Katsuri wrote:

[General]

1. Nice SB, but I have some problems here:
   1. 
      Images you have in folder without use: Okay, I fixed all of these unless otherwise excepted.
      ina.png
      intro.png
      intro2.png This is going to be used as a Diff Specific for Mashley's guest difficulty.
      lyrics\mound.png
      lyrics\out.png
      moon.png
      numbered.png
      piledup.png
      space.png The story behind this was that the stars were a seperate image and had two overlay to create paralax scrolling, but it caused far too much stress on the SB Load so I axed it and fused these two images together, forgetting space.png existed.
      this.png
      to one.png
      town.png
      
      Images you have in folder without code:
      cant.png No, this is used. It's a black version of cant2.png and appears at 00:40:560.
      tmbg.png tmbg.png has code. It's used as the thumbnail and background image during song selection, but not used within the beatmap.
      
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      Remove this images and Full-Submit
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      Things you have in-code but it's not on your folder:
      i've.png This is used at 01:51:453 and is in my folder. Does it not show up for everybody else?
      kaia.png
      lyrics\a.png
      they.png
      
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      Remove it from your code
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Easy

1. Here I suggest you to set the tick rate to 2, because this way you can hear the constant 1/2 rhythm on slider ticks. It's very recommended by Great mappers like RJ, SG, Larto, DC, NS and others. Done. Sounds especially sexy on this difficulty.
2. 01:16:256 (3) - Space it just to avoid the ugly overlapiness. Done.
3. 01:17:684 (7,1,2,3) - Such a weird pattern with bad overlaps and bad flow. I suggest you to forget the symmetry in this case and make it something like this. Yeah, that's much better.

Overral Grade: 8.7 Huh, the Easy difficulty is the best in the map set? Weird, I put a lot more into Insane.

Normal

1. Same as Easy about Tick rate. Done.
2. I can't say much for you here, a lot of weird overlaps and bad flowing, try to improve it.. Yeah, it's not the best difficulty. I consider myself good at Easy diffs and Insane diffs, but not much in between. You probably would have flipped shit if you saw my Hard.

Overall Grade: 5.6

Hard This is an Insane, not a Hard...

1. Tick rate 2.... Done.
2. 00:17:697 (1) - Space it correctly to avoid the weird overlapiness. Oh, thank you. Sometimes when I shift some patterns around (which I did with the previous combo) I don't recheck afterwards because I'm stupid.
3. 00:19:483 (3,4,5,6) - Make it something like this would be better for visualize the pattern and make it more playable. It's visual appealing and follows drums too. jesus christ that sounds fucking awesome holy shit
4. 00:48:399 (8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I don't think notenotenotenotenotenotenotenotenotenotenotenotenotenotenotenotenotenotenotenotenotenotes sections are good, try to use some sliders to make it more playable. The way it is now is really boring. Hmm. It's meant to go with the instrumental background (the same one as the beginning) but I do see what you mean. I'll look into shifting it around.
5. 01:11:970 (7) - Boring to play imo. All I can say about slider repeats is to avoid more than two. CDFA pointed this out too so I'm going to change it. Reduced the repeats to two and added two notes afterwards. Actually sounds particularly better.
   01:57:684 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Same as 00:48:399 (8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
6. Instead of making the notenotenotnoentoentoento sections, add spinners since this difficulty has no spinners. Buh. I hate spinners and prefer the notenotenote sections. I'll replace it with a spinner but don't expect it to stick around long.

Overall Grade: 7.6

iMercurial wrote:

Finish this or I'll kill you.

Katsuri wrote:

Hard This is an Insane, not a Hard...

ziin wrote:

so the storyboard commands MX and MY are buggy but perfect for this map. Since they are buggy however, we won't use them, and instead just fix your storyboard and all the work you put into it (far too much).

Open the .osb file and change the skyline.png files to all have the same Y value. 188 and 145 for the jump looks good.
M,0,16275,17703,246,191,327,191
M,0,17703,17793,327,191,332,150
whenever you see something like that in the storyboard, change the ~191 number to exactly 188, and the ~150 number to exactly 145. If you really want to be precise, change the X values too.

00:26:269 - johnny's "j" has the top cut off because it's black on black. Move both down a little bit.

01:49:113 - make sure this is perfectly centered or scale it up 1.1x. The bottom right corner isn't being covered properly.

In the future, remember that loops are very easy to use and very quick to make:
_L,6453,20
__M,0,0,179,180,309,180,324
__M,0,179,357,180,324,180,309
This will replace all the bouncing hearse. You don't really need to do it, but just to let you know it's there. After 7 repeats, it will lose 1 millisecond, so you'll have to restart it every so often.

