Unflagging wrote:

Normal:
00:25:091 --- add a new circle 5 ?
00:35:403 ---add a new slider 2 here?
00:36:653--add a new slider 5 ? Because of the NORMAL diff, so I reduce some rhythm here, if I add those circles and sliders, the diff will over 4.5
(several places are the as same situation as 00:35:403 & 00:36:653 later)
01:58:519--how about add a finish? ok, the other 5 similar place also fixed
02:16:330--change like this? 2 times slider rounds, 2 times slider rounds, 3 times slider rounds. ok


Hard:
00:24:935---add one time slider rounds to 00:25:091 ( white line) Here I'd better follow the Keyboard sound but not the Drum sound, so I prefer stop at 00:24:935~ XD But I add finish at 00:24:935 and the other 5 similar palce, sounds better now~
02:40:077---delete circle 1 ? I think there is a soft whistle in the background here, so it's necessary

That's all. With my best wishes to this beatmap would be ranked !

Thx a lot

好歌..
我不会做图...看不出哪里不对..

加油

hard:01:00:088
这种5连的排列感觉间距有点怪..改成等距或者直线或者五角星？
02:11:330
这里节奏好像略紧凑了一点呢...试过删掉一个也不大好听 = =!

总的来说很不错拉，玩着节奏也很爽

liselisa wrote:

hard:01:00:088
这种5连的排列感觉间距有点怪..改成等距或者直线或者五角星？可能是由于两列circles靠的较近又不平行导致的, 我稍微拉开一点看看这段的读图会不会容易一点 ^ ^
02:11:330
这里节奏好像略紧凑了一点呢...试过删掉一个也不大好听 = =! 可能是由于这个circle离得有些远, layout已调整, 或许会好读一点

总的来说很不错拉，玩着节奏也很爽

Thx

Your Map Diff ( Normal & Hard ) same style >~<"
I think your Normal is like Hard & your Hard is Insane @_@"
對不起 I can't mod >~<"

老闆啊，太晚reply了sorry

HARD
那個slider velocity的變化不夠明顯，對我這種遲鈍的人來說，加大落差會比較好，而且也更好玩
00:19:311 (6) - 這個放去整個平面的正中間，然後接下去的兩個note拉下右下角那裡，不用開distancesnap 這段
00:23:842 (4) - 懶惰啊？這麼長的repeat串不討好的
00:29:310 (5,6) - 跳！
00:37:590 (7) - 用多一些點，做一個比較好的形狀
00:50:089 (3) - 嗯。。不用太多repeat吧，用一些note、slider充場面
02:08:831 (1,1,1,1) - 沒必要換Newcombo吧？
哈哈02:10:080 (1) - 看不到頭，有一些天殺的mat會屌你

02:16:330 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - 沒必要換NC而且。。。。後面的閃光好好笑哦。。
02:36:795 (5,6) - 五跟六的位置調換，或許再跳遠一點
02:45:858 (7,8) - 調換位置
02:48:358 (6) - ctrl+r

圖做的很乾淨啊，可是沒有比較有新意的地方，不要成為下一個三妖（osplayer111)
他現在做的圖就因為作圖而作圖，越來越爛了
建議你打打natsumerin的圖的時候看看他怎樣用jump

normal
基本上就以上（hard）我講的意見啦，可是我覺得你這個normal跟hard太過接近了，不如做簡單一點的，節奏換一下的？

哎喲華語歌怎不star?

L_P wrote:

老闆啊，太晚reply了sorry

HARD
那個slider velocity的變化不夠明顯，對我這種遲鈍的人來說，加大落差會比較好，而且也更好玩 速度已经是0.5最小倍速了耶...以后或许会加2.0...
00:19:311 (6) - 這個放去整個平面的正中間，然後接下去的兩個note拉下右下角那裡，不用開distancesnap 這段 ok
00:23:842 (4) - 懶惰啊？這麼長的repeat串不討好的 ok
00:29:310 (5,6) - 跳！ ok
00:37:590 (7) - 用多一些點，做一個比較好的形狀 我花点时间想想怎么设计最好
00:50:089 (3) - 嗯。。不用太多repeat吧，用一些note、slider充場面 ok
02:08:831 (1,1,1,1) - 沒必要換Newcombo吧？ fixed
哈哈02:10:080 (1) - 看不到頭，有一些天殺的mat會屌你 fixed

02:16:330 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - 沒必要換NC而且。。。。後面的閃光好好笑哦。。 fixed, 闪光会削弱, 现在太闪眼我知道...
02:36:795 (5,6) - 五跟六的位置調換，或許再跳遠一點 ok
02:45:858 (7,8) - 調換位置 ok
02:48:358 (6) - ctrl+r ok

圖做的很乾淨啊，可是沒有比較有新意的地方，不要成為下一個三妖（osplayer111)
他現在做的圖就因為作圖而作圖，越來越爛了
建議你打打natsumerin的圖的時候看看他怎樣用jump

normal
基本上就以上（hard）我講的意見啦，可是我覺得你這個normal跟hard太過接近了，不如做簡單一點的，節奏換一下的？恩, NORMAL还会有大改动, EASY diff也会补上

哎喲華語歌怎不star?

