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EGOIST - Departures ~Anata ni Okuru Ai no Uta~ (TV Size)

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Anshi_old
General

I think i would make a hitwhistle the same with the song,
0 0 snapping... pay attention to it, i think u should open the aimod.. check by uself
00:51:493 这里的offset也许有点问题吗? 用1/3倒是能踩点


Eazy

  • 00:13:160 (4) - add a whistle on tail?
    00:19:827 (4) - ^
    00:29:827 (8) - ^
    00:59:827 (3) - ^
    00:24:410 (1) - add a whistle
    00:43:993 (4) - ^
    01:10:660 (4) - ^
    00:53:163~00:54:830 sounds strange, i would add notes at 00:53:163 and 00:53:580 ,reduce a recyle on 00:53:997 (1) and make the slider get 2 grid longer, and add a whistle on tail
    01:03:993 (2) - add a whistle on head?
    01:08:160 (1) - add a finish on head?
    01:11:497 这里有个用normal hitsound的建议, 可以跟着music 或者自己多新增一些点 使图更饱满


Normal


  • AR-1
    00:14:410 (8) - NC
    00:14:827 (3) - add a whistle
    00:16:493 (5) - ^ at last
    00:24:410 (1) - ^
    00:39:827 (6) - ^ at last
    00:53:580 add a note

Hard

  • 音效我就不吐槽了...
    这歌能用锣的地方真心不多

Insane

  • 除了音效有点奇怪没什么大问题。。。 用了finish的那几个地方再斟酌一下吧...



建议 就是可以不用完全跟着歌曲这样...有些空的地方不长又不短 希望注意一下,
就是这样... good luck
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
= =

好歌

72 bpm orz
XeistRia
WOW
that so good XD
I like it very much.shoot one> <
AoiX
Request from CMG

(。⊙ェ⊙。)Aoi's Mod

General
  1. 去掉设定中的enable countdown,加着效果会很囧
    ==========skin==========
  2. 转盘必须要有一个中心,否则会影响游戏
  3. hitcircle中间的图案颜色太深了,有影响到游戏。把浓度降低
  4. 缺少reversearrow,hit0,cursor文件
    =========timing=========
  5. 个人意见offset:1550,第二根红线也是无用的(至少我在玩的时候感觉offset是不对的)
Insane
  1. 00:51:497 (1) - 这里音量大有问题!!那根莫明的红线造成的
Normal
  1. 00:15:243 (4) - new combo
  2. 00:18:160 (4) - ^
//整体还过得去就没怎么mod,主要还是皮肤方面问题较多
//难度过低了,需要的话可以提供个 真·insane,另外你上次是不是说要SB来着?如果能等到月底的话我也能帮忙做。
以上。支持新人+超有爱的曲子,STAR~
Topic Starter
Twice_old

AoiX wrote:

Request from CMG

(。⊙ェ⊙。)Aoi's Mod

General
  1. 去掉设定中的enable countdown,加着效果会很囧
    ==========skin==========
  2. 转盘必须要有一个中心,否则会影响游戏
  3. hitcircle中间的图案颜色太深了,有影响到游戏。把浓度降低
  4. 缺少reversearrow,hit0,cursor文件
    =========timing=========
  5. 个人意见offset:1550,第二根红线也是无用的(至少我在玩的时候感觉offset是不对的)
Insane
  1. 00:51:497 (1) - 这里音量大有问题!!那根莫明的红线造成的
Normal
  1. 00:15:243 (4) - new combo
  2. 00:18:160 (4) - ^
//整体还过得去就没怎么mod,主要还是皮肤方面问题较多
//难度过低了,需要的话可以提供个 真·insane,另外你上次是不是说要SB来着?如果能等到月底的话我也能帮忙做。
以上。支持新人+超有爱的曲子,STAR~

\(o﹃o)、感谢star ><感谢mod
SuzumiyaSama
skin+diff~finished!
yukinohara
看了几个难度,只有insane开头觉得有点抢,可以试着向后移动一格,不必非要跟歌词。
50,100,300的颜色貌似是一样的,换成不同的颜色估计会更好分辨一点。
转盘BG最好添加一个中心点,这样转轮会方便控制点。BG貌似可以用jpg减少文件大小。
Skin貌似组件还是不够(*),comboburst图片再网上移动一点是不是好点...加上SB就好了,不错的图,mapper加油。

*咱是SB MODer,见谅。
Megurine Luka
/me from IRC req

罪恶王冠就看了第一集= =只记得了一个孝哥从面码的胸口掏出了..

