This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on February-28-14 at 9:01:20 PM

Artist: Nico Nico Chorus
Title: SPiCa
Tags: Vocaloid2 Vocaloid Hatsune Miku Sun_Rainbow Sun Rainbow Douga Regou collab collaboration Toku-P Headphone-Tokyo NicoNico Wataame Mei Kuripurin Himawari Lino Noir Nico Nico Douga
BPM: 162
Filesize: 15296kb
Play Time: 03:10
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (1.38 stars, 148 notes)
2. Hard (4.46 stars, 389 notes)
3. Insane Collab (4.99 stars, 533 notes)
4. Normal (2.75 stars, 227 notes)

Download: Nico Nico Chorus - SPiCa
Download: Nico Nico Chorus - SPiCa (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Hallowww ~

First map owo

Insane by Sun Rainbow & Regou

Storyboard by Sun Rainbow

Thank you to all the people who have helped me ~ >w<)

hello ~ i've got nothing better to do so might as well use my time to help someone with their map

general stuff;
- Very important! Your timing is way way off, I got
BPM: 162
Offset: 3570
The timing change implies:
* Snaping all notes so they fall on a tick and are not on the space ~
* Most probably remapping the whole song or adjusting some notes/sliders here and they follow the song

- Secondly, you need a bg, try this one ?
http://puu.sh/amlR

- You need to take the audio off from the video

- Add a preview point to all diffs! needs to be the same for all ~

- About the song's information:
* Source: Toku-P
* Tags: Take out Nico Nico Chorus since it is the artist already, add vocaloid2, vocaloid and hatsune miku

- Disable countdown and epilepsy warning

- It is kinda silly that you ask people to download the whole skin ... just include skin elements necessary for gameplay in the song's folder and full sub if you want to add skin elements to your map, people won't really like to download a skin just to play one map (because i don't think everybody will like to keep the skin after they play)
- Oh, and i downloaded the skin, is nice; some parts could be better but overall is nice!

I believe that is all for general stuff, can't really mod every diff since the timing is off and almost every note is off. When you finish fixing all this you can ask for a recheck.
Good luck!

D: I suck at doing this type of stuff ._.
And thanks for the help ;D
I did include the skin in the map but like I just put it there if other actually wanted to always use it.
And oh gawd D; That's a lot of work ._.

I can try to "repair" it a little bit for you if you want. :3
EDIT: You have a big amound of these large sliders:
You could repleace some of them with shorter sliders. For exemple, making few shorter sliders instead a long one. It will be really hard to mode it if you dont do that.
I will mod your map myself after.
Sorry for my bad english. D:

I guess that would help the map to be a bit more hard then easy .
Thankks~ ;D

Sorry for making you wait so much >.<
I was pretty tired the last 3 days, so I wasnt on osu! and I almost got ill.
I just started to mod your map. I have already finished 2 of the 4 diffs.
I had to change many things to get a good timing, I hope you that you still like it.
-Added:
--new sliders and hitcircles
--more hitsounds
--kiai time
--changed the speed at some parts
The Normal diff was pretty good, the Easy one wasnt bad, too, there were many places where the timing was almost perfect.
Also, I added the kiai time and slowed down some parts of the song, it looks better that way. Like in the part of the song where Miku sings, for example, I slowed down the speed from 1.00 ,normal speed, to 0.50, at the part after the speed goes up to 0.75, and to 1.00 like in the beggining.
I will finish the other 2 diff the next 2 days. I had this day off so I had plenty of time to mod your map.

Download: Nico Nico Chorus - SPiCa (xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx) [Neo's Relaxation].osu

Download: Nico Nico Chorus - SPiCa (xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx) [Moon's Lullaby].osu

Its fine ^^
Thannkyhuuu for the star

NP! Here is another one

Download: Nico Nico Chorus - SPiCa (xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx) [Crystal's Light].osu

The last one! (need to add hitsounds and reneame it to something better, do you have an idea what name could I use for it?)

Download: Nico Nico Chorus - SPiCa (xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx) [Topped Toph].osu

Download: Nico Nico Chorus - SPiCa (xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx) [SinDemonDragon's Insane].osu

Thannnkyhuu for all your hard work~ ;D

Hi~
There all are suggestion,so you don't have to follow it.

