This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sonntag, 25. Dezember 2011 at 18:33:26

Artist: Taylor Swift
Title: Last Christmas
Tags: MMzz Xmas X-mas Wham! MittenMasterzz
BPM: 116
Filesize: 6122kb
Play Time: 03:18
Difficulties Available:

1. Heart (2,33 stars, 172 notes)
2. Last Christmas (4,85 stars, 476 notes)
3. MM's Taiko (4,9 stars, 666 notes)
4. Tears (4,45 stars, 323 notes)

Download: Taylor Swift - Last Christmas
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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! It's Christmas Time !

Taiko Difficulty by MMzz

Yay 666 combo

Download: Taylor Swift - Last Christmas (Magicphoenix) [MM's Taiko].osu

last christmas, I gave you my heartttt.
another perfect mpx map.

good job as well mmzz
♥♥♥

Hi~
here's my mod, all suggestions

General
You're not using custom hitsounds, so use default instead of custom if you're not going to use any

Heart
01:27:060 (4) - Touches hp bar, a bit...
02:54:474 (1,3) - Why not use the same shape?

Tears
00:13:612 (2) - NC here instead and stack with 00:14:129 (3) - ?
00:50:336 (7) - Just curious, this touches the score displayed
01:31:198 (1) - Remove NC
01:39:474 (3) - Touches score
02:58:870 (3,4,5) - Make a perfect square

Last Christmas
00:11:025 (5) - NC
00:28:094 (3) - Touching HPbar
00:48:267 (5) - NC
01:06:887 (5) - NC?
02:58:612 (4) - NC?
03:00:422 (1,2,3,4,5) - Inconsistent spacing
03:16:715 (1,2,3) - Do you really need a jump here? D:

yay christmas song, I hope this gets ranked before christmas!

Takos wrote:

Hi~
here's my mod, all suggestions

General
You're not using custom hitsounds, so use default instead of custom if you're not going to use any

Heart
01:27:060 (4) - Touches hp bar, a bit... it is ok :3
02:54:474 (1,3) - Why not use the same shape? I want it like a little house or snow man ! something like that >//< erm well, anyway, i will keep it

Tears
00:13:612 (2) - NC here instead and stack with 00:14:129 (3) - ? New Combo but not stack
00:50:336 (7) - Just curious, this touches the score displayed fix
01:31:198 (1) - Remove NC Instead i removed NC from previous combo (1,2)
01:39:474 (3) - Touches score fix
02:58:870 (3,4,5) - Make a perfect square it is a perfect square .3.

Last Christmas
00:11:025 (5) - NC ok
00:28:094 (3) - Touching HPbar that little is ok i think
00:48:267 (5) - NC no since it fits the vocal
01:06:887 (5) - NC? ok
02:58:612 (4) - NC?
03:00:422 (1,2,3,4,5) - Inconsistent spacing jump...
03:16:715 (1,2,3) - Do you really need a jump here? D: yeees...I reduced the distance

yay christmas song, I hope this gets ranked before christmas! I hope this gets ranked on christmas!

Thank you very much Takos > < !

[General]:

1. Audio Lean-in! 1.5s would be nice.

[Last Christmas]:

1. 01:09:732 (7) - you can always get a bigger heart by adding a section like x1.2 or x1.5 to make it nicer.
2. 02:32:491 (7) - ^ btw this is heart for Hardrock player?
3. 01:51:241 (9) - a bit out of music for the repeat part, consider cancel it and notes or something at 01:51:887 01:52:017

[Tears]:

1. 00:01:198 (2) - 2 or 3 grids down?

[Heart]:

1. UNSNAPED EVERYWHERE

yeah these are the things I caught by the first glance, btw try get a better timing.
star for my Taylor you

Yo!~ As you have requested, my humble mod for your atmospheric map~ <3

[General]
Add 'Wham!' to the tags, since its the original artist? Correct me, if I am wrong, lol

[Heart]
Unsnapped objects are unsnapped.


00:34:296 (1,2) - don't make the sliders touch each other?
00:36:624 (3) - bow it?
01:00:158 (2,3) - ^
01:02:744 (2,3) - I dislike this overlapping here
01:33:784 (3,4) - ^
01:50:336 (2,3) - ^
02:14:905 (1) - NC here? remove next NC then
02:19:043 (1) - NC?
02:47:620 (1) - create a gap between the spinner and the last hitobject on such diffs.
02:56:543 (3) - shape it like (1)?
03:15:163 (1,2) - disliked overlapping D:

[Tears]
In general the hitcircles are placed very linear, maybe you could rearrange them a bit more like a wave.
e.g. like this maybe?

00:24:215 (4) - this one is ugly
00:59:387 (2) - ^
01:09:732 (6,1) - don't make them touch
01:23:439 (1,2) - overlap is not as pretty as at 01:02:749 (2,3) -
02:07:663 (7) - ugly D:
02:38:698 (2) - shape it like 02:01:715 (3) - ?

[Last Christmas]
Way better accurate work. Like it alot!

00:20:077 (7) - ugly
01:05:853 (1,2,3,4,1) - maybe rearrange them a bit?
01:09:732 (8) - I know, this should be a heart, but.. just no D:
02:32:491 (7) - ^
02:58:353 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this pattern is very confusing and not well shaped. D:


[MM's Taiko]
Unsnapped objects are unsnapped, here, too.

And afaik these snapping errors refers to timeline snapping, not distance spacing ... right? D:

But now just a few suggestions, maybe I'd have placed kats overall a bit more, just a few examples of what I would change and how.