SB looks neat, just has horrible coding.

[normal]
00:25:912 (2) - spacing
01:11:970 (6) - 2x repeating sliders are terrible. Split this up into 2 sliders or repeat and circle

That's it, but I may recheck it. I was tired when I modded.

wcx19911123 wrote:

[General]
I think the timing is a bit off, I just don't know why you set 3 red timing sections with the same BPM.. and I'm sure the timing is off at song's ending. plz find some timing pro to make timing perfect

ikari_kyon wrote:

1st timeline
BPM: 168,000
Offset: 555

2nd timeline (BPM reset)
BPM: 168,000
Offset: 29110

3nd timeline ( BPM reset, YEAH other BPM reset!)
BPM: 168,000
Offset: 40542

4th timeline (slowdown)
BPM: 144,000
Offset: 133399

nothing more to do here, just change the timing, starrrr <.<

wcx19911123 wrote:

[sb]
tmbg.png isn't used, remove it It's used as the background of the map during menu selection and as the thumbnail on the website. It has coding within the storyboard so as to show up as the menu background and thumbnail, but it's not used within the storyboard. For reference. I think that AIBAT picked that up for you, because it picked it up for me as well when I used it, and it did catch some files that I missed, but tmbg.png is indeed used:

//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
Sprite,Background,TopLeft,"tmbg.png",0,0

[Easy]
I suggest OD-1 and HD-1, the setting now is kinda high as an Easy diff Done.
00:19:840 (4,1) - wrong spacing here Good catch. Done.
00:29:110 (1,2,1,2) - why not ctrl+h? the anti-jump here is kinda confusing to read imo That was a mistake. Done.
00:46:256 (4,1) - wrong spacing here Only by 1 grid. But done.
01:51:256 (3,4) - plz change to slider, 1/2 click is really too hard to play in an Easy diff Fixed.

[Normal]
HD-1 OD-1 CS-1 plz, the setting now is too high as a Normal diff Done. I definitely agree with you on the CS-1, it was far too small.
00:17:697 (1,2) - the spacing is really confusing, it makes people think 2 is at 00:19:304 - , plz try a better pattern here to fix the spacing issue Done. Completely changed the pattern. (1) also looks a little better as a slider.
00:25:554 (1) - ^ Done.
00:48:399 (6) - better to ctrl+j here and fix the spacing then, or the slider is kinda hidden, confusing imo Oh, didn't catch that. I just changed the slider into a 123 stack instead.
01:11:970 (6) - I suggest repeat 1 time less and add a note at 01:13:041 - , slider repeat more than 1 time is hard to read when it end for newbies Done.
01:30:541 (4,5,6) - wrong spacing here.. Oh, that was a mistake. Fixed.
01:40:363 (5,6) - change into 1 slider? sound better imo If you meant push the slider back and remove (5), then extend the slider, then yeah, I did that.
01:43:041 (4,5,6) - ^, it's up to you Same thing.
01:54:828 (5,1) - don't use huge jumps in a Normal diff, really too hard to read/play Oh, sorry, that was a mistake. I apologize. Fixed.

[Hard]
OD-1? kinda high imo Done.
00:47:327 (5,6,7) - not symmetrical here? Oh, thanks for catching that. Fixed.

[Insane]
HD+1/2 plz, now is really too low Done. +2.
CS-1? I think I set it to 6 a few days ago but never updated. Which I'll set it to. If you're asking to set it to the lowest possible, then hell no.
other seems fine

Easy and Normal still need much more work atm, pay attention to the spacing issues, it kills newbies.. I completely agree with you on that. Normal is a very new difficulty and needs modding.
nice sb
that's all

Starry wrote:

[Easy]

00:17:697 (1) - Hmm Flip this Vertically. Yeah, that was a bad anti jump. Fixed. Also changed the proceeding patterns to accommodate distance snap.
00:48:042 (1) - Not a big issue but can you move this to the left a bit. So the spacing equals to 1.23 Done.
01:55:899 (1) - (Nazi) Move to the left 1 grid. Nah.
01:56:970 (4) - (Nazi) Move it down 5 grids. Nope.
01:57:327 (5) - Move this if you plan on moving the above.
01:51:256 (3) - Revere this. Nope.

[Normal]

00:29:824 (3) - Looks nicer making this slider. facing down. Oh, yeah, definitely. Thanks.
00:34:110 (6) - ^
01:26:970 (3) - ^
01:31:256 (6) - ^
01:14:827 (2) - This slider could be nicer. Fixed.

