1. Normal (2.35 stars, 228 notes)
2. Yume (4.96 stars, 563 notes)

GiNa wrote:

[Normal]
00:36:423 (1) – 在最簡單的diff裡，這種slider很容易中槍

1. The general volume of hitsound is too low. I barely hear the hitsound . Make the volume around 70-60%.

1. 00:24:116 (1) - Since it has a long spacing with previous note, i suggest you add a new combo here.
2. 00:34:885 - I feel something missing here. How about adding a circle with whistle sound? It's filling the gap with more consistent hitsound.
3. 00:39:500 (3) - If i look into it more, i see this slider is not blanketed properly. You can make it more blanket by moving it 1 grid right.
4. 00:43:346 (1) - Well, it's have long spacing with previous note too. I suggest you add a new combo here.
5. 00:46:423 (4) - Since the combo is kinda long, how about adding a new combo here?
6. 01:09:116 (4) - I see the shape of the slider didn't blanket properly. So move the endpoint 1 grid up.
7. 00:55:654 (2) - I hear a heavy beat here, so it will be better if you put a finish sound at the startpoint of the slider.
8. 01:01:423 (3) - Same reason with above, it will be better if you put a finish sound at the startpoint.
9. 01:16:808 (1) - It will be more consistent if you add a clap here. I feel something missing when i hear the hitsound pattern. Then i take a look again at your previous pattern rythim and i found inconsistent at the hitsound pattern.
10. 01:43:731 (2) - I see you add a whistle for every 'tak' sound. I found at this is nore is inconsistent.. Add a whistle at the endpoint of the slider.
11. 01:47:962 (1) - Same reason as above, how about adding a whistle at the startpoint?
12. 01:49:885 (3) - Same reason again, add a whistle at the second repeat.
13. 01:53:731 (4) - I see the combo is quite long. How about adding a new combo here?
14. 02:01:808 (8) - I feel this note doesn't follow anything. How about delete it instead?
15. 02:11:808 (3,4) - Make more blanket? > http://puu.sh/ajN6
16. 02:39:500 (3) - Found incosistentsy at the hitsound pattern here. Add clap at the startpoint and finish at the endpoint.
17. 02:46:039 (1) - I feel this slider doesn't follow anything. I suggest extend this slider to 02:46:808 to make it follow the vocal.
18. 03:10:654 (1,2,3,4,5) - Why you change the hitsound into soft at this note? The rythim is still high so it's weird to change the hitsound into vocal. And it's not consistent with your previous hitsound before the spinner. I suggest you change it into normal like before.

1. I see a lot of inconsistent hitsound here. >.<
2. 00:12:577 (3) - I think it will be nice if you add a whistle at the startpoint of the slider. Since it have heavy beat but generally low rythim.
3. 00:18:731 (1) - Same reason as above, it will be nice if you add a whistle at the startpoint of the slider.
4. 00:24:885 (1) - Same as above.
5. 00:27:962 (1) - Same as above.
6. 00:31:039 (1) - ^
7. 00:34:116 (1) - ^
8. 00:38:346- I feel you really need a circle here. It will follow the beat perfectly.
9. 00:38:539 (3) - The clap at the endpoint is awkward. I suggest you remove it.
10. 00:39:500 (5) - If you follow my suggestion above, then add clap here.
11. 00:44:500 - Add a circle here too. It will follow the beat more perfectly.
12. 00:44:693 (3) - Just like before. Remove clap here.
13. 00:45:654 (6) - Just like before too. Add clap here at the startpoint.
14. 00:51:039 (4) - Again, remove the clap here at the startpoint.
15. 00:51:808 (6) - ^, Add clap here at the startpoint.
16. 00:54:885 (5) - I feel you really need a clap here at the startpoint.
17. 00:55:846 (2) - A clap sound suddenly after spinner is a bit awkward. I suggest you remove it.
18. 00:57:385 (2) - If you follow my suggestion above, remove here as well.
19. 02:08:154 - The flow is not good here, i miss here at the first time when i test your beatmap. I suggest you add a circle here >.<
20. 00:59:500 (2) - The hitsound stop. It's a bit weird. I suggest you add circle here.
21. [01:01:039 (7) - Again, because there's no hitsound here, it will be better if you add a clap here.
22. 01:21:231 (4,5) - The circle touch the sliderbody. It doesn't look good. Make it like this instead > http://puu.sh/ajSW
23. 01:51:616 (2) - How about shorten this slider length to 01:51:808 and add a whistle sound at the endpoint. It'll follow the beat more better.
24. 02:05:654 (6) - I will not mention the reason again, the reason is almost like i have told above. Add a clap here at the startpoint.
25. 02:11:808 (6) - ^
26. 02:20:654 (1) - ^ but at the endpoint.
27. 02:25:270 (1) - ^
28. 02:27:193 (5) - The finish sound at the startpoint is not consistent imo. I suggest you remove it.
29. 02:36:808 (2) - I will mention adding clap start here. Since the hitsound suddenly stop here and it weird. Okay, add clap here.
30. 02:37:770 (4) - ^
31. 02:38:346 (6) - ^
32. 02:39:116 (9) - ^ at the startpoint.
33. 03:04:500 (8) - I think you forgot to add finish at the endpoint here.
34. 03:04:885 (1) - What? this spinner start at the same time as the end of 03:04:500. Fix this by move it to 03:05:077 and reduce the length to 03:10:270
35. 03:10:654 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - Same comment as normal. Change it into normal hitsound?
36. 03:39:308 (2) - I feel you need to add a whistle here at the startpoint since it doesn't consistent with the hitsound pattern.
37. 03:49:212 (1) - This spinner is start at the blue tick, and it doesn't good. Move it to 03:49:308 and also end at the same time like now.
38. 04:03:346 (1) - The clap sounds stop here. ._. Make it more consistent by adding a clap here at the startpoint.
39. 04:03:923 (2) - ^
40. 04:04:500 (3) - ^

DJPop wrote:

Can you change background color?


~Normal~
01:40:716 (4) - move up 1 grid (tiny)
03:14:178 (4,5) - remove claps
03:39:562 (2) - move right 1 grid (tiny)
03:40:332 (3) - move up & right 1 grid (tiny)

~Yume~
02:03:024 (3) - this set is confused, you've to fix by change pattern or add new combo at (3)
03:04:178 (4) - add new combo
03:53:408 (7) - ^
03:53:985 (10) - ^
03:54:178 (1) - remove new combo

Evil_Twilight wrote:

因為找不到他･ﾟ･(つд`ﾟ)･ﾟ･