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Gurutamin - Iroha uta

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Strawberry
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Strawberry
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年1月8日 at 9:09:17

Artist: Gurutamin
Title: Iroha uta
Source: Nico Nico Douga
Tags: Twice niconico vocaloid kagamine rin
BPM: 172
Filesize: 4420kb
Play Time: 03:31
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.81 stars, 428 notes)
  2. Insane (5 stars, 708 notes)
  3. Normal (3.67 stars, 249 notes)
  4. Twice's Easy (2.7 stars, 218 notes)
Download: Gurutamin - Iroha uta
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enjoy ぐるたみん(Gurutamin)'s Iroha uta

╭（′▽‘）╭（′▽‘）╭（′▽‘）╯

thanks to Easy diff from Twice
Last edited by Strawberry , edited 10 times in total.
SuzumiyaSama
48 posts
Joined February 2011
SuzumiyaSama
哇。姥爷的新图lol
Strawberry
osu! Alumni
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Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
Strawberry

SuzumiyaSama wrote:

哇。姥爷的新图lol
:oops: 凉宫大大:3
SuzumiyaSama
48 posts
Joined February 2011
SuzumiyaSama
MOD~~
break time
01:40:300
02:35:939
KIAI TIME
02:13:439 (1) - 02:20:242 (5) -
02:24:602 (1) - 02:34:195 (1) -
03:09:253 (1) - 03:14:311 (7) -
03:20:067 (1) - 03:31:579 (1) -

有需要diff吗？
Strawberry
osu! Alumni
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Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
Strawberry

SuzumiyaSama wrote:

MOD~~
break time
01:40:300
02:35:939
KIAI TIME
02:13:439 (1) - 02:20:242 (5) -
02:24:602 (1) - 02:34:195 (1) -
03:09:253 (1) - 03:14:311 (7) -
03:20:067 (1) - 03:31:579 (1) -

有需要diff吗？
o3o thx for modding~
Megurine Luka
2,579 posts
Joined November 2010
Megurine Luka
XD
Strawberry
osu! Alumni
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Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
Strawberry

Megurine Luka wrote:

XD
:P 大哥好
No_Gu
2,954 posts
Joined January 2011
No_Gu
request from my queue
哦 好受的咕噜炭
[Twice]
没用的绿线
52335
123497
163963
00:17:974 (3,4) - 4的clap移到3上
00:27:393 (1,3) - clap问题- -
02:55:649 (4) - 左1格
03:10:997 (3) - 上1格
- -刚mod完这难度就死机了。Orz

[insane]
00:43:614 (5) - 不推荐3个折返
01:53:904 (2) - ^

为什么不都用N:c1?感觉预设的clap不太适合这歌
Nixnez
295 posts
Joined April 2010
Nixnez
拖了一段时间的mod queue request~

[General]
- 是 Iroha Uta吗？若不是就请无视。
- Tag 考虑加进 Twice 吧，虽说难度标题已经有了，但通常Guest difficulty都会加吧？
- 考虑消掉 Letterbox during breaks？

[Twice's Easy]
- 整体音效使用不规律，需要多多注意。
- 00:52:335， 02:03:497， 02:43:963 - 没用到的绿线？
- 00:14:485 (4) - 少了clap?
- 00:17:974 (3,4) - Clap应该是在(3)？
- 00:19:369 (2,3) - Clap应该是在(2)？
- 00:21:811 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里clap改成(3)和(5)结尾？配合 00:24:602 (1,2,3,1,2,3)。
- 00:27:393 (1,2,3,4) - 不太清楚这里是要跟什么。。试试一下的拍子？跟着vocal? 第一个红线是 00:27:218。

- 00:34:370 (2) - slider尾少了clap?
- 00:35:765 (1) - slider尾少了clap?
- 00:41:346 (1,2) - 少了两个clap?
- 02:11:870 (1) - 建议在 02:10:649 开始 ？
- 第二个kiai section - 整个部分只有两个clap? D: 而且感觉后半部的音效在偷懒没放多少。。第三个kiai section也只是那一小部分的N:C1 clap。。。
- 02:53:207 (1,2) - 一般来说在 Easy 不建议重叠？

[Normal]
- 第一个 chorus 区不放kiai吗？
- 00:27:393 (1,2,1) - 我本身偏向红线开始，slider重复一次，像我[Twice's Easy]建议那样。没改也没关系。
- 00:36:463 (2,3,4) - 感觉这里照以下拍子比较顺畅？ (2) 没改。

- 00:57:044 (2) - 建议 clap 移去 slider 尾？
- 03:31:579 (5) - 这段不太需要，直接转到底吧~(也只有这里与众不同。。Normal特别招待？XD)