[General]


[Crystal's Light]


[Moon's Lullaby]


[Neo's Relaxation ]


[Topped Toph]


[SinDemon's Flame]


That's all
Love this song~
Good luck~
Star x3

You confused some of the difficulites like light with lullaby xD
But its okayy ;D and whoaa you didint need to do that much modding but thankkyhuu~ ;D
EDIT: updatedd~

Hello! ^^
I love nico nico chorus very much

[General]
I think you map contains too much identical linear long sliders, it's borring, please give them an interesting shape.
USE DISTANS SNAP!

[Moon's Lullaby]

00:15:236 (2) - please, add. Without this circle sounds bad.
00:21:347 (1,1,2) - place these circles are not at the same point.
00:22:829 (1) - delete new combo.
00:24:310 - 00:27:273 - insert break time.
00:27:273 (1) - 1 gird ap, here
00:30:977 (1) - vove to another place, because it overlaps the slider.
00:36:162 (1) - place it here 00:42:644 (4) - make a slider such as in the screenshot. Symmetric and uniform.
00:46:347 (7) - add new combo.
00:47:088 (1) - delete new combo.
00:47:644 (2) - add new combo.
00:47:644 (2,3,4,5) - all this 1 gird up.
00:51:718 (1,1,2) - please, more systematic. Looks like random sliders.
00:56:903 (2) - maybe will be better delete this and add a long spinner.
01:01:162 (3) - too close to the previous objects.
01:02:829 (1) - ^
01:07:273 (4,5,6) - move yo another place.
01:08:014 (5) - new combo.
01:16:903 (4) - make here !not linear! slider, PLEASE!
01:20:607 (6) - ^
01:20:607 (6) - new combo.
01:26:532 (9) - new combo.

[Neo's Relaxation]

00:22:829 (3,4) - too far from previous objects.
00:23:940 (1) - too close to the previous object.
00:31:718 (6) - do like this and PLEASE do all sliders no curves
00:33:940 (2,3,4) - to close.
00:36:162 (5) - ^
00:46:995 (4) - sound bad, Maybe circles will be better, but I don't think so.
00:50:514 (5) - move to 00:50:421.
00:50:699 (6) - move to 00:50:607.
00:50:792 (7) - add.
01:01:903 (5) - move to 01:01:532.
01:02:088 (6) - move to 01:01:903.
01:02:088 (7) - add.
01:02:273 (8) - add.
01:07:829 (1,2) - too far.
01:14:681 (1) - ^
01:14:681 (1) - this curve!
01:17:644 (1) - ^
01:26:532 (1) - ^
01:31:718 (4) - ^
01:50:236 (3) - too close.
02:13:755 (5) - ^
02:17:644 (1) - move to another plase.
02:31:718 (1) - move to centre!
02:57:273 (3,4,1) - wrong spacing. Again.
02:58:014 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^

[Topped Toph]

00:18:940 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - it's not very pretty.
00:25:792 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
00:32:458 (6) - new combo.
00:33:199 (1) - delete new combo.
00:33:940 (4) - new combo.
00:44:866 (6,7,8) - move to another plase. You make this 'pattern' in all map. Please, move it.
01:13:940 (9) - add.
01:15:051 (3,4,5) - omg.
01:25:977 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - change rhythm!
01:33:014 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - not ok. Strean in another plase.
02:07:273 (1,2) - can't be ranked.
02:46:162 (1) - ^

[SinDemon's Flame]

00:04:088 (2) - sound bad, not in rhythm.
00:04:977 (4) - ^
00:07:273 (2) - ^
00:09:495 (8) - ^
00:16:088 (1) - ^
00:16:829 (3) - ^
00:18:903 (1) - ^
00:45:421 (7) - too close.
I'm tired, and I am too lazy

Thannkyhuu^^
So my Light diff is okayy? o.o (Considering nothing was said about it)
I will try to fix as much of the sliders as I can.
Btw, you didint need to mod that much of the diffs but thannk you for doing so
I will update as soon as im done~

Edit: updated and fixed as much as I could. (I got lazy afterwards ._. )

Okay, sorry, but I diidn't see this difficult Oo
it's strange, but I'm too lazy.. Sorry ==
And anyway Good Luck with this map)

hello ~ let's do a recheck now

song's info;
- tags >> remove the "," between words

general;
- try to keep bgs dimensions 1024x768 or 800x600, here i fixed the ones that needed it
http://puu.sh/bSlV
you'll have to do a full submit
- preview point is not the same in all diffs, keep them the same