00:04:813 (13) - kat?
00:08:951 (25) - ^
00:13:089 (37) - ^
00:17:227 (50) - ^
00:35:848 (109,110) - kat kat?
00:39:986 (120,121) - don don?
00:42:060 (126) - don?
00:50:336 (148) - kat?
00:55:503 (163) - ^
01:01:710 (180) - ^
02:46:193 (544) - kat kat?

Ah yes, I miss a taiko template. I felt free to create one. Here you go. If you don't know how to add, just ask me. But I am sure you are able to. :'D

Enjoy it. And Merry Christmas everybody~

ahhn i'll wait until you fix the other mods before i post mine here >_< please tell me when you're done with them

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:

1. Audio Lean-in! 1.5s would be nice. okay

[Last Christmas]:

1. 01:09:732 (7) - you can always get a bigger heart by adding a section like x1.2 or x1.5 to make it nicer. It would come too unexpected and I think it looks lovely enough =)
2. 02:32:491 (7) - ^ btw this is heart for Hardrock player? LOL ...
3. 01:51:241 (9) - a bit out of music for the repeat part, consider cancel it and notes or something at 01:51:887 01:52:017 ok

[Tears]:

1. 00:01:198 (2) - 2 or 3 grids down? ok

[Heart]:

1. UNSNAPED EVERYWHERE _:D

yeah these are the things I caught by the first glance, btw try get a better timing. okay
star for my Taylor you

Thank you very much Colin

Loctav wrote:

Yo!~ As you have requested, my humble mod for your atmospheric map~ <3

[General]
Add 'Wham!' to the tags, since its the original artist? Correct me, if I am wrong, lol erm ok
[Heart]
Unsnapped objects are unsnapped. already fixed


00:34:296 (1,2) - don't make the sliders touch each other? they don't touch each other lol
00:36:624 (3) - bow it? no
01:00:158 (2,3) - ^^
01:02:744 (2,3) - I dislike this overlapping here on purpose...
01:33:784 (3,4) - ^ ^
01:50:336 (2,3) - ^ ^
02:14:905 (1) - NC here? remove next NC then ok
02:19:043 (1) - NC? Nop...but added NC a few notes before
02:47:620 (1) - create a gap between the spinner and the last hitobject on such diffs. ok
02:56:543 (3) - shape it like (1)? no
03:15:163 (1,2) - disliked overlapping D: xD

[Tears]
In general the hitcircles are placed very linear, maybe you could rearrange them a bit more like a wave.
e.g. like this maybe?

SPOILER

00:24:215 (4) - this one is ugly no
00:59:387 (2) - ^^
01:09:732 (6,1) - don't make them touch they don't touch lol
01:23:439 (1,2) - overlap is not as pretty as at 01:02:749 (2,3) - on purpose
02:07:663 (7) - ugly D: no
02:38:698 (2) - shape it like 02:01:715 (3) - ? ok

[Last Christmas]
Way better accurate work. Like it alot! =)

00:20:077 (7) - ugly no
01:05:853 (1,2,3,4,1) - maybe rearrange them a bit? no
01:09:732 (8) - I know, this should be a heart, but.. just no D: ?
02:32:491 (7) - ^^
02:58:353 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this pattern is very confusing and not well shaped. D: nope


[MM's Taiko]
Unsnapped objects are unsnapped, here, too.

And afaik these snapping errors refers to timeline snapping, not distance spacing ... right? D:

But now just a few suggestions, maybe I'd have placed kats overall a bit more, just a few examples of what I would change and how.

00:04:813 (13) - kat?
00:08:951 (25) - ^
00:13:089 (37) - ^
00:17:227 (50) - ^
00:35:848 (109,110) - kat kat?
00:39:986 (120,121) - don don?
00:42:060 (126) - don?
00:50:336 (148) - kat?
00:55:503 (163) - ^
01:01:710 (180) - ^
02:46:193 (544) - kat kat?

Ah yes, I miss a taiko template. I felt free to create one. Here you go. If you don't know how to add, just ask me. But I am sure you are able to. :'D

SPOILER

Enjoy it. And Merry Christmas everybody~

Thanks a lot Locie

Wiinter wrote:

ahhn i'll wait until you fix the other mods before i post mine here >_< please tell me when you're done with them

IRC Modded

Yo~ mod by request via mod queue

General

1. Storyboarding: no disabled countdown? I think more better if you disabled that?
2. I suggest you set the kiai time 02:29:646 - 02:50:336.. (short kiai time like: 02:29517 etc. is not used and will make distract players imo)

Heart
01:03:525 (3) overlap with 2. I think if overlap like this, will make confused for beginner
01:04:301 (4) new combo here? because new vocal and make it same with before note 01:02:232 (1-2-3)
01:26:543 (3,4) I think more symmetric if you do this : http://puu.sh/asxt
01:34:560 (4) overlap with 3, and same reason with 01:03:525. I suggest you do this: http://puu.sh/asy1
02:46:198 (1,2) I think this slider combination is weird, can change it ?
03:15:939 (2) overlap with 1, same reason with before

Tears
00:04:818 (6) add finish in here? because that end of rhythm
00:08:689 (6) add finish in the end of slider? same reason with ^
00:24:215 (4) this slider is odd I think. delete red point and that shape will "curve" as usually
00:25:508 (1) add finish in the beginning more better, because that new vocal and downbeat
00:33:784 (5) add finish in here? this circle is sign of the rhythm is end in here
00:59:387 (2) make it same with 01:00:422 (4)? more symmetrical if you do this
02:10:249 (5) new combo in here? so that not make the players confused

