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Megurine Luka - Interviewer

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Megurine Luka
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年6月30日 at 12:05:20

Artist: Megurine Luka
Title: Interviewer
Source: KuwagataP
Tags: Vocaloid2 Vocaloid yutsuki yukari Kiiwa
BPM: 125
Filesize: 6514kb
Play Time: 04:23
Difficulties Available:
  1. Kiiwa's Interview (4.72 stars, 561 notes)
  2. Luka's Interview (4.93 stars, 742 notes)
  3. Yukari's Interview (2.65 stars, 276 notes)
Download: Megurine Luka - Interviewer
Download: Megurine Luka - Interviewer (no video)
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For the first time, Megurine Luka mapping a Megurine Luka song. lol

说我分少的,哼哼送分送死你

Half year map......虽然说以现在自己的眼光看来确实是风格不成熟的map,但我很庆幸自己map了这张图ovo

[Yukari's Interview] - Normal
[Kiiwa's Interview] - Hard
[My Interview] - Insane

My dear Hatsune Miku, will you be my interviewee?
Hatsune Miku_old
沙化
tutuhaha
!!!!!!
沙发怎么被抢了!
Yutsuki yukari
板凳都没了TAT
GiNa
我只要前排就好了.
Grimoire Queen
這首歌很棒:D
JauiPlaY
Hello~
圖完成了記得傳WIP

[General]
osb恩恩別的沒什麼
名字後面何必都加interview呢...Luka's不是看著挺好

[Yukari's Interview]
01:38:968 (5) - 移到01:38:728
01:48:568 (2,3) - 被前面遮了一點,影響美觀
03:12:088 (1) - 呃...好挫...試試看這個吧
236,284,192088,6,0,B|162:337|71:298|35:195|101:108|200:100|253:173,1,420
03:14:248 (x) - 加個note
03:22:168 (1) - 被前面遮了
03:23:608 (3) - ^
03:31:768 (1) - 去掉nc
為什麼kiai和另外兩個難度相比少一段...

[Kiiwa's Interview]
00:38:488 (2) - Finish here sounds noisy for me.
00:46:168 (1) - ^
01:07:288 (6) - Remove the clap.
01:11:128 (5) - ^
01:14:968 (6) - ^
01:39:928 (2) - Add a note with finsh here.
Same suggestions to those kiai part's hitsounds.
02:26:968 (5) - Rotate by 1° clockwise. Don't forget to choose the selection centre.
02:28:888 (5) - ^
03:18:088 (x) - Add a note here.
03:31:288 (x) - ^

[大哥's Interview]
我記得純白note是不能用的
00:46:648 (x) - 加個note
01:00:088 (1,2,3) - 其實這三個clap用得不錯...但為甚麼只有這裏有用?有點突兀的說
03:07:528 (6) - clap.
kiai的clap加法太奇葩了...最后一個kiai的clap完全亂掉了@_@
建議好好修改下

別的沒神馬了
Have my star~
S h i o n
Hi. :)

