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Barney Stinson
Hey! Sorry for delay

Could not find nothing.

I'll star it when I'll get other kds for other maps.
Sorry ^^"
Roddie
Timing Points
  1. 04:02:502 (tutuhaha's Normal)-Kind of odd ending the kiai time here really. Try to end the kiai time on 04:09:614 like on Hard and Easy.
Easy
  1. Perhaps this difficulty would play better if you decrease the Approach Rate by one.
  2. 00:41:614 (1)-It sure does sound like there should be a finish here.
  3. 00:44:280 (5)-Well, a finish on the end sure sounds fitting in my opinion.
  4. 00:48:725 (4)-A finish here sounds alright here.
  5. 01:22:502 (1, 1)-Both finishes here don't sound right. Consider removing them.
  6. 01:27:836 (1)-A finish on the beginning would sound alright.
  7. 01:42:058 (1)-^
  8. 01:54:502 (5)-Don't mean to sound picky but can you make this slider going into a proper curve?
  9. 02:13:169 (4)-A finish on the end sure sounds fitting.
  10. 02:15:836 (1)-Adding a whistle would sound nice really. Consider doing that.
  11. 02:28:280 (1)-A finish here sounds fitting on the beginning perhaps?
  12. 02:31:836 (1)-Consider adding a finish here.
  13. 02:58:502 (1)-A finish on the beginning would sound alright.
  14. 03:02:058 (1)-Care to explain on why you didn't add a finish here? ):
  15. 03:04:725 (5)-Consider adding a finish on the end.
  16. 03:06:502 (1)-Looks sort of like an anti-jump really. Its not really a good idea to do that on an Easy difficulty. ): So, use the distance snap on it so the spacing on that can be fixed.
  17. 03:09:169 (1)-A finish here sounds fitting really.
  18. 03:16:280 (1)-^
  19. 04:02:058 (1)-A finish on the reverse arrow would sound alright.
tutuhaha's Normal
  1. 00:09:614 (1)-Forgot to add a finish on the beginning? o:
  2. 00:30:947 (1)-A finish on the beginning would sound alright.
  3. 01:50:058 (1)-A whistle here sure sounds nice here. In fact, I like how you used that on the second kiai time section. I'm a bit surprised that you didn't put a whistle here on the third kiai time section. o.o
  4. 01:52:725 (1)-A custom hit-clap would sound pleasing here? o:
  5. 02:28:280 (1)-Forgot to add a finish on the beginning here too?
  6. 02:31:836 (1)-^
  7. 02:35:391 (1)-A finish here sounds fitting perhaps?
  8. 03:00:280 (1)-Forgot to add a custom hit-clap on the end?
  9. 03:09:169 (1)-Forgot to add a custom hit-clap on the beginning?
  10. 03:16:280 (1)-^
  11. 03:27:836 (1)-Pretty much the same thing I talked about on 01:50:058.
  12. 03:51:836 (1)-Consider adding a custom hit-clap here.
Hard
  1. 00:18:725 (2, 3, 4)-A note triple here isn't really fitting. Turn it into a note double. You know, like this?
  2. 00:48:725 (1)-A finish here would sound fitting.
  3. 01:06:725 (2, 3, 4)-Pretty much the same thing on 00:18:725.
  4. 01:38:502 (4)-A finish on the beginning sounds fitting. Consider adding one in
  5. 01:42:058 (1)-Forgot to add a finish on the beginning?
  6. 01:58:280 (2, 3, 4)-Pretty much the same thing on 00:18:725.
  7. 02:03:614 (2, 3, 4)-^
  8. 02:17:614 (1)-Adding a whistle would sound nice really. Consider on doing that.
  9. 03:44:947 (2, 3, 4)-Pretty much the same thing on 00:18:725.
  10. 03:51:836 (1)-Forgot to add a custom hit-clap on the beginning?
And that's about it. Nothing too serious really.

Give me a call when you two are done looking through my mod.
Topic Starter
Scorpiour

Roddie wrote:

Timing Points
  1. 04:02:502 (tutuhaha's Normal)-Kind of odd ending the kiai time here really. Try to end the kiai time on 04:09:614 like on Hard and Easy.
:arrow: Asked tutuhaha and fixed it for she agreed,