[General]

大概没有=A=没仔细看(懒病

hitcircleoverlay不好看=A=建议用默认

spinner的metre最好有个外圈框,或者在spinner bg上安一个类似于圆框的东西,不然看不出是spinner

spinner metre的中心不在正中间。建议PS里开辅助线对准

[Easy]

Easy的SV变化太多了。Easy最好不要改SV。一个SV到底

00:21:932 (2) - easy尽量不要叠,后面不说了
00:28:182 (6) - Easy的combo数尽量控制在5,后面也不说了(懒病
01:14:835 (3) - 远离2


[Normal]

和EASY一样,SV不要变

节奏下的有点单调=A=


[Hard]

问题不大=A=

[Insane]

总体来说间距很乱=A=

节奏上这种几乎清唱的歌可以跟Vocal

欢迎irc上抓我我跟你讲ovo
Topic Starter
Twice_old
lol 感谢楼上所有的mod!
eveless
[general]
Move this to pending, it's still WIP now
add "chelly" in tags, it's the vocal of Egoist, also you can add "Inori" in tags too
add "Ryu" in tags, since he is composer


[Insane]
Obbject isnt snapped well, plz Resnap All notes.

00:08:183 (2) - end at 00:08:603, 00:08:811 - add a 1/2 slider here instead of 00:09:228 (3)
00:10:266 (6) - end at 00:10:478
00:23:603 (6) - move it to 00:23:811, then add a note at 00:24:228
00:24:433 (1) - add whistle at begin
00:40:683 (7) - add whistle
01:19:210 (2,3) - move these to 4's position, then move 4 to 01:19:835 (1)'s position

[Hard]
00:40:686 (8) - add whistle
01:09:835 (5) - use whistle instead of finish, or reduce your volume
01:18:168 (4) - ^

[Normal]
00:53:603 (1) - there is 1 unsnapped note, Resnap it plz


[Easy]

Unsnapped too.

Infact this map's diff spread is NNNE, at least it's HNNE 233
Topic Starter
Twice_old

goodbye wrote:

[general]
Move this to pending, it's still WIP now
add "chelly" in tags, it's the vocal of Egoist, also you can add "Inori" in tags too
add "Ryu" in tags, since he is composer


[Insane]
Obbject isnt snapped well, plz Resnap All notes.

00:08:183 (2) - end at 00:08:603, 00:08:811 - add a 1/2 slider here instead of 00:09:228 (3)
00:10:266 (6) - end at 00:10:478
00:23:603 (6) - move it to 00:23:811, then add a note at 00:24:228
00:24:433 (1) - add whistle at begin
00:40:683 (7) - add whistle
01:19:210 (2,3) - move these to 4's position, then move 4 to 01:19:835 (1)'s position

[Hard]
00:40:686 (8) - add whistle
01:09:835 (5) - use whistle instead of finish, or reduce your volume
01:18:168 (4) - ^

[Normal]
00:53:603 (1) - there is 1 unsnapped note, Resnap it plz


[Easy]

Unsnapped too.

Infact this map's diff spread is NNNE, at least it's HNNE 233
thanks for mod~ :)
spboxer3

[general]


  • Settings
  1. 加入tag:Suzumiyasama
  2. 當你加入Skin後需要加個sliderBorder:R,G,B(顏色) 在osu檔裡 家的位置在combo color下面
  3. 需要有個spinner-approachcircle.png
  4. 建議使用相同的combo color
  5. 建議使用相同的kiai time

[Easy]


  • Settings
  1. kiai需要下在重音(拍點)上 但是你沒有下在上面 也許是改過offset之類的 總之需要修正才行~ ;)
mapping
  1. 00:54:020 (3) - slider節尾沒有在拍點上~
  2. 01:13:168 (2,1) - 覆蓋到 這種的排列在Easy中難以被接受 建議改掉這個

[Suzumiya's Normal]


  • Settings
  1. kiai和Easy一樣的問題
  2. 未使用到的綠線:
    01:23:788 -
Overlaps
(slider/note有部分重疊到了 這會導致player有失誤或不好看 建議是改掉會比較好)
  1. 00:18:186 (1,2) -
  2. 01:19:418 (4,6) -
mapping
  1. 01:21:501 (1) - 結尾的地方並沒有對到拍點

[Hard]


  • Settings
  1. kiai和Easy一樣的問題
  2. 未使用到的綠線:
    01:22:751 -
mapping
  1. 並沒有什麼問題~但是有點必須提出來 因為這diff的note和slider都黏在一起了~下次map的時候盡量別黏在一起會好些 ;)