Yukari's Interview
  1. 00:22:168 (4) - 去掉clap 感觉一开始不用24都加clap比较好一点~
  2. 01:34:168 (3) - 不推荐这样的slider 很容易掉
  3. 03:15:928 (4) - 像H一样加个spinner或者I那样加个break
Kiiwa's Interview
IRC Mod
13:47 <S_h_i_o_n> : ~
13:48 <Kiiwa> : ~
13:48 <Kiiwa> : ahh
13:48 <Kiiwa> : your is moe'er T_T
13:48 <S_h_i_o_n> : 01:03:688 (2,3) - How about moving these a bit up by using x0.1 DS~
13:49 <S_h_i_o_n> : give a feeling of going up ~~
13:49 <Kiiwa> : maybe >_<
13:49 <S_h_i_o_n> : 00:56:488 (1,2,3,4,5) - Here an increasing spacing feels weird to me D:
13:50 <Kiiwa> : because of music...
13:50 <S_h_i_o_n> : ignore me if you don't think so :D
13:51 <Kiiwa> : i need to reDL D:
13:51 *Kiiwa is listening to (Megurine Luka - Interview)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/41017]
13:52 <Kiiwa> : ~_~
13:52 <Kiiwa> : moe song
13:52 <S_h_i_o_n> : yeah~
13:52 *S_h_i_o_n is editing (Megurine Luka - Interview)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/41017]
13:53 <S_h_i_o_n> : moe diff ~
13:53 <Kiiwa> : what diff?
13:53 <Kiiwa> : lol
13:53 <S_h_i_o_n> : yours~
13:54 <Kiiwa> : >//<
13:54 <S_h_i_o_n> : 02:45:568 (T) - silence this ?
13:55 <Kiiwa> : its on purpose...
13:55 <Kiiwa> : decending sounds :D
13:58 <S_h_i_o_n> : 03:48:568 (6,7,1) - make them streams ~? sliders feel so ...
13:59 <S_h_i_o_n> : i'm so noob a modder D:
13:59 <Kiiwa> : you think its wired..?
13:59 <Kiiwa> : your not noob D:!
14:00 <S_h_i_o_n> : yes, even have no response on my 1st attempt
14:00 <Kiiwa> : ?
14:01 <S_h_i_o_n> : maybe 03:45:208 (1) - this spinner distract me ..
14:01 <Kiiwa> : 04:03:928 (4,5) - use it again here
14:01 <Kiiwa> : also, my diff has no streams...
14:01 <Kiiwa> : only this use of sliders..
14:01 <Kiiwa> : be akward to add streams now ^^;
14:02 <S_h_i_o_n> : maybe sliders are more likely to get a miss for me ...
14:02 <Kiiwa> : ww
14:02 <S_h_i_o_n> : especially 1/4 sliders..
14:04 <S_h_i_o_n> : mind my saving this baka irc mod ~?
14:05 <Kiiwa> : ok~!
后来一起检查的时候又发现2个 ww
  1. 02:30:088 (T) - 在这结束kiai time
  2. 03:18:328 (T) - 少根红线

Luka's Interview
  1. 00:07:768 (1) - 叠在00:06:808 (4)的尾部如何~
  2. 00:24:568 (1) - 感觉有点太远了..没反应过来, 放在00:23:608 (4)这然后向上弯~?
  3. 00:42:928 (3) - 这个NOTE放到00:43:168去? 红线上起3连听着比较好~ 01:30:448 (2) - 同~
  4. 01:03:928 (4,5,6,7,8) - 没排直 故意的么
  5. 01:40:168 (1) - RNC 01:40:408 (2) - NC
  6. 01:53:128 (4,5) - Ctrl + R ,交换下位置 感觉更顺~?
  7. 01:56:968 (7) - 不跳大概更好些...
  8. 02:00:808 (6) - 这里到02:10:168 (5) 一小段NC有点乱..
  9. 02:59:608 (1) - 开DS 放在(324,268)左右正好 :D
  10. 03:56:728 (1) - 缩短1/1? 不然时间太短后面的可能吃不准节奏...
That's all.
Star for moe Luka~
spboxer3

[general]

  1. 紅線需統一
  2. combo color最好統一
  3. kiai最好統一

[Yukari's Interview]

  1. 00:13:528 (5) - NC 因為這是最簡單的難度combo不該這麼長
  2. 01:53:368 (4) - NC? ^
  3. 03:12:088 (1) - 調好些 讓他對稱吧

[Kiiwa's Interview]

  1. 00:14:008 (6) - touch HP BAR need fix it~
  2. 00:25:768 (7,1) - not cover all. could fix it?
  3. 00:57:688 (1,2,3) - uneven spacing?
  4. 01:18:808 (1,5) - also stack issue~
  5. 01:37:288 (4,6) - ^
  6. 01:39:928 (x) - add break or spinner here?
  7. 02:09:688 (5) - up 2 gird and left 1 grid looks batter then now :P
  8. 02:28:168 (2,5) - stack
  9. 03:04:408 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - not pretty spacing :(
  10. 03:16:408 (1) - spinner seem start at 03:16:168 -
  11. 03:42:328 (3,4) - stack [I know those are super nazi lol]
  12. 04:22:888 (1,1,1) - why don't add finish hitsound?