[Hard]

00:37:681 (1) - Hmm try this. http://puu.sh/v85 HAHAHA. That doesn't lead to a screenshot! It's also quite creepy. But from the second screenshot I know what you mean and I will do that.
01:34:827 (1) - http://puu.sh/v86z

[Insane]

I dislike small circles maybe you can make them a bit bigger? I'm sort of flip-flop on this. I think it looks better at 5, but it's harder at 6. I think I might keep it at 5...

00:08:590 (6) - Can you make this line up with note 5 and 7. It's supposed to be curved.
01:16:256 (3) - Move this up a bit. I don't like sliders touching sliders like this.

Your map is good. But some of your sliders need to be tidied up and made look nicer. The SB is awesome too :3 Thank you. Haven't heard anything bad about the SB.
I guess I can give you a star.

If you have some time you can mod this? t/82215 Thanks! I'll look into it.

[Tsukasa] wrote:

Hi~

Easy:

00:14:840 (3) -- Remove the whistle sound at the end Done.
00:23:412 (6) -- Better off with finish than whistle
00:25:912 (2) -- Distance snap this, this is to near imo It's fine. I think it may have been changed while you were modding.
01:08:756 -- Add a note here Okay.
01:22:684 (1) -- Put finish sound on the end Done.
01:41:870 (1) -- Add finish sound here Did this and removed the finish sound on the previous slider.
01:43:399 (5) -- Add a finish sound at the end Did this, but removed the finish at the beginning. I don't want too many finishes.
02:11:970 (1) -- This spinner is pointless here These aren't pointless. They're there to map the outro of the song without causing timing and rhythm problems involved with mapping. I want to map this section as a finale, and admittedly I don't want them skipping the ending on the storyboard, but it's kind of hard to map for easier difficulties. I'll try and map it without the spinner.

Normal:

00:38:395 (6) -- Move this somewhere else Done.
02:11:970 (1) -- Same pointless spinner Remapped. These sections are being remapped with the fact that there is a slow down in mind, so they mostly involve sliders on the slowdown.

Hard:

02:11:970 (1) -- Same pointless spinner Remapped.

Insane:

Circle Size -1 Already done.
02:11:970 (1) -- Same pointless spinner There is no spinner there. I think you just added this but didn't check to see if there was a spinner there.

meiikyuu wrote:

hello ~stopping by, as thanks for modding my map

feel free to ignore suggestions if you don't like
Nice SB btw

Easy
01:10:899 (2) - add whistle Done.

looks good

Normal
00:33:752 (5) - i dont think u should make this touching 3 since none of the other single notes that are in similar That was a mistake. Fixed.
00:47:684 (5) - remove finish at the end of slider , doesnt rly fit the vocal i think Done.

Hard
01:17:684 (6) - clap at end? Done.

Philippines wrote:

• Easy

1. 00:10:733 (1) - This note is off rhthm. Remove it please. No, it follows the rhythm of the lyrics, which is what the whole map falls on. I'm aware it falls on a red tick, but it seems boring just to have the same three 1/1 notes then a slider pattern done several times throughout the map when it sounds and plays much better when on a red tick. If an MAT tells me to change it, I will.
   
   
2. 00:43:399 (5) - Fix this blanket for better gameplay. Seems fine to me.
   
   
3. 00:46:256 (4) - This too. Done.
   
   
4. 01:10:541 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing. It follows distance snap, but I moved (5) closer anyway.

• Normal

1. Seems fine.

• Hard

1. Seems fine and the rest ~

wingman_dw wrote:

hi~ from #modreqs Oh, thank you!
just suggestions

[Hard]
01:18:934 (1,2) - rearrange please Okay.
01:23:042 (2,3) - don't touch. look bad I moved it, if you're saying the placement was bad?
01:30:541 (1,2,3,4) - ^ (2,3,4) are stacked, so 1 grid right and down. Okay.
01:34:827 (1) - could be nicer Rearranged it.
01:40:542 (1) - fmm, move to x:176y:240? Done.

[Insane]
01:14:827 (1,2,3,4,5) - please fix spacing. I often forget to beat (4) I just moved (4), the spacing was fine.

Nice SB~~~ but...combo...colors.__. Yes, I suppose I should make them more readable.

1. You might want to add your previous username into the tags, as you started the map as stickmeister.
2. You've got 2 .osb files. Remove one.
3. intro1.png, intro3.png, and tmbg.png have a code somewhere in the SB, but aren't used. Please remove them.