* i can help you to improve your map taking little steps at a time if you want, i mean i can do more rechecks if you want or you can always ask me stuff you are unsure about (:

moon's lullaby;
- 00:05:051 >> add a note here, the break or unfilled space is unnecessary and also if you add a note here it helps to follow the music more
- 00:08:014 >> ^
- 00:10:977 >> ^
- 00:13:940 >> ^
- 00:15:051 (1,2) >> i think is better to do a slider from here to 00:15:421, much easier to hit
- 00:16:903 >> add a note here for reasons mentioned above
- 00:19:866 >> ^
- 00:25:792 >> a slider from here to 00:26:532 would be good
- 00:27:273 >> finish at the start, reverse arrow and end; also you could try to make a simple curvy slider like this

- 00:31:718 >> finish
- 00:33:199 >> ^
- 00:36:162 >> finish at start
- 00:39:125 >> add a note
- 00:39:495 >> start the slider here instead but end it at the same spot
- 00:49:125 >> many repeats, it may be hard for players so try making a slider from here to 00:50:051 and add a repeat
- 00:53:569 (1) >> end the slider here
- 00:53:940 >> add a note here
- 00:54:310 (3) >> move the slider here
- 00:58:384 >> add a note here and at 00:58:755 too
- 01:00:977 (3) >> many repeats and they don't fit music that well; try adding a note here and then add a slider from 01:01:347 to 01:02:458
- 01:02:829 >> remove whistle, add finish
- 01:08:014 >> new combo
- 01:08:755 >> remove whistle, add finish
- 01:14:681 >> ^ also you have 2 green sections here, remove one and snap the other so it is snapped to the tick
- 01:16:532 >> add a note
- 01:18:384 >> end the slider here, then add another slider from 01:18:755 to 01:19:495
- 01:28:384 >> add a note here
- 01:29:125 >> delete this note
- 01:29:866 >> add a note here
- 01:39:607 >> move the slider here and end it at 01:31:347; after you do this add a note at 01:30:236
- 01:31:718 (5,6) >> delete both, then add a slider from here to 01:34:125 and add a repeat to it
- 01:35:051 >> add a note here with finish
- 01:35:421 >> this spinner is way way too long, end it at 01:38:014

neo's relaxation;
- 00:03:570 ~ 00:14:681 >> is not good to add whistles on all the notes, you should leave one note without a hitsound between notes with hitsounds so it doesn't sound too full ):
- 00:16:162 >> remove a repeat
- 00:19:125 >> add a note
- 00:25:792 (2,3) >> move (2) here and (3) to 00:25:977
- 00:26:903 >> delete
- 00:27:273 >> move (7) here and add a finish
- 00:28:384 >> add a note
- 00:28:755 >> finish at the start and end
- 00:31:718 >> remove the claps and add finish at the start
- ok, i think this is going to take lots of time, so let's do it in parts ~ from now i'll just mod the placement of notes in the timeline, nothing else; if you want me to do another modpost with just hitsounds or new combos you just tell me (:
- 00:32:644 >> remove new combo
- 00:36:162 >> this doesn't sound good, try making a slider from here to 00:36:903
- 00:37:644 >> this spinner seems a little short for a diff like this so maybe delete it and try to map something else ?
- 00:39:485 >> add a note
- 00:44:495 (5) >> move it here
- 00:44:866 >> add a note here
- 00:47:088 >> move (4) here
- 00:50:421 >> delete this
- 00:50:977 >> add a note with finish
- 01:07:829 >> delete
- 01:17:458 >> add a note ?
- 01:22:458 >> ^
- 01:23:014 >> ^
- 01:24:681 >> end the spinner here
- 01:29:495 >> leave just one repeat and map something else on the space left
- 01:35:421 >> start the spinner here and end it at 01:38:014 with a finish
- 01:46:347 >> delete this and add a note at 01:47:273; i think is a better way to start after a break
- 01:59:125 >> just leave 2 repeats then map something in the space left
- 02:01:718 >> move (1) here
- 02:02:008 >> remove a repeat and map something else on the space left
- 02:05:051 ~ 02:11:718 >> maybe you shouldn't map this part or fill the breaks
- 02:13:755 >> remove all repeats, then add a note at 02:14:310
- 02:22:458 >> start the spinner here and end it at 02:23:940
- 02:34:310 >> end the slider here
- 02:47:829 >> maybe add a note
- 02:48:384 >> add a note
- 02:53:199 >> ^
- 02:55:051 >> end the spinner here
- 02:56:532 >> add a note here
- 03:05:421 >> ^
- 03:05:792 >> move the spinner here