Easy
  1. Perhaps this difficulty would play better if you decrease the Approach Rate by one. :arrow: tested and fixed :)
  2. 00:41:614 (1)-It sure does sound like there should be a finish here. :arrow: fixed
  3. 00:44:280 (5)-Well, a finish on the end sure sounds fitting in my opinion. :arrow: finish maybe heavy here...i try lower volumn and C:S1-clap, and choose clap :)
  4. 00:48:725 (4)-A finish here sounds alright here. :arrow: nice
  5. 01:22:502 (1, 1)-Both finishes here don't sound right. Consider removing them. :arrow: removed~~ and change the later one to clap
  6. 01:27:836 (1)-A finish on the beginning would sound alright. :arrow: fixed
  7. 01:42:058 (1)-^ :arrow: fixed
  8. 01:54:502 (5)-Don't mean to sound picky but can you make this slider going into a proper curve? :arrow: okay ~~fixed
  9. 02:13:169 (4)-A finish on the end sure sounds fitting. :arrow: fixed
  10. 02:15:836 (1)-Adding a whistle would sound nice really. Consider doing that. :arrow: okay
  11. 02:28:280 (1)-A finish here sounds fitting on the beginning perhaps? :arrow: ye...here should be a finish >.<
  12. 02:31:836 (1)-Consider adding a finish here. :arrow: added
  13. 02:58:502 (1)-A finish on the beginning would sound alright. :arrow: yes~
  14. 03:02:058 (1)-Care to explain on why you didn't add a finish here? ): :arrow: fixed....that....for wcx said i add too many finishes, so I remove a lot...and then he said I need more finishes...i add some back...and that confuse myself...>.<...
  15. 03:04:725 (5)-Consider adding a finish on the end. :arrow: fixed T.T
  16. 03:06:502 (1)-Looks sort of like an anti-jump really. Its not really a good idea to do that on an Easy difficulty. ): So, use the distance snap on it so the spacing on that can be fixed. :arrow: spacing fixed....
  17. 03:09:169 (1)-A finish here sounds fitting really.
  18. 03:16:280 (1)-^
  19. 04:02:058 (1)-A finish on the reverse arrow would sound alright. :arrow: fixed >.<
tutuhaha's Normal :arrow: tutuhaha asked me to fix hitsounds...so...I fixed all QAQ
  1. 00:09:614 (1)-Forgot to add a finish on the beginning? o:
  2. 00:30:947 (1)-A finish on the beginning would sound alright.
  3. 01:50:058 (1)-A whistle here sure sounds nice here. In fact, I like how you used that on the second kiai time section. I'm a bit surprised that you didn't put a whistle here on the third kiai time section. o.o
  4. 01:52:725 (1)-A custom hit-clap would sound pleasing here? o:
  5. 02:28:280 (1)-Forgot to add a finish on the beginning here too?
  6. 02:31:836 (1)-^
  7. 02:35:391 (1)-A finish here sounds fitting perhaps?
  8. 03:00:280 (1)-Forgot to add a custom hit-clap on the end?
  9. 03:09:169 (1)-Forgot to add a custom hit-clap on the beginning?
  10. 03:16:280 (1)-^
  11. 03:27:836 (1)-Pretty much the same thing I talked about on 01:50:058.
  12. 03:51:836 (1)-Consider adding a custom hit-clap here.
Hard
  1. 00:18:725 (2, 3, 4)-A note triple here isn't really fitting. Turn it into a note double. You know, like this? :arrow: cool~~
  2. 00:48:725 (1)-A finish here would sound fitting. :arrow: fixed~
  3. 01:06:725 (2, 3, 4)-Pretty much the same thing on 00:18:725. :arrow: fixed~
  4. 01:38:502 (4)-A finish on the beginning sounds fitting. Consider adding one in :arrow: fixed~
  5. 01:42:058 (1)-Forgot to add a finish on the beginning? :arrow: fixed QAQ
  6. 01:58:280 (2, 3, 4)-Pretty much the same thing on 00:18:725.
  7. 02:03:614 (2, 3, 4)-^fixed both~/color]
  8. 02:17:614 (1)-Adding a whistle would sound nice really. Consider on doing that. :arrow:
  9. 03:44:947 (2, 3, 4)-Pretty much the same thing on 00:18:725. :arrow: fixed~~i overuse triplet....X.X
  10. 03:51:836 (1)-Forgot to add a custom hit-clap on the beginning?
And that's about it. Nothing too serious really.

Give me a call when you two are done looking through my mod.
thank you very much for modding....
Roddie
Discussed with Scorpiour about minor fixing on Easy and a bit of a major fixing on the Storyboard. He also removed the cursor and cursortail png files, which is fine.

Everything seems fine from what I am seeing.

So... Rebubbled!
Topic Starter
Scorpiour

Roddie wrote:

Discussed with Scorpiour about minor fixing on Easy and a bit of a major fixing on the Storyboard. He also removed the cursor and cursortail png files, which is fine.

Everything seems fine from what I am seeing.

So... Rebubbled!
thank you very much Roddie >.<
lolcubes
Ok let's take a look.

