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Maya-kira

Crimmi wrote:

Maya-kira wrote:

syncope @_@;; (what the hell is that---)

I don't really get it T_T;;
Syncope - A missed beat or off-the-beat stress.

Modding, CrimmiStyle!!

From my Mod Rescue Queue~

Suggestion
Change

[In Maya's World]

01:10:883 (1) - Remove Whistle & add Finish? no that would make the other whistle useless TwT;;

[In My World]

Why is this diff the only diff with 3 different timing sections?
01:05:672 (3) - Add finish? okay ;w;
01:08:199 (3) - ^ okay ;w;
01:10:883 (1) - ^ okay
01:18:314 (3) - ^ okay

Alrighty then, this map is solid, good luck!! :)
thank you ;w;
frost-b-spec
thx reqs~

[Yosora]
0.35.989(2) - spacing
0.43.726(2) - ^
0.45.147(1,2) - try this

0.51.620(3) - try this


[Maya]
1.27.620(1) - remove finish
Topic Starter
Maya-kira

frost-b-spec wrote:

thx reqs~

[Yosora]
0.35.989(2) - spacing
0.43.726(2) - ^
0.45.147(1,2) - try this

0.51.620(3) - try this


[Maya]
1.27.620(1) - remove finishno, sorry (and I think you still have the old version of this map? "w")
Yasora
[quote="frost-b-spec"]thx reqs~

[Yosora]
0.35.989(2) - spacing
0.43.726(2) - ^
0.45.147(1,2) - try this sorry, no change

0.51.620(3) - try this ^


thanks for mod (:

Download: ROOKiEZ is PUNK'D - In My World (TV Size) (Maya-kira) [In Yasora's World].osu
JoJo
Hi ~ As request by kanpakyin ~ TAT

  1. Red - Unrankable stuff.
  2. Blue - Extremely suggest you to fix this.
  3. Black - Feel free to ignore this.
[General]
  1. Timing is NOT unified!! The first 2 diffs have only 1 red line.
  2. I'm not a big fan of your setting of KIAI section. Looks a bit orderless and random.
[In Maya's World]
  1. 00:32:989 (3,1) - This overlap looks not good..Well, just a say.
  2. 00:35:515 (x) - Remove useless timing section.
  3. 00:54:147 (1,1) - This is unrankable! The note is too close to the spinner and too far away from the center. Remember this is the easiest diff in this mapset~ So this pattern should not be put here.
  4. 00:55:568 (x) - Remove useless timing section.
  5. 01:01:883 (3) - I prefer reduce 1/2, the slider should end at 01:02:515.(Just like 00:41:989 (2) hmm?)
  6. 01:15:936 (x) - Remove useless timing section.
  7. 01:27:620 (1) - Toooooooooo loud for me. Remove finish and set 5% volume plz...
  8. This diff is a bit difficult for beginners...
[In Yasora's World]
  1. Remove audio lead-in time since it's unnecessary.
  2. 01:09:305 (2) - Stack this perfectly plz ~
    451,264,69305,2,0,B|447:328|347:372|299:356|259:320,1,220,8|8
    275,332,70094,1,0
[In Niva's World]
  1. 00:35:673 (1) - You have to set new combo here manually.
  2. 00:54:305 (1) - Hmm~ I prefer add a note here and delay the spinner to 00:54:383 or 00:54:462.
  3. 01:05:673 (x) - Resnap the KIAI section.
  4. Nice diff!
[In my World]
  1. Remove audio lead-in time since it's unnecessary.
  2. 00:19:094 (7) - This is not suitable here. Firstly this fast slider with 3 reverses is confused, and this follows nothing, neither vocal nor music. Perhaps you can try note on 00:19:094 and 1/4 slider with 1 reverse on 00:19:252.
  3. 00:31:568 (5) - I suggest, don't stack this on 00:31:252 (3) but try some other positions. A bit hard to read tho..
  4. 00:32:831 (x) - Add note here.
  5. 00:35:357 (x) - The KIAI section should be started here, like how other diffs have done.
  6. 00:37:567 (1,4) - Switch new combo for easier reading.
  7. 00:50:988 (2,3) - Ehh. Spacing? Since I find very few jumps but here...
  8. 00:56:041 (3) - What's wrong on the tail.. o o
  9. 01:05:673 (x) - Resnap the KIAI section.
  10. 01:16:251 (1) - Too far away from the center maybe.
  11. 01:18:146 (2,3) - Just comment, really hard to know jumps would come here.
That's it~ Good luck >~<
Topic Starter
Maya-kira