1. 00:17:697 (1,2) - Odd overlap between this slider and circle.
2. 00:33:395 (3) - Remove the NC here for consistency.
3. 00:49:113 (4) - Add a finish here. It sounds right.
4. 02:14:232 (2) - Add a whistle to the end of this.

1. 00:21:983 (1,2,3) - Don't stack these, as it may be difficult to read for a player of normal experience. You may also want to turn it into a short reverse slider. Take this note for all triplet stacks you have.
2. 00:33:395 (4) - Add a NC here for consistency.
3. 00:38:395 (3) - The claps on this slider should be on the beginning and end of it.
4. 01:14:827 (2,3) - Odd looking overlap.
5. 01:16:970 (4,5) - ^
6. 01:17:684 (5,1) - ^

1. You should really make the circle size larger. This IS a hard difficulty, after all.
2. 00:33:395 (1,2) - In game, due to stacking, these overlap.

Jacob wrote:

This map is fantastic, man. The SB compliments it nicely.

General

1. You might want to add your previous username into the tags, as you started the map as stickmeister. Done, good call.
2. You've got 2 .osb files. Remove one. Done. I think that was because of my old name.
3. intro1.png, intro3.png, and tmbg.png have a code somewhere in the SB, but aren't used. Please remove them. Removed into1.png and intro3.png. tmbg.png is the background as it shows up as the menu background and thumbnail on the osu website and osudirect. It's not used within the map, only as a thumbnail and menu background. I'm going to give this code in the storyboard.

Easy

1. 00:17:697 (1,2) - Odd overlap between this slider and circle. Only a teensy bit. But I'll move it.
2. 00:33:395 (3) - Remove the NC here for consistency. Good catch.
3. 00:49:113 (4) - Add a finish here. It sounds right. It does!
4. 02:14:232 (2) - Add a whistle to the end of this. Done.

Normal

1. 00:21:983 (1,2,3) - Don't stack these, as it may be difficult to read for a player of normal experience. You may also want to turn it into a short reverse slider. Take this note for all triplet stacks you have. Gotcha. I'm personally not a fan of short repeat sliders, but works pretty well here.
2. 00:33:395 (4) - Add a NC here for consistency. Good catch. I miss these small things a lot.
3. 00:38:395 (3) - The claps on this slider should be on the beginning and end of it. Okay. There was a slider near the beginning that did the same thing; I fixed that too.
4. 01:14:827 (2,3) - Odd looking overlap. Moved it. Also fixed the overlap between (3) and (4) that could cause some problems with readability.
5. 01:16:970 (4,5) - ^ Yeah, fixed.
6. 01:17:684 (5,1) - ^ Also fixed.

Hard

1. You should really make the circle size larger. This IS a hard difficulty, after all. Done.
2. 00:33:395 (1,2) - In game, due to stacking, these overlap. Good catch.

Well done.

1. 00:19:304 (x)-Might if I suggest adding a note here? in my opinion, this follows the vocals pretty well. Test it out. See and hear for yourself.

1. 01:23:399 (3)-The way the previous notes overlapping the slider track of slider 3 doesn't look good really. Consider flipping this slider vertically.

20:19 <Doodley> : yo roddie
20:19 <Roddie> : hey
20:19 <Roddie> : there you are
20:19 <Doodley> : yeah
20:20 <Roddie> : let's do this
20:20 <Doodley> : a'ight
20:20 <Roddie> : We're going to be discussing about your insane diff
20:20 <Roddie> : there are some things I can help you improve on
20:21 <Doodley> : good good
20:21 <Roddie> : and make things a little challenging for the player, I should say (:
20:21 <Doodley> : ah, yes, good
20:22 <Roddie> : 00:51:345 (x)-
20:23 <Roddie> : add a note here
20:23 <Roddie> : that way, this pattern can be a note triple
20:23 <Doodley> : oh, it falls on the drums, i see
20:23 <Doodley> : okay
20:23 <Roddie> : yes
20:23 <Roddie> : and then
20:23 <Doodley> : also makes it less of a notenotenote pattern which people have been complaining about
20:24 <Roddie> : really now?
20:24 <Doodley> : yes
20:24 <Roddie> : hm...
20:24 <Doodley> : which is why those repeat sliders are there
20:25 <Roddie> : 00:51:613 (7)-
20:26 <Roddie> : well, might i suggest a note stream here?
20:26 <Doodley> : 1/2 note stream?
20:26 <Roddie> : something like this would help you
20:26 <Roddie> : no
20:26 <Roddie> : a 1/4 note stream (:
20:26 <Doodley> : oh snap
20:26 <Doodley> : actually, that also fits the drums...!
20:26 <Roddie> : that's right
20:27 <Roddie> : it is something like this
20:27 <Doodley> : awesome
20:27 <Roddie> : http://puu.sh/A7ac
20:27 <Doodley> : okay, so 5 note 1/4?
20:27 <Roddie> : yes
20:28 <Doodley> : i might chance around this placement later to accomodate that
20:28 <Doodley> : change*
20:28 <Roddie> : okay, good (:
20:28 <Roddie> : you can add hitsounds to those btw
20:28 <Roddie> : if you like
20:29 <Doodley> : yeah, of course
20:29 <Roddie> : can't forget about the hitsounds, man
20:29 <Roddie> : and that's it
20:29 <Roddie> : we're done
20:31 <Doodley> : oh okay
20:31 <Doodley> : a similar pattern appears arooouuund
20:31 <Doodley> : oh no wait
20:31 <Doodley> : that's a spinner
20:31 <Doodley> : heh
20:31 <Roddie> : lol
20:31 <Doodley> : spinner fits more there
20:31 <Doodley> : it used to be a similar pattern
20:32 <Roddie> : haha
20:32 <Roddie> : its cool, man