Thx a lot

哎喲。。忘了提醒你0.5slider velovity已經unrankable 了
不過有些mat還是會通融的
no kudos

02:31:344 - kiai这里开始（重音开kiai来的）02:40:077 结束
00:47:594 - 这里加kiai到01:06:337结束
01:40:084 - kiai到01:58:832
BPM192
随便说点（看前面帖子感觉normal还会改- -就..）
感觉滑条速度很吓人。。
感觉hard（就节奏上来说）有点简单，（跟vocal做不难- -）
加了好多绿线- -（印象中这样很花时间- -）
hard
00:14:468 - 这里开始其实可以跟鼓点放半拍的五连打
00:17:905 - 象这里跟鼓点还可以放的地方我就举两个例子，你自己看该怎么用（高难度图一般跟鼓点来的- -）
00:24:466 (5) - 个人不喜欢这种很多往返的滑条- -拆开来图会更好打，而且这个感觉少往返一次比较好
02:36:327 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 在一排上吗...
另:can i make a easy?(normal maybe - -)
(目测是被忽略了- -)
Download: BY2 - Mesona Honey Drink (yzhbxiang) [211].osu

Banana wrote:

02:31:344 - kiai这里开始（重音开kiai来的）02:40:077 结束 是指02:31:328吗？我找不到344在哪...fixed
00:47:594 - 这里加kiai到01:06:337结束 ok
01:40:084 - kiai到01:58:832 ok
BPM192 fixed
随便说点（看前面帖子感觉normal还会改- -就..）
感觉滑条速度很吓人。。
感觉hard（就节奏上来说）有点简单，（跟vocal做不难- -）
加了好多绿线- -（印象中这样很花时间- -）
hard
00:14:468 - 这里开始其实可以跟鼓点放半拍的五连打 放了六连拍，感觉可能更好点
00:17:905 - 象这里跟鼓点还可以放的地方我就举两个例子，你自己看该怎么用（高难度图一般跟鼓点来的- -） 我会记住并在适当的地方加上
00:24:466 (5) - 个人不喜欢这种很多往返的滑条- -拆开来图会更好打，而且这个感觉少往返一次比较好 fixed
02:36:327 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 在一排上吗... y轴都是312确实在一排无误，估计是打起来的时候由于approach circle大小不一的缘故导致觉得不在一排

Thx 修改版本会在EASY diff完工后一并上传

Hi~ >w</
From my modding queue

General
If you want this ranked, you have to make "Easy" with a star rating lower than 3.
THis can be achieved by not puting notes on red lines, user sliders rather than circles, etc.
02:16:344 - This part is so flashy lol

Easy
I don't think you should change slider velocity for the easiest diff ;_;
Since this is the easiest diff, you should make it as simple as possible, try avoiding fancy stuff.
I'll point out some of those stuff.
00:38:844 (3) - This is impossible to read for a beginner.
01:05:094 (1) - ^
01:31:344 (3) - ^
01:57:594 (1) - ^
02:10:094 (3) - ^
02:11:344 (4) - ^
02:12:594 (1) - ^
02:13:844 (2) - ^
02:38:844 (1) - ^

Normal
The change of slider velocities are very confusing.
Remove those, or use NC to emphasize that you're using a slow slider.

Hard
Again, the the change of slider velocities are confusing ;w;
00:37:594 (7) - I'm not sure if this type of slider is rankable anymore
02:16:811 (7) - Why is the spacing here a little big? You can use constant ditance spacing
02:49:311 (1) - Remove NC

good luck~

Takos wrote:

Hi~ >w</
From my modding queue

General
If you want this ranked, you have to make "Easy" with a star rating lower than 3. I will try to reduce it till lower than 3
THis can be achieved by not puting notes on red lines, user sliders rather than circles, etc.
02:16:344 - This part is so flashy lol It will be revised

Easy
I don't think you should change slider velocity for the easiest diff ;_; All deleted
Since this is the easiest diff, you should make it as simple as possible, try avoiding fancy stuff.
I'll point out some of those stuff.
00:38:844 (3) - This is impossible to read for a beginner.
01:05:094 (1) - ^ fixed
01:31:344 (3) - ^
01:57:594 (1) - ^ fixed
02:10:094 (3) - ^
02:11:344 (4) - ^
02:12:594 (1) - ^
02:13:844 (2) - ^
02:38:844 (1) - ^ fixed
I will consider to change the remain 5 or not, because I really like them

Normal
The change of slider velocities are very confusing. I think it's ok, I may change some 0.5X to 0.75X, so lower confusing generated
Remove those, or use NC to emphasize that you're using a slow slider.