JoJo wrote:

Hi ~ As request by kanpakyin ~ TAT

  1. Red - Unrankable stuff.
  2. Blue - Extremely suggest you to fix this.
  3. Black - Feel free to ignore this.
[General]
  1. Timing is NOT unified!! The first 2 diffs have only 1 red line. [/color]
  2. I'm not a big fan of your setting of KIAI section. Looks a bit orderless and random. o_o;; but imo this fits the song orz
[In Maya's World]
  1. 00:32:989 (3,1) - This overlap looks not good..Well, just a say. fixed
  2. 00:35:515 (x) - Remove useless timing section. ^
  3. 00:54:147 (1,1) - This is unrankable! The note is too close to the spinner and too far away from the center. Remember this is the easiest diff in this mapset~ So this pattern should not be put here. ^
  4. 00:55:568 (x) - Remove useless timing section. ^
  5. 01:01:883 (3) - I prefer reduce 1/2, the slider should end at 01:02:515.(Just like 00:41:989 (2) hmm?) even so, there's drum at 883, and that's why I keep this slider ending at 883.
  6. 01:15:936 (x) - Remove useless timing section. fixed
  7. 01:27:620 (1) - Toooooooooo loud for me. Remove finish and set 5% volume plz... fixed
  8. This diff is a bit difficult for beginners... x_xa
[In my World]
  1. Remove audio lead-in time since it's unnecessary. wah TwT;; my bad (i forget orz)
  2. 00:19:094 (7) - This is not suitable here. Firstly this fast slider with 3 reverses is confused, and this follows nothing, neither vocal nor music. Perhaps you can try note on 00:19:094 and 1/4 slider with 1 reverse on 00:19:252. I hear a drum sound around here o3o
  3. 00:31:568 (5) - I suggest, don't stack this on 00:31:252 (3) but try some other positions. A bit hard to read tho.. fixed
  4. 00:32:831 (x) - Add note here. I'll think about it
  5. 00:35:357 (x) - The KIAI section should be started here, like how other diffs have done. fixed
  6. 00:37:567 (1,4) - Switch new combo for easier reading. I'll think about it (because I follow the vocal atm)
  7. 00:50:988 (2,3) - Ehh. Spacing? Since I find very few jumps but here...I'll think about it
  8. 00:56:041 (3) - What's wrong on the tail.. o o uh.. extra shape xwx?
  9. 01:05:673 (x) - Resnap the KIAI section. fixed
  10. 01:16:251 (1) - Too far away from the center maybe. yes ofc, but however, this is an insane diff ><
  11. 01:18:146 (2,3) - Just comment, really hard to know jumps would come here. I'll think about it
That's it~ Good luck >~<
thank you for mod :D
YTYuyu
Yo modding this map because of ur request :)

General:
Lead in time is inconsistent. *points at Yasora's diff*

In Maya's World:
00:44:831(1,2) - move it 1 tick up because it looks like its not following vocals accurately. if u move it up it follows vocals accurately.
00:54:147(1,1) - this spinner is unexpected for beginners. instead add a slider, end it at 00:54:936, delete the circle at 00:55:568 and make it repeat. this should follow vocals accurately.
01:06:305(2) - same as 00:44:831
01:16:726 - delete the break because the hp bar doesnt decrease that much.

