Ayu wrote:

From my modding queue~ Digimon!! xD

[Normal]
00:04:266 - 00:08:016 - I think this is a bit too much linear, use a pattern here.
00:37:999 - 00:41:297 - Use a different pattern here~
00:50:203 (3,4,5) - I wouldn't overlap circles this way since it's a Normal diff.
01:27:703 (6,7,8) - ^
01:28:641 (1) - Work on this slider
01:30:516 (3) - ^
01:37:078 (3,4,5) - I wouldn't overlap circles this way since it's a Normal diff.
01:38:953 (8,9,10) - ^
01:42:703 (6,7) - Use spacing here
01:53:953 (6,7,8) - I wouldn't overlap circles this way since it's a Normal diff.

[Hard]
01:17:391 (4) - Blanket this slider~
Didn't encounter any other problems although I would say that there are some linear parts in it, overall the beatmap is good and you should go for ranked~

Mystica wrote:

[Easy]
Cause diff looks.just change the [E] and [N] Title seems fine

Mystica wrote:

Here comes my mod.

[Normal] fixed
02:04:266 (3,4) - make them more beauty

[Hard]
01:08:016 - may consider to use 0.7x fits more.Now a little speed up ok


Sweet and cute song yeah.....Good map

ertyukjh010 wrote:

Hello

[Gabe's Easy]

OD-1

[Normal]

Fine

[Hard]

01:56:531 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make it Symmetry like: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/294724

[sewerty5's Insane]

00:23:016 (1) - Finish?
00:39:891 (1) - Finish at beginner

Sorry, I cannot find a lot of problems.
That all

Gabex3 wrote:

Thanks ^ c:
http://puu.sh/qh8j

1. Some unrankable stuff:
   

   1. omboburst.png's dimensions must not be larger than 500x767
   2. reversearrow.png's dimensions must be exactly 128x128

2. Skin: Since you have hitcircleoverlay so I guess you also need to add a sliderball to fit with that.

1. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:13:641 (4) - How about add a new combo here because a new stanza is starting from here.
   2. 00:53:953 (2) - (Design) I think it would be better if you can make it parallel this with slider (1)- like this:
      
      Suggestion

      
      You might need to adjust the spacing after change.
   3. 00:55:828 (4) - ^Same.
2. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:05:203 (2) - Would you remove the finish sound? It doesn't fit with the music.You can hear that it doesn't have a accent here.
   2. 00:05:203 (2) - Add a clap at the end of the slider?To fit with the music.
   3. 00:07:078 (4) - ^Same.
   4. 00:22:078 (4) - This part is quite soft so I don't think a finish is appropriate here.Probably change it to soft-whistle instead of it? Or you can just remove the finish.
   5. 01:08:016 - 01:24:891 (x) - Please don't do this.Please increase the volume here.It near inaudibility, some bats and mats may not accept this.
   6. 01:13:523 (1) - This spinner off the beats, please move this spinner to 01:13:641 - and end at 01:15:516 - .It fits the music more.
   7. 01:19:266 (3) - Probably a new combo here to fit with the music.

1. Issue/unrankable stuff
   (Something bad in gameplay or unrankable staff,you should take a look on it.)
   
   1. 00:38:016 (1,2,3) - (Bad gameplay) Inconsistent spacing between (2) and (3)- .Please fix the spacing for a better gameplay!
2. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:11:766 (1) - (Design) Probably make this slider resemble to 00:13:641 (3) - ?It looks more beautiful imo.
   2. 00:36:141 (1) - I would remove this spinner if I were you because the vocal is still singing here.A spinner shouldn't appear here.I think some notes or slider may more suitable.
   3. 00:53:016 (1) - (Design) oh..This slider was a bit ugly.The curve of this slider seems unbalance for me.I would make it like this:
      
      Suggestion

      
3. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:19:266 (1) - Please remove the finish at the beginning of the slider.It doesn't fit the music, I can't hear a exact accent point from the music.
   2. 00:21:141 (3) - ^Same
   3. 01:21:141 (1) - How about reduce the volume to 5% at the end of the spinner and remove the whistle as well?

1. Issue/unrankable stuff
   (Something bad in gameplay or unrankable staff,you should take a look on it.)
   
   1. 01:32:391 (1,2,3) - (Bad gameplay) I can see a inconsistent spacing between (1.2.3)- .I'm not sure are you do this deliberately, but I highly suggest to remove that to make a better game flow here.
2. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:36:141 (1) - Because the vocal are still singing so I'm not recommend a spinner here.Probably map this part with a soft hitsounds?
   2. 00:46:453 (4) - Some design thing here.I would make this slider parallel with (1)-.It would look much better then now imo. But it is up to you.
   3. 01:04:500 (2,3,4) - A design thing here again.How about place these notes and slider like this, you need to adjust the spacing of 01:05:437 (5,6) - if you change it.
      