Hard
Again, the the change of slider velocities are confusing ;w; ^
00:37:594 (7) - I'm not sure if this type of slider is rankable anymore I will keep this until a MAT tell me whether it is rankable or not
02:16:811 (7) - Why is the spacing here a little big? You can use constant ditance spacing 0.65x and 0.72x are all 0.7x distance spacing I think... And I can't find a layout to ensure each distance between circles are 0.65x
02:49:311 (1) - Remove NC ok

good luck~

Thx

from my queue

[General]
个人建议去掉countdown
因为这图有sb，所以去掉letterbox during breaks
slider tick rate 0.5现在unrankble了，至少弄成1吧

[Easy]
OD-1
这SV真是吓死人。。
00:06:343 (3,4,1) - 这种节奏一开始新人很难反应过来，我建议前几个这种节奏用折返slider
00:08:843 (4,5,1) - ^
00:11:031 (3,1) - 没叠好
00:13:531 (3,1) - ^
00:23:844 - 音量100%+whistle，不过即使这样还是太小声了，这地方
00:38:844 (3) - unrankble slider，不要使用锚点改变slider速度！！
00:43:844 (1) - 结束在00:45:094 - 好多了
01:31:344 (3) - same
01:37:594 - 不要静音啊。。不觉得少了点什么么，静音的话
02:16:344 (1) - 结束在02:19:781 - 试试？不要静音

[Normal]
AR+1
OD-1
BPM192的Normal难度用SV1.6感觉unrankble了，然后DS用0.7，还有很多减速slider，这让判断slider速度变得非常困难，我建议全部remap一遍
00:23:843 (4) - 这种东西太难了，换个长slider
00:42:594 (2) - 这种slider，中间那个红锚点没啥用其实
00:43:843 (1,1) - spinner又短又静音，然后1/4紧跟一个note？卧槽这太坑爹了，删掉note让spinner结束在00:45:094 - ，不要静音
00:47:594 (2) - 太难了，而且完全读不出啥时候停
00:50:093 (3) - ^
00:52:593 (3) - ^
00:56:969 (1,2,3,4,5) - Normal啊这是Normal。。BPM192的Normal就用1/2stack串会死人的
01:36:343 (1,1) - same
01:38:843 (4,1) - 这里间距为啥突然变小，非常confusing
01:40:093 (2) - same
01:42:594 (3) - ^
01:45:093 (3) - ^
01:57:594 (1,1,1) - 没叠好
02:08:844 (1,1,1,1,1) - 这太难了orz
02:11:811 (2,3) - 这里间距太小了啊。。
02:16:344 (1,1,1) - Normal还用1/4？没搞错吧。。
02:30:094 (6,1) - 这里间距太小了，用了变速slider但是也不要变DS
02:30:719 (1,2,3,4,5) - same

[Hard]
HD+1?
00:14:156 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - 会死人的
00:24:468 (5) - repeat多一次？
00:29:937 - add note
00:37:594 (7) - 这种slider我感觉最好别用，即使是Hard难度
00:38:844 (8,9) - 这吓死人了，第二个slider也请减速
00:58:062 (4,5) - 卧槽这跳。。前几个circle慢慢往下弯不好么
01:00:093 (3,4,5,6,7) - 卧槽这。。不要跳好么。。这地方跳来干啥，很和曲么？
01:16:343 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - spacing小点吧，这太难了
01:17:905 (1,2,3) - 我觉得顶多用这种spacing，^
01:30:094 (7) - 这种slider别用比较好，虽然打起来没事，但是既不符合歌曲而且也难rank
01:31:344 (8,9) - same
01:50:561 (4,5) - ^
哎哟复制粘贴的我懒得再说一遍了
02:10:094 (1) - 我觉得应该结束在02:11:031 -
02:12:594 (1) - ^
02:16:344 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - 换几个去折返slider然后间距小点，不然这不是Hard了
02:19:624 (5,6,7) - 跳小点。。
02:33:844 (3,4,5,6,7) - 死人了，跳小点

就我来说这图离rankble还远得很，慢慢多remap几次吧
主要是SV太高了，这是根本性的错误

Hard

00:09:781 (5) - I would center this around the y-axis
00:12:281 (6) - ^
00:14:156 (5) - new combo
00:32:594 (1) - slider velocity change doesn't really make sense
00:37:594 (7) - I would be hesitant to do this. THe slider overlaps itself. I will not say it is outright wrong and is a major problem, but I would definitely consider changing this
00:38:844 (8) - the slider velocity change is unexpected. I'm gonna stop talking about these changes
00:46:969 (1) - ^
01:55:093 (3) - new combo?
02:19:624 (5) - ^

--biggest issue with this is that you are doing what I was doing when I made one of my first few maps. These slider are readable and makes sense to you, but they don't really make any sense to other people. you should definitely try to keep the Slider velocity consistent.
--Secondly, this is not a Hard. THis is definitely an Insane. You should rename this difficulty, or you need to remap this whole difficulty so that it actually is a hard (which I doubt you'd like to do). THe slider velocity seems really fast too, but it's not as big of a deal on the hardest difficulty.