Last christmas
00:02:491 (1) delete this new combo, because that anti-jump. you must add combo in next note
00:04:818 (1) add finish in here? because that end of rhythm
00:24:215 (5) delete the red point, and the shape not will sharp. the sharp is weird looks imo
00:49:301 (7) add new combo in here because this is jump from before note
01:09:732 (8) this slider shape is really weird and somewhat forced. can change it?
01:36:629 (3) make it linear with 2? more tidy if you do this
01:45:939 (4) I think you must delete this circle, because this is circle is not following anything. and add new combo to the next note
01:51:758 (10) this slider's overlap is weird, I think will better if this is stack with 9 and the slider direction to up
02:21:112 (7) make it linear with 6 (1 grid down)
02:32:491 (7) same reason with 01:09:732

That's all~ I hope my mod can helpful :')
Good luck and a little star for you (:

Some suggestions~♪

Last Christmas
I think you can safely increase the AR by 1
00:02:232 (4,1,2) - Make the spacing here smoother?
00:27:318 (1) - try to make the end point stack with previous (4)
00:44:129 (5) - NC
02:45:163 (1) - ^

Tears
02:29:129 (4) - 1 or 2 grids up, depending on what grid-size you're using
02:49:818 - not sure about having a break during kiai time ><

Heart
02:49:818 - remove break?


:3

Yasora-chan wrote:

Yo~ mod by request via mod queue

General

1. Storyboarding: no disabled countdown? I think more better if you disabled that? ok
2. I suggest you set the kiai time 02:29:646 - 02:50:336.. (short kiai time like: 02:29517 etc. is not used and will make distract players imo0) stopped at 02:46:198

Heart
01:03:525 (3) overlap with 2. I think if overlap like this, will make confused for beginner I think it won't
01:04:301 (4) new combo here? because new vocal and make it same with before note 01:02:232 (1-2-3) Combo follows vocal
01:26:543 (3,4) I think more symmetric if you do this : http://puu.sh/asxt It looks fine as it is IMO
01:34:560 (4) overlap with 3, and same reason with 01:03:525. I suggest you do this: http://puu.sh/asy1 same like 01:03:525..
02:46:198 (1,2) I think this slider combination is weird, can change it ? ok
03:15:939 (2) overlap with 1, same reason with before same

Tears
00:04:818 (6) add finish in here? because that end of rhythm nope
00:08:689 (6) add finish in the end of slider? same reason with ^ ^
00:24:215 (4) this slider is odd I think. delete red point and that shape will "curve" as usually oh i like this slider...
00:25:508 (1) add finish in the beginning more better, because that new vocal and downbeat no
00:33:784 (5) add finish in here? this circle is sign of the rhythm is end in here ^
00:59:387 (2) make it same with 01:00:422 (4)? more symmetrical if you do this nope, it's supposed to be a combination of (4,5) somehow lol
02:10:249 (5) new combo in here? so that not make the players confused nope

Last christmas
00:02:491 (1) delete this new combo, because that anti-jump. you must add combo in next note I highlighted the 1-2-3-4 combo because of the bell so NC is good as where it is now
00:04:818 (1) add finish in here? because that end of rhythm no
00:24:215 (5) delete the red point, and the shape not will sharp. the sharp is weird looks imo nope
00:49:301 (7) add new combo in here because this is jump from before note ok
01:09:732 (8) this slider shape is really weird and somewhat forced. can change it? It's not forced at all and supposed to be a heart lol
01:36:629 (3) make it linear with 2? more tidy if you do this no
01:45:939 (4) I think you must delete this circle, because this is circle is not following anything. and add new combo to the next note Eh? It does follow beat lol
01:51:758 (10) this slider's overlap is weird, I think will better if this is stack with 9 and the slider direction to up fixed the overlap but not like suggested
02:21:112 (7) make it linear with 6 (1 grid down) fix
02:32:491 (7) same reason with 01:09:732 fixed this one

That's all~ I hope my mod can helpful :')
Good luck and a little star for you (:

Thank you very much Yasora-chan !

Saten-san wrote:

Some suggestions~♪

Last Christmas
I think you can safely increase the AR by 1 hmm no, that would be too fast (especially for song)
00:02:232 (4,1,2) - Make the spacing here smoother? Not sure if I made it stiffer or smoother but I fixed it in a better way
00:27:318 (1) - try to make the end point stack with previous (4) hmm no
00:44:129 (5) - NC ok
02:45:163 (1) - ^ nope

Tears
02:29:129 (4) - 1 or 2 grids up, depending on what grid-size you're using I moved the following note
02:49:818 - not sure about having a break during kiai time >< Removed the KIAI

Heart
02:49:818 - remove break? No


:3

Thank you very much Saten-san >w<

[Last Christmas]

00:27:318 (1) - 00:26:801 (4) - stack
01:21:112 (6) - 01:20:077 (4) - ^

[Tears]
00:38:956 (2) - 00:37:922 (5) - stack
00:44:129 (3) - NewCombo?
01:22:922 (7) - 01:21:887 (5) - stack
01:33:784 (4) - 01:33:267 (3) - ^

[Heart]
01:00:163 (2) - 00:58:094 (4) - stack
02:45:422 (4) - Distance

nice beatmap

NewRulerNA wrote:

[Last Christmas]

00:27:318 (1) - 00:26:801 (4) - stack
01:21:112 (6) - 01:20:077 (4) - ^

[Tears]
00:38:956 (2) - 00:37:922 (5) - stack
00:44:129 (3) - NewCombo?
01:22:922 (7) - 01:21:887 (5) - stack
01:33:784 (4) - 01:33:267 (3) - ^

[Heart]
01:00:163 (2) - 00:58:094 (4) - stack
02:45:422 (4) - Distance

nice beatmap

Fixed all 'xcept 1st, ty very much

Hi.