Roddie wrote:

Hey there. Just wanted to see if you have been making some improvement. Now, let's see what I can do to help you out further.

Easy

Looks alright to me.

Normal

1. 00:19:304 (x)-Might if I suggest adding a note here? in my opinion, this follows the vocals pretty well. Test it out. See and hear for yourself. Done. Sounds pretty good. Plays pretty fine, too.

Hard

1. 01:23:399 (3)-The way the previous notes overlapping the slider track of slider 3 doesn't look good really. Consider flipping this slider vertically. I was going to do that way earlier but my inner stupidity cried out "but the previous slider was flipped verticallyyyyyy." But it actually makes it looks worse situated the way I had it, so it looks fine when flipped vertically. So yeah, done.

Insane

Here is the chatlog about it.

Chatlog

20:19 <Doodley> : yo roddie
20:19 <Roddie> : hey
20:19 <Roddie> : there you are
20:19 <Doodley> : yeah
20:20 <Roddie> : let's do this
20:20 <Doodley> : a'ight
20:20 <Roddie> : We're going to be discussing about your insane diff
20:20 <Roddie> : there are some things I can help you improve on
20:21 <Doodley> : good good
20:21 <Roddie> : and make things a little challenging for the player, I should say (:
20:21 <Doodley> : ah, yes, good
20:22 <Roddie> : 00:51:345 (x)-
20:23 <Roddie> : add a note here
20:23 <Roddie> : that way, this pattern can be a note triple
20:23 <Doodley> : oh, it falls on the drums, i see
20:23 <Doodley> : okay
20:23 <Roddie> : yes
20:23 <Roddie> : and then
20:23 <Doodley> : also makes it less of a notenotenote pattern which people have been complaining about
20:24 <Roddie> : really now?
20:24 <Doodley> : yes
20:24 <Roddie> : hm...
20:24 <Doodley> : which is why those repeat sliders are there
20:25 <Roddie> : 00:51:613 (7)-
20:26 <Roddie> : well, might i suggest a note stream here?
20:26 <Doodley> : 1/2 note stream?
20:26 <Roddie> : something like this would help you
20:26 <Roddie> : no
20:26 <Roddie> : a 1/4 note stream (:
20:26 <Doodley> : oh snap
20:26 <Doodley> : actually, that also fits the drums...!
20:26 <Roddie> : that's right
20:27 <Roddie> : it is something like this
20:27 <Doodley> : awesome
20:27 <Roddie> : http://puu.sh/A7ac
20:27 <Doodley> : okay, so 5 note 1/4?
20:27 <Roddie> : yes
20:28 <Doodley> : i might chance around this placement later to accomodate that
20:28 <Doodley> : change*
20:28 <Roddie> : okay, good (:
20:28 <Roddie> : you can add hitsounds to those btw
20:28 <Roddie> : if you like
20:29 <Doodley> : yeah, of course
20:29 <Roddie> : can't forget about the hitsounds, man
20:29 <Roddie> : and that's it
20:29 <Roddie> : we're done
20:31 <Doodley> : oh okay
20:31 <Doodley> : a similar pattern appears arooouuund
20:31 <Doodley> : oh no wait
20:31 <Doodley> : that's a spinner
20:31 <Doodley> : heh
20:31 <Roddie> : lol
20:31 <Doodley> : spinner fits more there
20:31 <Doodley> : it used to be a similar pattern
20:32 <Roddie> : haha
20:32 <Roddie> : its cool, man

And that's about it. Give me a call when you are finished looking through my mod.