kokoroanime wrote:

~Beginner~

00:08:013: This is where you start the break at, so drag the start of the break to 00:08:013 (White tick). done
00:41:270: Drag this start of the break to 00:41:270. (White tick)

~biwako~

00:04:241 (2,3) - Highlight both of them and move this to x: 111 y: 106. done
00:05:784 (7) - Move this to x:367 y:104. done
00:21:384 (3) - Move this to x:229 y:193. done
00:29:698 (7,8,9,1) - *Nazi* Highlight them and move one grid down and one grid left... After that, fix the spacing on (2) (00:30:298). done
00:31:584 (2,3) - Highlight both of them and move this to x:239 y:136.
00:33:556 (5,6) - Highlight both of them and move this to x:258 y:320. done
01:03:127 (3,4) - Highlight both of them and move this to x:377 y:65. done
01:10:755 (4) - Move this to x:88 y:302. done

That's the best I can do.
Thank you and good luck.

Sync wrote:

theowest
01:10:241 (4) - Make this into a slider that lasts until 01:10:756. ok, fix'd
01:16:070 (1) - Remove all of these repeats ok, fix'd
01:16:413 (2) - Add a slider here that ends at 01:16:927. ok, fix'd

Good luck, hope I helped.

Sync wrote:

General
-- Add tags to Pastel's difficulty
-- Pastel's combo colors are different from the rest of the maps. In Pastel's .osu file, replace Combo3 : 0,219,219 with Combo3 : 85,85,255 Sorry I forgot changing Thx

Pastel
-- This difficulty is fine by all means; however, I believe there are places where the map feels empty. A large portion of my mod (for this difficulty) will focus on beat-placement.
00:04:756 (4) - Add a hit circle here to follow the vocals No change
00:18:984 (1) - Either way is fine, but I'd also consider adding a hit circle here. ok! fixed
00:29:441 (3) - Add a hit circle here No change
00:29:613 (4,5,6) - Again, this isn't necessary, but since you've added triplets like these in similar sections (later on), I'd do the same here No change
00:31:841 (2) - Add a hit circle I tried adding circle, but I feel this part is difficult... No change
00:41:956 (2) - ^ Changed pattern thanks!
00:42:470 (4) - Shorten by 1/2 a beat ok! fixed
00:42:984 (5) - Move back 2 ticks and make it longer by 1/2 a beat. I think this follows the vocals better.
00:57:898 (9) - Add a hit circle to follow the vocals. (also, kiai should be more exciting, no?)　No change
01:05:098 (5,6) - I'd thought I would point out that the beat definitely calls for a triplet here, so I suggest you add these two notes. I think here part stopped (4) Good.
01:05:441 (2) - Add a hit circle ok! fixed
01:08:356 (1) - Move back two ticks Changed pattern
01:08:698 (2) - Add a hit circle
01:16:241 (3) - Remove this slider; add a hit circle at 01:16:241; add a 1-beat slider at 01:16:413 and don't forget to remove 01:16:756 (5). Timeline Reference Changed pattern a bit

1. Consider adding des1re43 in the tags. I believe that was Pastel's previous user name.
2. Keep the slider tick rate consistent for all difficulties. It's a suggestion but I recommend you do that.

1. 00:01:156-On theowest, biwako, and Pastel, this timing point that is overlapping the timing section is pretty useless. Delete it.

1. 00:05:870 (1)-Probably best to extend the end of that spinner onto 00:08:013.
2. 00:32:698 (1, 2, 3)-I don't like how the 1st note is overlapping slider 2. Here is what I think is better. http://puu.sh/dCfN Oh and don't forget to use the distance snap on the rest of the notes after.
3. 00:34:927-It looks like to me that there should be a new combo here. Add on in. (:
4. 00:35:613-Remove new combo~
5. 01:02:870 (1)-It sounds like there should be a finish here.
6. 01:11:098 (1)-It sounds like there should be a finish on the beginning...

1. I was expecting the slider velocity to be a bit faster on a Normal difficulty, say 1.10. But having the slider velocity 0.80 is okay I guess.
2. 00:24:127 (5)-You know, it's not a good idea stacking this note behind the end point of the previous slider. ): The player could hit it early and might miss. Consider using the distance snap on it more or you can keep it stacked but move the note onto 00:23:956, which sounds better here and plays better in my opinion.
3. 00:34:927-It seems to me that there should be a new combo here. Consider adding one in.
4. 00:36:298-Remove new combo.

1. 00:34:584 (3, 4, 5)-A triple here doesn't sound right to me. Consider having this become a double. You know, something like this?
   
2. 00:37:670 (4, 5, 6)-^Pretty much the same thing.
3. 00:56:527 (2, 3, 4)-^Same thing
4. 01:18:813 (8, 10)-Sliders in between streams... I'm not okay with that. ): Sure, it depends on the BPM but since the BPM for this map is 175, I don't approve of this. Just replace those sliders with notes and it would be just a note stream~
5. 01:24:298-Perhaps it would be best to put a new combo here.

