kosiga wrote:

hi~ Maya-kira hi kosiga

[General]

1. KIAI TIME - change KIAI TIME ? 00:35:357~00:55:568 , 01:05:673~01:15:778 in all diff. I think is better :3

fixed

[In Maya's World]

1. 00:03:032 (3) - match it with a curve. more beautiful http://puu.sh/bpJu x344,y320 and with 00:03:790 (4) - x428,y136 ? fixed
2. 00:10:153 (1) - spacing too close (0.57x) x104,y312 ? used kiddo-kun's suggestions
3. 00:14:093 (4) - end does not match a sound >< remove repeat. and add slider 00:15:002~00:15:153 is better ?I'll wait for next suggestions
4. 00:32:989 (3) - one grid right. x160,y168 fixed
5. 00:37:726 (1,2) - Suggestion of the rhythm http://puu.sh/bpLD fixed
6. 00:56:199 (2) - add NC ? fixed
7. 00:56:673 (3,1,2,3) - Suggestion of the rhythm http://puu.sh/bpMX sorry ;A;
8. 01:00:147 (3) - spacing too far. (0.88x) fixed
9. 01:04:094 (3) - one grid down. x16,y260 fixed
10. 01:05:041 (1,2) - one tick right move. I think this slider start 01:05:199 is better. ( Please be careful about DS if I change it ) fixed
11. 01:11:831 - add note ? sorry ;A;
12. 01:13:726 (4) - remove finish fixed
13. 01:18:462 (1) - start 01:18:305 is better. Suggestion of the rhythm http://puu.sh/bpPi fixed
14. 01:27:305 (3) - slider end 01:27:778sorry ;A;

[In My World]

1. 00:10:229 (1) - remove NC and 00:10:456 - add NC fixed
2. 00:15:002 (5) - slider end 00:15:153 sorry ;A;
3. 00:23:989 (4,5) - grid move ? 4:x128,y260 5:x48,y260 fixed
4. 00:28:726 (3) - add NC I'll wait for next suggestions
5. 00:29:041 (5) - ^ I'll wait for next suggestions
6. 00:29:515 (7) - ^ I'll wait for next suggestions
7. 00:29:989 (10) - Suggestion of the rhythm http://puu.sh/bpZ1 I see your point, but I like my current rhythm
8. 00:38:357 (5) - slider end 00:38:515 or 00:38:673 fixed
9. 00:41:120 - add note sorry ;A;
10. 00:41:199 - ^ sorry ;A;
11. 00:42:699 (2) - remove note ? fixed
12. 00:46:173 (3) - spacing too close >< I'll wait for next suggestions
13. 00:53:831 (8) - add NC fixed
14. 00:55:252 (1) - remove NC and 00:55:568 - add NC fixed
15. 00:56:752 (8) - this slider start 00:56:831. end 00:57:462. (repeat part 00:57:147) and add note here I'll wait for next suggestions
16. 00:57:462 (10) - remove note why? Please give explanation ><
17. 01:05:041 (1) - remove NC and 01:05:199 - add NC no, the lyric starts here
18. 01:18:620 (1,2,3,4) - two tick right move. start 01:18:778 I'll wait for next suggestions
19. 01:27:778 (1) - spinner end 01:28:726 ?sorry ;A;

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[General]
Make someone control the timing... i kinda tried...Will tell if I find a more precise timing... okay, please inform me anytime


[In Maya's World]
00:03:790 (4,5) - Would be easier if you continued following the guitar with those, as you started following drums in the middle of a combo(it could be confusive for noobs) move at 00:03:638 (4,5) used kiddo-kun's suggestions
00:11:365 (2) - Adjust the shape a little

SPOILER

because I used kiddo-kun's suggestion, this pattern is no longer valid
00:14:093 (4) - One less repeat fixed
00:15:153 (x) - to add a circle here fixed
00:38:989 (2) - Make it a 1/1 Slider and add one repeat used kosiga's suggestion instead
00:44:673 (1) - Adjust Blanket

SPOILER

fixed
Adjust the various blankets after too, and there are many many many I think they plays fine ._.;;
01:20:989 (3,4,5) - Adjust?