紅色是unrankable的 一定要改 藍色的是需要討論的問題 黑色就只是建議

ok~就這樣摟
good luck
Topic Starter
Twice_old

spboxer3 wrote:

[general]


  • Settings
  1. 加入tag:Suzumiyasama
  2. 當你加入Skin後需要加個sliderBorder:R,G,B(顏色) 在osu檔裡 家的位置在combo color下面
  3. 需要有個spinner-approachcircle.png
  4. 建議使用相同的combo color
  5. 建議使用相同的kiai time

[Easy]


  • Settings
  1. kiai需要下在重音(拍點)上 但是你沒有下在上面 也許是改過offset之類的 總之需要修正才行~ ;)
mapping
  1. 00:54:020 (3) - slider節尾沒有在拍點上~
  2. 01:13:168 (2,1) - 覆蓋到 這種的排列在Easy中難以被接受 建議改掉這個

[Suzumiya's Normal]


  • Settings
  1. kiai和Easy一樣的問題
  2. 未使用到的綠線:
    01:23:788 -
Overlaps
(slider/note有部分重疊到了 這會導致player有失誤或不好看 建議是改掉會比較好)
  1. 00:18:186 (1,2) -
  2. 01:19:418 (4,6) -
mapping
  1. 01:21:501 (1) - 結尾的地方並沒有對到拍點

[Hard]


  • Settings
  1. kiai和Easy一樣的問題
  2. 未使用到的綠線:
    01:22:751 -
mapping
  1. 並沒有什麼問題~但是有點必須提出來 因為這diff的note和slider都黏在一起了~下次map的時候盡量別黏在一起會好些 ;)


紅色是unrankable的 一定要改 藍色的是需要討論的問題 黑色就只是建議

ok~就這樣摟
good luck
:) 感谢MOD
GiNa
你好

[General]
-Tags請弄好,Suzumiyasama只有Easy有另外兩個沒有
Tags裡也請加上supercell跟ending,還有不是ryu,是ryo,r記得不要大寫,詳見: http://zh.wikipedia.org/zh-cn/Supercell
-Source也算是挺有爭議的,竟然已經有ranked ver.了,Guilty Crown也改成GUILTY CROWN(全大寫)吧,我看日本人也有說是因為動畫官網裡的GUILTY CROWN全都是大寫
-因為你有video,所以請拿掉”Letterbox during breaks” (Song Setup -> Storyboarding),記得全部diff都要拿掉
-Preview time感覺有點太後面了,試聽時都沒聽到什麼的感覺,試著往前一點怎麼樣?我覺得放在00:53:603應該還可以

[Easy]
00:21:936 (2) – 下移一格,所以就是在x:432 y:260(Grid Level 4)
00:32:353 (2) – 跟上一個有一點點遠
00:54:853 (5) – 建議NC
01:19:834 (1,2) – 我覺得這兩個不用特意結束在藍線上,紅線即可,改的話記得調一下spacing

[Suzumiya's Normal]
00:34:853 (7) – NC,不然combo太長
01:04:835 (5) – 應該不必停在藍線上

[Hard]
01:21:501 (3) – 前面兩個就算了,但是這個停在藍線上感覺有點多餘

整體是不錯的圖,加油
Topic Starter
Twice_old
SPOILER

GiNa wrote:

你好

[General]
-Tags請弄好,Suzumiyasama只有Easy有另外兩個沒有
Tags裡也請加上supercell跟ending,還有不是ryu,是ryo,r記得不要大寫,詳見: http://zh.wikipedia.org/zh-cn/Supercell
-Source也算是挺有爭議的,竟然已經有ranked ver.了,Guilty Crown也改成GUILTY CROWN(全大寫)吧,我看日本人也有說是因為動畫官網裡的GUILTY CROWN全都是大寫
-因為你有video,所以請拿掉”Letterbox during breaks” (Song Setup -> Storyboarding),記得全部diff都要拿掉
-Preview time感覺有點太後面了,試聽時都沒聽到什麼的感覺,試著往前一點怎麼樣?我覺得放在00:53:603應該還可以

[Easy]
00:21:936 (2) – 下移一格,所以就是在x:432 y:260(Grid Level 4)
00:32:353 (2) – 跟上一個有一點點遠
00:54:853 (5) – 建議NC
01:19:834 (1,2) – 我覺得這兩個不用特意結束在藍線上,紅線即可,改的話記得調一下spacing

[Suzumiya's Normal]
00:34:853 (7) – NC,不然combo太長
01:04:835 (5) – 應該不必停在藍線上

[Hard]
01:21:501 (3) – 前面兩個就算了,但是這個停在藍線上感覺有點多餘

整體是不錯的圖,加油

感谢mod><
LKs
hi

timing check and hitsound help

  1. Make first offest 1498 to fit the song better
  1. Found 5 hitdounds file for you, plus my [test].osu file.
http://puu.sh/kSEM