crystal's light;
- go to timing > resnap all notes
- go to timing > recalculate all slider lengths
- 00:35:792 >> i don't think such a short spinner is a good idea
- 00:37:644 >> i think you can change this to something that fits the music more
- 00:43:199 >> move (3) here
- 00:50:236 >> doesn't fit, remove a repeat and extend the slider by a tick
- 00:50:607 >> move (5) here
- 00:50:977 >> add a note with finish
- 00:51:532 >> delete
- 01:02:088 >> move (5) here
- 01:03:384 >> end the slider here
- 01:03:569 >> move (3) here
- 01:04:125 >> move (4) here
- 01:04:310 >> move (5) here and end it at 01:05:051
- 01:05:421 >> move (6) here
- 01:14:681 >> i don't think that starting the kiai time with a spinner is good, try something else
- 01:22:088 >> move (4) here
- 01:50:051 >> doesn't fit, try something else
- 01:56:903 >> add a note
- 01:57:458 >> ^
- 02:06:069 >> map this break
- 02:08:107 >> ^
- 02:10:997 (4,5,6) >> move these one tick forward
- 02:13:569 >> end the slider here
- 02:13:755 (5,6) >> move this one tick to the left
- 02:14:310 >> move (7) here
- 02:15:977 (1,3) >> delete both
- 02:16:903 >> replace with just a note here
- 02:24:588 ~ 02:29:681 >> remap this part
- 02:44:310 >> end the spinner here
- 02:45:514 >> doens't fit, try something else
- 02:55:421 >> ^
- 03:01:718 >> end the slider here and map something in the space left
- 03:05:236 >> start the spinner here and end it at 03:06:903
- i think you should just end this diff at the same spot as neo's

topped toph;
- 00:27:273 >> end the slider here
- 00:37:458 (4,5) >> move one tick forward

sindemon's flame;
- you used 1/6 snap divisor but this song uses 1/4 so use 1/4 and resnap all notes, also recalculate slider lengths, you would also need to do some re-mapping after that

* i'm at my limit D: so sorry ): but if you want i can absolutely mod this again but try to get some mods before

Thannkyhuu for all the help ;D
And ohmaiigawdd..... ._. I SUCK at mapping x_x

And its fine ^^
The both of you didint need to do that much work but thank you for doing it. ;3

Ill updates soon~

Modding~~

[Moon's Lullaby]:
-) Slider Tick 1, because this fits more.
-) 00:54:310 (3) - Move it to 00:54:681. (You might decline it, but try it)
-) 01:03:569 (2) - This Slider is off. My english sucks, so this Picture should be more useful. http://puu.sh/c4Pp
-) 01:16:162 (3,4,5) - This looks better. http://puu.sh/c4RD
-) 01:28:384 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/c4Sx
-) 01:31:718 (2) - http://puu.sh/c4ST


[Neo's Relaxation]:
-) Why I think that the Distance Snaping is wrong?
-) 00:03:570 - 00:27:273 - Lower the Volume to 50%.
-) 00:25:792 (2,3) - They are off. I know that they are set on purpose, but it doesn't fit. You can remove (3).
-) 00:37:273 (1) - Extend to 00:38:755.
-) 00:42:644 (4) - Add Cirlce and the Slider move to 00:42:829.
-) 00:48:014 - Add Circle with Finish.
-) 01:26:532 (1) - http://puu.sh/ves I took this from the Slider Thread. You should make this slider like this on the image.
-) 01:57:829 (8,9) - They touch the HP-Bar and this is unrankable.
-) 02:07:273 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - The spacing is wrong. You can do this like that? http://puu.sh/cuDf But please ask someone with experience if this is recommened for a normal Diff.
-) 02:12:458 (2,3,4) - Add Finish.
-) 02:24:310 - 02:36:162 - Decrease the Volume to 50%
-) 02:45:051 - 03:05:792 - The claps sounds strange. Just in my Opinion.



They are so many things not at the same line. And yes, I'm a person what take care for Symmetric. You can if you want, pm me at In-Game that we could fix the unsymmetric Circles.