SPOILER

I see your point, but I prefer my way

[In My World]
00:46:094 (x) - Add a Note, Midly stopped stream aren't good .-. although it sounds good to me, but since many peoples points this out... fixed
00:53:831 (8,9,x,10,11,x) - Make it a 3-3 stream (add 00:53:989 and 00:54:305 (13) - sorry, but this 2-2 streams sounds better to me .w.
00:54:462 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try to move them like this?

SPOILER

I can't see it well @_@;; can you give me the codes instead?
and make the volume lower, as it's fastidious ... fixed
01:27:778 (1) - Make it start in 01:27:936 (1) to
01:27:778 (x) - Add this circle in the center good idea, fixed.

The song was good :3

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

Please read my siggy~

[General]

• Make the first Kiai start on 00:35:357 and it should end on 00:55:568. It matches the music better that way. used kosiga's suggestion.

[In Maya's World]

• 00:03:790 (4,5) - I would move these to notes over a 1/2 tick earlier so it would match the music a lot better sorry ;A;, I think my current pattern match the music best. Might change if someone mention this again though
• 00:10:153 (1) - If I were you, I would move this note over to 00:10:305 and shorten the slider so that it ends on 00:10:759. Doing this would follow the music better and it would enhance the game play. It should look like this in the end:
fixed
• 00:22:568 (3) - I would flip this note so that is is moving downwards. This would make the note flow better into the next note, thus enhancing the game play.

SPOILER

I don't see so much difference, but... fixed
• 00:28:410 (1,2) - I find this change over to red ticks has a very awkward feel to it. I would so something like this:

SPOILER

that might make the spacing difficult. beside the vocals starts on red tick >< but however, I don't think your suggestion is bad. I'll wait for the next opinion
• 00:44:673 (1,2) - I like these slider~ Just thought I'd let you know :3 lol thanks >w< I liked them too~

[In My World]
♦ O_O That SV... don't worry about the SV I've seen maps with 200 BPM and 2,20 SV (this is probably nothing compared to it)
♦ I would turn down the AR to 7 or 8 to compensate for the insanely high SV. I actually prefer my current AR , but maybe after a few time cooling down I might change my mind >_<
♦ This diff seems a little too hectic for my taste. Some of the 1/4 notes feel a little forced when they don't fit in, just to add "fake difficulty" well.. sorry for that ._.
• 00:10:229 (1) - I would delete this note here. It doesn't seem to fit in. fixed
• 00:45:936 (1,2,3,4) - I don't anyone would get this on their first try. I would do something like this.

SPOILER

used kosiga and hakunokaemi's suggestion already ._.

1. Timing : I'm still totally unsure about the timing, you should ask someone good at it to check it :/
2. You don't have any breaks, disable the letterboxes then ?