Normal

--THe slider velocity is really high for this difficulty, especially for a normal. I would really consider remapping this without the high slider velocity. Also, I also refrain from using slider velocity changes like you did for specific notes. THese notes really don't have anything special that allows for a SV change to fit. ALso, this high velocity makes it really hard to read for beginners.

00:46:969 (1) - This is something i would definitely not do.
00:56:969 (1) - ^ and etc.
01:05:093 (1,1,1) - i would unstack these. Stacked notes do not make notes easier to read.
02:16:344 (1,1,1) - You definitely should not do this. THis isn't something that should be in a normal.

THere are some incorrect spacing, but it's not as big of a deal. Having a slow slider velocity can fix a lot of the seemingly confusing spacing.

Easy

00:20:562 (4) - new combo
00:43:844 (1) - end spinner at 00:45:094
00:27:594 (1) - the slider is a little squished imo and for this diffulty i'd rather the slider path more visible.
01:31:344 (3) - no, this is not allowed at all anymore, and it doesn't make sense.

Good luck. Those slider velocities ._.

Hello. Mod this beatmap.
http://osu.ppy.sh/b/123212&m=0

~Eazy~

01:57:594 (7) - Move one grid left is it helps?

~Normal~

00:19:625 (6) - This slider... Move this one grid left? It could be better to me.
01:58:062 (1) - Move this to x:210 y:135.
01:58:531 (1) - Move this to x:227 y:262.

~Hard~

00:53:219 (7) - Any spacing to after 6? If did, fix the way you wanted after (7).
02:50:094 (4,5,6,7) - Could you try moving four of them to x: 166 y: 150.


That's the best I can do.
Thank you and good luck.

Overall:
Easy is 3.13 stars? Normal is 4.60? You could probably rename the diff names to "Normal, Hard, Insane", and totally get away with it.

Hard:
00:32:672 - No me gusta!
00:37:594 (7) - I'm not going to say anything about this, but some people might be all like "wtf"
01:30:094 (7) - ^

Easy:
00:38:844 (3) - http://youtu.be/jVhdKoU69DA

Desu.

[General]
map不错。就是有点偏难。看star就知道。
我上面的那个modder说的很对，应该把难度都网上调一个等级。
并且最好把approach rate调大，这样打起来才感觉舒服。
[Easy]
感觉spacing有点大。BPM高的缘故吧。
（强烈建议减小spacing，虽然调整很花时间。）
00:09:781 (1,2) - 有点近了。
00:20:562 (4) - NC？
00:34:469 (3) - 往上一格？
00:30:094 (4) - NC？
00:43:844 (1) - 再长一点。（对准节拍或者更长）
00:52:594 (2,3,4) - 这里不要snapp，因为颜色一样很难判断，对新手应该仁慈一点。。
00:54:469 (1,2) - 类似这种组合在这曲子里貌似蛮多，对新手还是有难度地。不过由于多的原因，不修改也罢。
01:03:844 (4,5,6) - 可以做成和01:02:594 (3)一样的。
01:22:594 (4) - NC？
01:31:344 (3) - 坑爹么。。如果在Hard里可以通过调整timming来设置，这里，不建议。（至少长的不要一样吧。。）
01:55:094 (3) - 形状有点怪。
01:56:344 (4) - NC
02:15:094 (1,2) - 有点远了。
02:16:344 (1) - 好长，后面立即出现的note对新手有点难，建议缩掉33%
02:46:812 (3/4) - NC
taiko和ctb也过关了。
[Normal]
00:08:531 (3) - 位置离后面那个太近。NC
00:11:812 (8,9) - 太远，NC
（你这曲子里有3种速度357，289和373。点选音符，看好右上角的距离变化，这个难度应该通通调整未0.70x）
距离问题这里就不多说了。
NC的作用有3个，变换小节（由于你这里不是严格按照小节来NC的，所以无所谓），当速度变化比较大时要NC，还有就是snapp可以提醒玩家、
00:33:843 (2) - 压蓝线啊。
00:43:843 (1) - 这个要被视为Error的。。
00:46:969 (1) - 坑爹的减速。
00:56:969 (1,2,3,4,5) - 1slider+3circle？还是改成slider+slider的形式吧。最坑爹的还是那个5号。
01:39:469 (1) - 每次打到这个红的都要断。。总感觉提前了点。
01:45:093 (3,4) - 这个打起来就是不舒服。
01:57:594 (1,1,1) - 这里倒可以变速、
02:16:969 (1) - 这个是。。5个了。。02:16:969 (1,1) - 这样子完全不行。就算难也不能这样写啊。。
02:17:437 (1) - 这一拍极难抓准。。
02:18:844 (1,2,3,4) - 既然间隔不长距离就不要那么远。。
02:19:624 (5) - 也写成circle比较好。
02:39:781 (1) - 到此就结束吧，后面的显得没必要并且歌曲太长。
（感觉normal没有easy做的好。）
[Hard]
不多说了。距离还是要调整的，还有一个很大的问题就是circle太多，休息的时间太少。
00:12:906 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 这一拍的难度绝对可以上Insane了。
00:37:594 (7) - 这种地方最好还是要NC，两位数的note都快出来了。。
00:53:219 (7) - 塞在中间很便扭。
00:58:218 (5,6,7) - 没必要这么远。
01:45:093 (3,4,5) - 不要这么多snapp，差点断。
02:37:594 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 距离变化就算了，还重叠得这么多，你叫hidden怎么活？
（这hard和我hard的难度简直是天壤之别。。至少我的hard开了hr和dt还能fc）