[General]
  1. Skin: There is too little difference between hit300.png and hit100.png. You should definitely try to use a different color for the 100, that green is too similar to the yellow which 300 is using.
[Hard]
  1. 00:43:725 (2) - This is very hard to see, because of a hitburst from 00:42:725 (6). Easy fix would be to change where 00:43:391 (1) points, so you can position it properly.
  2. 01:12:725 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - A bit long for a [Hard], don't you think? Maybe make last few notes into a short repeating slider?
  3. 01:34:947 (1) - A soft default finish would be better than your custom clap one because you used it in the next section frequently, and it starts with this note.
  4. 01:57:169 (5) - You can make this slider look better by moving the middle point a bit left, it looks weird like it is now.
  5. 02:42:502 (1) - In my opinion a soft finish would be better than your custom clap here.
  6. 03:15:502 (5) - This slider makes no sense because both the drum and the vocal is on 03:15:614. You should start this slider there.
[Easy]
  1. AR+1, OD+1. Looks much more lively with AR3.
  2. 00:19:391 (5) - It would be best if this slider was more clear. The slider 00:17:614 (2) disappears when you are done clicking the circle 00:18:502 (3), and that would be too little time to notice that this was a slider. You should definitely change this, because this is not something you should be doing in [Easy].
  3. 03:04:725 (5) - I think you're missing a whistle on the arrow.
Simple stuff, I should be able to rank after the fixes.
Topic Starter
Scorpiour

lolcubes wrote:

Ok let's take a look.

[General]
  1. Skin: There is too little difference between hit300.png and hit100.png. You should definitely try to use a different color for the 100, that green is too similar to the yellow which 300 is using.
:arrow: color adjusted >.< increase Hue

[Hard]
  1. 00:43:725 (2) - This is very hard to see, because of a hitburst from 00:42:725 (6). Easy fix would be to change where 00:43:391 (1) points, so you can position it properly. :arrow: flip them to the left side :) i suppose it's better now~~
  2. 01:12:725 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - A bit long for a [Hard], don't you think? Maybe make last few notes into a short repeating slider? :arrow: okay~~ and adjust the shape of stream :)
  3. 01:34:947 (1) - A soft default finish would be better than your custom clap one because you used it in the next section frequently, and it starts with this note. :arrow: it's nice :)
  4. 01:57:169 (5) - You can make this slider look better by moving the middle point a bit left, it looks weird like it is now. :arrow: ah..fixed..>.<
  5. 02:42:502 (1) - In my opinion a soft finish would be better than your custom clap here. :arrow: yes it is~~ fixed~
  6. 03:15:502 (5) - This slider makes no sense because both the drum and the vocal is on 03:15:614. You should start this slider there. :arrow: fixed~
[Easy]
  1. AR+1, OD+1. Looks much more lively with AR3. :arrow: okay~
  2. 00:19:391 (5) - It would be best if this slider was more clear. The slider 00:17:614 (2) disappears when you are done clicking the circle 00:18:502 (3), and that would be too little time to notice that this was a slider. You should definitely change this, because this is not something you should be doing in [Easy]. :arrow: adjust the whole combo here, i suppose it's better now :)
  3. 03:04:725 (5) - I think you're missing a whistle on the arrow. :arrow: Yes...fixed >.<
Simple stuff, I should be able to rank after the fixes.
thank you very much for modding >.<
lolcubes
Looks good.

Ranked!
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
恭喜rank!
No_Gu
日。居然把我newest ranked顶掉了
我去vote 1
快出现error然后unrank
Akemi_Homura
Congratz~~! ><
I love this song~!
Topic Starter
Scorpiour
thank u very much >.<

thanks for all my friends >.<

i love u ~~~~
LKs
>.<
spboxer3
wa~恭喜摟
Masterede
Love this song/map/skin *_* Amazing job!
Topic Starter
Scorpiour
thanks >.<
LunarSakuya
asdfaskljglkfd Congrats!! :D
a32
恭喜scor君rank图~
Kawayi Rika
恭喜第一张 ~
Faust
Been 4 months since I last saw this, great to see it finally ranked !
emonite
Congrats~
Roddie
Glad to see that your map finally ranked.

Congrats, man. (:
Nymph
S h i a
哇 恭喜 \:D/
Kite
ooo congrats, nice map!
_Kiva
congrats for 1st ranked scor!
Shohei Ohtani
When I see this map, all I think about is this :>.

fanzhen0019
恭喜~ XD
ziin
When I see this map, all I think about is this :>.

Topic Starter
Scorpiour
thanks guys~~

orz.......
L_P
恭喜first rank!!!!!!!!!
Colin Hou
title is 'Masquerade!'

congratz anyway
suzutsukikanade

Colin Hou wrote:

title is 'Masquerade!'

congratz anyway
well isn't a big problem, but he is right.
Potato sauce Sui
支持下
AIR315
Congratz~

:)
13telang13
hi
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