1. 00:03:790 (4) - As you're following the guitar previously, you need to follow the guitar here too, otherwise this note feels too late and awkward. Move this note 1/2 earlier then.
2. 00:04:396 (5) - Same for this slider, you need to follow the guitar. I know there is a loud note at 00:05:002 and you need to map it too, so try something like this :
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:15:305 (5) - This circle is too late, it doesn't follow the music. Move it 1/2 earlier.
4. 00:21:305 (2,3) - This pattern is awkward, I mean the end of (2) is not acually in the rhythm of the song and (3) has a different rhythm than what you did before. It's confusing :/
   I suggest you something like this :
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:40:410 (1) - This anti-jump is bad, look, the spacing between the end of (3) and the beginning of this slider is the spacing that is used for notes spaced by 1/1 however the spacing between these note is 2/1. That's very confusing and most of the beginners will click this slider earlier than they should. Use the proper spacing please.
6. 00:56:199 (1,2,1,2,3) - This pattern is totally not in the song rhythm. Consider doing this patern instead (or something else) :
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 01:12:147 (2,3) - Again, this pattern doesn't follow the song's rhythm. Try this :
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:05:305 (1) - The reverse on this slider sounds kinda bad since there is actually nothing in the music at 00:05:608. Also, don't stack this slider with the previous circle, it looks kinda hard to read.
2. 00:15:153 - A finish would sond awesome at the end of this slider.
3. 00:22:883 (1) - Even if this slider follows the vocal, it plays very awkwardly. You should extend it by 1/4.
4. 00:42:778 - It feels like a note is missing here.
5. 00:44:989 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern is not bad or something, however you can do something much better if you follow the actual rhythm of the song. I mean :
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:00:462 (1) - This slider is too long, if you want to follows the song, you have to shorten this slider by 1/2.
7. 01:06:462 (3) - ^
8. 01:07:094 (4) - This slider doesn't follow the song's rhythm, it is 1/2 later than it should so move it 1/2 backward.
9. 01:27:620 (4) - Silenced objects are unrankable because they are very confusing and doesn't give any feedback to the player. Unsilence it.

1. 00:22:726 (4,5) - Because of the vocals which are dominant here, this pattern sonds awkward, I would do something like this :
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:49:252 (2) - For the same reason as before, do something like this ? :
   
   SPOILER

   

1. AR9 doesn't fit this song, there are calm part such as 00:25:410 for example where it doesn't fit at all ! Believe me, AR8 would me more appropriate.
2. You are using some 1/4 which are not justified by the music which causes a bad overmapping. Seriously, it kills the quality of the map
   You should remove them, here's the list of the note you should remove :
   
   1. 00:05:456 (1,2,3) - This pattern is not even in the good rhythm (blue - red - blue rarely fits). do this :
      
      SPOILER

      
   2. 00:06:441 (3) - Remove
   3. 00:06:668 (1,2,3,4) - Again this pattern doesn't fit the music, 4 notes streams are very unusal in 1/4 rhythms (mostly in 1/3 and 1/6 rhythms) So consider doing something like this :
      
      SPOILER

      
   4. 00:09:623 (5) - Remove
   5. 00:14:774 (2) - Remove
   6. 00:19:410 (5,6,7,8) - Same as 00:06:668 (1,2,3,4). Do this ?
      
      SPOILER

      
   7. 00:35:594 (2) - Remove
   8. 00:36:226 (5) - Remove
   9. 00:37:883 (2) - Shorten it by 1/4
   10. 00:42:383 (3) - Remove
   11. 00:48:305 (1,2,3,4) - Again a 4 notes stream. Do this ?
       
       SPOILER

       
   12. 00:59:910 (7) - Move it 1/4 later and shorten it by 1/4
   13. 01:02:120 (5) - Remove
   14. 01:04:173 (5,7) - Remove
3. 00:02:577 (1,2,3) - This jump is quite big, such a big jump after anti-jumps is not a good thing :/
4. 00:12:426 (6) - This slider is too close from the previous note. Use the proper spacing please.
5. 00:23:199 (3,1) - This jump is not justified by the song so I don't understand you have such a huge jump here :/
   That's very confusing and hard to read (Even more if you use AR9 !!).
6. 00:29:515 (7) - Hophop, a little new combo is missing here ^-^
7. 00:54:462 (1,2,3,4,5) - Believe me, slider streams suck >~<
   Use circles instead °A°

KuraiPettan wrote:

As promised Maya-chan, here's your mod <3

General :

1. Timing : I'm still totally unsure about the timing, you should ask someone good at it to check it :/ I'll try to find someone >_<
2. You don't have any breaks, disable the letterboxes then ? fixed

In Maya's World :

