This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on วันอังคารที่ 27 ธันวาคม พ.ศ. 2554 at 19:04:06

Artist: Spiritsoul
Title: Bad Apple!! (Orchestra Version)
Source: Synthesia
Tags: bad apple spiritsoul orchestra version synthesia
BPM: 138
Filesize: 20324kb
Play Time: 03:28
Difficulties Available:

1. Endless (4.93 stars, 454 notes)
2. Guest Collab (4.88 stars, 27 notes)
3. Hard (4.51 stars, 113 notes)

Download: Spiritsoul - Bad Apple!! (Orchestra Version)
Download: Spiritsoul - Bad Apple!! (Orchestra Version) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Here is the orchestra version of "Bad Apple"

Hard 18%
Guest Collab 5%
Endless 100% (I was place some trap at this diff.)

Modded by Kei

Hi!
Another Bad Apple map? *sigh*

• General

1. Remove from tags 'bad apple orchestra version 0814587134 endless'. 'Bad Apple' and 'orchestra version' are already written at the title. Yes, title words count as tags. '0814587134' it's the beatmap creator's nick (Your nick). Beatmap creator name count as tags too. 'Endless' it's the name of the difficulty you've got submitted atm.. This tag is unnecessary.
   
   
2. Why it's 'credits.png' at the song's folder when you're not using it? Well.. maybe you're gonna make a SB with that image.. if you're gonna do that, then ok, don't delete this image.. but if it's there to be seen by some people that has the special opportunity to open the song folder for a random reason, delete it.. It's pointless.. Specially because it only repeats what the beatmap general information already says. If you delete this image don't forget to do Full Submit.
   
   
3. I think you should change the title to "Bad Apple!! (Orchestra Version)".
   
   
4. The MP3 file you used has 265kbps. The maximum bitrate allowed of the audio file is 192kbps. You should encode this mp3, or replace this one with another mp3 of 128 ~ 192kbps.
   
   
5. Timing sounds really wrong. You should search for someone to give you a decent timing. Also, timelines aren't snapped correctly.

[Endless]


Maybe too much copy paste..?


00:04:505 (4) – New combo.
00:07:983 (9) – Move this note somewhere.. It’s above the next slider (2)’s body, Add New combo here.
00:08:418 (2) – Remove new combo.
00:14:964 (1) – New combo.
00:16:268 (1) - ^
00:17:137 (1) - ^
00:19:746 (1) - ^
00:20:615 (5) – ^
00:28:007 (1) – Remove new combo.
00:30:616 (1) - ^
00:41:050 (1) – New combo
00:41:485 (2) - ^
00:41:920 (3) - ^
00:42:029 (2) – Remove new combo.
00:42:355 (5) – Add whistle and finish here.
00:42:790 (9) – New combo.
00:43:007 (1) – Remove new combo.
00:44:529 (1) - ^
00:53:224 (5) – New combo.
00:54:529 (1) – Remove new combo.
00:54:963 (5) – New combo.
00:55:398 (6) – New combo and add whistle too.
00:55:833 (2) – New combo.
00:56:268 (3) -^
00:59:746 (6) – New combo.
01:00:398 (1) – Remove new combo.
01:03:877 (1) -^
01:08:442 (4) – New combo.
01:10:833 (1) – Remove new combo.
01:12:572 (1) – New combo.
01:38:661 (1) – Remove new combo.
01:39:964 (5) – New combo.
01:40:834 (5) - ^
01:42:246 (1) – Remove new combo.
01:42:572 (3) – New combo.
01:43:443 (5) – ^
01:44:311 (5) – ^
02:03:875 (1) - ^
02:04:527 (1) – Remove new combo.
02:27:372 (1) – New combo.
02:34:329 (1) – Remove new combo.
02:36:068 (1) – New combo.
02:38:677 (1) – ^
02:41:285 (1) – Remove new combo.
02:43:024 (8) – New combo.
02:49:766 (1) – New combo.
02:51:505 (3) – New combo.
02:56:722 (3) - ^
03:03:244 (4) - ^
03:04:983 (5) - ^
03:15:853 (1) – ^
03:16:070 (1) – Remove new combo.
03:17:809 (5) – Remove new combo.
03:19:548 (1) – Don’t hide notes like this. It’s unrankeable.
03:22:374 (1) – New combo.
03:23:027 (6) – Remove new combo.
03:24:766 (9) – New combo.
03:26:505 (1) – Again. Unrankeable note placement.
03:29:005 – Add a spinner here and end it where (1) is. (Delete (1), obviously).