And that's all. Good luck.

Roddie wrote:

Hi.

General

1. Add MittenMasterzz in the tags. That was MMzz's previous username. Why would I add an old username to tags? But ok
2. Remove the lead-in time from the Heart difficulty. ok

Heart

1. 01:34:560 (4)-You forgot to add a clap on the end. I didn't lol
2. 02:16:715 (3)-You forgot to add a clap on the beginning. I didn't ...
3. 02:19:818 (3)-You also forgot to add a clap here. fixed
4. 03:08:439 (2)-Add a clap on the beginning. added

Tears

1. 01:16:887-Snap this timing point properly on the white tick. Once fixed, the kiai time should start off nicely. There is no timing point ?
2. 01:23:439-^ fix
3. 01:39:991-Snap this timing point properly on the white tick. Once fixed, the kiai time should end off nicely.
4. 03:02:749-Same issue as 01:16:887.
5. 03:19:301-Same issue as 01:39:991 fixed all

Last Christmas

1. 00:12:836-I think it's best to put a new combo here because it's like the next part of the lyrics, you know? What lyrics
2. 01:13:094-Remove new combo from here. No, instead i made the previous combo a bit longer

MM's taiko

1. 01:06:887-Snap this timing point properly on the white tick. This should start off the kiai time nicely.
2. 01:23:439-^
3. 01:39:991-Snap this timing point properly on the white tick. This should end off the kiai time nicely.
4. 02:13:094-Same issue as 01:06:887.
5. 02:29:646-^
6. 02:46:198-^
7. 03:02:749-^
8. 03:19:301-Same issue as 01:39:991. fixed all

And that's all. Good luck.

Thanks a lot Roddie =3

Hi!

[General]

Change Offset to 667. It sounds better imo.

The samples volume at the start sounds loud. Maybe you should lower the volume.

[Heart]

00:52:405 (2) - Move this slider where 00:50:336 (5) was?
02:04:301 (1,2) - Try this http://puu.sh/ayI8 ? :3

[Tears]

This difficulty it's ok to me~

[Last Christmas]

00:39:215 (4) - This slider it's touching the HP bar.

________________________


Nothing more to say, it's a nice beatmap overall. Good luck!

Kei wrote:

Hi!

[General]

Change Offset to 667. It sounds better imo. Nope

The samples volume at the start sounds loud. Maybe you should lower the volume. Hmm I think it sounds just right

[Heart]

00:52:405 (2) - Move this slider where 00:50:336 (5) was? ok
02:04:301 (1,2) - Try this http://puu.sh/ayI8 ? :3 Nope

[Tears]

This difficulty it's ok to me~~

[Last Christmas]

00:39:215 (4) - This slider it's touching the HP bar. fixed

________________________


Nothing more to say, it's a nice beatmap overall. Good luck!

Thank you very much for mod + star

from my queue

[Gerenal]
#1 kiai time in Tears diff start at 01:06:887 - plz , make sure it is the same with other diffs

[Heart]
OD-1?
00:37:922 (4,1) - I think slider first then circle later is easier to read and play
01:56:543 (1,2) - why not straight slider ? or more arc ?
02:04:301 - I suggest add note here with clap , or it is hard to read the rhyme , cuz 02:04:560 (1) - start at a red line , it is kinda confusing for newbies
02:06:370 - ^
02:34:301 (2,3) - try to blanket better ? with ctrl+1
03:09:991 (3) - start at 03:09:732 - to follow vcoal here is better imo
03:14:129 (4) - ^

[Tears]
AR-1? I think this AR is kinda too high for a Normal diff
00:12:836 (6,7,1) - this stack is confusing , not the same rhyme here.. I suggest not to stack 7 and 1
00:51:629 (2) - change to a repeat slider and clap at 00:51:887 - ? sound better
01:06:883 - unsnapped timing section
01:21:887 (5,6) - this 2 sldiers blanket bad.. fix them like 01:22:922 (7,1) - is better
01:51:112 (6,7) - 1/4 click in a Normal diff seems too hard to play , I suggest repeat 01:50:336 (5) - 1 time more and delete 01:51:112 (6) -
02:04:301 - you miss a clap here