[Hard]
- 00:29:311 (7) - 这个是红线结束还是白线？slider设计貌似是白线。
- 00:34:718 (5) - 这 slider 设计。。囧
- 00:42:742 (1) - 感觉短了些，这里用缓速slider比较好吧？
- 02:25:300 (3) - clap 感觉在 02:24:951 (2) 比较好？

[Insane]
- 大致ok，有些 new combo 的使用我不太赞同，但没什么大碍。
- 01:39:253 - 01:50:067 - 这里的空白区。。。hmm。放break感觉不怎么好，放拍子又。。。 D:

嘛，大致上就这样。 不错的图，加油~
Strawberry
osu! Alumni
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Topic Starter
Strawberry
thanks to no_gu&Soul-less's mod~ update N/H/I~
Jayel
846 posts
Joined August 2010
Jayel
Hi~, glad to mod your map :>.

Red - Must
Black - Optional

[General]
Nothing.

[Twice's Easy]
00:19:370(2,3) - Distance Error. Move each circle one grid right.
00:52:509(1,2,3,4) - Not a proper rhythm pattern for Easy. How about this?
SPOILER

01:06:811(2,3) - Distance Error. Move each circle one grid lower.
01:08:207(2,3) - ^
01:14:835(1,2,3,4,5,6) - Not a proper rhythm pattern for Easy. How about this?
SPOILER

02:13:090(x) - Placing a circle right after the spinner like this would make Easy difficulty harder.
Remove the circle after the spinner and lengthen the spinner.
02:49:370(x) - ^
03:06:463(x) - How about inserting break time?
03:29:311(1,2,3,4,5) - Not a proper rhythm pattern for Easy. How about this?
SPOILER

[Normal]
00:55:300 ~ 1:17:625(x) - Why don't you put kiai time in this time period?

[Hard]
Actually it is well-made, but I think it suddenly gets harder in the behind part.
Make some slight changes so that the player would not be embarrassed while playing this diff.
(Probably from 02:33:497)

00:55:300 ~ 1:17:625(x) - Why don't you put kiai time in this time period?
02:59:137(3,1,2) - A little hard for this diff? :(
03:28:963(3,4,5,6) - Not proper distance variation for this diff...

[Insane]
00:55:300 ~ 1:17:625(x) - Why don't you put kiai time in this time period?

Sorry, Insane diff is not the one I can mod, too hard... :(


OK, That's all. You know what? You are a better mapper than me haha
Alright, see you and good luck!
I like this kind of song, makes me really excited :D
Twice_old
Twice_old
fix o.o

Download: Gurutamin - Iroha uta (Strawberry) [Twice's Easy].osu
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
这图貌似有点问题orz

装上以后只能看到hard难度, 重传一下看看
Strawberry
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Topic Starter
Strawberry

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

这图貌似有点问题orz

装上以后只能看到hard难度, 重传一下看看
好了 :3
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
Hi, from my queue


[Twice's Easy]

  1. 00:20:416 (4) - 上面那个点拉到(384,168), 右边两个点往左一格, 尾上add clap
  2. 00:23:556 (5) - 尾上add clap
  3. 00:32:277 (6) - clap
  4. 00:37:160 (4) - whistle
  5. 00:39:253 (3) - 这个建议还是把reverse拉开点, 不然新手可能会看成reverse和下一个(1)的距离
  6. 00:59:486 (3,4) - 3尾上和4头上加whistle?
  7. 01:40:649 (2,3,4) - whistle
  8. 02:13:439 (1) - 这个建议换个位置...... = =这外圈叠的, 加上转盘短, 容易看错
  9. 03:28:788 (3) - whistle
  10. 03:30:009 (2) - add whistle 头上尾上都要
  11. 03:31:579 (1) - why not 5%? = =
[Normal]

  1. 00:13:439 (2) - 中间的点拉到(168,312)好看一点
  2. 00:18:323 (1,2) - 这两个摆好看点...
  3. 00:38:556 (1) - don't whistle
  4. 00:24:602 (1) - 第二个点(296,264) 第三个点(376,264) 减一个reverse加个圈
  5. 01:48:323 (1) - normal不要这么减速, 很坑啊////
  6. 01:59:835 (2) - 拆成2个滑条... = =坑
  7. 03:23:207 (1) - 摆好看点...
[Hard]

  1. 00:12:742 (1) - -1 reverse
  2. 00:17:451 (4) - 摆好看点
  3. 00:57:393 (6) - no clap
  4. 01:08:556 (7) - ^
  5. 02:55:300 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - 别这么摆... 不合歌曲了......
  6. 02:59:486 (1,2,3) - 感觉有点不好打= =
  7. 03:04:021 (9) - 往后1/2拍
  8. 03:21:114 (3) - 换个地方跳
[Insane]