mod结束。

Remap EASY and NORMAL diff. Adopt most of the suggestion above. HARD diff will also remap bcause of its high SV and some over hyper distance a few days later. Thx to all of the mod above

在modreqs里看到了就来mod一下:D吧
[biginner]00:45:094 - 不加个breaktime？
01:06:187 - 这个breaktime很长很多开着DT刷的人会耐不下心 试试补一个spin缩短breaktime？
01:25:094 (1) - 这个滑条新手很难判断折返次数，试试看加个whistle强调？或者换成一个一折返的滑条和一个note？
[advanced]
breaktime 同[beginner]稍长快结束的时候放个spin多好- -
00:23:844 (4,5,1) -这些折返滑条有点单调呀
01:25:094 (1) - 换成2个滑条试试？
01:40:094 (2) - 转个90度试试？
01:42:594 (3) - ^
01:45:094 (3) - 换成2个滑条比较好读

[challenge]
00:58:843 (7,8) - dis有问题打起来不舒服
01:51:344 (7,8) - ^
02:10:094 (1,2) - ^
02:12:594 (1,2) - ^
02:15:094 (1,2,1) - 两个滑条不一样很别扭 建议吧第二个滑条的节奏延长到连打的开头然后直接接连打

AngelEyE wrote:

在modreqs里看到了就来mod一下:D吧
[biginner]00:45:094 - 不加个breaktime？ 这么短加了意义不太大吧。。。
01:06:187 - 这个breaktime很长很多开着DT刷的人会耐不下心 试试补一个spin缩短breaktime？ 这个问题也不大吧。。。
01:25:094 (1) - 这个滑条新手很难判断折返次数，试试看加个whistle强调？或者换成一个一折返的滑条和一个note？ 恩，我再看看有没有其他人提出相似意见再决定改不改吧
[advanced]
breaktime 同[beginner]稍长快结束的时候放个spin多好- -
00:23:844 (4,5,1) -这些折返滑条有点单调呀 已经从一整个分开为两个了。。。
01:25:094 (1) - 换成2个滑条试试？ 再考虑考虑
01:40:094 (2) - 转个90度试试？ 现在这样放刚好是中央对称
01:42:594 (3) - ^ ok
01:45:094 (3) - 换成2个滑条比较好读 再考虑考虑

[challenge]
00:58:843 (7,8) - dis有问题打起来不舒服 fixed
01:51:344 (7,8) - ^ fixed
02:10:094 (1,2) - ^ fixed
02:12:594 (1,2) - ^ fixed
02:15:094 (1,2,1) - 两个滑条不一样很别扭 建议吧第二个滑条的节奏延长到连打的开头然后直接接连打 ok. 不过这样感觉更难了，以后肯定还会有人吐槽这里。。。

Thx

Hello, another mod for you, I apologize for the wait.

I did I mod for Challenge, and then I read was not supposed to, so here it is.


And then here's the actual mod.

Advanced
00:55:562 Reverse selection.
01:05:094 (1, 1, 1) I remember you not being able to see Dropbox images, so I'll describe this one. Replace these sliders with 6 notes, in a 1,2 stacked combo each, in the same places the sliders start and end on the timeline.
01:57:594 (1, 1, 1) Same thing here.
02:38:844 (1 ,1, 1) Do this here, too.
02:39:312 (1, 1)- No new combos.
02:41:344 (1)- No new combo.

Beginner
00:19:781 (3)- Replace this slider with two new notes.
02:11:344 (4) and 02:13:844 (2)- Bad slider. Makes the slider ball spaz out.
Not too many other problems.