[Luka's Interview]

  1. 00:33:448 (9) - 壞掉的圖形阿lol
  2. 01:53:608 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 這根本蛋疼嘛...為什麼3連的spacing這麼近 2連突然這麼遠?
  3. 04:22:888 (1,2,3) - 我是建議這三個都用finish啦...

紅色是unrankable的 一定要改 藍色的是需要討論的問題 黑色就只是建議

乃們這等神mapper都用綠牆禍害人群!!該Ban了!!
Topic Starter
Megurine Luka
Fixed most.

Thanks guys :3 Love you :3333
vivicat
Hi 大哥 :)
via irc
all suggestion.
SPOILER
[Yukar]
01:39:928 (1) - finish at 01:42:808
00:12:568 (3) - down 1 grid(Grid level 4)
[Kiiwa]
moe moe kiiwa
03:18:328 (1) - no use of the green line,delete
01:29:368 (4) - x:124,y:136
01:39:688 (1) - no break after this note?
02:26:968 (5) - overlap the end to 02:26:248 (2)
02:28:888 (5) - ^
03:04:888 (2) - x:189,y:62
[Luka]
送分好
00:20:128 (5,6) - 距离不等距 edit里不明显 打的时候会看出来
00:23:968 (5,6) - ^
00:27:448 (2,3,4) - ^
00:57:568 (7,1) - ^
01:36:928 (4,5) - ^
01:47:968 (3,4) - ^
03:22:648 (5,6,7,8,9) - ^
04:00:928 (2,3) - ^
04:01:888 (6,7) - ^
04:02:848 (2,3) - ^
04:04:768 (2,3) - ^
04:05:728 (6,7) - ^
00:38:488 (1) - whistle
00:41:848 (5) - ^
01:53:128 (4) - 这个whistle应在5上吧?
03:42:568 (7) - 这个长拉条打起来略怪o.o缩短一半吧
02:09:208 (2) - 无用绿线
01:05:368 (1) - kiai部分的音效 clap放在第三小节上感觉略奇葩

不放最后么 比如这样:
01:07:528 (5) - remove clap,
01:08:488 (8) - add clap
01:11:368 (2) - remove clap
01:12:328 (5) - add clap
Scorpiour
Hi there~~mod from queue~~

General:
  1. osb文件没用就删掉吧XD.
Yukari's Interview:
  1. 00:31:048 (1,2,3) - 对于easy/normal难度来说这里可能会造成一点读图障碍,后面也是
  2. 00:46:648 - 这里好像少个note的样子?
  3. 00:50:248 (1,2,3) - 这整个combo节奏好像有点错位,slider结束在了vocal长音的开始处,建议调整下吧
  4. 01:50:248 (4) - 这听着也有点怪,感觉用一个白线-白线的slider会更舒服点吧?
  5. 01:53:608 - 这里应该是少了个note,把后面的slider延长到这里吧,用个折返也可以
  6. 03:22:168 (1,2,3) - 这一段vocal一共7个音很清晰,所以在中间空拍上加个note,并且最好想办法把slider带过的那个节奏补上吧。
Kiiwa's Interview:
  1. Coooooool sliders~~~
  2. 00:20:968 (6,7) - i'd like to select a slider here~~~
  3. 00:21:928 - change(9)to be a note,and the slider start from here to 00:22:408 - ?
  4. 00:22:648 (11) - move to next red line and a NC from here?
  5. 00:53:128 (1,2,1) - confusing a bit here....move (2) to 340:312?
  6. 01:39:928 - what happened here.....?
  7. 03:35:608 (6,7,8,9) - i'd like to remove (6) and move sliders 1/2 tick ahead to follow the vocal
  8. 04:08:968 - add a note here?
  9. 04:09:928 - ^
Luka's Interview:
  1. 00:07:768 (1,2) - 这个跳的感觉有点怪……我觉得这样跳的话可以考虑删掉00:07:528 (5) - ?
  2. 00:40:888 (2) - 虽然能理解这么拉的缘故,但是还是觉得有点怪……停在红线跟着vocal的声音停下可以考虑下吧?
  3. 00:42:808 (2,3,4,5) - 这里中间听来听去应该是少了个音,建议(3)(4)中间加note做成5连吧?
  4. 01:40:408 (2,3) - (nazi)好像尾巴没叠好?
  5. 03:43:288 (9) - 这个clap听得有点别扭,建议拿掉~
差不多就这些啦好华丽的图星星支持下~
Topic Starter
Megurine Luka
Fixed most :3