[Last Christmas]
HD+1
OD-1?
00:32:749 (3) - add newcombo ? cuz the spacing suddenly become bigger
00:50:336 (5) - whistle here ? this note sound too quiet to me..
00:51:629 (4) - change to repeat slider , and add clap at 00:51:887 - , sound better
01:06:499 - add note ? sound better to me
01:45:680 (3) - newcombo , or the jump is too suddenly..
01:48:913 (3) - this sound kinda off , delete it and add note at 01:49:043 - , cuz 01:48:913 - is empty
01:50:982 (8) - ^
01:51:241 (9,10) - this rhyme is very odd.. I think 9 should end at 01:51:499 - and 10 start at 01:51:629 - end at 01:51:887 - with clap , sound and play better
02:12:318 (5) - repeat slider in streams should start at heavy beat.. or it is too hard to read when it start.. I suggest circle at 02:12:318 - and 02:12:448 - , repeat sldier start at 02:12:577 - end at 02:12:965 -
02:29:517 - add note ? sound better to me
02:29:746 - unsnapped timing section
02:35:724 (7) - I suggest to delete this , here is empty , no vocal here.. and if you fix this , plz not to stack 02:35:594 (6) - and 02:35:853 (1) -
02:45:163 (5) - newcombo here , easier to read the stream
02:58:612 (4) - and here , cuz the spacing is changed
02:59:646 (8) - ^
03:07:922 (5) - ^

that's all
gl

wcx19911123 wrote:

from my queue

[Gerenal]
#1 kiai time in Tears diff start at 01:06:887 - plz , make sure it is the same with other diffs Eh? it is same...I will full-submit later = =

[Heart]
OD-1?
00:37:922 (4,1) - I think slider first then circle later is easier to read and play ok
01:56:543 (1,2) - why not straight slider ? or more arc ?Hmm, it is cool, I will keep it
02:04:301 - I suggest add note here with clap , or it is hard to read the rhyme , cuz 02:04:560 (1) - start at a red line , it is kinda confusing for newbies
02:06:370 - ^ fixed both
02:34:301 (2,3) - try to blanket better ? with ctrl+1 I'm not the most accurate one xAx but I think I fixed it
03:09:991 (3) - start at 03:09:732 - to follow vcoal here is better imo hmm..nope
03:14:129 (4) - ^ ^

[Tears]
AR-1? I think this AR is kinda too high for a Normal diff This is supposed to be a Normal-Hard diff anyway, but okay -1 AR
00:12:836 (6,7,1) - this stack is confusing , not the same rhyme here.. I suggest not to stack 7 and 1 ok
00:51:629 (2) - change to a repeat slider and clap at 00:51:887 - ? sound better Hm nope, following vocal.. but instead I converted the slider before in 1/2 slider + circle
01:06:883 - unsnapped timing section fix
01:21:887 (5,6) - this 2 sldiers blanket bad.. fix them like 01:22:922 (7,1) - is better I think I fixed it
01:51:112 (6,7) - 1/4 click in a Normal diff seems too hard to play , I suggest repeat 01:50:336 (5) - 1 time more and delete 01:51:112 (6) - I think it is okay, since BPM is very low and the pattern is nice to read. Also it's not like the diff is a [Normal]
02:04:301 - you miss a clap here fix

[Last Christmas]
HD+1 No
OD-1? Ok
00:32:749 (3) - add newcombo ? cuz the spacing suddenly become bigger I did it 1 combo later
00:50:336 (5) - whistle here ? this note sound too quiet to me.. There is a whistle already? lol
00:51:629 (4) - change to repeat slider , and add clap at 00:51:887 - , sound better ok
01:06:499 - add note ? sound better to me Hmm, I seldom work with triples and suddenly adding one there..nope sorry
01:45:680 (3) - newcombo , or the jump is too suddenly.. I did it 1 combo later
01:48:913 (3) - this sound kinda off , delete it and add note at 01:49:043 - , cuz 01:48:913 - is empty fixed
01:50:982 (8) - ^^
01:51:241 (9,10) - this rhyme is very odd.. I think 9 should end at 01:51:499 - and 10 start at 01:51:629 - end at 01:51:887 - with clap , sound and play better fix
02:12:318 (5) - repeat slider in streams should start at heavy beat.. or it is too hard to read when it start.. I suggest circle at 02:12:318 - and 02:12:448 - , repeat sldier start at 02:12:577 - end at 02:12:965 - Fixed, end it 1/4 earlier though
02:29:517 - add note ? sound better to me no
02:29:746 - unsnapped timing section Lol, very random one, deleted it
02:35:724 (7) - I suggest to delete this , here is empty , no vocal here.. and if you fix this , plz not to stack 02:35:594 (6) - and 02:35:853 (1) - fix
02:45:163 (5) - newcombo here , easier to read the stream fixed
02:58:612 (4) - and here , cuz the spacing is changed fix
02:59:646 (8) - ^^
03:07:922 (5) - ^^

that's all
gl

Thank you very much for mod wcx ! =)

[General]

merry christmas!

[Heart]

1. y u no map the whole song
2. y so many repeat sliders
3. 00:36:629 (3) - well i understand that you follow vocal here but there is an obvious beat on the previous white tick sooo....
4. 00:39:991 (4) - but why blue tick, theres nothing in the song you could have followed here and it sounds weird D:
5. 00:49:043 (4) - same stuff
6. 03:03:784 (2) - rhythm here differs from the one here 01:06:887 (1) - and here 02:13:094 (1,2) - , you should probably put something similar here to avoid confusing the player :/

[Tears]

1. 00:15:422 - note here pls
2. 00:33:267 (3) - 1/4 slider(or 1/4 repeat slider) would definitely sound better here but idk
3. 00:38:956 (2) - this instantly makes me want to stop playing
4. 01:14:387 (3) - maybe clap the whole slider
5. 01:22:922 (7) - ^
6. 01:30:422 (7) - clap at the end?
7. 01:31:456 (9) - clap?
8. 01:31:198 (8,9,1,2,3,4) - looks kinda...bad
9. try adding claps here 01:59:905 and here 02:00:422
10. 02:46:974 (2,3) - make this into slider?
11. 03:04:301 (3,4) - slightly offscreen

[Last Christmas]

1. 01:13:870 (3) - clap at the end?
2. 01:30:939 (2) - clap?
3. 01:49:818 (1,2) - newcombo somewhere
4. 01:54:215 (6) - ^
5. 02:07:663 (7) - try adding claps on repeat and end?
6. 02:20:077 (5) - clap on end?