  1. 00:25:474 (5) - 中间点(400,168)
  2. 00:53:730 (1) - 第二个点(240,336) 第三个(336,376) 最后(416,320)
  3. 01:10:997 (2) - (216,192)
  4. 1000 combo orz... 就这么多吧
Good luck~
Starry_old
Starry_old
Request from queue

[Twice's Easy]

00:20:416 (4) - I'm not a big fan of these sliders because its an easy and it might confuse new players.
00:23:207 (4) - New combo here
01:53:207 (5) - ^
02:32:974 (5,6) - Remove note 6 and make the slider note 5 longer?
02:53:207 (1,2,3,4) - Remove 3 and make 2 reverse!

[Normal]

orz, Maybe move circle size 1 up?

00:28:614 (1) - Remove new combo
00:58:090 (3) - New combo
00:57:044 (2) - I think you should reverse this
01:32:974 (3,4) - Remove 4 and reverse 3? But if you want variation then ignore this.
01:46:230 (4) - New combo here?
02:25:997 (4) - ^
02:01:928 (2) - I think short reverse slider go better here.

[Hard]

00:27:916 (3) - New combo
00:28:614 (5) - ^
00:43:265 (6) - ^
01:57:393 (4) - ^
01:55:997 (9) - ^
03:01:579 (4) - ^
03:02:800 (4) - ^
03:10:474 (4) - ^
00:57:567 (7) - Remove this note~ cause I don't see any reason to put it
01:28:788 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - All 1 combo?
02:43:614 (1,2,3) - Reverse slider instead? or make this form a triangle
03:09:253 (1) - I think there no need for new combo
03:20:067 (1) - ^

[Insane]

00:59:311 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think 234 would be better with 1 short sldier.
01:45:009 (2) - New combo
03:02:451 (4) - ^
01:57:044 (4,5) - Should stack with 01:57:393 (1) -

That's all I could find!

Good Luck~
Ranger
939 posts
Joined June 2011
Ranger
Hi~
sorry my poor English

[Twice's Easy]
00:42:742 (3) - Put in x:256 y:176
00:53:730 (4) - Put in x:368 y:240
00:55:300 (1) - Add Finish in head
01:56:695 (1) - Put in x:176 y:320
02:13:439 (1) - Add Finish in Head

[Normal]
00:31:579 (5) - Put in x:80 y:192
02:02:277 (3) - Put in x:288 40 and Add Finish
02:13:439 (1) - Add Finish
02:24:602 (1) - ^

[Hard]
03:02:277 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Difficult :o

[Insane]
00:17:974 (1) - Put in x:256 y:176
00:22:509 (3,4) - Mad jump
01:00:358 (6,1) - ^
01:15:707 (3,4,5) - Add NC(Anti Jump)
01:17:102 (1) - Remove NC
01:40:300~01:44:137-Insert Break Time
01:45:532~01:47:974-^
02:31:579 (1,2) - Mad Jump
02:36:114~02:38:207-Insert Break Time
02:49:718 (2,3) - Add NC

Insane is too difficult to me
Good luck~
DarknessAngel
2,237 posts
Joined May 2010
DarknessAngel
request from Queue ~ :)


General

  1. Kai Time理應從[00:55:300]、[02:13:439]、[03:09:253]開始，[01:20:416]、[02:30:183]、[03:37:160]結束
  2. "Gurutamin - Iroha uta (Strawberry).osb"沒用到，需刪除

Twice's Easy

  1. 01:03:672 (3,4) - 這裡沒對到節奏。把(3)刪掉；(4)的時間點移到[01:03:846]並且調好距離
  2. 01:04:195 (1) - 在[01:05:590]結束
  3. 01:46:928 (1) - 箭頭上的whistle移到尾部會好聽很多
  4. 01:46:928 (1) - 在這裡加個音量增大的綠線吧，前面的音樂很小聲，後面增大了，音量沒改變很奇怪的吧:O
  5. 02:32:277 (3) - 放這裡不好看，消掉grid snap然後移到這吧
  6. 02:46:928 (1) - 結束在(02:49:021)，因為你要讓新手有足夠的時間找回鼠標位置
  7. 03:30:707 (3) - 頭換成finish，箭頭加clap，尾部消掉clap，這樣好聽多了