That's all I can do for now.

stickmeister wrote:

Hello, another mod for you, I apologize for the wait.

I did I mod for Challenge, and then I read was not supposed to, so here it is.

Challenge mod

Challenge
00:13:531 (4)- I say you should copy and paste the slider at 00:11:031, flip it horizontally, and then reverse the selection. The velocity of this two sliders are little different...
00:53:219 (7)- Move this a grid up. fixed
00:46:969 (1)- No new combo. k
00:58:210 (5)- Move this closer to the last note according to Distance Snap, it's in a bad rhythm if it's placed here. fixed
01:37:281 (6)- Move this a grid or two up, it's confusing being all covered up by the sliders. fixed
01:39:469 (1)- No new combo. k
01:43:687- New note. nah...
02:16:344 (1~13)- Oh holy hell this entire combo stream is a very bad idea. It's extremely inconsistent with the rest of the difficulty in terms of mapping. 1/4 streams appear nowhere else. I highly advise you remap this bit to something else.I will consider it

And then here's the actual mod.

Advanced
00:55:562 Reverse selection. If ctrl + R, the distance will be inconsistent in this part
01:05:094 (1, 1, 1) I remember you not being able to see Dropbox images, so I'll describe this one. Replace these sliders with 6 notes, in a 1,2 stacked combo each, in the same places the sliders start and end on the timeline. k
01:57:594 (1, 1, 1) Same thing here. I will keep this because the shape looks good
02:38:844 (1 ,1, 1) Do this here, too. ^
02:39:312 (1, 1)- No new combos. nah...
02:41:344 (1)- No new combo. k

Beginner
00:19:781 (3)- Replace this slider with two new notes. k
02:11:344 (4) and 02:13:844 (2)- Bad slider. Makes the slider ball spaz out. I will consider this
Not too many other problems.

That's all I can do for now.

Thx

❤喂。。。直接说中文就好了嘛。、。。
❤中文歌~！支持一下~！不过好像有点印度曲风。。。。

❤In general

❤【Challenge】diff

❤【Advanced】diff

❤【Beginner】diff
没发现什么问题。。。鉴于我是新人modder，以上modding仅个人建议

-Baby Strawberry- wrote:

❤喂。。。直接说中文就好了嘛。、。。
❤中文歌~！支持一下~！不过好像有点印度曲风。。。。

❤In general

SPOILER

16-Immaturity是专辑名，请放到tag里面而不是sourse~！ fixed
其他没有啦~！

❤【Challenge】diff

SPOILER

00:06:343 (4) - 放到和5对称的位置
00:07:281 (6) - 放在2开头
00:07:593 (1) - 放到中心
整体看起来是这样的http://puu.sh/boU6 ok
00:15:406 (2,3) - 左下各移一格，不要遮挡到5 fixed
00:42:281 (1,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这几个的形状我个人觉得不是很好看。。。 changed
00:53:062 (6) - 摆放没什么问题，但是从test看这个note离得有点远。换成最小格调整一下？ distance 都是1.02x啊...估计是圈子缩放问题导致打图的时候看起来有点远
02:15:874 (2) - 这个我建议去掉一个折返，最后一个折返变成note http://puu.sh/boYL 才按上一个人的意见改成了4次折返...我会考虑,再看看别人怎么说
还有就是把streaming一大串弄成圆弧会不会好看点？ ok
02:17:280 (12,1) - 离得远了，这slider开头应该属于streaming里面的note，弄成slider我觉得已经有点违和了。。。没有啊,一个是1/4,一个是1/2,这个slider head不在stream里的...
02:26:344 (3) - 这样？http://puu.sh/boZdnah...
02:33:844 (3,4,5,6,7) - 五星不正哦~！ 建议你用转角度来做fixed
02:36:344 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - 好乱的遮挡。。。。 changed

❤【Advanced】diff

SPOILER

ar+1（加不加都可以） OD-1（这个应该是必须的）ok
01:06:031 (1,2) - 放到这里会不会好点？http://puu.sh/bp0u ok
02:16:344 (1,2,1) - 我觉得好乱。。。。但是具体怎样又说不出。。。。 这里多半还会修改
02:18:375 (3) - 左1啦 fixed
02:18:844 (1,2,3,4) - nazi。。。http://puu.sh/bp20
02:39:781 (1) -尾巴点在（336,136）fixed
02:40:250 (2) - 我觉得这个slider应该从02:40:406开始，结束时间一样nah...