Thanks
DarkDunskin
M4M - Hopefully not too late.

Suggesting to rename:
Easy -> Yukari's Chat
Hard -> Kiiwa's Interview
Insane -> Luka's Interragation/Examination

It's confusing when all diffs have the same name, even if the star-Rating makes it clear to see how difficult it should be.
It would be nice if you could make a Collab called "Cross-Examination" lol played Phoenix Wright too much

Yukari's Interview:
[*] 03:33:628 (x) - Useless Green Timeline, delete it.
[*] 04:22:888 (5) - Add finish's on slider start and slidertail~

This is a nice Easy, nothing else to say :D

Kiiwa's Interview:
[*] Set the Beat Snap Divisor back to 1/4 when uploading next time please~
[*] 00:12:088 (2) - Slider is almost out of th playscreen, move it up.
[*] 00:13:528 (5,6) - Slider crossing the hp-bar, not so good either, move them a bit down.
[*] 00:40:408 (6) - Slider is almost out of th playscreen, move it up.
[*] 01:17:368 (3) - I'd find it prettier if this note would be moved a bit down so it makes a better curve with (2,4).
[*] 01:35:608 (4,1) - Sliders crossing the hp-bar, move them a bit down.
[*] 01:51:448 (1) - You can curve that slider better if you put the slider end a bit down.
[*] 01:53:848 (8) - Slider crossing the hp-bar, move it a bit down.
[*] 02:45:208 (1,2,3) - Sliders aren't stacking, this is a bug in the editor, fix it with moving (2) and (3) 1 grid down and one to the right.
This is unrankable since stack 0 is not allowed :/
[*] 02:49:048 (1,2,3) - ^
[*] 02:52:888 (1,2,3) - ^
[*] 03:33:628 (x) - Useless Green Timeline, delete it.
[*] 03:34:168 (3,4) - ^
[*] 03:41:848 (2,3) - ^
[*] 04:22:888 (1,1,1) - Add finish's please.

Beautiful hard Diff, just stay in the play-area while mapping okay? ^^

Luka's Interview:
[*] 03:33:628 (x) - Useless Green Timeline, delete it.

All in all a nice map, feed me with kudosu if I could help with my mod~
I will star then.
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
Hi, from cmn & Luka's Love Love Queue

overall nice score brushing map, go go rank it

~ ☆ Yukari's Interview ☆ ~

00:10:648 (5) - 这里加whistle, 头上和reverse arrow
00:14:488 (3) - 头上加whistle
00:26:968 (1) - 和后面的pattern保持一致, 这里用reverse 1/2 slider比较好
00:31:048 (1) - 不叠看起来舒服一点
00:40:408 (3) - 还是slider+note吧 这样看不出来
00:55:768 (3) - 第二个点拉到(88,40) 这个箭头应该朝上好看些
01:10:648 (3) - 这种pattern叠起来不好看 放成三角形吧
01:14:008 (2) - not perfect triangle
02:10:648 (1) - 这个clap是怎么回事
02:19:768 (3) - 这种pattern叠起来不好看 放成三角形吧
03:20:728 (5) - reverse和尾上放clap
03:22:168 (1) - add more curve to this slider
03:28:408 (4,5) - 这里感觉先放note再slider好一点