1. 00:03:790 (4) - As you're following the guitar previously, you need to follow the guitar here too, otherwise this note feels too late and awkward. Move this note 1/2 earlier then.
2. 00:04:396 (5) - Same for this slider, you need to follow the guitar. I know there is a loud note at 00:05:002 and you need to map it too, so try something like this :
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:15:305 (5) - This circle is too late, it doesn't follow the music. Move it 1/2 earlier.
4. 00:21:305 (2,3) - This pattern is awkward, I mean the end of (2) is not acually in the rhythm of the song and (3) has a different rhythm than what you did before. It's confusing :/
   I suggest you something like this :
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:40:410 (1) - This anti-jump is bad, look, the spacing between the end of (3) and the beginning of this slider is the spacing that is used for notes spaced by 1/1 however the spacing between these note is 2/1. That's very confusing and most of the beginners will click this slider earlier than they should. Use the proper spacing please.
6. 00:56:199 (1,2,1,2,3) - This pattern is totally not in the song rhythm. Consider doing this patern instead (or something else) :
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 01:12:147 (2,3) - Again, this pattern doesn't follow the song's rhythm. Try this :
   
   SPOILER

   

In Yasora's World :

1. 00:05:305 (1) - The reverse on this slider sounds kinda bad since there is actually nothing in the music at 00:05:608. Also, don't stack this slider with the previous circle, it looks kinda hard to read.
2. 00:15:153 - A finish would sond awesome at the end of this slider.
3. 00:22:883 (1) - Even if this slider follows the vocal, it plays very awkwardly. You should extend it by 1/4.
4. 00:42:778 - It feels like a note is missing here.
5. 00:44:989 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern is not bad or something, however you can do something much better if you follow the actual rhythm of the song. I mean :
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:00:462 (1) - This slider is too long, if you want to follows the song, you have to shorten this slider by 1/2.
7. 01:06:462 (3) - ^
8. 01:07:094 (4) - This slider doesn't follow the song's rhythm, it is 1/2 later than it should so move it 1/2 backward.
9. 01:27:620 (4) - Silenced objects are unrankable because they are very confusing and doesn't give any feedback to the player. Unsilence it.

In Niva's World :

1. 00:22:726 (4,5) - Because of the vocals which are dominant here, this pattern sonds awkward, I would do something like this :
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:49:252 (2) - For the same reason as before, do something like this ? :
   
   SPOILER

   

In My World :

1. AR9 doesn't fit this song, there are calm part such as 00:25:410 for example where it doesn't fit at all ! Believe me, AR8 would me more appropriate.
2. You are using some 1/4 which are not justified by the music which causes a bad overmapping. Seriously, it kills the quality of the map
   You should remove them, here's the list of the note you should remove :
   
   1. 00:05:456 (1,2,3) - This pattern is not even in the good rhythm (blue - red - blue rarely fits). do this :
      
      SPOILER

      
   2. 00:06:441 (3) - Remove
   3. 00:06:668 (1,2,3,4) - Again this pattern doesn't fit the music, 4 notes streams are very unusal in 1/4 rhythms (mostly in 1/3 and 1/6 rhythms) So consider doing something like this :
      
      SPOILER

      
   4. 00:09:623 (5) - Remove
   5. 00:14:774 (2) - Remove
   6. 00:19:410 (5,6,7,8) - Same as 00:06:668 (1,2,3,4). Do this ?
      
      SPOILER

      
   7. 00:35:594 (2) - Remove
   8. 00:36:226 (5) - Remove
   9. 00:37:883 (2) - Shorten it by 1/4
   10. 00:42:383 (3) - Remove
   11. 00:48:305 (1,2,3,4) - Again a 4 notes stream. Do this ?
       
       SPOILER

       
   12. 00:59:910 (7) - Move it 1/4 later and shorten it by 1/4
   13. 01:02:120 (5) - Remove
   14. 01:04:173 (5,7) - Remove
3. 00:02:577 (1,2,3) - This jump is quite big, such a big jump after anti-jumps is not a good thing :/
4. 00:12:426 (6) - This slider is too close from the previous note. Use the proper spacing please.
5. 00:23:199 (3,1) - This jump is not justified by the song so I don't understand you have such a huge jump here :/
   That's very confusing and hard to read (Even more if you use AR9 !!).
6. 00:29:515 (7) - Hophop, a little new combo is missing here ^-^
7. 00:54:462 (1,2,3,4,5) - Believe me, slider streams suck >~<
   Use circles instead °A°

That's all for now >w<

Genkishi wrote:

Can i make a taiko diff?