音效还好 应该好用
Topic Starter
Twice_old

LKs wrote:

hi

timing check and hitsound help

  1. Make first offest 1498 to fit the song better
  1. Found 5 hitdounds file for you, plus my [test].osu file.
http://puu.sh/kSEM


音效还好 应该好用

:) 感谢lks帮忙><
Nichiyouki
Hi, Twice

From my modding queue

[General]
  1. Remove .osb file in folder, then upload (full submission)
  2. Change AudioLeadIn to 2000
[Easy]
00:53:603 (2) - Here isn't snapped.
00:54:019 (3) - ^
00:54:436 (4) - ^
00:54:853 (1) - ^, You should move to match the line.

[Suzumiya's Normal]
  1. Your diff has rating star is 2.64, I think this should be more 2.75.
OD +1
00:32:331 (2) - Add whistle in begin of slider
00:33:164 (3) - Remove whistle
00:33:997 (5) - Add whistle
00:34:831 (1) - Remove whistle in begin of slider
00:35:664 (2) - Same as 00:33:997 (5)

[Hard]
  1. Edit to this in notepad
    [Events]
    //Background and Video events
    0,0,"BG.jpg"
    Video,0,"bgv.avi"
    //Break Periods
    //Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
    //Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
    //Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
    //Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
    //Storyboard Sound Samples
    //Background Colour Transformations
    3,100,163,162,255
The rest, I had not found any problems.

That's all, that I can find them.
nice song

Good luck.
Fabi
Awesome! Hope it get ranked :P
Topic Starter
Twice_old
SPOILER

nich95 wrote:

Hi, Twice

From my modding queue

[General]
  1. Remove .osb file in folder, then upload (full submission)
  2. Change AudioLeadIn to 2000
[Easy]
00:53:603 (2) - Here isn't snapped.
00:54:019 (3) - ^
00:54:436 (4) - ^
00:54:853 (1) - ^, You should move to match the line.

[Suzumiya's Normal]
  1. Your diff has rating star is 2.64, I think this should be more 2.75.
OD +1
00:32:331 (2) - Add whistle in begin of slider
00:33:164 (3) - Remove whistle
00:33:997 (5) - Add whistle
00:34:831 (1) - Remove whistle in begin of slider
00:35:664 (2) - Same as 00:33:997 (5)

[Hard]
  1. Edit to this in notepad
    [Events]
    //Background and Video events
    0,0,"BG.jpg"
    Video,0,"bgv.avi"
    //Break Periods
    //Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
    //Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
    //Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
    //Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
    //Storyboard Sound Samples
    //Background Colour Transformations
    3,100,163,162,255
The rest, I had not found any problems.

That's all, that I can find them.
nice song

Good luck.

fixed~ :3 thanks mod
H A D E S_old
[General]

撒~ 没看出有什么问题 - -.

[Easy]

00:40:664 (3) - maybe这个条子结束的地方可以+个finish
00:56:085 (2) - 从00:55:876开始应该会更好点,不过这是easy -_,- 也许太难了,我好纠结...
00:59:835 (3) - 和上面一样的感觉..

[Normal]

01:11:501 (1,2,3) - 音效表这么弄了吧

[Hard]

00:02:956 (4,5) - (4)end at 00:03:581比较好,然后(5)从00:03:789开始
00:29:622 (4) - 去掉尾端的finish

歌听得很舒服的说 >///<
Topic Starter
Twice_old

H A D E S wrote:

[General]

撒~ 没看出有什么问题 - -.

[Easy]

00:40:664 (3) - maybe这个条子结束的地方可以+个finish
00:56:085 (2) - 从00:55:876开始应该会更好点,不过这是easy -_,- 也许太难了,我好纠结...
00:59:835 (3) - 和上面一样的感觉..

[Normal]

01:11:501 (1,2,3) - 音效表这么弄了吧

[Hard]

00:02:956 (4,5) - (4)end at 00:03:581比较好,然后(5)从00:03:789开始
00:29:622 (4) - 去掉尾端的finish

歌听得很舒服的说 >///<

>3< 感谢mod!
Armin
[General]

*Your second non-unherited (=red) timing section sounds a bit early; consider to change its offset.
*Your sliderborder is not used in suzumiya's normal. Consider to add it.
*What if you add a custom normal-hitnormal (taken from the original skin) from here 01:09:001?
*Weird kiai's start o_O What about 01:08:168?