❤【Beginner】diff
没发现什么问题。。。

SPOILER

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总的来说能看出来这是新人图，整个图看起来感觉不舒服，有点乱。
继续加油~！

鉴于我是新人modder，以上modding仅个人建议

Thx

[genenal]
建議別用空白的那張SB 不是很好看
讓三個diff的combo顏色都相同

[Beginner]
00:45:250 - 多餘的綠線
01:37:750 - ^

[Advanced]
00:26:344 (3,4) - 沒有對齊喔~
00:55:094 (3,4) - ^
02:51:344 (1) - 這轉圈太長了阿 應該會被挑的

[challenge]
00:13:531 (4) - 這個slider有問題(結尾)
00:37:594 (1) - 說實話我不想挑這個 但是很可惜 這是unrankable的
01:30:094 (1) - ^
02:10:094 (1) - 沒有對稱 修改下吧...
02:12:594 (1) - ^
02:51:344 (1) - 這轉圈太長了阿 應該會被挑的


紅色是一定要改的 藍色是有需要討論的 黑色就看看你的感覺了

就這樣摟~
good lucky

spboxer3 wrote:

[genenal]
建議別用空白的那張SB 不是很好看
讓三個diff的combo顏色都相同

[Beginner]
00:45:250 - 多餘的綠線
01:37:750 - ^

[Advanced]
00:26:344 (3,4) - 沒有對齊喔~
00:55:094 (3,4) - ^
02:51:344 (1) - 這轉圈太長了阿 應該會被挑的

[challenge]
00:13:531 (4) - 這個slider有問題(結尾)
00:37:594 (1) - 說實話我不想挑這個 但是很可惜 這是unrankable的
01:30:094 (1) - ^
02:10:094 (1) - 沒有對稱 修改下吧...
02:12:594 (1) - ^
02:51:344 (1) - 這轉圈太長了阿 應該會被挑的


紅色是一定要改的 藍色是有需要討論的 黑色就看看你的感覺了

就這樣摟~
good lucky

All fixed, thx

抱歉拖了一段時間....>_>

[Beginner]

*Slider Tick Rate 請改成"1" "0.5"是Unrankable的!!~~

1. 00:42:281 (1,2) - 這樣排 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/205739
2. 01:39:468 到 01:58:531 - Copy... 好明顯的偷懶>< 建議改改~
3. 02:11:344 (4) - 這樣的Silder不太好.....
4. 02:13:844 (2) - ^
5. 02:20:719 到 02:39:781 - 同第2條..
6. 02:48:844 (1) - 加個折返 然後把後面的(2)刪了

[Advanced]

Good!!

[Challenge]

1. 00:19:625 (8,9) - 位置對調? 會有趣些lol
2. 00:39:468 (3) - 拉到00:39:781
3. 01:01:031 (8) - 換種有弧度的Slider?
4. 01:31:968 (3) - 拉到01:32:281
5. 01:53:531 (8) - 同第3條
6. 02:16:811 (6) - Grid level:4 往下一格??
7. 02:34:781 (8) - 改成跟(9)一樣的形狀?
8. 02:45:561 (7) - 這樣? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/205750
9. 02:46:344 (1) - 這樣:33 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/205752

加油!!~~~

12BARRY21 wrote:

抱歉拖了一段時間....>_>

[Beginner]

*Slider Tick Rate 請改成"1" "0.5"是Unrankable的!!~~ fixed

1. 00:42:281 (1,2) - 這樣排 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/205739 changed
2. 01:39:468 到 01:58:531 - Copy... 好明顯的偷懶>< 建議改改~ 以后会改掉, 现在只是做一个雏形
3. 02:11:344 (4) - 這樣的Silder不太好..... changed
4. 02:13:844 (2) - ^ changed
5. 02:20:719 到 02:39:781 - 同第2條..
6. 02:48:844 (1) - 加個折返 然後把後面的(2)刪了 ok

[Advanced]

Good!!

[Challenge]

1. 00:19:625 (8,9) - 位置對調? 會有趣些lol 就是听别人的意见从对调的时候调过来的。。。我再看看别人怎么说吧。。。
2. 00:39:468 (3) - 拉到00:39:781 ok
3. 01:01:031 (8) - 換種有弧度的Slider? 想到更好的形状的时候再改
4. 01:31:968 (3) - 拉到01:32:281 ok
5. 01:53:531 (8) - 同第3條
6. 02:16:811 (6) - Grid level:4 往下一格?? fixed
7. 02:34:781 (8) - 改成跟(9)一樣的形狀? 两个长度不同啊...
8. 02:45:561 (7) - 這樣? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/205750 这样一来6,7,8的距离还是不一致。。。我把5,6对调一下好了
9. 02:46:344 (1) - 這樣:33 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/205752 nah...