~ ☆ Kiiwa's Interview ☆ ~

00:18:568 (4) - 这里容易断
00:20:008 (2) - blanket摆好点
00:47:128 (5,6,7,8) - 这个圈摆好看点
00:53:368 (2,1) - ctrl+r...坑爹
01:03:208 (1) - 这跳有点大吧
01:56:488 (3) - 出去了?
02:07:528 (4) - blanket摆好点
03:14:248 (1,2) - 这里不容易看出是1/4?
04:13:288 (2) - blanket摆好点
04:16:648 (6) - 往上摆一点
04:22:888 (1,1,1) - is combo spam necessary?

~ ☆ Luka's Interview ☆ ~

OD -1 貌似不会降分
00:24:568 (1) - 这个跳稍大, 感觉放在(108,248)好点
00:27:688 (4) - slider -> 2 notes
00:52:408 (10) - 既然是送分 用两个note可能好点? 看过不会超分
01:06:328 (3) - 这个reverse往外一点好看
01:31:048 (5) - 0.75x sv?
01:34:888 (6) - 0.75x sv?
01:46:168 (4) - strange pattern, 这个可能好一点 http://up.ppy.sh/files/13-13.jpg
01:51:448 (1,2) - 不对称
01:54:088 (4,5,6,7) - 这spacing是怎么回事
02:04:408 (4) - 这个也不对称
02:48:808 (1,1) - 0.75x sv?
02:58:888 (2) - ^
03:13:528 (7,8,1,2) - 这地方容易路人断啊...
04:06:328 (1,2) - 这两个之间spacing拉大一点

~ ☆ ~ I love da ge = 我爱大哥 ~ ☆ ~
Topic Starter
Megurine Luka
Fixed some. Thanks
Axey
moe luka のワの

general

除了kiiwa的其他难度的音效略轻啊..我觉得可以用60~80

Yukari's Interview

听完后才发现那个不是whis是finish音- - 总之后面的mod你想改的话 你就随便用whis或者finish好了 我感觉区别不大-.-

00:30:088(5,6)-(5) use clap ; (6) use whis?
00:33:208(4)-add clap on head of silder ; add whis on end of silder?
00:34:648~-从这里开始我不太理解为什么要和前面用不同的clap..明明旋律差不多的啊-.- 用一样的话感觉也不错的
00:44:728(4)-change clap to whis
00:45:928(6)-add whis or clap
00:47:128(2)-add clap
00:48:088(4)-add clap
第一段kiai clap 用c2
01:39:688(6)-add whis
01:50:248(4)-add clap
01:51:208(5)-add clap
01:55:048~01:57:928-和00:45:928~00:48:088加法相似
因为觉得还是整体音效都加的饱满点的好=w= 个别地方不加音效怪怪的哈哈
04:10:648(4,5)-add whis ; add whis on head and end of silder (5) ; remve clap

if you think my mod is helpful , you can call me back to have a remod :3

Kiiwa's Interview

perfect! :P

Luka's Interview

ar-1 is better -.-?