1. 00:18:641 (2)-A finish here doesn't sound right to me. Consider removing it.
2. 00:32:013 (2, 3, 4)-A triple doesn't sound right to be and they don't fit. ): Consider removing notes 2, 3 and 4. Would I recommend adding a slider on 00:31:841 and ending it on 00:32:184. http://puu.sh/dDdH Making that slider into a curve or linear is up to you.
3. 00:40:927 (x)-It sounds like there should be a note here. Add one in and add a finish too perhaps?

Roddie wrote:

Hey.

General

1. Consider adding des1re43 in the tags. I believe that was Pastel's previous user name. I think don't need add it tag because There is no Ranked map or guest diff When previous name
2. Keep the slider tick rate consistent for all difficulties. It's a suggestion but I recommend you do that.

um...no change

Timing Points

1. 00:01:156-On theowest, biwako, and Pastel, this timing point that is overlapping the timing section is pretty useless. Delete it.

I think This section is neccesary because red section can't change slider speed

Beginner almost fixed

1. 00:05:870 (1)-Probably best to extend the end of that spinner onto 00:08:013.
2. 00:32:698 (1, 2, 3)-I don't like how the 1st note is overlapping slider 2. Here is what I think is better. http://puu.sh/dCfN Oh and don't forget to use the distance snap on the rest of the notes after.
3. 00:34:927-It looks like to me that there should be a new combo here. Add on in. (:
4. 00:35:613-Remove new combo~
5. 01:02:870 (1)-It sounds like there should be a finish here. no change,I think it don't fit
6. 01:11:098 (1)-It sounds like there should be a finish on the beginning...

biwako all fixed

1. 00:34:584 (3, 4, 5)-A triple here doesn't sound right to me. Consider having this become a double. You know, something like this?
   
2. 00:37:670 (4, 5, 6)-^Pretty much the same thing.
3. 00:56:527 (2, 3, 4)-^Same thing
4. 01:18:813 (8, 10)-Sliders in between streams... I'm not okay with that. ): Sure, it depends on the BPM but since the BPM for this map is 175, I don't approve of this. Just replace those sliders with notes and it would be just a note stream~
5. 01:24:298-Perhaps it would be best to put a new combo here.

And that's about it. If you have any questions, feel free to reply back.

Good luck to you!

Roddie wrote:

Hey.

Pastel

1. 00:18:641 (2)-A finish here doesn't sound right to me. Consider removing it. removed finish
2. 00:32:013 (2, 3, 4)-A triple doesn't sound right to be and they don't fit. ): Consider removing notes 2, 3 and 4. Would I recommend adding a slider on 00:31:841 and ending it on 00:32:184. http://puu.sh/dDdH Making that slider into a curve or linear is up to you. I think so too, Fixed
3. 00:40:927 (x)-It sounds like there should be a note here. Add one in and add a finish too perhaps? Fixed~

Good luck to you!

Roddie wrote:

theowest

1. I was expecting the slider velocity to be a bit faster on a Normal difficulty, say 1.10. But having the slider velocity 0.80 is okay I guess. I compared like 10 normals with eachother before I made this map and thought 0,8 would be best. It's 175 bpm yknow, can't be too much!
2. 00:24:127 (5)-You know, it's not a good idea stacking this note behind the end point of the previous slider. ): The player could hit it early and might miss. Consider using the distance snap on it more or you can keep it stacked but move the note onto 00:23:956, which sounds better here and plays better in my opinion. okay, fix'd
3. 00:34:927-It seems to me that there should be a new combo here. Consider adding one in. okay!
4. 00:36:298-Remove new combo. sure

1. 00:37:498 (5) - Considers move this slider three grids up to the newbie players can be read this with more easily like 00:51:727 (1).
2. 01:19:327 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Add more hitsounds, maybe finish and whistles like the others diffs.

1. 00:05:784 (1) - Move this spinner 1/1 backward and longer by 1/1, in the others diffs follows the voice to 00:05:784 but here no, considers it or add sliders or beats like the others diffs.
2. 00:14:870 - Remove this rythmical break, is needless with only 1/4 of duration.
3. 00:27:556 - Add a note here to read best the next beat, furthermore fits with the voice.
4. 00:44:698 - Same as above.
5. 00:53:956 (1) - Remove new combo and put it to 00:54:641 (5), the two notes of the prev
6. 00:57:213 (1) - Whistle at the start.
7. 01:05:270 (1) - Remove new combo here and put nc in the next note.
8. 01:16:413 (2) - The stack here is a bit confusing and a bit har to read, please move this slider to avoid the stack.