加油!!~~~

Thx

Hello~ here's my mod =w= sorry for being late ._. (a request from my queue)

[Beginner]
00:05:719 (1) - Put a "clap" here.
00:07:281 (3) - ^
00:08:219 (1) - ^
00:09:781 (3) - ^
00:10:719 (2) - ^
00:13:219 (2) - ^
00:14:781 (1) - ^
00:16:031 (2) - ^
00:17:281 (4) - ^
00:18:531 (1) - ^
00:19:781 (3) - ^
00:21:031 (1) - ^
00:22:281 (2) - ^

that's all~ I don't see anything wrong with the other diffs
nice map :3

[Beginner]
00:05:094 (1,2,3) and 00:07:594 (1,2,3) - do like this? (the latter group is mirrored Horizontally and vertically)
00:12:281 (1,2,3,4) - copypaste and Ctrl+R 00:10:094 (1,2,3,4) and add a circle in 00:13:844 (x) and a 1/1 slider in 00:14:156 (5) -
00:27:281 (4) - delete and make 00:26:344 (3) 1/2 longer
00:56:031 (3) - Move it to obtain this?
01:19:781 (3) - delete and make 01:18:844 (2) 1/2 longer
01:47:594 (3) - like 00:56:031 (3) - but vertically flipped
02:15:719 (2) - Move to 02:15:562 (2) and make it 1/2 longer
02:29:782 (3) - like 00:56:031 (3) -

[Advanced]
Even if you have some little slider, you can make them a little curvy to make this (was taken from 00:16:344 (2,3,4) )
and you can do that many times !
00:46:812 (x) - Add hit circle
00:52:593 (3,4) - Like this?
01:39:312 (x) - Add hit circle
01:45:093 (3,4) - something similiar to 00:52:593 (3,4) -

[Challenge]
00:13:531 (4) - Make it curvy
00:43:843 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Not so muh readable... shape it like
00:46:656 (1,2) - like this?
00:48:218 (5,6,7) - I feel a jump will feel good
01:37:280 (6) - 4 grid down (that cross shall be completed like this)
01:39:155 (1,2) - like 00:46:656 (1,2)

抱歉我犯懶了.

[General]
我略嫌hitsound音量過大了.
還有我覺得Soft-normal好用一點啦...

[Beginner]
00:30:094 (4) - nc?
01:22:594 (4) - ^
02:16:344 (1,1) -

[Advanced]
我不知道這個算Hard還是normal..不過算了.
02:15:875 (2,1,2) - 這超難讀的...
02:18:844 (1,2,3,4,5) - (2,3)有spacing問題.還有這個算normal的話也算是太兇了.

基於支持C-POP的原因我還是留一星了.

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[Beginner]
00:05:094 (1,2,3) and 00:07:594 (1,2,3) - do like this? (the latter group is mirrored Horizontally and vertically) I feel it's better in my way lol

SPOILER

00:12:281 (1,2,3,4) - copypaste and Ctrl+R 00:10:094 (1,2,3,4) and add a circle in 00:13:844 (x) and a 1/1 slider in 00:14:156 (5) - The 1/1 slider is added in 00:14:156, others ingored
00:27:281 (4) - delete and make 00:26:344 (3) 1/2 longer ignored
00:56:031 (3) - Move it to obtain this? ignored

SPOILER

01:19:781 (3) - delete and make 01:18:844 (2) 1/2 longer
01:47:594 (3) - like 00:56:031 (3) - but vertically flipped
02:15:719 (2) - Move to 02:15:562 (2) and make it 1/2 longer ok
02:29:782 (3) - like 00:56:031 (3) -

[Advanced]
Even if you have some little slider, you can make them a little curvy to make this (was taken from 00:16:344 (2,3,4) ) k

SPOILER

and you can do that many times !
00:46:812 (x) - Add hit circle follow lyrics here
00:52:593 (3,4) - Like this? ignored

SPOILER

01:39:312 (x) - Add hit circle
01:45:093 (3,4) - something similiar to 00:52:593 (3,4) -

[Challenge]
00:13:531 (4) - Make it curvy k

SPOILER

00:43:843 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Not so muh readable... shape it like ok

SPOILER

00:46:656 (1,2) - like this? k

SPOILER

00:48:218 (5,6,7) - I feel a jump will feel good k
01:37:280 (6) - 4 grid down (that cross shall be completed like this) k

SPOILER

01:39:155 (1,2) - like 00:46:656 (1,2) k

Thx

justnobody wrote:

抱歉我犯懶了.

[General]
我略嫌hitsound音量過大了. 会修改的啦
還有我覺得Soft-normal好用一點啦... 恩

[Beginner]
00:30:094 (4) - nc? k
01:22:594 (4) - ^ k
02:16:344 (1,1) - 这个是什么意思。。。

[Advanced]
我不知道這個算Hard還是normal..不過算了.
02:15:875 (2,1,2) - 這超難讀的...
02:18:844 (1,2,3,4,5) - (2,3)有spacing問題.還有這個算normal的話也算是太兇了. spacing问题已修正

基於支持C-POP的原因我還是留一星了.

Thx

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