      Recommendation

      
   4. 01:06:141 (1) - Same as 00:46:453-
   5. 01:23:250 (x) - Please remove the break please.There is no point add a break when the last part has heavier HP.
   6. 01:46:453 (5,6,7) - I didn't know why you placed a triplets here.It doesn't fit the music.I suppose something like simple 1/2 is enough.
3. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 01:21:141 (1) - How about change the volume to 5% at the end of the spinner? It sounds much better with the music.
   2. I would like to say.You can use more soft hitsounds in this difficulty.It fits some places in this song.

1. Issue/unrankable stuff
   (Something bad in gameplay or unrankable staff,you should take a look on it.)
   
   1. 01:31:453 (5) - (bad gameplay) This 1/4 jump causes a really bad flow during gameplay because tit is not really suitable here.
   2. 01:43:172 (8) - ^Same.
2. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:19:500 (2,3,4) - Probably align these notes?I found that it may looks better if you do this.
   2. 00:32:391 (1,2,3,4) - ^Same.Check the grid snap.It may helps you.
   3. 01:23:250 (x) - Please remove the break please.There is no point add a break when the last part has heavier HP.
3. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:07:312 (6) - How about remove the finish sound here.It doesn't fit with the music because there is no accent point.
   2. 00:07:547 (7) - ^Same.
   3. 00:08:016 (1) - Then you can try a finish sound here.
   4. 00:27:937 (6) - Again remove the finish.
   5. 01:08:016 - 01:24:891 (x) - Please don't do this.Please increase the volume here.It near inaudibility, some bats and mats may not accept this.
   6. 01:21:141 (1) - How about reduce the volume to 5% at the end of the spinner?

1. 00:36:141 (1) - This short spinner doesn't fit the music and plays really awkward here!I highly suggest removing this spinner and use a big don instead of it.
2. 01:14:812 (6) - How about change it to kat?
3. 01:54:422 (1) - Would you extand this spinner to 01:54:891 - ?

kanpakyin wrote:

Request is taken from my queue.A cute song indeed.

[Gabe's Easy]

1. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:13:641 (4) - How about add a new combo here because a new stanza is starting from here. Well, I think it's useless to add a New Combo there, because if I do this one, I must do it for the other.
   2. 00:53:953 (2) - (Design) I think it would be better if you can make it parallel this with slider (1)- like this:
      
      Suggestion

      
      You might need to adjust the spacing after change. Done.
      v I have to finish these. v
   3. 00:55:828 (4) - ^Same.
   5. Hitsound
      (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
      
      1. 00:05:203 (2) - Would you remove the finish sound? It doesn't fit with the music.You can hear that it doesn't have a accent here.
      2. 00:05:203 (2) - Add a clap at the end of the slider?To fit with the music.
      3. 00:07:078 (4) - ^Same.
      4. 00:22:078 (4) - This part is quite soft so I don't think a finish is appropriate here.Probably change it to soft-whistle instead of it? Or you can just remove the finish.
      5. 01:08:016 - 01:24:891 (x) - Please don't do this.Please increase the volume here.It near inaudibility, some bats and mats may not accept this.
      6. 01:13:523 (1) - This spinner off the beats, please move this spinner to 01:13:641 - and end at 01:15:516 - .It fits the music more.
      7. 01:19:266 (3) - Probably a new combo here to fit with the music.
      Apart of these.It looks very nice overall!
      
      That's it!

osu file format v9

[General]
AudioFilename: Touhou - Iosys Tewis Mapaku To Endless Wi PV .mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 84891
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.9
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8

[Metadata]
Title:Tewi's Mapaku To Endless Wi
Artist:IOSYS
Creator:eLtigreXXx
Version:Gabe's Easy
Source:Touhou
Tags:sewerty5 Tewi Inaba pokedigi gabex3

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:1
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:2
SliderMultiplier:1.1
SliderTickRate:1

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//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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Gabex3 wrote:

^ Oh god, I can't edit it...
WHYYY.

Here's the diff ._. : http://puu.sh/qASQ

Teddiursa wrote:

Hope it will get Bubbled soon o3o

those wrote:

[Teddiursa's Easy]
HP2. HP1 is just a giveaway.
00:44:578 (4) - x:286 y:139 for better spacing. Right now you're too close by 0.1x, which is a lot consider you're mapping at 0.9x spacing.

Good luck :3

those wrote:

From .:Let those mod those maps:.

[General] fixed
If you would like, you can delete all your bookmarks to decrease the size of your .osz file by a little since you won't be needing them by the time this gets put on the server.
Consider "usatei" in your tags, since you have "usa" and "tei" separately.
You may want to properly centre yor reversearrow.png; right now it doesn't sit in the centre of the slider circle, and you can see this during gameplay. BGs are really cute ;3
taiko_bg.png isn't either 1024x768 or 800x600. You should fix that.
AIBat says comboburst.png cannot be larger than 500x767. It is currently 2 pixels too wide.
Kiai Times are inconsistent across all diffs.