In Yasora's World:
00:18:147(1) - i think u forgot to add a clap at the beginning. if u did add it to keep a steady pattern.
00:46:094(3,4) - delete (3,4) and try this. IMO this is easier and it follows vocals accurately.
01:03:147(1) - how about replacing this for 1 1/4 slider with 2 repeats. it follows vocals accurately.

In Niva's World:
00:32:989(3) - move it down because its touching the hp bar. this may cause a distraction for players causing them to mess up.
01:24:146(4) - ^

In Maya's World:
just out of curiosity why isnt there 2 timing points like the other diffs?
00:57:936 - add a circle to follow vocals?

this is the best i can do. GL :D

I might watch Ao no Exorcist after listening to this.
Yasora
AndreasHD
[General]
Delete OSB-file in folder.




[In Maya's World]
This is a very very hard diff as it is the "easiset" in the mapset.
00:17:831 (1) - New combo?
00:20:041 (1) - And then new combo here?
00:20:989 (2) - Skip new combo? .. I don't know of these 3 but I feel like it's better this way, so give it a thought.
00:26:041 (1) - This slider can be better if you drag the bottom point. Like this:01:01:883 (3) - You can easily make this slider much better by dragging the right point like this:
01:12:778 (4) - another slider that you can make better by dragging some points and delete the end point like this:



[In Yasora's World]
00:16:568 (3,4) - You should do something here so they don't overlap each other.
00:41:989 (3) - eew, ugly slider hehe.. do something about that last end point of it. To make it curve smoother around (2).
00:54:305 (1) - Don't do new combo here
00:55:568 (3) - New combo.
00:57:778 (1) - And then skip this new combo.
01:09:305 (2) - The starting point of this slider should be exactly beneath 01:08:041 (1) - but, it's not very bad as it is though, just look at it : ).




[In Niva's World]
00:26:989 (4) - One grid to the left.
00:28:568 (4) - Make this slider so that it overlap better with (2).. maybe drag the end point of (3) 4 grids up? : D
if you do that, make sure the spacing between (4) and (5) is smaller that it currently is.
00:35:672 (1) - hmm, when I see this, I think "why suddenly change to ugly slider when all of you'r others are so perfectly?" you should really really make this slider smoother.. perhaps this should do?: 00:47:989 (1) - new combo? since you did here: 00:45:462 (1) - and here 00:46:726 (1) -

~Best diff imo~




[In My World]
OD + 1 ?
00:16:726 (5) - This slider should overlap (7) better.
00:21:778 (5) - Should overlap (7) better.
00:26:831 (4) - Spacing.
00:30:857 (1,2) - These two are just not suiting.. sorry.
00:37:567 (5) - Don't take new combo here.
00:37:883 (1) - But take it here instead.
00:44:042 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - That pattern, try to play it.. that's not good.. you should do something with this pattern.. maybe the best choise is to make a new pattern. Looks pretty good when not playing though : ).
00:51:146 (3) - Spacing.
00:52:567 (6) - Spacing.
00:53:041 (9) - It would feel better to play it if this was a slider.. but then you have to make new pattern.. so it's up to you >_> .. It works as it is, just that it would be better if you made slider here.
00:54:541 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) - This stream is extremly hard to read.. do something else?
00:57:462 (7) - This slider don't curve very well around (6) so it looks alittle weird.
00:57:778 (1) - Don't do new combo here.
00:58:093 (1) - Rather do it here.
01:06:935 (4) - Make this so that the end of the slider curves better around (3) ..it's gonna look way better.




Okay, that's about it.
Star
Yasora
not change anything in my diff ._. also, maya, please update my diff ><
Niva
Late reply orz ><

JoJo wrote:

Hi ~ As request by kanpakyin ~ TAT

[In Niva's World]
  1. 00:35:673 (1) - You have to set new combo here manually. Done
  2. 00:54:305 (1) - Hmm~ I prefer add a note here and delay the spinner to 00:54:383 or 00:54:462. Awesome suggestion, added
  3. 01:05:673 (x) - Resnap the KIAI section. Done
  4. Nice diff!

