reread my other post. Spacing way too confusing. Use some distance snap, please.

edit: and make it shorter!

I fixed these errors.
But there is a problem with the slider (02:37:77 (1)), and I can't fix it. :/
When you say "make it shorter", you mean only on all difficulty, or just on easy/normal?
And you mean I must remove all circles/.. after a time, or edit mp3 file for make it shorter?
And sorry for my bad english <<;

bump..

bubble again.. i guess..

Thanks. Hope this time I'll get more advice or get ranked. :/

Bump...

If no one looks at this soon, I'll bother m980.

You called??

Easy
00:19:49 (4) - Move this closer to 3.
00:22:77 (5) - Move this closer to 1 (Next Combo)
01:46:67 (2) - Move this down abit more.
02:37:77 (1) - Why is this slider end snapped onto an 1/8 beat? I don't know about this.. But it's probably fine..

Normal
00:48:55 (7,8,1,2) - Put these closer to eachother.
00:50:42 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
00:53:70 (2) - Down abit.
00:58:39 (5,6,7,8,9) - Fix Spacing. Move 5 further from 4, and fix spacing from there.
01:25:11 (3,4,5,6) - Put 3-5 closer to eachother and move 6 so that it is above 5 like it is now.
01:46:67 (3,4,5,6) - Move closer to eachother.
01:52:30 (7,8) - I don't know about this, how about move it closer to 6.

O.O 30 second break.. Shorten??

Hard
00:24:88 (2) - Move up abit.
00:26:05 (7,8) - Move away from 6.
00:28:63 (2) - Move to the right.
01:08:00 (1) - Move the end point so it's not stacked onto the starting point.
01:54:17 (5) - Move this further away from 4.
02:53:00 (1) - Move the end point so it's not half-stacked onto the starting point.
03:04:49 (1,2,3,4,5) - Move these closer to eachother.
04:15:50 (1) - Move the end point so it's not half-stacked onto the starting point.

Insane
01:08:00 (1) - Move the end point so it's not half-stacked onto the starting point.
01:30:50 (1) - Guh.. No.. Just no..
01:46:09 (3,4) - Closer together.
01:46:67 (1,2,3,4) - Closer together.
01:47:38 (1,2,3,4,5) - Closer together.
01:51:36 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:26:52 (1,2,3) - Move these closer together.
04:06:13 (8,9) - Move closer to 7.


{Pop}

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Nya, could you reduce the image file size? 1.17MB is a bit too much for downloading and this will lag the player with older computer.. ^^
convert to JPG please

It's ok. ^^

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I'm waiting for more than 1 month...
Anybody wants to look at it?

Forgive me, but I will finish modding the other difficulties soon. For now, here's Insane.