Thannkyou for modding ^^
Ill try to line everything up before you recheck everything~
Ill update and get to modding on your map very soon

Oh, you dont want to use the BG that I recomended you to use for my diff? XD
Anyway, here, I modded it, again.

Download: Nico Nico Chorus - SPiCa (xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx) [SinDemon's Flame].osu

O_O I did use it...
Ill update everything nao~

Edit: Updated~ ;D

Hey~
ummm ok. Well, since you're just a beginner mapper, I will just give you some tips about mapping that I believe will help you a lot in the future and hopefully drastically improve the quality of this map.

Unrankable Things you should know:
The maximum BG size allowed is 1024x768, and you have a different BG for every single difficulty but they are all in random resolutions. You must fix this and do a full submit afterwards.

Difficulty Names:
Right now, I cannot tell from the first look which difficulty is supposed to be the hardest and which is the easiest. It would be best if you can just make difficulty names like [Moon's Easy], or [Neo's Normal]...etc. This way, there could be no confusion and it looks more consistent. Lullaby, relaxation, and flames?! <-- that is very random. It has no consistency nor relation between them.

Distance Snap:
ATM, everything looks really messy, scattered and not really following any rhythm or parts in the song.
For example, [Crystal's Light] has a constant, uniform 1/2 rhythm at the start but it has a very wide range of spacing which is quite messy and looks as if the map isn't polished. Of course, mapping jumps are an exception but right now, it's hard to tell if some parts are jumps or antijumps.
In [SinDemon's Flames], it's very difficult for anyone to read the beats/grasp the rhythm of the map because spacing changes every second. Therefore, it's very important to at least show some kind of constant spacing throughout the difficulty so it's not messy this way. You can enable distance snap all the time by just clicking the DS button.
Believe me it will increase the quality of all the difficulties right now by 20 folds.

Difficulty Settings:
For Insane, I would recommend:
OD7, HP7, AR8
Circle size could be up to you, right now it's fine. With OD9 right now, it's actually quite impossible to hit 300s and definitely not suitable for a nice song like this.

For Hard, I would recommend:
OD5, HP5, AR7

You seem to have very high overall difficulty for all the difficulties. Turn them down 3 notches for each difficulty individually and things would be much better. For Normal, OD3 or OD4 is fine. Easy, OD2. Increasing OD = makes circles harder to hit300s, therefore players must be extremely precise almost like Autoplay.

You wanted feedback for [SinDemon's Flames]:
Here's something:
Please try to at least follow something in the song. Right now I have a hard time telling which parts of the song you are trying to follow. Whether it's the vocals, the background music or...something else? After applying distance snap, renap some of the sliders because they are not following anything. I'll give you some examples:
00:04:125 (2) - this isn't following the vocals nor the music
00:04:958 (4) - this should start here: 00:04:866 (4) correct? because this way it follows something in the song: the vocals.
00:06:440 (6) - this one should start here: 00:06:347 instead because there's actually no sound at where you snapped it to atm.
So I believe you understand what I mean, there are some resnapping you need to do and difficulty settings you need to fix.

I think you will need to put some more effort into this :>
at the same time, you should definitely try to get more feedback on this map.
Good Luck~ I hope you would improve this map and aim for ranking

The backgrounds for each diff are all the same size, try re-downloading?

Thank you so much for all the help ^^
I'll fix them soon!

XD I re-mapped it, but its waaaaaaaaaaay better now.

Download: Nico Nico Chorus - SPiCa (xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx) [SinDemon's Song].osu

Updatedd~
Redownload the map for the new backgrounds size~

[SinDemon's Flame]

-There are many messy slider,Please make it nicer.
-So many unsnapped slider o.o Like this part
-There are some timing point that doesn't snapped. Like this part

-00:22:088 (3) - Shorten to 00:22:829,I think its more fit
-00:27:273 (6) - Shorten to 00:28:014,^
-00:38:569 - Useless break time
-00:46:440 - Again..Useless break time
-00:57:921 - ^
-01:12:829 (1) - Remove finish
-02:02:088 (3) - Remove clap
-03:27:181 (8) - Doesn't follow anything,I highly recommended to delete this note

That's all~
Hope this helpfull
No kds,since you already give me one.

Nothing about my diffs then? ;o
Thanks for mod ^^

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Nothing about my diffs then? ;o
Thanks for mod ^^

I'm not doing a recheck,'cause I'm noob... ;A;
Sorry..><

Its fine ;D you did more then enough modding, thannks!~