[Easy]

00:53:164 (1,2,3,4) - it seems that you didn't snap this stuff, fix it please; by the way what are they following? o_O Maybe it's your mental rhythm pattern that suggested you to do this, but believe me if I say that's quite unexpected
00:54:831 (1) - Be careful with this slider's end, if you change your red section! (its end is not snapped properly)

[Normal]

00:53:997 (1,2,3) - Just off of rhythm and you knooow

[Hard]

00:02:123 (3) - if I were you I'd still follow the vocal voice, since you started by following it (and you finished to do the same thing in the pattern!)
00:04:622 (6) - I don't really understand the lack of distance spacing here
00:06:706 (slidertick) - I'd silence this slidertick, it's kinda bad to hear it
00:48:163 (1) - Baad position for a spinner's end (because of the next 2 hitobjects, just make something clean; example: make the spinner finish eariler and put a hitcircle on its original position)
01:25:668 (1,2,3) - You can avoid to map this section, and make the map end in the same way of all your difficulties
Topic Starter
Twice_old

Armin wrote:

[General]

*Your second non-unherited (=red) timing section sounds a bit early; consider to change its offset.
*Your sliderborder is not used in suzumiya's normal. Consider to add it.
*What if you add a custom normal-hitnormal (taken from the original skin) from here 01:09:001?
*Weird kiai's start o_O What about 01:08:168?

[Easy]

00:53:164 (1,2,3,4) - it seems that you didn't snap this stuff, fix it please; by the way what are they following? o_O Maybe it's your mental rhythm pattern that suggested you to do this, but believe me if I say that's quite unexpected
00:54:831 (1) - Be careful with this slider's end, if you change your red section! (its end is not snapped properly)

[Normal]

00:53:997 (1,2,3) - Just off of rhythm and you knooow

[Hard]

00:02:123 (3) - if I were you I'd still follow the vocal voice, since you started by following it (and you finished to do the same thing in the pattern!)
00:04:622 (6) - I don't really understand the lack of distance spacing here
00:06:706 (slidertick) - I'd silence this slidertick, it's kinda bad to hear it
00:48:163 (1) - Baad position for a spinner's end (because of the next 2 hitobjects, just make something clean; example: make the spinner finish eariler and put a hitcircle on its original position)
01:25:668 (1,2,3) - You can avoid to map this section, and make the map end in the same way of all your difficulties

:) all fixed,thanks mod!
wmfchris
From Newbie queue

[General]
- I wonder why you end kiai at blue tick, but [Easy] and [Normal]'s kiai ending time is not snapped.
- Snap all your object (as well as timing lines)

[Easy]
00:53:997 (1) - kinda off from the vocal, it may mislead newbies orz
01:27:342 - how about S:C1 finish?

[Normal]
00:15:247 (2) - whistle at middle as usual
00:31:497 - sounds like clap on (1), whistle on (2) and the sounding on the rest should be fixed...
00:31:497 - feels pretty odd that drum-hitsound simply disappeared in these two combos
01:27:342 - how about S:C1 finish?

*you may want to mute the slidertick in the last combo.

[Hard]
01:27:342 - how about S:C1 finish?

*sounds like S:C1 whistle does not go well with S:C1 finish, they give quite different feeling, so I suggest you to keep the metronome sound and find a softer drum sound.
*nice custom hitsounds, though you have to try to make it consistent.
Topic Starter
Twice_old

wmfchris wrote:

From Newbie queue

[General]
- I wonder why you end kiai at blue tick, but [Easy] and [Normal]'s kiai ending time is not snapped. fix
- Snap all your object (as well as timing lines) done

[Easy]
00:53:997 (1) - kinda off from the vocal, it may mislead newbies orz change
01:27:342 - how about S:C1 finish? ok

[Normal]
00:15:247 (2) - whistle at middle as usual fix
00:31:497 - sounds like clap on (1), whistle on (2) and the sounding on the rest should be fixed... fix
00:31:497 - feels pretty odd that drum-hitsound simply disappeared in these two combos fix
01:27:342 - how about S:C1 finish? ok

*you may want to mute the slidertick in the last combo.
[Hard]
01:27:342 - how about S:C1 finish? ok

*sounds like S:C1 whistle does not go well with S:C1 finish, they give quite different feeling, so I suggest you to keep the metronome sound and find a softer drum sound.
*nice custom hitsounds, though you have to try to make it consistent.