Byakugan249 wrote:

Yo modding this map because of ur request :)

In Niva's World:
00:32:989(3) - move it down because its touching the hp bar. this may cause a distraction for players causing them to mess up.
01:24:146(4) - ^
It won't distract that much imo. No change, sorry ><

AndreasHD wrote:

[In Niva's World]
00:26:989 (4) - One grid to the left. Done
00:28:568 (4) - Make this slider so that it overlap better with (2).. maybe drag the end point of (3) 4 grids up? : D
if you do that, make sure the spacing between (4) and (5) is smaller that it currently is. Hmm, I get your point. I didn't do exactly as you say, but improved the overlap here ~
00:35:672 (1) - hmm, when I see this, I think "why suddenly change to ugly slider when all of you'r others are so perfectly?" you should really really make this slider smoother.. perhaps this should do?: Nice suggestion again, done
00:47:989 (1) - new combo? since you did here: 00:45:462 (1) - and here 00:46:726 (1) - OK ~

~Best diff imo~
Thanks for mod all ~ :3

Download: ROOKiEZ is PUNK'D - In My World (TV Size) (Maya-kira) [In Niva's World].osu
Topic Starter
Maya-kira
Sorry can't update yet-- no computer connection x_x

edit:

sorry accidentally press the give kudosu to yasora >_<
Topic Starter
Maya-kira

Byakugan249 wrote:

In Maya's World:
00:44:831(1,2) - move it 1 tick up because it looks like its not following vocals accurately. if u move it up it follows vocals accurately. no, sorry
00:54:147(1,1) - this spinner is unexpected for beginners. instead add a slider, end it at 00:54:936, delete the circle at 00:55:568 and make it repeat. this should follow vocals accurately. fixed, but using my own way ehe
01:06:305(2) - same as 00:44:831 no, sorry
01:16:726 - delete the break because the hp bar doesnt decrease that much. I'll think about it


In Maya's World:
just out of curiosity why isnt there 2 timing points like the other diffs? forgot to remove the other one tehe, sorry >_<
00:57:936 - add a circle to follow vocals ? fixed

this is the best i can do. GL :D

I might watch Ao no Exorcist after listening to this.go and watch it :D

AndreasHD wrote:

[General]
Delete OSB-file in folder.


[In Maya's World]
This is a very very hard diff as it is the "easiset" in the mapset. I don't think its that hard o3o; my newcomer friend still pass it (and she almost fc it, so I guess yeah)
00:17:831 (1) - New combo? no, sorry
00:20:041 (1) - And then new combo here? ^
00:20:989 (2) - Skip new combo? .. I don't know of these 3 but I feel like it's better this way, so give it a thought. ^
00:26:041 (1) - This slider can be better if you drag the bottom point. Like this: I don't actually see any difference, but--- fixed01:01:883 (3) - You can easily make this slider much better by dragging the right point like this: ^01:12:778 (4) - another slider that you can make better by dragging some points and delete the end point like this: ^

[In My World]
OD + 1 ? no, sorry
00:16:726 (5) - This slider should overlap (7) better. I'll think about it
00:21:778 (5) - Should overlap (7) better. I'll think about it
00:26:831 (4) - Spacing. what's wrong with the spacing?
00:30:857 (1,2) - These two are just not suiting.. sorry. no, sorry
00:37:567 (5) - Don't take new combo here.
00:37:883 (1) - But take it here instead.
00:44:042 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - That pattern, try to play it.. that's not good.. you should do something with this pattern.. maybe the best choise is to make a new pattern. Looks pretty good when not playing though : ).
00:51:146 (3) - Spacing.
00:52:567 (6) - Spacing.
00:53:041 (9) - It would feel better to play it if this was a slider.. but then you have to make new pattern.. so it's up to you >_> .. It works as it is, just that it would be better if you made slider here.
00:54:541 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) - This stream is extremly hard to read.. do something else?
00:57:462 (7) - This slider don't curve very well around (6) so it looks alittle weird.
00:57:778 (1) - Don't do new combo here.
00:58:093 (1) - Rather do it here.
01:06:935 (4) - Make this so that the end of the slider curves better around (3) ..it's gonna look way better.