...I didn't mentioned almost anything about design and hitsounds because I'm really tired of writing, so I'll resume that.
Hitsounds are so so. There are some hitsound and spacing errors. The design doesn't look good but with some modding you can improve your beatmap a lot.

Hitsound suggestion: Add sound samples in a regularly way.

Design suggestion: Try to don't overlap or hide notes. Be creative, make good-looking patterns, and maybe some symmetrical sliders.

Ah, and I almost forget to tell you something important. You broke my Modding Queue rules, but I modded your map anyway because I'm in a good mood and also because I noticed you're new to the forums. That's why I've made an exeption with you, but, please, read the rules before posting in a Modding Queue the next time.

That's all. You have to work more in this beatmap. Good luck! :3

0814587134 wrote:

Composer's name is Spiritsoul, NOT Spiritsoulxx (Youtube name)

prove that the Composer name is Spiritsoul!
in the youtube video it says: by Spiritsoulxx
http://puu.sh/aQmu

เราอัพเพลงเต็มยังอ่ะ ทำไมโหลดแล้วมันไม่ขึ้นเพลงเลย

SUBSTAC9 wrote:

เราอัพเพลงเต็มยังอ่ะ ทำไมโหลดแล้วมันไม่ขึ้นเพลงเลย

http://www.megaupload.com/?d=1BZPR12N ลองดูครับ

Hi. Mod Request as Modding Queue

General:
- Artist: I'm sure that Artist's Name is Spiritsoulxx, so you have to change it. Also (Orchestra Version) is unnecesary in Title
- I suggest to change the BG since a Ranked Map has the same BG as you. (http://osu.ppy.sh/s/13664)
- You have to delete some parts and add some breaks time since the song is too long
- Tags: Remove from tags: Bad apple since it's in Title, Spiitsoui since it's the Artist
- Source: The Source must be Touhou and Remove Synthesia from Source
- Adjust the Audio Lead-in 1000
- Your kiai Sections are unsnaped (Include kiai) you must resnap
- Remove Audio from video

Endless:
Slider Tick Rate in 4 is too much, 2 it's OK.
Overall Difficulty and HP Drain Rate 10 is Unrankable, I suggest to reduce by 3 Ticks (Overall Difficulty and HP Drain Rate -3)
In this song, don't use sections with 100% (In Volume), because sounds too high and ugly
Important Things:
00:40:630 (1,1,1): This pattern doesn't follow the music, (1,2,3) it's better
00:59:108 (5): This Slider must ends 1/2 back (Red Tick, 00:59:543)
01:37:604 (1,1): In this Case (1,2) it's better, so Remove New Combo in 2nd Note
01:48:002 (Spin): Unrankable Spinner, since the Autoplayer can't make 3000 points
02:18:464 (4): New Combo, it's more predictable the change of Slider Velocity
02:59:784 (Spin): This Spinner doesn't play very well, Replace for a Slider
03:05:001 (1): Unnecesary New Combo, Remove it Please.
03:16:523 (2): This Slider Sounds off-rhythm, I suggest to Replace the Slider for a note here
03:22:175 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7): The notes are too speareted in this Stream, you must to collect better the notes
03:23:479 (1): The same as 03:16:523 (2)
03:28:045 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10): The same as 03:22:175
03:28:1947 (Spin): Unrankable Spinner

Well, you need a Style, so I suggest to read this Thread: Mapping Techniques
And in General your Sliders Looks ugly, so here a Link to improve your Sliders: Making Delicious Sliders: A Guide

This need a lot of work, I said only Some things, so try to find more mods
Good Luck with your map