓｕｂｍｉｔのことは忘れたか？ ok, full-submit

Insane

1. 01:14:707 (3) - ３００のＨｉｔｂｕｒｓｔはスライダの轨道遮りましたですが、ちょっと移动するのほうがいいです ok,change
   [attachment=1:7b45e]0.jpg[/attachment:7b45e]
2. 00:16:432 (5) - Ｗｈｉｓｔｌｅを消えたのほうがいいですと思います、今はちょっと騒がしいの感じ removed
3. 00:19:190 (5) - ＾ ^
4. 00:57:811 (7) - ＾ ^
5. 01:00:569 (6) - ＾ ^
6. 01:10:225 (4) - Ｃｌａｐを消えた
7. 01:34:190 (1,2) - 0.75ｘＢＰＭのスライダをノート代わりにすると考えておいてもいいかもしれませんね？ okay, changed

[attachment=0:7b45e]1.jpg[/attachment:7b45e]

いい譜面です
星をあげる

Guy wrote:

good map

特に修正すべき所もなく良い譜面だと思います

BakaHuang wrote:

^^ love this song

Breeze wrote:

Bubbled

1. Kiai Time: It should end 1/2 earlier (01:34:363) imo.

1. 00:54:363 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try to keep combos short and consistent in the easiest diff. This combo's length is too long imo, I suggest to use a NC on (4)
2. 01:15:052 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same here, NC on (4)
3. 01:32:638 (1) - This Spinner should end 1/2 earlier (01:34:363), imo.
4. 01:32:638 (1) - This Spinner is bugged, the NC has to be added manually.

1. I'd suggest to rename this diff to [Bless' Hard], looks better imo.
2. 01:15:052 (1,2) - Increase the spacing between these objects please.
3. 01:34:363 (X) - I'd suggest to add a circle here to complete the vocals.
4. Hm... the gap between this and the previous diff is kinda big, it could slide tho...

1. 01:34:190 (1) - Hm, I'm not sure about this slider. Just like the previous difficulties, I'd suggest to keep the last object at: 01:34:363 -

Gonzvlo wrote:

[General]

1. Kiai Time: It should end 1/2 earlier (01:34:363) imo. changed

[Easy]

1. 00:54:363 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try to keep combos short and consistent in the easiest diff. This combo's length is too long imo, I suggest to use a NC on (4) ok, add
2. 01:15:052 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same here, NC on (4) ok, add
3. 01:32:638 (1) - This Spinner should end 1/2 earlier (01:34:363), imo. ok, changed
4. 01:32:638 (1) - This Spinner is bugged, the NC has to be added manually. ok, add

[Insane]

1. 01:34:190 (1) - Hm, I'm not sure about this slider. Just like the previous difficulties, I'd suggest to keep the last object at: 01:34:363 - I changed it into a short slider

thank you <3


Let me know when you're ready.

Gonzvlo wrote:

[Bless's Hard]

1. I'd suggest to rename this diff to [Bless' Hard], looks better imo. fixed
2. 01:15:052 (1,2) - Increase the spacing between these objects please. ok
3. 01:34:363 (X) - I'd suggest to add a circle here to complete the vocals. i delete 01:34:190 (4) - and add a slider from 01:34:190 to 01:34:363
4. Hm... the gap between this and the previous diff is kinda big, it could slide tho...

Gonzvlo wrote:

[Bless's Hard]

1. 01:15:052 (1,2) - Increase the spacing between these objects please.