Insane:
-00:15:740 (3, 4) - This stack is slightly off-center. Move it over to the left a tiny bit.
-00:17:966 (8, 9) - This stack is slightly off-center. Move it over to the left a tiny bit. I'm being an uberbitch, yes, but if everything else is perfectly straight, why not this? :P
-00:22:302 (1, 2, 3, 4) - These shouldn't be stacked. First off, this part should have the same spacing as 00:26:990 (1, 2, 3, 4). So, move 2 closer to 1 and 4 closer to 3, then separate 3 and 4 from those stacks so they're spaced evenly and it doesn't look...weird.
-00:45:740 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13) - I feel like these beats are spaced too closely together. They're spaced just as evenly as the beats at 00:26:990 (1, 2), but they're different timeline lengths. Plus, I think that this spacing is too easy for an Insane map. :P
-00:49:490 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13) - ^
-00:53:240 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13) - ^
-00:56:521 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7) - I do have a few notes to make about this.
A) I like the spacing for these. Use this spacing for the parts I told you to fix at 00:45:740, 00:49:490, and 00:53:240.
B) Start this a bit closer to the end of the previous phrase. Please. That gap there is a tad too large.
C) 00:58:630 (1) - Remove the new combo colour
00:58:865 (2) - Start the new combo here
01:00:740 (10) - New combo mark here
01:00:974 (1) - Remove the new combo colour
-01:04:021 (4) - I feel like there should be a Clap hitsound there.
-01:04:490 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 1, 2, 3) - Remember that spacing suggestion I made earlier? That applies here, too.
-01:05:896 (1), 01:06:833 (1) - Remove the new combo marks from these, since they're all in the same phrase. Sure, it'll make the heart pink, but a maroon-ish heart is fine, too.
-01:11:990 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 1, 2, 3, 1, 2) - See the last two points I made for the information on what to fix, since it's exactly the same thing as before.
-01:19:490 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 1, 2) - Spacing and combo number fixing again, same as before.
-01:26:990 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5, ,6 , 7, 8, 9) - Spacing issue, same as before.
-01:45:740 (1, 2, 3, 4) - These need the same spacing as 00:26:990 (1, 2, 3, 4). It's much too large.
-01:46:677 (1, 2, 3, 4, 1, 2, 3, 4 , 5) - Two things:
A) 01:47:497 (2, 3) - Highlight these on the timeline and nudge them to to the right in the 1/4 divisor.
B) Respace so it has the previously mentioned spacing.
C) 01:47:380 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark from this.
01:47:497 (2) - New Combo mark goes here.
-01:48:552 (6) - New Combo mark.
-01:49:841 (3, 4) - Space this further away from 2.
-01:51:129 (1) - First off, remove the New Combo mark. Second, respace it so it's on the endpoint of the previous slider.
-01:51:365 (1, 2, 3, 4) - Straighten this out, it looks insanely sloppy.
-01:52:302 (1) - Okay, this is lame. You could mirror 01:51:365 (1, 2, 3, 4) here, and that'd be acceptable.
-01:54:177 (1) - This slider is spaced far too close to the end of the previous phrase. Respace it.
-01:55:155 (2, 3, 4, 5) - First off, new combo mark on 2. Second off, highlight this, and space it further from the endpoint of the previous slider.
-01:56:052 (1, 2, 1, 2) - First off, remove the new combo mark from the second 1. Second, space this further away from the previous phrase.
-01:56:990 (3) - New Combo mark here.
-01:56:990 (3, 4) - Straighten out these sliders.
-01:57:927 (5) - New Combo mark here.
-01:58:279 (7, 8) - First off, space it further away from the previous two beats, same spacing as before. Second, straighten this out, so it doesn't look messy. Then respace 9-13 to make them all in the same line they were in before. Hey, speaking of lines...
-01:58:865 (10) - [INTERRUPTION]New combo here.[/INTERRUPTION]
-01:59:216 (12, 13) - ...realign this so that it looks perfectly straight with the rest of the line.
-02:15:740 (this part) - Notes, notes, notes.
A) Individual combo numbers? No. Number this like the part before that was like this.
B) Respace this so it's like the way it was before. (I think the heart can still be done despite having to respace this)
C) Where are the beats on 02:31:911, 02:32:146, and 02:32:380?
D) 02:34:021 (1) - Remove the new combo mark, add a Clap.
-02:34:958 (1, 1, 1) - Remove these New Combo marks.
-02:38:005 (5) - New Combo mark goes here.
-02:44:333 (1, 2) - Respace this so that 1 is closer to the end of the last phrase or that 2 is a jump away (consistency is always needed). Also, remove the New Combo mark from 1.
-02:45:505 (3) - New Combo mark goes here. Also, clean this up so it looks straight, not like a random slider-doodle on a grid-notebook.
-02:52:302 (11) - Space this out further. Consistency, consistency, consistency.
-02:53:005 (12) - New Combo mark goes here.
-03:06:365 (1) - Straighten this out.
-03:08:005 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark.
-03:08:240 (2) - New Combo mark goes here. Also, this is lame. Basically, for the length of this slider and 3, do the same thing you did with 03:04:490 (1, 2, 1, 2).
-03:10:115 (4) - New Combo mark goes here.
-03:11:286 (9) - Shorten this so it's as long as the other sliders, and then make it repeat.
-03:40:115 (9, 10, 11, 12, 13) - Highlight this, and then move from 9 so that 8 and 9 are evenly spaced. New Combo mark on 9, as well.
-03:47:146 (1, 1) - Remove the New Combo marks from these.
-03:47:849 (1, 1, 1) - Remove the New Combo marks from these.
-03:49:021 (4) - New Combo mark here.
-03:49:021 (4, 5, 6, 7, 8, onward) - The old spacing was fine, fix this.
-03:50:139-03:54:279 - Renumber this. Please. All 1s is just...painful. And with the spacing unchanged, I can't differentiate when it gets to the 1/4 stuff and it just sucks. Also, do not start the 1/4 stuff until 03:53:240 and don't end it until 03:54:997.
-04:12:458 (3, 4, 5, 6, 7) - The same spacing issue we've had this entire map. Change it, please.
-04:14:333 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark.
-04:16:443 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5) - Remove the New Combo mark from 1, then stack them at the end of the previous slider's endpoint. If it looks bad while testing the map, set the Stack Leniency to Never Stack or something close to that.

Anyways, so far, you've got quite a bit to fix. Please fix it. Because of this, a star has fallen.

Holy penis, Mogsworth.

Wow.
I'll take my time tommorow to fix these.
Thanks a lot Mogsworth ^^

I think Easy's WAY too long. Most Easy's get cut off somewhere. I'd recommend deleting all beats after 02:00:271 , the song pretty much loops twice and it gets really dull after 2 mins.

Nice song

Great song and mapping ^_^. There's still alot to do though, don't be discouraged. When it's finished, i'm sure it'll be pretty darn good >.<

Nice song, i want it to be ranked soon D:

In the time i'll give a star, i haven't saw any error atm

yes i really hope it gets approved

cool i love this song itll be cool if it gets ranked

Bump :v rank this please

NXTKitKat wrote:

Bump :v rank this please

pls



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