1. Capitalize pastel of the tags to Pastel
2. 00:39:898 (1) - Remove new combo, the previous looks weird with only 1
3. 01:06:984 (1,2) - Whistle at the start.
4. 01:24:298 (1,2,3) - Yeah the flower looks nice but the overlap no, considers move away to avoid this overlap.

1. 01:20:527 (4) - New combo here and remove to the next note.
2. Nothing wrong or remarkable only I suggest add more hitsound in this part 01:19:327 (1)

Kenezz wrote:

Herrow >w<
from my queue
Kenezz's Bakamod~

Beginner

1. 00:37:498 (5) - Considers move this slider three grids up to the newbie players can be read this with more easily like 00:51:727 (1). done
2. 01:19:327 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Add more hitsounds, maybe finish and whistles like the others diffs. same as Insane

biwako

1. 01:20:527 (4) - New combo here and remove to the next note. done
2. Nothing wrong or remarkable only I suggest add more hitsound in this part 01:19:327 (1) added some hitsounds

Ok, It's All, I hope to helps you
Good Luck :3~

Kenezz wrote:

Herrow >w<
from my queue
Kenezz's Bakamod~


Pastel

1. Capitalize pastel of the tags to Pastel
2. 00:39:898 (1) - Remove new combo, the previous looks weird with only 1
3. 01:06:984 (1,2) - Whistle at the start.
4. 01:24:298 (1,2,3) - Yeah the flower looks nice but the overlap no, considers move away to avoid this overlap.

Ok, It's All, I hope to helps you
Good Luck :3~

Kenezz wrote:

Sorry for the delay >.<~

Bubble

abalee wrote:

[theowest]
Timing point in 5784ms should move forward to totally silence this spinner 00:05:613 (1) - right?

theowest wrote:

so.. when's this getting ranked?

grumd wrote:

theowest wrote:

so.. when's this getting ranked?

Now! Ranked!

(yea, very funny joke)

Garven wrote:

[theo]
00:47:613 (3) - Whistle on sliderslide sounds awful :<
00:58:756 (4) - Surprised this didn't end at 00:59:270 - and have a rhythm to continue at 00:59:784 -
01:02:870 (1,2) - Kind of a strange rhythm to use here. How about something like this?

01:24:470 - Add note

Garven wrote:

Ouch, too many people replying so it's hard to see how old this was.

[General]
00:08:013 - I can make the title text appear at this point in time if you'd like. I want it,please set to show title this time
Think you could get a 1024x768 BG please? fixed

[Easy] fixed
00:05:870 (1) - Start this at 00:05:956 -
00:36:984 (4,5) - For a map labeled as beginner, I really wouldn't recommend having such a short slider with a hit object afterward so soon. I'm honestly already wary of 00:34:927 (1,2,3,4) - anyway
01:23:442 (3) - Same thing here

[theo]
00:47:613 (3) - Whistle on sliderslide sounds awful :<
00:58:756 (4) - Surprised this didn't end at 00:59:270 - and have a rhythm to continue at 00:59:784 -
01:02:870 (1,2) - Kind of a strange rhythm to use here. How about something like this?

01:24:470 - Add note

[Pastel]
00:21:727 (7,8,9) - This rhythm feels unnecessary
00:38:356 (1,2,3) - These feel unnatural to play because the strong synth hit is where you want to start your sliders, so at 00:38:184 - 00:38:698 - and 00:39:213 - . A rhythm like this would work best imo

00:40:927 - Add note
00:48:813 (6,7,8) - This rhythm feels unnecessary. Bleh there are a lot of them later in the map too. I really don't think they fit this song well.
01:00:813 (3) - Although it's not obscured for very long, it would be an easy thing to adjust the slider tail so that the repeat isn't covered by the hitburst from 00:59:784 (5) -
01:04:756 (4,1) - Really don't like this spacing

[biwako] fixed
00:16:241 (1,3) - After playing these two hitting this stack at 00:17:270 (1,2) - broke your flow..
I'm of the same opinion from the Pastel difficulty: the triple 1/4 rhythms feel extraneous and unnecessary.

Garven wrote:

[Pastel]
00:21:727 (7,8,9) - This rhythm feels unnecessary
00:38:356 (1,2,3) - These feel unnatural to play because the strong synth hit is where you want to start your sliders, so at 00:38:184 - 00:38:698 - and 00:39:213 - . A rhythm like this would work best imo

00:40:927 - Add note
00:48:813 (6,7,8) - This rhythm feels unnecessary. Bleh there are a lot of them later in the map too. I really don't think they fit this song well.
01:00:813 (3) - Although it's not obscured for very long, it would be an easy thing to adjust the slider tail so that the repeat isn't covered by the hitburst from 00:59:784 (5) -
01:04:756 (4,1) - Really don't like this spacing

Garven wrote:

[biwako]
01:20:527 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This doesn't read well at all. I recommend you change it up.