La Cataline wrote:

[General]

merry christmas!

[Heart]

1. y u no map the whole song I tried to do it but then I took an arrow to the knee
2. y so many repeat sliders 'cause I can
3. 00:36:629 (3) - well i understand that you follow vocal here but there is an obvious beat on the previous white tick sooo.... I think you should actually be able to figure out the slider following the vocal even as a beginner, but sometimes red ticks really are a problem but IMO not in this case. I will look for others to point it out and then maybe fix it.
4. 00:39:991 (4) - but why blue tick, theres nothing in the song you could have followed here and it sounds weird D: fix
5. 00:49:043 (4) - same stuff It does follow the vocal though?
6. 03:03:784 (2) - rhythm here differs from the one here 01:06:887 (1) - and here 02:13:094 (1,2) - , you should probably put something similar here to avoid confusing the player :/ fix

[Tears]

1. 00:15:422 - note here pls ok
2. 00:33:267 (3) - 1/4 slider(or 1/4 repeat slider) would definitely sound better here but idk Hm, nope, I don't use 1/4 reverse on the whole diff so I don't think i should do one suddenly there
3. 00:38:956 (2) - this instantly makes me want to stop playing Indeed, actually I don't even know how that extra reverse got there
4. 01:14:387 (3) - maybe clap the whole slider Hm, nope
5. 01:22:922 (7) - ^ ok
6. 01:30:422 (7) - clap at the end? nope
7. 01:31:456 (9) - clap?^
8. 01:31:198 (8,9,1,2,3,4) - looks kinda...bad fix
9. try adding claps here 01:59:905 and here 02:00:422 Nope
10. 02:46:974 (2,3) - make this into slider? ok
11. 03:04:301 (3,4) - slightly offscreen I think it should be okay..

[Last Christmas]

1. 01:13:870 (3) - clap at the end? nope
2. 01:30:939 (2) - clap?^
3. 01:49:818 (1,2) - newcombo somewhere ok
4. 01:54:215 (6) - ^^
5. 02:07:663 (7) - try adding claps on repeat and end? nop
6. 02:20:077 (5) - clap on end? nope

Thank you very much Cataline ! > <

this song is now stuck in my head. dammit.

La Cataline wrote:

this song is now stuck in my head. dammit.

hehe >:3

As per your request:

[General]

1. Everything seem ok.

[Heart]

1. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:29:646 (1) - Would you symmetrize the slider’s curve?It's quite weird for now,probably do sth like this:
      
      Sample

      

      309,181,29646,6,0,B|320:147|403:147|419:184,1,120,0|8

      Don't forget to adjust the spacing if you change that.
   2. 00:32:749 (5) – Add a new combo here because the combo length of this chain is more longer then others.
   3. 00:49:043 (4) - Why you put a 3/4 rhythm here T_T it doesn't fit the music that much,you can hear there are nothing to support the reverse of the slider 00:49:431 - .Here's my little suggestion,try to make a slider here and stop at 00:49:560 - ,after that,add a note at 00:49:818 - .You may need to adjust the spacing if you fix this.
   4. 00:52:405 (2) - I don't support these kind of slider keep in the easy diff...about the slide's route...
   5. 03:17:749 (1,1) - IMO,this don't need to spam the new combo here,well,I just think that isn't have a specific reason to do that.If I were you.I would add a new combo at 03:18:784 (1) - only.
2. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 01:39:991 (3) - Probably add a finish here?either using a soft finish or normal finish.

[Tears]

1. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:13:094 (7) - Probably unstack this note?Because you didn't stack any notes/sliders in this part,so I just suggest to remove that.
   2. 00:33:267 (3,4) - A little rhythm suggestion here,would you make a slider triplet here instead of this 1/2?Just going to follow the drum sound here and it sounds much comfortable during gameplay.
   3. 00:39:991 (3) - Do you missing a new combo here? :U
2. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:25:508 (1) - Add a finish here?Due to the strong accent point.
   2. 01:39:991 (3) - Probably add a finish here?either using a soft finish or normal finish.

[Last Christmas]

1. Difficulty setting
   (I suggest the difficulty setting for better gameplay.)
   
   1. AR -1 if possible due to the low BPM song.
2. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:15:939 (1) - I think it shouldn't be a jump here Y_Y I can't hear any higher pitch, acceleration, instrument going ape at all and the lyrics at that part are even.
   2. 00:47:232 (3,4) - The arrangement of the slider were a little bit weird,I prefer using notes instead of slider here.
   3. 01:39:991 (10,1) - Swap new combo?Because (10)- is a start of a new part.
   4. 02:35:853 (1,2,3,4) - I can't find a reason that its need a stream here orz...it doesn't fit the music that much so I recommend to remove that and use simple 1/2 is okey.
3. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:33:913 (5) - Probably change to soft hitsound here?
   2. 01:39:991 (3) - Probably add a finish here?either using a soft finish or normal finish.
   3. 03:06:887 (3) - Add a finish here?

That's it!
Star'd

..ignore this plz..

kanpakyin wrote:

As per your request:

[General]

1. Everything seem ok.

[Heart]

1. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:29:646 (1) - Would you symmetrize the slider’s curve?It's quite weird for now,probably do sth like this: fixed, but not exactly as in screenshot..
      