:) thanks for mod
ertyukjh010


您好 :) 既然要英文mod就英文吧QAQ

[Easy]

01:11:296 () - unless green line

[Suzumiya's Normal]

00:17:331 () - unless green line
00:27:331 (4) - whistle at beginner
00:31:289 () - unless green line
00:37:747 () - ^

[Hard]

00:26:289 () - unless green line
01:07:343 () - ^
01:12:759 () - ^
01:16:718 () - ^

That all :) Go to rank quickly ><
Topic Starter
Twice_old

ertyukjh010 wrote:



您好 :) 既然要英文mod就英文吧QAQ

[Easy]

01:11:296 () - unless green line

[Suzumiya's Normal]

00:17:331 () - unless green line
00:27:331 (4) - whistle at beginner
00:31:289 () - unless green line
00:37:747 () - ^

[Hard]

00:26:289 () - unless green line
01:07:343 () - ^
01:12:759 () - ^
01:16:718 () - ^

That all :) Go to rank quickly ><

all fix :) 谢谢mod
_-Chihara-_
nice map :D, especially the elements <3
Topic Starter
Twice_old

_-Chihara-_ wrote:

nice map :D, especially the elements <3
>.< thank you
Leorda
Hi there

[Skinning]
* default-comma.png, default-dot.png, default-percent.png, and default-x.png are useless for mapset. Remove them


[Easy]
00:26:081 (3) - Remove whistle at end
00:26:914 (4) - Add clap at start
00:33:997 (4) - Add finish?
00:38:997 (2) - Add whistle at start
00:54:843 (1) - New combo for preventing of spinner bug


[Hard]
00:53:789 (1) - New combo for preventing of spinner bug


Once you done, forum PM me for recheck
Topic Starter
Twice_old
SPOILER

Leorda wrote:

Hi there

[Skinning]
* default-comma.png, default-dot.png, default-percent.png, and default-x.png are useless for mapset. Remove them


[Easy]
00:26:081 (3) - Remove whistle at end
00:26:914 (4) - Add clap at start
00:33:997 (4) - Add finish?
00:38:997 (2) - Add whistle at start
00:54:843 (1) - New combo for preventing of spinner bug


[Hard]
00:53:789 (1) - New combo for preventing of spinner bug


Once you done, forum PM me for recheck

:) thanks Leorda's mod!
iPad
modding ~
Sallad4ever
I'm very sorry for the awfully late reply. I see that Leo already mod this map so I'll make this brief

[General]
  1. Also remove the ranking-A-small, ranking-B-smal, etc. They are unnecessary
  2. It's strange to have a non rotating image as the slider ball imo. I suggest you to search for another image with round shape to make it rotate, but if you can't then it's ok to use the current slider ball
  3. Your custom soft-hitnormal is a blank sound meaning there's no sound whatsoever, please don't do this as this won't give a feedback from hitting the object. Remove this file, try using timing sections with low volume if you want to use a very soft sound
  4. Hmm I think the offset should be 1505 and you don't need a 2nd red line on 00:54:843. Try to consult with other MAT/BAT about this if you're not sure
[Suzumiya's Normal]
  1. 00:36:289 & 00:36:706 - Remove this 2 timing section. These 2 sections lowering the sound of the slider tick AND the slider slide which is awkward considering you put the section in the middle of the slider
  2. 01:26:926 & 01:28:592 - Same as above, try not to put timing section with volume change in the middle of slider. Put timing section right in the beginning/end of the slider
Ok that's all from me, you have to do something about that blank soft-hitnormal as it's a bad idea
Anyway good luck~
Topic Starter
Twice_old
SPOILER

Sallad4ever wrote:

I'm very sorry for the awfully late reply. I see that Leo already mod this map so I'll make this brief

[General]
  1. Also remove the ranking-A-small, ranking-B-smal, etc. They are unnecessary
  2. It's strange to have a non rotating image as the slider ball imo. I suggest you to search for another image with round shape to make it rotate, but if you can't then it's ok to use the current slider ball I would like to keep my decision.
  3. Your custom soft-hitnormal is a blank sound meaning there's no sound whatsoever, please don't do this as this won't give a feedback from hitting the object. Remove this file, try using timing sections with low volume if you want to use a very soft sound
  4. Hmm I think the offset should be 1505 and you don't need a 2nd red line on 00:54:843. Try to consult with other MAT/BAT about this if you're not sure
[Suzumiya's Normal]
  1. 00:36:289 & 00:36:706 - Remove this 2 timing section. These 2 sections lowering the sound of the slider tick AND the slider slide which is awkward considering you put the section in the middle of the slider
  2. 01:26:926 & 01:28:592 - Same as above, try not to put timing section with volume change in the middle of slider. Put timing section right in the beginning/end of the slider
Ok that's all from me, you have to do something about that blank soft-hitnormal as it's a bad idea
Anyway good luck~