sorry, I don't change much :D

Okay, that's about it.
Star
thanks for mod
Yasora
please someone denied my kudosu orz :<
Star Stream
Mod 4 Mod with Niva~

*Why only Niva's diff has 3 Red-timings?
*Why only Niva's diff has checked Letter Box?
*Yasora - Snap your kiai-timing to 00:55:567 - and 01:05:672?
*Rename the 'In Maya's World'? something like 'In The World'. It's look like a Guest Diff by 'Maya' now

Maya's
AR-1
delete some notes like : it's so busy and you can get 2.71 star rating if you delete them
00:28:252 (3) -
00:30:778 (3) -
00:40:094 (3) -
00:42:620 (3) -
01:00:305 (3) -

01:05:041 (1,2) - 1/2 later : 01:05:199 (1,2) - , so flow with 01:03:305 (1,2,3) -
01:12:147 (3,4,5) - put at 01:11:989 (3,4,5) - ? more fit to me

Yasora's
00:18:462 - delete clap
00:20:989 ~ 00:24:778 - don't change clap pattern
00:29:199 - add whistle and delete at 00:29:515 -
00:31:726 - and 00:32:989 - add clap
00:35:673 ~ delete claps, try adding whistles instead, at each 2/1 rhythms
00:44:989 (1,2) - make it as 1/1 slider and put 00:45:620 (2) - 1/2 early
00:50:357 (1,2,3) - put them 1/2 later and make 00:51:620 (3) - as 1/1 slider if you want
01:05:199 (1) - make it as 3/2 slider and delete 01:06:147 (2) -
01:06:936 (4) - Ctrl+h is more looks good for me
01:11:831 ~ 01:13:726 - rhythms like this? really good for me

01:27:620 (4) - add a arrow

Niva's
HP and OD +1
00:32:989 (3) - put down a bit
00:40:883 (2) - put down a bit
01:24:147 (4) - put down a bit

In My World
whistle at 00:18:778 - and 00:19:410 - and 00:20:041 -
00:30:857 (1) - delete
00:51:146 (3) - don't increase distance
*Add more Claps during Kiai
01:29:120 (T) - delete


Good Luck~
Niva
To Maya-kira and Yasora:

Those three timing sections are required to reset the metronome's tick. (try to delete one in 00:35:357 for example, the metronome will sound wrong). This may not be a problem in osu! standard, but this could be troublesome in Taiko diff.

anyway, fixed almost all (only not changing 01:24:147 (4) because I can't move it ><)
Thank you Star Stream ^^

Download: ROOKiEZ is PUNK'D - In My World (TV Size) (Maya-kira) [In Niva's World].osu
Kuma-san
Hi~
[Easy]
00:44:831 (1,2) - move to 00:44:988 - its will be sounds good
00:54:146 (1) - move to 00:54:304 -
[In my world]
00:21:147 - will be good if you add note
00:41:829 - ^
00:43:408 - ^
00:46:408 - ^
01:02:040 - maybe add note?
01:02:356 - ^
01:02:514 (7) - add repeat
01:19:408 - add note?
01:27:776 - delete and add spinner here 01:27:618 - ?
[Yasora's diff]
00:45:620 (2) - make longer to 00:45:936 - and move to 00:45:462 - ?

That's all.Niva's diff is very good.Good luck with rank.Give you my star~
Agnes
Requested from the fire and ice queue. You received Ice.

[General]
There's something that baffles me about the kiai here. Contact me in-game when you can so we can get this touched up. But overall, this is nice.

[In Maya's World]

Nothing to poke at.

[In Yasora's World]

01:10:094 (3) - This note seems to ruin the flow.