      Sample

      

      309,181,29646,6,0,B|320:147|403:147|419:184,1,120,0|8

      Don't forget to adjust the spacing if you change that.
   2. 00:32:749 (5) – Add a new combo here because the combo length of this chain is more longer then others. ok
   3. 00:49:043 (4) - Why you put a 3/4 rhythm here T_T it doesn't fit the music that much,you can hear there are nothing to support the reverse of the slider 00:49:431 - .Here's my little suggestion,try to make a slider here and stop at 00:49:560 - ,after that,add a note at 00:49:818 - .You may need to adjust the spacing if you fix this. fix
   4. 00:52:405 (2) - I don't support these kind of slider keep in the easy diff...about the slide's route... Hmm, I made it a bit easier and fixed it so you don't stop at the middle of the slider, but generally this should be ok
   5. 03:17:749 (1,1) - IMO,this don't need to spam the new combo here,well,I just think that isn't have a specific reason to do that.If I were you.I would add a new combo at 03:18:784 (1) - only. I nc'd a combo earlier
2. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 01:39:991 (3) - Probably add a finish here?either using a soft finish or normal finish. Nop

[Tears]

1. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:13:094 (7) - Probably unstack this note?Because you didn't stack any notes/sliders in this part,so I just suggest to remove that. ok
   2. 00:33:267 (3,4) - A little rhythm suggestion here,would you make a slider triplet here instead of this 1/2?Just going to follow the drum sound here and it sounds much comfortable during gameplay. No, since I don't use triples in this whole diff so putting one there for a drum sound wouldn't be much enough to convince me for a 1/4 reverse
   3. 00:39:991 (3) - Do you missing a new combo here? :U Nope > <
2. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:25:508 (1) - Add a finish here?Due to the strong accent point. I don't want to add finish at that point
   2. 01:39:991 (3) - Probably add a finish here?either using a soft finish or normal finish. Hmm, nope

[Last Christmas]

1. Difficulty setting
   (I suggest the difficulty setting for better gameplay.)
   
   1. AR -1 if possible due to the low BPM song. I think 7 is fine , also 6 would be too slow for highest difficulty...
2. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:15:939 (1) - I think it shouldn't be a jump here Y_Y I can't hear any higher pitch, acceleration, instrument going ape at all and the lyrics at that part are even. ok
   2. 00:47:232 (3,4) - The arrangement of the slider were a little bit weird,I prefer using notes instead of slider here. ok
   3. 01:39:991 (10,1) - Swap new combo?Because (10)- is a start of a new part. No because I'm following the vocal with Combo
   4. 02:35:853 (1,2,3,4) - I can't find a reason that its need a stream here orz...it doesn't fit the music that much so I recommend to remove that and use simple 1/2 is okey. Hngh :< ok
3. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:33:913 (5) - Probably change to soft hitsound here? ok
   2. 01:39:991 (3) - Probably add a finish here?either using a soft finish or normal finish. nope
   3. 03:06:887 (3) - Add a finish here? Nope, I only add finish on "last christmas" and "this year"

That's it!
Star'd

Thank you very much kanpakyin !! (also for star > <)

Hi Magic~ \:D/

[General]

• 
  I want to spend a good time with girl friend this christmas but I'm alone yet ;_;

[Heart]

• 
  OD+1? OD2 is kinda low imo.

1. 02:06:370 (3) - Move it a bit left? Seems kinda closer to (2) than between (1,2).

[Tears]

1. 00:03:784 (3) - Move the end of slider up by 1 grid? That looks more straight with (4,5,6).
2. 00:33:396 (x) - Add a note? It's not so hard pattern if you added it.
3. 02:04:560 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - More whistle are needed here~

[Last Christmas]

1. 00:34:301 (T) - It's better to silence since 00:34:043 than this time imo.
2. 00:42:577 (1) - How about adding whistle at the end instead of (2)'s top? That sounds better for me.
3. 01:01:456 (8) - Move 1st way point up by 1 grid? The shape will become more beutiful ^_^
4. 01:52:146 (x) - I think that a note should be added here...but not a big deal.
5. 02:05:594 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Wow sweet heart<3
6. 02:13:612 (2) - You forgot to add clap?
7. 02:32:232 (6,7) - A bit wide spacing.
8. 03:16:715 (1) - Clap?

Sweet mapset<3
Good luck!

Suzully wrote:

Hi Magic~ \:D/ YO ~ \o/

[General]

• 
  I want to spend a good time with girl friend this christmas but I'm alone yet ;_; ;w;...

[Heart]

• 
  OD+1? OD2 is kinda low imo. ok +1

1. 02:06:370 (3) - Move it a bit left? Seems kinda closer to (2) than between (1,2). fix

[Tears]

1. 00:03:784 (3) - Move the end of slider up by 1 grid? That looks more straight with (4,5,6). ok
2. 00:33:396 (x) - Add a note? It's not so hard pattern if you added it. I replaced it with a slider 1/4...
3. 02:04:560 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - More whistle are needed here~ sure :3

[Last Christmas]

1. 00:34:301 (T) - It's better to silence since 00:34:043 than this time imo. fixed it even 1/2 earlier
2. 00:42:577 (1) - How about adding whistle at the end instead of (2)'s top? That sounds better for me. yup okay
3. 01:01:456 (8) - Move 1st way point up by 1 grid? The shape will become more beutiful ^_^ oke~
4. 01:52:146 (x) - I think that a note should be added here...but not a big deal. Hm, I won't add
5. 02:05:594 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Wow sweet heart<3 :DD ! <3
6. 02:13:612 (2) - You forgot to add clap? added
7. 02:32:232 (6,7) - A bit wide spacing. fixed
8. 03:16:715 (1) - Clap? good

Sweet mapset<3 >w< <3
Good luck!