Normal

  1. Normal麻煩統一間距，乖乖按照Distance Snap做好嗎... ?
  2. 00:16:928 (1) - 間距過大
  3. 01:02:625 (2) - 向下一格
  4. 01:39:253 (1,2,3,4,5) - 太難了，這真的是normal嗎 ? 別做這麼複雜
  5. 01:42:742 (1,2,3,4) - BPM172這樣放實在太坑了..換成slider
  6. 01:59:835 (2,3,4,5) - 真的很難，換成slider
  7. 02:02:277 (3) - 跟[02:00:707 (1,2)]同間距才好
  8. 02:00:707 (1,2) - 總覺得從這裡開始才是「真正的normal」
  9. 03:06:375 - 這條綠線還是太大聲，改成30%效果比較好
  10. 03:30:881 (1,2,3,4) - 你知道我想說什麼的

Hard

  1. 很多間距問題需要注意，你自己檢查看看
  2. 00:59:835 (6) - 這slider拉好一點
  3. 01:08:556 (7,8) - 間距
  4. 02:17:974 (8) - 尾部的clap去掉

Insane

  1. 00:39:079 (1) - 要不要在這邊加個new combo ? 感覺比較好判斷也比較好看
  2. 00:57:393 (5) - 這clap改到[00:56:870 (4)]的尾部
  3. 03:37:160 - 這綠線太小聲，至少40%吧


跟你說一下有關DS(間距)改變的條件好了
1.跳
2.進入副歌時從原本的1.0x改到1.2x，副歌結束後又改回1.0諸如此類有道理的改變間距
3.滑條變速時

就這樣


像Easy沒有這些大問題
我比較能從細微的部分檢查

你把間距問題都弄好了的話可以要求我recheck(你不介意的話)
加油 ~
Strawberry
osu! Alumni
1,536 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
Strawberry

DarknessAngel wrote:

request from Queue ~ :)


General

  1. Kai Time理應從[00:55:300]、[02:13:439]、[03:09:253]開始，[01:20:416]、[02:30:183]、[03:37:160]結束
  2. "Gurutamin - Iroha uta (Strawberry).osb"沒用到，需刪除

Twice's Easy

  1. 01:03:672 (3,4) - 這裡沒對到節奏。把(3)刪掉；(4)的時間點移到[01:03:846]並且調好距離
  2. 01:04:195 (1) - 在[01:05:590]結束
  3. 01:46:928 (1) - 箭頭上的whistle移到尾部會好聽很多
  4. 01:46:928 (1) - 在這裡加個音量增大的綠線吧，前面的音樂很小聲，後面增大了，音量沒改變很奇怪的吧:O
  5. 02:32:277 (3) - 放這裡不好看，消掉grid snap然後移到這吧
  6. 02:46:928 (1) - 結束在(02:49:021)，因為你要讓新手有足夠的時間找回鼠標位置
  7. 03:30:707 (3) - 頭換成finish，箭頭加clap，尾部消掉clap，這樣好聽多了



Normal

  1. Normal麻煩統一間距，乖乖按照Distance Snap做好嗎... ?
  2. 00:16:928 (1) - 間距過大
  3. 01:02:625 (2) - 向下一格
  4. 01:39:253 (1,2,3,4,5) - 太難了，這真的是normal嗎 ? 別做這麼複雜
  5. 01:42:742 (1,2,3,4) - BPM172這樣放實在太坑了..換成slider
  6. 01:59:835 (2,3,4,5) - 真的很難，換成slider
  7. 02:02:277 (3) - 跟[02:00:707 (1,2)]同間距才好
  8. 02:00:707 (1,2) - 總覺得從這裡開始才是「真正的normal」
  9. 03:06:375 - 這條綠線還是太大聲，改成30%效果比較好
  10. 03:30:881 (1,2,3,4) - 你知道我想說什麼的

Hard

  1. 很多間距問題需要注意，你自己檢查看看
  2. 00:59:835 (6) - 這slider拉好一點
  3. 01:08:556 (7,8) - 間距
  4. 02:17:974 (8) - 尾部的clap去掉

Insane

  1. 00:39:079 (1) - 要不要在這邊加個new combo ? 感覺比較好判斷也比較好看
  2. 00:57:393 (5) - 這clap改到[00:56:870 (4)]的尾部
  3. 03:37:160 - 這綠線太小聲，至少40%吧


跟你說一下有關DS(間距)改變的條件好了
1.跳
2.進入副歌時從原本的1.0x改到1.2x，副歌結束後又改回1.0諸如此類有道理的改變間距
3.滑條變速時

就這樣


像Easy沒有這些大問題
我比較能從細微的部分檢查

你把間距問題都弄好了的話可以要求我recheck(你不介意的話)
加油 ~
awesome mod >< 十分感谢 :oops: 有太多要改。我应该会改久些:3 最近也比较忙T.T
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