>3< 糯米作图越来越棒了呀 加油!!
Topic Starter
Megurine Luka
呜 谢谢阿黄>3<
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
revive了么0.0
Topic Starter
Megurine Luka

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

revive了么0.0
嗯o.o
ertyukjh010


您好Luka :) (我只是跟唱歌的Luka打招呼而已

[Yukari's Interview]

00:27:688 (2) - 重疊1/2好像不太適合0.0 這作為最容易的難度的話...., 或者別重疊看看
00:32:248 (2) - ^
01:09:688 (2) - 提前到01:10:168結束,
01:10:408 () - 放個圈圈
01:10:648 (4) - 別重疊Orz
01:50:248 (4,5) - 全部向前搬1/2beat??
02:08:728 (3) - 提前到02:09:208結束
02:18:808 (2) - 同01:09:688 (2)的情況一樣
02:29:848 (5) - 減少一下重疊吧(?
03:22:168 (1) - 同01:09:688 (2)的情況一樣
04:09:208 (2) - 將它放到與04:08:248 (1)同一水平~

[Kiiwa's Interview]

00:11:128 (3,4) - 用連打代替比較好,這樣放很難分辨是1/2還是1/4 beat :)
00:19:288 (1,2) - 包圍得更好看
00:53:608 (1) - 為甚麼不是在00:53:848 NC??
01:02:488 (2) - Remove Finish
03:22:168 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 對於這個難度,這種排法很困難

[Luka's Interview]

00:31:408 (3) - 刪掉?

That all :)
Topic Starter
Megurine Luka
Fixed Most! Thanks ert!

:<你不跟我打招呼我不高兴
Leorda
Hi there

[General]
* All diff name makes confuse for players for which hard, normal or easy diff go. So I suggest you to name the difficulty to your diff name (e.g. "Yukari's Normal")


[Yukari's Interview]
* AR +1? Your current approach rate seems low
* This diff is doesn't have a preview point
* Remove the countdown for consistency of each diff


[Kiiwa's Interview]
00:12:088 (2) - The head slider is almost offscreen
00:13:528 (5,6) - These head slider is touch the HP Bar
00:40:408 (6) - The tail slider is almost offscreen
01:33:208 (3) - ^
01:53:848 (8) - These tail slider is touch the HP Bar
01:56:488 (3) - ^


[Luka's Interview]
00:33:448 (8) - New combo for 0,5x slider


Good luck~
Hatsune Miku_old
好きな音楽は何ですか?
好きな食べ物は何ですか?
君の好きな人は谁ですか?
别にそれが 仆じゃなくていいけど ;_;
Topic Starter
Megurine Luka
别这样嘛Q.Q

你看这video的配色多充满了鱼葱的气息

@Leorda: Fixed all. Thanks!
tutuhaha
占!
Banana
Hi~ Banana here from my queue

general

音量上的处理咱觉得hard的比较好,normal和insane的有点听不见,比如没有声音比较大的clap的前奏
(开了edit才看见hard种了很多草,我大概说的是只是音量 嗯)

insane

00:03:928 (1,2) - 开头象00:07:768 (1,2)跳一下会有出其不意的感觉,个人觉得效果还不错
00:44:728 (3) - 因为这个难度很多地方都有跳,所以在这边我建议ctrl+r一下造一个跳,而且滑条向下滑还有到达高音前欲扬先抑的效果
00:46:408 (6) - 1/2滑条?前面音不变而这里有一点音调变化
00:49:288 (1,2,3) - 个人感觉间距略小看着不爽,另外这个组合结束后和下一个滑条的衔接用同样小的间距感觉有点不合适,如果是咱的话 这里会做成这样
00:52:408 (1) - 虽说有nc的提醒,但是这边用1/2的滑条放在这里也没什么违和感,所以很容易读错,所以建议在这个前面放一个跳 最偷懒可以ctrl+r
00:56:248 (4) - nazi,弄弯一点
00:59:848 (8) - 虽说现在这样没问题,可是感觉这后面的跳有点违和,因为00:59:608 (7)比后面那个note重一些,于是建议在这里用1*,这样连下一段时也顺一点
01:03:448 (1) - 因为音效声音不太大所以这个白线起手的三连打听上去不是太违和,不过如果真的动了音量的话恐怕这个三连得移到前面去
01:17:368 (4,5,6) - 这个打起来有点不舒服,建议把(5)去了然后新的(4,5,6)跟vocal
01:54:088 (4,5) - 这里咱断了 而且进edit看也觉得很怪
01:58:408 (1,2,3) - 和上面的建议一样 竖着在后面的滑条的右边摆三个
02:21:928 (6) - 个人感觉是这边钢琴的音停了跳也该停了,不知道这边跟的什么
02:25:768 (6) - ^
03:35:368 (7) - 要是咱的话这个圈会和后面的03:37:048 (4)叠在一起
03:41:128 (1) - 嘛 还是跳在哪里停的问题- -
04:03:688 (6) - nazi,向下摆到大概1.2*的地方会好看点
04:19:648 - 原曲这边还有个鼓音
04:22:888 (1) - hard难度这里是一个note一combo的,最好统一一下