Yasora-chan wrote:

why this map back to WIP? O.o

Maya-kira wrote:

syncope @_@;; (what the hell is that---)

I don't really get it T_T;;

Crimmi wrote:

Maya-kira wrote:

syncope @_@;; (what the hell is that---)

I don't really get it T_T;;

Syncope - A missed beat or off-the-beat stress.

Modding, CrimmiStyle!!

From my Mod Rescue Queue~

Suggestion
Change

[In Maya's World]

01:10:883 (1) - Remove Whistle & add Finish? no that would make the other whistle useless TwT;;

[In My World]

Why is this diff the only diff with 3 different timing sections?
01:05:672 (3) - Add finish? okay ;w;
01:08:199 (3) - ^ okay ;w;
01:10:883 (1) - ^ okay
01:18:314 (3) - ^ okay

Alrighty then, this map is solid, good luck!!

frost-b-spec wrote:

thx reqs~

[Yosora]
0.35.989(2) - spacing
0.43.726(2) - ^
0.45.147(1,2) - try this

0.51.620(3) - try this


[Maya]
1.27.620(1) - remove finishno, sorry (and I think you still have the old version of this map? "w")

1. Red - Unrankable stuff.
2. Blue - Extremely suggest you to fix this.
3. Black - Feel free to ignore this.

1. Timing is NOT unified!! The first 2 diffs have only 1 red line.
2. I'm not a big fan of your setting of KIAI section. Looks a bit orderless and random.

1. 00:32:989 (3,1) - This overlap looks not good..Well, just a say.
2. 00:35:515 (x) - Remove useless timing section.
3. 00:54:147 (1,1) - This is unrankable! The note is too close to the spinner and too far away from the center. Remember this is the easiest diff in this mapset~ So this pattern should not be put here.
4. 00:55:568 (x) - Remove useless timing section.
5. 01:01:883 (3) - I prefer reduce 1/2, the slider should end at 01:02:515.(Just like 00:41:989 (2) hmm?)
6. 01:15:936 (x) - Remove useless timing section.
7. 01:27:620 (1) - Toooooooooo loud for me. Remove finish and set 5% volume plz...
8. This diff is a bit difficult for beginners...

1. Remove audio lead-in time since it's unnecessary.
2. 01:09:305 (2) - Stack this perfectly plz ~
   

   451,264,69305,2,0,B|447:328|347:372|299:356|259:320,1,220,8|8
   275,332,70094,1,0

1. 00:35:673 (1) - You have to set new combo here manually.
2. 00:54:305 (1) - Hmm~ I prefer add a note here and delay the spinner to 00:54:383 or 00:54:462.
3. 01:05:673 (x) - Resnap the KIAI section.
4. Nice diff!

1. Remove audio lead-in time since it's unnecessary.
2. 00:19:094 (7) - This is not suitable here. Firstly this fast slider with 3 reverses is confused, and this follows nothing, neither vocal nor music. Perhaps you can try note on 00:19:094 and 1/4 slider with 1 reverse on 00:19:252.
3. 00:31:568 (5) - I suggest, don't stack this on 00:31:252 (3) but try some other positions. A bit hard to read tho..
4. 00:32:831 (x) - Add note here.
5. 00:35:357 (x) - The KIAI section should be started here, like how other diffs have done.
6. 00:37:567 (1,4) - Switch new combo for easier reading.
7. 00:50:988 (2,3) - Ehh. Spacing? Since I find very few jumps but here...
8. 00:56:041 (3) - What's wrong on the tail.. o o
9. 01:05:673 (x) - Resnap the KIAI section.
10. 01:16:251 (1) - Too far away from the center maybe.
11. 01:18:146 (2,3) - Just comment, really hard to know jumps would come here.

