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Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. My opinions or questions about something.
[General]
maybe it's me but i think that the BG looks stretched. i suggest finding a clear BG similar to this. it's gonna bother me when this song gets ranked.
Add "Insert song" in the tags. this was sung during the 24th episode of k-on season 2.
i think that the spinner BG and the spinner metre's dimensions should be the same. as it stands, they're different. from what I see, it should be at 1023x692.
i don't think a lead in is needed since the song starts 2 seconds ahead. i suggest that remove the lead in because of that.
[Normal]
00:14:299 (4) - delete this circle and add a 1/2 repeat slider starting at 00:14:043 to follow the drums.
00:18:402 (4) - same as above but this follows the bass.
00:20:966 (4) - make this a NC. the lyrics change from here.
00:25:069 (4) - ^
00:30:710 (4) - same as 00:18:402.
00:37:376 (4) - same as 00:20:966.
00:41:479 (4) - same as above but the instrumental changes.
00:49:684 (2) - ik you can make a wave slider nicer than this. it plays weird during gameplay.
00:53:787 (3,4) - tbh i was expecting these 2 notes to point in the same direction as (1,2). it'll flow a lot smoother if you do this.
01:04:043 (1) - maybe add a finish at the beginning? the vocal pitch sounds the same as 00:59:940.
01:08:146 (1,2) - same as 00:49:684.
01:24:556 (1,2) - see? this looks nice. try to fix the wave sliders and make them similar to this.
01:30:710 (3) - since (1) is a curved slider, make this slider a curved slider to flow a lot smoother during gameplay.
02:03:530 (2) - the flow looks weird because the flow from the wave slider to the straight slider makes me feel ucomfortable. make this a curved slider so that it'd blanket the 1st half of the slider. it should look like this.
02:34:299 (1) - same as 01:04:043
02:46:607 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern might be hard for players. since this is the easiest diff, players might feel uncomfortable as they have to move in a weird motion. re-arrange the pattern like this. it'd be easier and it'll flow smoother during gameplay.
03:46:094 (1) - same as 01:04:043.
03:47:120 (2) - Do Ctrl+R. you should blanket the repeat slider on (4).
04:06:607 (1) - Ctrl+H and leave it around that spot. the overlap on the repeat slider makes it look bad during gameplay.
04:22:889 (1) - i understand that this is at the 1/6 line, but it'd be better if you can re-snap it to the 1/4 line. the delay is almost the same if you ask me. for the 2nd spinner.
nice map and use of the hitsounds, but i think the combos need a bit of work. if the combos are intentional, then ignore this, and replace the circles for 1/2 repeat sliders like at 00:14:299.
[Hard]
00:05:838 (8) - add a repeat to follow the guitar and to keep it consistent with (7).
00:08:402 (3) - idk after seeing a map unranked due to something like this, this might be unrankable. ask a MAT or BAT to confirm about this.
00:16:863 (2) - make this a curved slider. you'll blanket the previous slider if you do so.
01:04:043 (1) - same as normal.
01:47:120 (2) - curve it a lot more, you'll make a blanket for the previous slider.
02:27:120 (3,4) - remove (4) and add a repeat on (3). i see a potential pattern on this combo. a slider to circle pattern.
02:34:299 (1) - same as normal.
02:46:607 (1) - make to make this slider similar to (5). it plays weird during gameplay.
03:43:017 (3) - same as 00:49:684 on normal.
03:46:094 (1) - same as 01:04:043.
03:49:171 (7) - *nazi* move this up a bit to avoid the slight overlap on (5).
04:18:658 - add a circle or a repeat to follow the guitar.
04:20:710 (3) - same as 00:08:402.
same comment about the combos.
[Insane]
00:11:479 (3) - aww i was expecting a jump on this. it'd look fun for players, so do Ctrl+R for this slider.
00:42:248 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - manual stacking right? if not stack these notes perfectly. it looks weird during gameplay.
01:04:043 (1) - same as normal.
01:29:684 (2,3,4,5,6) - instead of a flower pattern, how about a star pattern? same reason as 00:11:479.
02:21:222 (7) - make this a symmetrical curved slider. you'll make a blanket for the previous slider.
02:34:299 (1,3) - for a smoother flow, 1 of the slider should look the same as the other. example: 1 should look like (3) and vice versa.
03:17:120 (1) - this slowdown on the slider might throw off players. put the SV back to its original speed to make it easier for players.
same comment about the combos.
I guess that's it. Star because of the song. when graduation comes, i'm gonna think of this song . anyways GL
Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. My opinions or questions about something.