hard

03:16:408 (1) - 这个转盘感觉提前一条白线开始比较适合
04:22:888 (1) - 和insane的最后一个一样的

normal

01:50:248 - 这边感觉节奏有点怪,我的建议是01:50:248 (4) 一个1/1滑条 后面1/2的地方一个圈

吐槽mod的横向分布你就输了- - 咱才不是懒了呢
Pokie
_(:3」∠)_

好治癒的曲子

[General]
  1. Diff spread: 1.8m > 11m > 17.9m :( 這最低難度和Hard之間總要補點東西的感覺…不過還沒有人提過就先保留意見吧

[Yukari's Normal]
  1. 寫作Normal, 讀作Easy
00:26:968 (1,2) - 據Garven說, Easy裡最好不要有1/2拍的stack
00:40:408 (3) - 我個人對easy裡這種雙折返的有點意見…主要是混在單折返之間的時候, 容易混淆 D: 建議縮一折返後移1/2, 前面補circle:

00:59:608 (3,4) - 同第一條
02:08:728 (3,4) - ^
02:18:808 (2,3) - ^ (加的還不少的樣子…T-T)
03:22:168 (1,2) - ^ (這邊還漏了一個clap, 我覺得順便把節奏拆一下比較好, (1)縮短1/2)
03:23:608 (3) - clap
03:38:968 (3,4) - 同上上面



[Kiiwa's Hard]
  1. Hi, Kiiwa
  2. Kiiwa's Hard Kiiwa's Round and Round
00:40:168 (5) - Suggest to move it here: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/317844
01:03:208 (1) - Expect this would appear 1/2 later. Since here is a big jump if comparing to your whole map. Can you do something on it?
01:19:768 (5) - Shrink the body a bit , and stack 01:18:808 (1) - well


01:34:648 (2) - Kinda nazi, but 1 grid left to make these three notes in a straight line
01:43:768 (1) - I know you will start from this position wwww
02:10:648 (1,2,1) - Way better!

[Insane]

03:49:048 - Kiai這裡結束

00:29:848 (4,5) - 白線不可缺…求改成這樣


00:52:408 (1) - 以為是1.0x 速度 D:...有點坑爹啊
01:54:088 (4,5,6,7) - 有點什麼都沒踩著的趕腳


太治癒了好催眠…!
Topic Starter
Megurine Luka
大部分改掉了=3=多谢ovo
Kawayi Rika
Hi ~ Megurine Luka ~ :)

Mod time for my Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[Insane]


  1. 00:50:008 (4) - Add new combo,confused with play.
  2. 02:29:848 - KIAI Time should end to here.
  3. 04:19:408 (6) - Move 1 gird up,looks better here.
  4. 04:23:128 (1,1) - Remove too short new combo.

[Kiiwa's Hard]


  1. 00:18:568 (4) - Suggestion change a repeat slider + 1 note,sound much better.
  2. 01:04:168 - Why not add circle to here? break here a bit strange.
  3. 04:23:128 (1,1) - Remove too short new combo.

[Yukari's Normal]


  1. OD+1
  2. 02:29:848 - KIAI Time should end to here.

That's all ~ pretty nice mapset ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~
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