1. 00:19:304 (x)-Might if I suggest adding a note here? in my opinion, this follows the vocals pretty well. Test it out. See and hear for yourself.

1. 01:23:399 (3)-The way the previous notes overlapping the slider track of slider 3 doesn't look good really. Consider flipping this slider vertically.

20:19 <Doodley> : yo roddie
20:19 <Roddie> : hey
20:19 <Roddie> : there you are
20:19 <Doodley> : yeah
20:20 <Roddie> : let's do this
20:20 <Doodley> : a'ight
20:20 <Roddie> : We're going to be discussing about your insane diff
20:20 <Roddie> : there are some things I can help you improve on
20:21 <Doodley> : good good
20:21 <Roddie> : and make things a little challenging for the player, I should say (:
20:21 <Doodley> : ah, yes, good
20:22 <Roddie> : 00:51:345 (x)-
20:23 <Roddie> : add a note here
20:23 <Roddie> : that way, this pattern can be a note triple
20:23 <Doodley> : oh, it falls on the drums, i see
20:23 <Doodley> : okay
20:23 <Roddie> : yes
20:23 <Roddie> : and then
20:23 <Doodley> : also makes it less of a notenotenote pattern which people have been complaining about
20:24 <Roddie> : really now?
20:24 <Doodley> : yes
20:24 <Roddie> : hm...
20:24 <Doodley> : which is why those repeat sliders are there
20:25 <Roddie> : 00:51:613 (7)-
20:26 <Roddie> : well, might i suggest a note stream here?
20:26 <Doodley> : 1/2 note stream?
20:26 <Roddie> : something like this would help you
20:26 <Roddie> : no
20:26 <Roddie> : a 1/4 note stream (:
20:26 <Doodley> : oh snap
20:26 <Doodley> : actually, that also fits the drums...!
20:26 <Roddie> : that's right
20:27 <Roddie> : it is something like this
20:27 <Doodley> : awesome
20:27 <Roddie> : http://puu.sh/A7ac
20:27 <Doodley> : okay, so 5 note 1/4?
20:27 <Roddie> : yes
20:28 <Doodley> : i might chance around this placement later to accomodate that
20:28 <Doodley> : change*
20:28 <Roddie> : okay, good (:
20:28 <Roddie> : you can add hitsounds to those btw
20:28 <Roddie> : if you like
20:29 <Doodley> : yeah, of course
20:29 <Roddie> : can't forget about the hitsounds, man
20:29 <Roddie> : and that's it
20:29 <Roddie> : we're done
20:31 <Doodley> : oh okay
20:31 <Doodley> : a similar pattern appears arooouuund
20:31 <Doodley> : oh no wait
20:31 <Doodley> : that's a spinner
20:31 <Doodley> : heh
20:31 <Roddie> : lol
20:31 <Doodley> : spinner fits more there
20:31 <Doodley> : it used to be a similar pattern
20:32 <Roddie> : haha
20:32 <Roddie> : its cool, man

Roddie wrote:

Hey there. Just wanted to see if you have been making some improvement. Now, let's see what I can do to help you out further.

Easy

Looks alright to me.

Normal

1. 00:19:304 (x)-Might if I suggest adding a note here? in my opinion, this follows the vocals pretty well. Test it out. See and hear for yourself. Done. Sounds pretty good. Plays pretty fine, too.

Hard

1. 01:23:399 (3)-The way the previous notes overlapping the slider track of slider 3 doesn't look good really. Consider flipping this slider vertically. I was going to do that way earlier but my inner stupidity cried out "but the previous slider was flipped verticallyyyyyy." But it actually makes it looks worse situated the way I had it, so it looks fine when flipped vertically. So yeah, done.

Insane

Here is the chatlog about it.

Chatlog

20:19 <Doodley> : yo roddie
20:19 <Roddie> : hey
20:19 <Roddie> : there you are
20:19 <Doodley> : yeah
20:20 <Roddie> : let's do this
20:20 <Doodley> : a'ight
20:20 <Roddie> : We're going to be discussing about your insane diff
20:20 <Roddie> : there are some things I can help you improve on
20:21 <Doodley> : good good
20:21 <Roddie> : and make things a little challenging for the player, I should say (:
20:21 <Doodley> : ah, yes, good
20:22 <Roddie> : 00:51:345 (x)-
20:23 <Roddie> : add a note here
20:23 <Roddie> : that way, this pattern can be a note triple
20:23 <Doodley> : oh, it falls on the drums, i see
20:23 <Doodley> : okay
20:23 <Roddie> : yes
20:23 <Roddie> : and then
20:23 <Doodley> : also makes it less of a notenotenote pattern which people have been complaining about
20:24 <Roddie> : really now?
20:24 <Doodley> : yes
20:24 <Roddie> : hm...
20:24 <Doodley> : which is why those repeat sliders are there
20:25 <Roddie> : 00:51:613 (7)-
20:26 <Roddie> : well, might i suggest a note stream here?
20:26 <Doodley> : 1/2 note stream?
20:26 <Roddie> : something like this would help you
20:26 <Roddie> : no
20:26 <Roddie> : a 1/4 note stream (:
20:26 <Doodley> : oh snap
20:26 <Doodley> : actually, that also fits the drums...!
20:26 <Roddie> : that's right
20:27 <Roddie> : it is something like this
20:27 <Doodley> : awesome
20:27 <Roddie> : http://puu.sh/A7ac
20:27 <Doodley> : okay, so 5 note 1/4?
20:27 <Roddie> : yes
20:28 <Doodley> : i might chance around this placement later to accomodate that
20:28 <Doodley> : change*
20:28 <Roddie> : okay, good (:
20:28 <Roddie> : you can add hitsounds to those btw
20:28 <Roddie> : if you like
20:29 <Doodley> : yeah, of course
20:29 <Roddie> : can't forget about the hitsounds, man
20:29 <Roddie> : and that's it
20:29 <Roddie> : we're done
20:31 <Doodley> : oh okay
20:31 <Doodley> : a similar pattern appears arooouuund
20:31 <Doodley> : oh no wait
20:31 <Doodley> : that's a spinner
20:31 <Doodley> : heh
20:31 <Roddie> : lol
20:31 <Doodley> : spinner fits more there
20:31 <Doodley> : it used to be a similar pattern
20:32 <Roddie> : haha
20:32 <Roddie> : its cool, man

And that's about it. Give me a call when you are finished looking through my mod.

N a n o wrote:

这图都rank了?没天理
oh my god this map was ranked!!!!!!it's not science!

Doodley wrote:

HAHAHAH YESSS

SO MUCH WOORRRRRK

AAAAAAAAAAA OH MY GOD

L_P wrote:

not going to say about how bad the map is.....

but i like the song and the funny storyboard haha