Thanks Sallad4ever's mod :) all fixed!
Melophobia
As requested

[General]
you have both of muted slidertick and sliderslide in the .osz, it's not allowed and you have to remove either

[Easy]
00:15:671 (4) - it'll look better if you use same shape as 00:13:171 (4) -
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/323620
00:17:338 - add a note to follow the piano
00:19:838 (4) - add whistle at the end of this slider to match it with the piano
00:23:171 - add a note to follow the piano
00:47:338 (3) - i think this slider should end at 00:47:963 - instead to follow vocal. if you care about coming next spinner too early, then i'd suggest replace the slider with a circle
00:24:213 - i think this green line should be at 00:24:629 - since the music begins getting louder there
00:51:504 (1) - mute this spinner's end. sounds noisy because background music disappears here
if you agree, apply it for others diffs as well
01:25:671 (1) - i dont get why you add note here this notes doesnt follow anything and a bit soon after spinner for an Easy diff
at least you should remove finish
01:01:504 (1) - such a long slider is not good way imo it's kinda boring and i think you can use shorter slider to follow vocal/piano better
01:18:171 - add finish (CS2) at the beginning of this? just suggestion. i dont know if it'll fit but rhythm will be better to me
01:19:004 - i think this finish is too much and doesnt fit here, clap is enough
01:28:171 (3) - replace with a circle? since the end of this follows nothing so sounds not that good to me

[Normal]
00:20:671 - add a note to follow the piano
00:22:338 (3) - add whistle at the end?
00:24:213 - volume is too high imo, 20% is better
00:45:255 (2,3) - these are uncomfortable to me, they are not following anything, right?
00:47:338 (3) - same as Easy
00:53:796 (1,2) - use lower volume than previous part for these notes, because background music disappears. i think 15~20% is better
00:54:838 (3) - add finish at the beginning
01:13:171 (3) - remove finish from end of this, whistle's enough for this
01:14:004 (4) - add whistle because 01:12:337 (2) - has it
01:14:837 (1) - end this at 01:15:671 -
01:16:504 (2) - ^
01:25:671 (1) - remove this note, it follows nothing
01:28:171 (3) - same as Easy

[Hard]
00:10:872 (8) - finish+whistle is too much, remove both and add whistle to the beginning next slider
00:17:956 (2) - remove whistle
00:48:164 (1) - no need to add finish here and it doesnt fit
00:51:498 (1) - same as Easy
00:54:838 (6) - add newcombo
01:08:176 (2) - i think soft-hitfinish2 is better like you did on Easy diff
01:17:342 (3) - add clap at the beginning
01:25:676 (1) - same as Easy
01:28:176 (3) - ^

i think you need a lot of work before getting this bubbled, especially on hitsounding but maybe it's just me
good luck!
Topic Starter
Twice_old
SPOILER

Melophobia wrote:

As requested

[General]
you have both of muted slidertick and sliderslide in the .osz, it's not allowed and you have to remove either

[Easy]
00:15:671 (4) - it'll look better if you use same shape as 00:13:171 (4) -
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/323620
00:17:338 - add a note to follow the piano
00:19:838 (4) - add whistle at the end of this slider to match it with the piano
00:23:171 - add a note to follow the piano
00:47:338 (3) - i think this slider should end at 00:47:963 - instead to follow vocal. if you care about coming next spinner too early, then i'd suggest replace the slider with a circle
00:24:213 - i think this green line should be at 00:24:629 - since the music begins getting louder there
00:51:504 (1) - mute this spinner's end. sounds noisy because background music disappears here
if you agree, apply it for others diffs as well
01:25:671 (1) - i dont get why you add note here this notes doesnt follow anything and a bit soon after spinner for an Easy diff
at least you should remove finish
01:01:504 (1) - such a long slider is not good way imo it's kinda boring and i think you can use shorter slider to follow vocal/piano better
01:18:171 - add finish (CS2) at the beginning of this? just suggestion. i dont know if it'll fit but rhythm will be better to me
01:19:004 - i think this finish is too much and doesnt fit here, clap is enough
01:28:171 (3) - replace with a circle? since the end of this follows nothing so sounds not that good to me

