Dangaard wrote:

general

1. add Apricot to tags
2. remove countdown on [Easy] and [Normal]
3. You should add some SB for the collab diffs to show the mapper names, and maybe add a little "beatmap by" for the non-collab diffs (or you can include "Apricot" in the diff name)
4. try to make the diffs end at the same time (If you want to keep [Easy] as is, then at least end the spinner 1/4 earlier and add a finish sound)

timing

1. 03:16:496 - remove this section on all diffs
   ->[Easy]/[Normal]:put 1x speed on the section at 03:16:495 then
   ->[Hard]/[Insane]: you don't need to set speed to 1x directly 1ms after slowing down, since you have a 1x section at the end of the slider already

[Easy]

1. 2 unsnapped objects
2. 00:27:146 (1) - you should remove this, as this is too shortly after the spinner
3. 00:46:673 (1) - make this end 1/2 earlier
4. 01:40:992 (1) - then remove this too
5. 01:49:868 (3) - make this return 1 more time (put finish sound on the new end of slider)

[Normal]

1. 00:35:312 (1) - looks a bit like a flat tire
   maybe make the shape a bit rounder and pay attention to the endpoint, it might be a little too far away from the playfield atm
2. 01:23:596 (1) - remove new combo?
3. I recommend using different patterns on the part between 2nd break and 2nd kiai, it's just getting very repetitive
4. at least flip the copy pasted parts

[Hard]

1. just put 1st offset on 4070ms as in other diffs and delete the green line there, then put S:C2 on offset (sounds basically the same)
2. Bass-chan's part: I would just keep normal hitsounds in the whole part
3. 03:16:495 (1) - start 1/2 earlier

[Insane]

1. 113 unsnapped objects (all objects till 1st bookmark)
2. 01:00:164 (6,7) - either there is a beat missing between them, or they are too close together (compared to the previous stream pattern)
3. 01:11:170 (7) - put a new combo here, it seemed quite long
4. 02:09:750 (1) - move this a bit away and create a stacking effect, so that it gets more visible

1. add "Apricot" as tag in [Easy] and [Normal] too
2. remove countdown in [Easy] and [Normal]
3. Maybe it's just me, but I got the feeling that the endspinner is too long (btw: [Hard] still ends earlier than the others diffs)

1. 03:16:495 - double section here, remove 1 of them ([Easy] and [Normal])
2. same for [Insane], delete the 1x speed section

1. 00:46:496 (1) - start should be 1/2 later (as it was before) and the end should be 1/2 earlier

1. maybe add sb for your own diff too for consistency
2. I still recommend flipping some parts horizontally as some parts are recycled 3 times here without any differences

1. 00:03:892 (1,2) - add back the claps on these 2 beats

1. 00:59:809 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - I would still increase the spacing between these 2 streams or add an extra note in between like in the previous stream pattern in this part

blissfulyoshi wrote:

02:37:442 (3,1) - this jump in spacing felt sort of random if we are going to slow down on the next note anyway

1. 03:11:860 - set this section 10ms later
2. set the whole map 5ms earlier
3. consider using a higher OD for Insane

Dangaard wrote:

ok, here is what I got for the end:
03:29:316 offset / 79,500 bpm
03:31:616 / 68,500 bpm
with this you can place notes on full beats

(talked to some other BATs about this)

Edit: you should only use the 2 sections I posted here before for the end.
Furthermore some stuff Cyclone mentioned:

1. 03:11:860 - set this section 10ms later
2. set the whole map 5ms earlier
3. consider using a higher OD for Insane

Nakagawa-Kanon wrote:

Dangaard wrote:

ok, here is what I got for the end:
03:29:316 offset / 79,500 bpm
03:31:616 / 68,500 bpm
with this you can place notes on full beats

(talked to some other BATs about this)

Edit: you should only use the 2 sections I posted here before for the end.
Furthermore some stuff Cyclone mentioned:

1. 03:11:860 - set this section 10ms later
2. set the whole map 5ms earlier
3. consider using a higher OD for Insane

all fixed. but If I use higher OD in Insane, score become 2000milion.

1. 03:11:520 (2) - Here, the end of the slider is unsnapped because of the bpm change, then I think you should consider making it two notes like this because this way you will have the note snapped correctly.

Katsuri wrote:

Normal

1. 03:11:520 (2) - Here, the end of the slider is unsnapped because of the bpm change, then I think you should consider making it two notes like this because this way you will have the note snapped correctly.

• 
  Volume:

1. 00:04:064 ~ 00:09:390 - The volume on this section is a little too high imo... I suggest turning it down a little.
2. 03:32:596 (1) - 5% seems a little too low to place it from the start of the spinner... How about doing a fade out in volume?
   
   Settings:
3. I suggest turning off Letterbox During Breaks to avoid stuff like this, unless it was your intention in the first place.

1. 03:40:370 - Shouldn't the spinner end here, as in the other difficulties?

1. 03:11:520 (2) - This slider's end is unsnapped due to the timing section you added right before it's end:
   
   Maybe you could use two circles to avoid this!

1. There's kind of a... Too big jump in difficulty from Normal to this imo. You should check that spread, but I doubt that you are willing to change anything now...
2. 00:14:715 (1,1,1,1) - Is this new combo spam needed?
3. 00:25:543 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - (^) I don't like this so much... (Plus it doesn't look consistent with the work of the rest of the mappers).
4. 02:10:278 (1) - I hit this early because I thought it would be at 02:10:100 -. Would you move it please? And then you could add notes at 02:10:455 - and 02:10:810 -.
5. 03:05:129 (1) - Unneeded new combo, please remove it.
6. 03:06:283 (1) - (^)

1. I didn't feel that this was so much harder than Hard... That's what I ment about the spread, too :/
2. 02:13:473 (1,1) - I don't know about this... Such a short spinner, and an object right after, might be really hard to hit. Consider changing this.
3. 03:32:486 (5) - Why don't you add a new combo, as in the other difficulties?

narakucrimson wrote:

[Insane]

1. 02:13:473 (1,1) - I don't know about this... Such a short spinner, and an object right after, might be really hard to hit. Consider changing this.Ok, dk you can extend the spinner to 02:14:360.

Well that's all for now! You should get a few more mods!

narakucrimson wrote:

[*]00:14:715 (1,1,1,1) - Is this new combo spam needed?
[*]00:25:543 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - (^) I don't like this so much... (Plus it doesn't look consistent with the work of the rest of the mappers).