JoJo wrote:

Hi ~ As request by kanpakyin ~ TAT

1. Red - Unrankable stuff.
2. Blue - Extremely suggest you to fix this.
3. Black - Feel free to ignore this.

[General]

1. Timing is NOT unified!! The first 2 diffs have only 1 red line. [/color]
2. I'm not a big fan of your setting of KIAI section. Looks a bit orderless and random. o_o;; but imo this fits the song orz

[In Maya's World]

1. 00:32:989 (3,1) - This overlap looks not good..Well, just a say. fixed
2. 00:35:515 (x) - Remove useless timing section. ^
3. 00:54:147 (1,1) - This is unrankable! The note is too close to the spinner and too far away from the center. Remember this is the easiest diff in this mapset~ So this pattern should not be put here. ^
4. 00:55:568 (x) - Remove useless timing section. ^
5. 01:01:883 (3) - I prefer reduce 1/2, the slider should end at 01:02:515.(Just like 00:41:989 (2) hmm?) even so, there's drum at 883, and that's why I keep this slider ending at 883.
6. 01:15:936 (x) - Remove useless timing section. fixed
7. 01:27:620 (1) - Toooooooooo loud for me. Remove finish and set 5% volume plz... fixed
8. This diff is a bit difficult for beginners... x_xa

[In my World]

1. Remove audio lead-in time since it's unnecessary. wah TwT;; my bad (i forget orz)
2. 00:19:094 (7) - This is not suitable here. Firstly this fast slider with 3 reverses is confused, and this follows nothing, neither vocal nor music. Perhaps you can try note on 00:19:094 and 1/4 slider with 1 reverse on 00:19:252. I hear a drum sound around here o3o
3. 00:31:568 (5) - I suggest, don't stack this on 00:31:252 (3) but try some other positions. A bit hard to read tho.. fixed
4. 00:32:831 (x) - Add note here. I'll think about it
5. 00:35:357 (x) - The KIAI section should be started here, like how other diffs have done. fixed
6. 00:37:567 (1,4) - Switch new combo for easier reading. I'll think about it (because I follow the vocal atm)
7. 00:50:988 (2,3) - Ehh. Spacing? Since I find very few jumps but here...I'll think about it
8. 00:56:041 (3) - What's wrong on the tail.. o o uh.. extra shape xwx?
9. 01:05:673 (x) - Resnap the KIAI section. fixed
10. 01:16:251 (1) - Too far away from the center maybe. yes ofc, but however, this is an insane diff ><
11. 01:18:146 (2,3) - Just comment, really hard to know jumps would come here. I'll think about it

That's it~ Good luck >~<

JoJo wrote:

Hi ~ As request by kanpakyin ~ TAT

[In Niva's World]

1. 00:35:673 (1) - You have to set new combo here manually. Done
2. 00:54:305 (1) - Hmm~ I prefer add a note here and delay the spinner to 00:54:383 or 00:54:462. Awesome suggestion, added
3. 01:05:673 (x) - Resnap the KIAI section. Done
4. Nice diff!

Byakugan249 wrote:

Yo modding this map because of ur request

In Niva's World:
00:32:989(3) - move it down because its touching the hp bar. this may cause a distraction for players causing them to mess up.
01:24:146(4) - ^
It won't distract that much imo. No change, sorry ><

AndreasHD wrote:

[In Niva's World]
00:26:989 (4) - One grid to the left. Done
00:28:568 (4) - Make this slider so that it overlap better with (2).. maybe drag the end point of (3) 4 grids up? : D
if you do that, make sure the spacing between (4) and (5) is smaller that it currently is. Hmm, I get your point. I didn't do exactly as you say, but improved the overlap here ~
00:35:672 (1) - hmm, when I see this, I think "why suddenly change to ugly slider when all of you'r others are so perfectly?" you should really really make this slider smoother.. perhaps this should do?:

