1. Another (4.95 stars, 708 notes)
2. Beginner (2.04 stars, 103 notes)
3. Hyper (5 stars, 344 notes)
4. Normal (3.57 stars, 137 notes)

giuyl-nyah wrote:

yes, DJ YOSHITAKA.

• [Hyper]

1. 01:49:870 (5) - 終点のwhistleをremove
2. 01:50:113 (6) - add whistle

1. 00:06:978 (4) - I personally dislike how this (4) suddenly moves to the right, I think it's better to continue your circle formation here, maybe like this:
   
   SPOILER

   http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/232539
2. 00:17:357 (4) - Place it here? It looks/plays better imo:
   
   SPOILER

   [img]osu.ppy.sh/ss/232542[/img]
3. 00:29:843 (1,2,3,4) - You can (slightly) rotate these four selection-centre (-4° maybe?) for a twist here :3
4. 00:37:140 (11) and other parts like this - Whistle also fits here to break the silence imo...
5. 00:42:816 (1) - Finish here, to emphasize the stream's end?
6. 00:45:167 (10,11) - Arrange them pointing to (1) perhaps?
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:53:194 (1) - Finish here to emphasize the cymbal from the song?
8. 01:03:573 (11) - Move the inherit section 1/4 earlier?
9. 01:16:221 (5) - Well, how about curving like this? This wave flows more naturally imo, and it doesn't give the "gap" to (4) as your current slider does:
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 01:24:654 (5) - Whistle really fits on slider's start. (this suggestion also applies for the next parts like this)
11. 01:33:735 (5) - Curve this slider a bit?
    
    SPOILER

    
12. 01:44:762 (6) - Add finish on slider's end?
13. 02:05:843 - Minor stuff, but you won't need that C1 here :3

1. 00:01:789 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Move all these one grid down and right, to equalize (1,2)'s "midpoint gap"... uh, well, I think this pic shows what I mean:
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:19:465 (1,3) - Tilt this a bit (one grid up for (1)'s endpoint and one grid down for (3)'s endpoint) maybe?
3. 00:42:816 (1) - Finish on slider's start?
4. 00:52:789 (7) - Curve it more (like this)?
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:53:194 (1) - Finish here?
6. 01:03:573 (7) - Move inherit section 1/4 earlier?
7. 01:16:221 (4) - Curve it more also? (slider wave also plays beautiful here imo)
8. 01:24:330 (1) - Add finish here to add more power from the hitsounds?
9. 01:26:276 (3,4) - Rather than facing right to each other, I prefer this:
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 01:45:086 (1) - Add finish here?
11. 01:49:140 (2) - Not perfectly stacked to (4), but I can understand it because you're mapping with grid lv3
12. 01:52:221 (5) - Curve this downward instead? Would build more flow imo:
    
    SPOILER

    
13. 02:05:843 - Minor stuff, but you won't need that C1 here :3

1. 00:19:465 (1) - Drag the waypoints 1 grid right, and the endpoint 1 grid down? (minor stuffs, yeah >_<)
2. 00:20:438 (2) - If you do ^, copy-paste (1), ctrl+h, and put here
3. 00:33:735 (2) - Should be placed 1 grid left (unless it's intentional)...
4. 00:35:032 (3,4) - I prefer if the whistles exist on both slider's start and end (like the hitsounding on Another diff)
5. 00:46:708 (3) - Another minor stuff, but one grid right for the endpoint
6. 00:51:248 (2) - Remove whistle here. I think it's better if you don't repeat the whistle pattern here, sometimes no hitsound works better imo
7. 00:59:032 (2,2) - If you follow ^, remove whistle on one of these slider's start to keep the consistency
8. 01:02:600 (3,4) - I'd rather put (3) in (2)'s path to keep it flowing, like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 01:34:708 (1) - Add finish on slider's start?
10. 01:35:681 (2) - Add whistle here?
11. 01:36:005 (3) - If you do ^, (optional) remove the whistle on slider's start or move the whistle to the slider's end
12. 01:45:086 (1) - Add finish on slider's start?
13. 02:05:843 - Minor stuff, but you won't need that C1 here :3

1. 00:22:059 (1,2,3,4) - Tilt this square pattern?
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:28:546 (2) - Not perfectly in the center (you can tell from the slidertick), barely noticeable though
3. 00:42:816 (1) - Add finish?
4. 00:56:762 (2,2,2) - Curve these three a bit also? (like you mostly did before)
5. 01:24:330 (1) - Add finish?
6. 01:38:276 (4) - Add whistle here? (to spice up this part)
7. 01:45:086 (1) - Add finish on slider's start?
8. 01:51:248 (2,3) - Try something like this perhaps?
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 01:54:816 (4) - Although straight slider plays fine here, but optionally you can curve this slider also to get some flow for the ending. For example:
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 02:05:843 - Minor stuff, but you won't need that C1 here :3

1. Your bg is 1024x759, so resize it to 1024x768? D:
2. I'm not sure about 19 in tags, it can't be searched, because it's too short. So, maybe change to IIDX19?

1. 00:31:140 (4,5,6) - add finishes?
2. 00:32:438 (1) - ^

1. 00:32:438 (1) - finish in the beginning instead of whistle?

1. 00:32:438 (1) - finish to the beginning? D:

1. 00:32:438 (1) - finish? :<