Thank you very much Suzullyyy ~~ !

Hello :3 Here is my Mod

All IMO

[Heart]

• 00:33:784 (3) – Add finish
• 00:50:336 (6) – Add finish remove whistle
• 01:39:991 (3) – Add finish
• 01:56:543 (1) – Add finish at the begin of the slider
• 02:00:680 (1) – ^
• 02:04:301 (1) – Add finish at the retrieve arrow
• 02:08:956 (1) – Add finish at the begin of the slider

[Tears]

• 00:33:784 (4) – Add finish
• 01:39:474 (3) – Add finish at the end of the slider
• 01:56:543 (1) – Add finish at the begin of the slider
• 02:00:680 (1) – ^
• 02:04:560 (1) – ^
• 02:08:956 (1) – Add finish

[Last Christmas]

• 00:33:784 (5) – Add finish at the begin of the slider
• 00:37:922 (7) – Add whistle at the begin of the slider
• 00:42:577 (1) – ^ And remove whistle at the end
• 00:42:965 (2) – Add whistle at the begin of the slider
• 00:45:034 (3) – ^
• 01:56:543 (1) – Add finish
• 02:00:681 (1) – Add finish at the begin of the slider
• 02:04:818 (3) – ^
• 02:08:956 (1) – ^

That’s all I can do cause the beatmap its great hope this will be ranked for Christmas or before lol

Good Luck !

Sorry no fixes xAx
But thank you very much, I hope it will rank on Christmas
(PS : reverse arrow! not retrieve..lol)

Hello

Heart
* Map the beginning part? Like other diff?

01:03:525 (3) - The sliderpath is overlapped by hitburst, and makes beginners is confusing (not sure, lol)
03:03:525 (2) - Make this slider paralleled (Nazi)

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Tears
* AR +1?

00:18:008 (2) - The head slider is touch the HP Bar, and it's impair of visibility for approachcircle and notes

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Last Christmas
00:27:318 (1) - How about the tail slider is stacked with 00:26:801 (4)?
01:53:568 (5) - Remove 1 repeating slider?
03:16:974 (2) - What's the point having a finish hitsound here?

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I think my modpost is useless, sorry

Leorda wrote:

Hello

Heart
* Map the beginning part? Like other diff? oke :[ but later

01:03:525 (3) - The sliderpath is overlapped by hitburst, and makes beginners is confusing (not sure, lol) I don't think so
03:03:525 (2) - Make this slider paralleled (Nazi) nope

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Tears
* AR +1? ok

00:18:008 (2) - The head slider is touch the HP Bar, and it's impair of visibility for approachcircle and notes ok

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Last Christmas
00:27:318 (1) - How about the tail slider is stacked with 00:26:801 (4)? nope
01:53:568 (5) - Remove 1 repeating slider? hmm, no
03:16:974 (2) - What's the point having a finish hitsound here? removed

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I think my modpost is useless, sorry

Thank you very much Leo =)

request from my queue
3:19 - 2 diff
[last christmas]
02:12:577 (7) - maybe add a repeat will sound better

[tears]
01:17:232 (1) - the last white point 1 grid left (grid 4)
01:20:853 (4) - add a note with clap
02:41:543 (7) - x396 y148
02:41:801 (1) - x344 y104
03:00:422 (1,2) - make them straight
03:04:818 (4) - 1 grid right

No_Gu wrote:

request from my queue
3:19 - 2 diff
[last christmas]
02:12:577 (7) - maybe add a repeat will sound better IMO not, it also would give me a lot of trouble for the spacing..

[tears]
01:17:232 (1) - the last white point 1 grid left (grid 4) ok
01:20:853 (4) - add a note with clap no
02:41:543 (7) - x396 y148 nop
02:41:801 (1) - x344 y104 342 103 instead
03:00:422 (1,2) - make them straight nope
03:04:818 (4) - 1 grid right no, would mess up the spacing

Thank you very much no_gu =)

hi~ Magicphoenix

from my queue ~

here my mod ~

[Heart]

1. 00:42:577 (1) - spacing too far (1.16x)
2. 00:58:094 (4) - grid. x416,y160 ( stack with 01:00:163 (2) )
3. 01:26:543 (3,4) - grid. 3:x328,y168 is better. http://puu.sh/aV7X with 01:27:060 (4) - x328,y72
4. 02:14:905 (1) - remove NC and 02:16:715 - add NC and 02:18:267 - remove NC

[Tears]

1. 00:51:629 (3) - grid move. x200,y124 (use grid size 4 tiny )
2. 02:35:853 (6) - add NC or 02:35:594 (5) - add NC ?

[Last Christmas]

1. 00:54:215 (1) - remove NC and 00:54:474 - add NC
2. 01:53:568 (5,1) - Suggestion of the rhythm http://puu.sh/aViX
3. 02:43:870 (5) - add NC and 02:44:129 - remove NC ?

That's all ~

very very beautiful map >x<

two Star for you ~ ☆ and Good luck ~

(and sorry, poor mod. Please do not throw kudosu if worthless (*>ω<*) )