[Normal]
00:20:671 - add a note to follow the piano
00:22:338 (3) - add whistle at the end?
00:24:213 - volume is too high imo, 20% is better
00:45:255 (2,3) - these are uncomfortable to me, they are not following anything, right?
00:47:338 (3) - same as Easy
00:53:796 (1,2) - use lower volume than previous part for these notes, because background music disappears. i think 15~20% is better
00:54:838 (3) - add finish at the beginning
01:13:171 (3) - remove finish from end of this, whistle's enough for this
01:14:004 (4) - add whistle because 01:12:337 (2) - has it
01:14:837 (1) - end this at 01:15:671 -
01:16:504 (2) - ^
01:25:671 (1) - remove this note, it follows nothing
01:28:171 (3) - same as Easy

[Hard]
00:10:872 (8) - finish+whistle is too much, remove both and add whistle to the beginning next slider
00:17:956 (2) - remove whistle
00:48:164 (1) - no need to add finish here and it doesnt fit
00:51:498 (1) - same as Easy
00:54:838 (6) - add newcombo
01:08:176 (2) - i think soft-hitfinish2 is better like you did on Easy diff
01:17:342 (3) - add clap at the beginning
01:25:676 (1) - same as Easy
01:28:176 (3) - ^

i think you need a lot of work before getting this bubbled, especially on hitsounding but maybe it's just me
good luck!

lol fixed most, thanks for mod!
Chewin
[Easy]
00:11:505 (3) - Add new combo
00:14:421 (1) - Remove new combo
00:14:838 (2) - Add new combo
00:17:755 (1) - Remove new combo
00:18:171 (2) - Add new combo
00:24:838 (2) - Use a soft finish 10% volume here. It sounds very good
00:47:338 (3) - Reduce this slider till the red tick 00:47:754 and remove finish? It's Just a suggestion since this is an easy and you shouldn't use 1/4
Awesome map

[Suzumiya's Normal]
00:14:421 (1) - Add finish at the end
00:37:338 (1) - Remove new combo for consistency
00:37:754 (2) - Add new combo
00:41:088 (1) - Remove new combo
00:41:505 (2) - Add new combo

[Hard]
00:23:796 (6) - Remove this circle?
00:24:421 (1) - Remove new combo
00:24:838 (2) - Add new combo here instead
01:03:796 (6) - Reduce this slider adding a whistle on the tail, then add a circle here 01:04:213 and here 01:04:629, It fits much better the song:

01:07:963 (1) - Remove new combo
01:08:171 (2) - Add new combo
01:14:837 (6) - ^?

That's all! Now get this ranked and good luck :3
Topic Starter
Twice_old

Chewin wrote:

[Easy]
00:11:505 (3) - Add new combo
00:14:421 (1) - Remove new combo
00:14:838 (2) - Add new combo
00:17:755 (1) - Remove new combo
00:18:171 (2) - Add new combo
00:24:838 (2) - Use a soft finish 10% volume here. It sounds very good
00:47:338 (3) - Reduce this slider till the red tick 00:47:754 and remove finish? It's Just a suggestion since this is an easy and you shouldn't use 1/4
Awesome map

[Suzumiya's Normal]
00:14:421 (1) - Add finish at the end
00:37:338 (1) - Remove new combo for consistency
00:37:754 (2) - Add new combo
00:41:088 (1) - Remove new combo
00:41:505 (2) - Add new combo

[Hard]
00:23:796 (6) - Remove this circle?
00:24:421 (1) - Remove new combo
00:24:838 (2) - Add new combo here instead
01:03:796 (6) - Reduce this slider adding a whistle on the tail, then add a circle here 01:04:213 and here 01:04:629, It fits much better the song:
I know your meaning, but I think iit will destroy the fluency of my design. so...
01:07:963 (1) - Remove new combo
01:08:171 (2) - Add new combo
01:14:837 (6) - ^?

That's all! Now get this ranked and good luck :3
fixed most >< thanks for mod!!
DarkSkyKnight
General:很好的skin,很少看见类似的了,不错 =w=

[Easy]

很好啊

[Normal]

00:53:796 (1) -

试试看这样?

01:03:171 (3) -
01:04:838 (1) -
看你自己决定咯,这只是建议

节奏很简单。。。试试看多加点花样吧

[Hard]

其实感觉你有点像走节奏的路线而不是melody的路线那如果你只是铺节奏的话那就无视我吧

00:02:130 (3) -

这样的节奏试试看?

00:04:213 (6) -
删掉7,把6推前这样的节奏看看?

00:21:088 (1,2) - 建议不要这两个note

00:53:784 (1) -
这样的排列试试看?

00:58:171 (1) - 这里开始的一段加点跳跃如何。。 = =

风格很不错,整体很棒。。。skin真的很好看。。。只是觉得节奏时而不跟歌,时而跟有点怪。。。就这样。。
祝早日rank
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