[General]
maybe it's me but i think that the BG looks stretched. i suggest finding a clear BG similar to this. it's gonna bother me when this song gets ranked.
Add "Insert song" in the tags. this was sung during the 24th episode of k-on season 2.
i think that the spinner BG and the spinner metre's dimensions should be the same. as it stands, they're different. from what I see, it should be at 1023x692.
i don't think a lead in is needed since the song starts 2 seconds ahead. i suggest that remove the lead in because of that.
[Normal]
00:14:299 (4) - delete this circle and add a 1/2 repeat slider starting at 00:14:043 to follow the drums.
00:18:402 (4) - same as above but this follows the bass.
00:20:966 (4) - make this a NC. the lyrics change from here.
00:25:069 (4) - ^
00:30:710 (4) - same as 00:18:402.
00:37:376 (4) - same as 00:20:966.
00:41:479 (4) - same as above but the instrumental changes.
00:49:684 (2) - ik you can make a wave slider nicer than this. it plays weird during gameplay.
00:53:787 (3,4) - tbh i was expecting these 2 notes to point in the same direction as (1,2). it'll flow a lot smoother if you do this.
01:04:043 (1) - maybe add a finish at the beginning? the vocal pitch sounds the same as 00:59:940.
01:08:146 (1,2) - same as 00:49:684.
01:24:556 (1,2) - see? this looks nice. try to fix the wave sliders and make them similar to this.
01:30:710 (3) - since (1) is a curved slider, make this slider a curved slider to flow a lot smoother during gameplay.
02:03:530 (2) - the flow looks weird because the flow from the wave slider to the straight slider makes me feel ucomfortable. make this a curved slider so that it'd blanket the 1st half of the slider. it should look like this.
02:34:299 (1) - same as 01:04:043
02:46:607 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern might be hard for players. since this is the easiest diff, players might feel uncomfortable as they have to move in a weird motion. re-arrange the pattern like this. it'd be easier and it'll flow smoother during gameplay.
03:46:094 (1) - same as 01:04:043.
03:47:120 (2) - Do Ctrl+R. you should blanket the repeat slider on (4).
04:06:607 (1) - Ctrl+H and leave it around that spot. the overlap on the repeat slider makes it look bad during gameplay.
04:22:889 (1) - i understand that this is at the 1/6 line, but it'd be better if you can re-snap it to the 1/4 line. the delay is almost the same if you ask me. for the 2nd spinner.
nice map and use of the hitsounds, but i think the combos need a bit of work. if the combos are intentional, then ignore this, and replace the circles for 1/2 repeat sliders like at 00:14:299.
[Hard]
00:05:838 (8) - add a repeat to follow the guitar and to keep it consistent with (7).
00:08:402 (3) - idk after seeing a map unranked due to something like this, this might be unrankable. ask a MAT or BAT to confirm about this.
00:16:863 (2) - make this a curved slider. you'll blanket the previous slider if you do so.
01:04:043 (1) - same as normal.
01:47:120 (2) - curve it a lot more, you'll make a blanket for the previous slider.
02:27:120 (3,4) - remove (4) and add a repeat on (3). i see a potential pattern on this combo. a slider to circle pattern.
02:34:299 (1) - same as normal.
02:46:607 (1) - make to make this slider similar to (5). it plays weird during gameplay.
03:43:017 (3) - same as 00:49:684 on normal.
03:46:094 (1) - same as 01:04:043.
03:49:171 (7) - *nazi* move this up a bit to avoid the slight overlap on (5).
04:18:658 - add a circle or a repeat to follow the guitar.
04:20:710 (3) - same as 00:08:402.
same comment about the combos.
[Insane]
00:11:479 (3) - aww i was expecting a jump on this. it'd look fun for players, so do Ctrl+R for this slider.
00:42:248 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - manual stacking right? if not stack these notes perfectly. it looks weird during gameplay.
01:04:043 (1) - same as normal.
01:29:684 (2,3,4,5,6) - instead of a flower pattern, how about a star pattern? same reason as 00:11:479.
02:21:222 (7) - make this a symmetrical curved slider. you'll make a blanket for the previous slider.
02:34:299 (1,3) - for a smoother flow, 1 of the slider should look the same as the other. example: 1 should look like (3) and vice versa.
03:17:120 (1) - this slowdown on the slider might throw off players. put the SV back to its original speed to make it easier for players.
same comment about the combos.
I guess that's it. Star because of the song. when graduation comes, i'm gonna think of this song . anyways GL