SPOILER

Nice suggestion again, done
00:47:989 (1) - new combo? since you did here: 00:45:462 (1) - and here 00:46:726 (1) - OK ~

~Best diff imo~

Byakugan249 wrote:

In Maya's World:
00:44:831(1,2) - move it 1 tick up because it looks like its not following vocals accurately. if u move it up it follows vocals accurately. no, sorry
00:54:147(1,1) - this spinner is unexpected for beginners. instead add a slider, end it at 00:54:936, delete the circle at 00:55:568 and make it repeat. this should follow vocals accurately. fixed, but using my own way ehe
01:06:305(2) - same as 00:44:831 no, sorry
01:16:726 - delete the break because the hp bar doesnt decrease that much. I'll think about it


In Maya's World:
just out of curiosity why isnt there 2 timing points like the other diffs? forgot to remove the other one tehe, sorry >_<
00:57:936 - add a circle to follow vocals ? fixed

this is the best i can do. GL

I might watch Ao no Exorcist after listening to this.go and watch it

AndreasHD wrote:

[General]
Delete OSB-file in folder.


[In Maya's World]
This is a very very hard diff as it is the "easiset" in the mapset. I don't think its that hard o3o; my newcomer friend still pass it (and she almost fc it, so I guess yeah)
00:17:831 (1) - New combo? no, sorry
00:20:041 (1) - And then new combo here? ^
00:20:989 (2) - Skip new combo? .. I don't know of these 3 but I feel like it's better this way, so give it a thought. ^
00:26:041 (1) - This slider can be better if you drag the bottom point. Like this: I don't actually see any difference, but--- fixed

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01:01:883 (3) - You can easily make this slider much better by dragging the right point like this: ^

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01:12:778 (4) - another slider that you can make better by dragging some points and delete the end point like this: ^

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[In My World]
OD + 1 ? no, sorry
00:16:726 (5) - This slider should overlap (7) better. I'll think about it
00:21:778 (5) - Should overlap (7) better. I'll think about it
00:26:831 (4) - Spacing. what's wrong with the spacing?
00:30:857 (1,2) - These two are just not suiting.. sorry. no, sorry
00:37:567 (5) - Don't take new combo here.
00:37:883 (1) - But take it here instead.
00:44:042 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - That pattern, try to play it.. that's not good.. you should do something with this pattern.. maybe the best choise is to make a new pattern. Looks pretty good when not playing though : ).
00:51:146 (3) - Spacing.
00:52:567 (6) - Spacing.
00:53:041 (9) - It would feel better to play it if this was a slider.. but then you have to make new pattern.. so it's up to you >_> .. It works as it is, just that it would be better if you made slider here.
00:54:541 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) - This stream is extremly hard to read.. do something else?
00:57:462 (7) - This slider don't curve very well around (6) so it looks alittle weird.
00:57:778 (1) - Don't do new combo here.
00:58:093 (1) - Rather do it here.
01:06:935 (4) - Make this so that the end of the slider curves better around (3) ..it's gonna look way better.

sorry, I don't change much

Okay, that's about it.
☆ Star ☆

Agnes wrote:

Requested from the fire and ice queue. You received Ice.

[General]
There's something that baffles me about the kiai here. Contact me in-game when you can so we can get this touched up. But overall, this is nice.

[In Maya's World]

Nothing to poke at.

[In Yasora's World]

01:10:094 (3) - This note seems to ruin the flow.


[In Niva's World]

01:27:778 (2) - (Suggestion) Adjust on the Y-Axis? Like so.

[In My World]

00:46:564 (2) - Unsnapped note.
00:57:936 (2) - Unsnapped note.
00:52:725 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - This stream looks a bit messy. Adjust it?

There are also unsnapped inherited sections at the following points:

00:55:094
00:55:410
01:05:673
01:15:936
01:26:989
01:27:778

Just a bit of adjustments and it should be ready for a bubble soon. Just catch me in-game.

Agnes wrote:

Just a bit of adjustments and it should be ready for a bubble soon. Just catch me in-game.