[In Niva's World]

01:27:778 (2) - (Suggestion) Adjust on the Y-Axis? Like so.

[In My World]

00:46:564 (2) - Unsnapped note.
00:57:936 (2) - Unsnapped note.
00:52:725 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - This stream looks a bit messy. Adjust it?
There are also unsnapped inherited sections at the following points:
00:55:094
00:55:410
01:05:673
01:15:936
01:26:989
01:27:778

Just a bit of adjustments and it should be ready for a bubble soon. Just catch me in-game.
Yasora
Topic Starter
Maya-kira

Agnes wrote:

Requested from the fire and ice queue. You received Ice.

[General]
There's something that baffles me about the kiai here. Contact me in-game when you can so we can get this touched up. But overall, this is nice.

[In Maya's World]

Nothing to poke at.

[In Yasora's World]

01:10:094 (3) - This note seems to ruin the flow.


[In Niva's World]

01:27:778 (2) - (Suggestion) Adjust on the Y-Axis? Like so.

[In My World]

00:46:564 (2) - Unsnapped note.
00:57:936 (2) - Unsnapped note.
00:52:725 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - This stream looks a bit messy. Adjust it?
There are also unsnapped inherited sections at the following points:
00:55:094
00:55:410
01:05:673
01:15:936
01:26:989
01:27:778

Just a bit of adjustments and it should be ready for a bubble soon. Just catch me in-game.
Fixed all (except Niva's, he don't want to change) :o
Thank you for mod :)
Topic Starter
Maya-kira
Kiai time should be consistent now :)
Thanks again Agnes :)
PsychoSkill

Agnes wrote:

Just a bit of adjustments and it should be ready for a bubble soon. Just catch me in-game.

:S :(
Choka
I love it !
Black Abyss
Can someone tell me if it can be ranked? Because I love it and it's fantastic! But I see it's in the graveyard... ;(
Feanor
Just played last map, but it`s awesome <3
ThisManzzz
Why isn't this map ranked yet?! It seems finished, I don't see why it's in graveyard.
Topic Starter
Maya-kira
Resurrected for now.
Rara-kira
you stole my mapp !!
Darrkwolf
Me encanta el mapa *.*,ojala la pongan en ranked por que se lo merece ;)
Topic Starter
Maya-kira

Rara-kira wrote:

you stole my mapp !!
I'm sorry?
Rara-kira

Maya-kira wrote:

Rara-kira wrote:

you stole my mapp !!
I'm sorry?
i mean , thats actually my mapp ! and you stoled it from my account isn't it ?
Topic Starter
Maya-kira
i mean , thats actually my mapp ! and you stoled it from my account isn't it ?
miss.
Please.
I'm the original one here.
I don't get why I even reply to you.
Topic Starter
Maya-kira
Ressurected again *sobs*
le oni
http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Beatmap_Approval
For Ranked this beatmaps
they say you must have 12 star .. and 1 kudosu = 1 star ..

and conditions
a MAT or BAT can bubble it if they feel it meets two conditions:
1. The beatmap meets the Ranking Criteria. Basically, this must mean that the map has the correct timing, has at least 2 difficulties (one of which is an Easy or a Normal), and is overall both mapped to the music and playable.

2. The beatmap meets overall quality standards that aren't part of the Ranking Criteria. For example, if a slider isn't very pretty, then a MAT or BAT would likely request for it to be made prettier before bubbling it.

i just wanted this beatmaps get ranked
Topic Starter
Maya-kira
Thank you, Le oni ;w; I appreciate the support you give..

But personally I don't think there's any condition which haven't fit the standard..
It's just that I lack time and connection..

I've tried to make use of a modding ticket I got, but it seems like the BAT is currently busy.. ..or such..

I'll try my best though ;w;
AnthonyEcon
Maya-Kira:
Last active about a month ago
:(
RenkoV2
This map is pretty awesome, I think it should be ranked. :D
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