[Normal] ok
01:38:016 (6) - New combo here.

[Hard]
-

Good luck :3

Meow, thnx.

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11. Kyouka sama
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32. Ayu
33. Mystica
34. ertyukjh010
35. kanpakyin
36. those
37. Teddiursa

kanpakyin wrote:

[Poke's Taiko]

1. 00:36:141 (1) - This short spinner doesn't fit the music and plays really awkward here!I highly suggest removing this spinner and use a big don instead of it.
2. 01:14:812 (6) - How about change it to kat?
3. 01:54:422 (1) - Would you extand this spinner to 01:54:891 - ?

That's it!

1. 00:36:141 (1) - I prefer not to put a big don on it, but a short spinner really makes the beatmap strange. I decide to just change the spinner to a slider, because the vocal here is a long syllable.
2. 01:14:812 (6) - In my opinion, changing it to kat seems not really fits the rhythm.Done
3. 01:54:422 (1) - Done

-Bakari- wrote:

yo~

[General]
not okay You mad?

[Easy]
00:15:516 (1,2,3) - make this symmetrical ><
01:00:516 (1,2) - this shape?
01:02:391 (3,4) - ^
01:08:953 (2) - not perfectly symmetrical
01:16:453 (1) - do NOT use this slider for SOFT part ;_; make softer slider :O
01:26:766 (3,4) - this and you can make it better like this
01:28:641 (1,2,3) - MUST be symmetrical Why MUST IT BE SYMMETRICAL?!
01:36:141 (1,2) - not this sliders ;_; same as above
01:56:297 (3,4,5) - kinda ugly sliders ;_;
02:08:953 (6) - flip horizontally and move to x256 y56

[Normal]
i guess better to rename diffs like Gabex3's Normall and Easy What you mean ? It's not because the Star level is just 0.01 more than Normal that my diff must be Normal.
Look @ Normal & Easy. Normal is most more harder than Easy !

so.. Star!

ay6859 wrote:

wow Gabe

Random mod

or request from my mod queue ?

General
Kiai Time doesn't same at every diff , please make it same . fixed
Gabex3's Easy

01:16:805 (x) - Useless inherited Point

01:17:039 (x) - ^

Normal

01:13:172 (2) - spacing D: done

01:30:047 (2) - ^ (too far from (1) ><) done

01:33:797 - ~ 01:39:422 - i think these parts are too hard to Normal ... all are notes >< hecho
well just a suggestion


Hard and Insane are fine ~

GL !

ay6859 wrote:

so hard by you or pokedigi ?

i think taiko by pokedigi ,so change "hard" to "taiko" in the Creator's Words .

ay6859 wrote:

wow Gabe Yes, I'm mean with my Bakari ♥

Random mod

or request from my mod queue ?

Gabex3's Easy

01:16:805 (x) - Useless inherited Point OMFG WAIT. I FORGOT TO PUT A SLIDER HERE. LOOOOOOOL.
01:17:039 (x) - ^

Gabe wrote:

Name change = Change the diff name ♥

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Nyaa~
You requested in my queue ~


[Normal]
- HP Drain Rate -1


[Hard]
- It's funny how you set distance spacing to 1.4 yet you space it as 1 xD
- HP Drain Rate +1
- Overall Difficulty +1
01:39:891 (1) - Place this where 01:38:484 (3) was.


Blehhh, this mod was useless. ;w;
Anyway, good luck and star !

And dont forget to change Gabe's name in creator's words ~

SliderBorder: 255,255,255

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Kiddo-Kun wrote:

Sorry for the delay.

[General]
* You seem to be missing the Slider Border code. You must have it to compliment your hitcircle skin set. Please add this under the [Colour] section:

SliderBorder: 255,255,255

Done
* I also noticed something else while fiddling around. The video offset is a tad late. Change it to -200ms please. Done

[Easy]

• 00:08:016 (1) - Add in a finish on this note to match with the music.
• 01:06:141 (1) - Remove the new combo on this note to match your combo pattern.
• 01:16:453 (2) - Manually add in a new combo on this slider. It's just a little combo bug.
• 01:08:953 (2,4,1) - These slider isn't really appealing visually. I recommend going with a normal arched slider:

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• 01:19:266 (1,2,3,4) - I don't like how boxy this pattern is. I would change it to something more natural feeling, like this:

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Technically, nothing. It's just that at some points in the map it feels too linear and boxed. Re-arrange some of the notes and give it a more natural feel.

[Overall]

Pretty solid map set. Well balanced and plays well. Though I'm pretty disappointed because of the linear and boxy patterns. Try to smooth everything out and give it a natural feel.
Star for now, though no forums star. Should be good now. (:

Good luck.