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3L - WARNING!

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zerozaber
not only 3L but mariapolo too
Topic Starter
Mayzel

zerozaber wrote:

not only 3L but mariapolo too
oh it's true, thanks.

I fixed, but I cannot submit map maybe because I changed my name.( Submittnig after changing Creater needs other 1 room for uproading map.( ? ) :? )
Now I upload 3 maps already, so I should wait for aother map to go to graveyard..
Topic Starter
Mayzel
I see. I cannot submit when I'm about to change the title or artist ,not creater.
How should I do..
Topic Starter
Mayzel
Added in tag.
N A L U
I wish this beatmap to be ranked!!!
Please Please Please Please Please Please :o
I dunno how to give the star..sorry.
Topic Starter
Mayzel
I wish so too :)
xiceyx
Really cool map! I hope gets ranked! :D Great job
Topic Starter
Mayzel

xiceyx wrote:

Really cool map! I hope gets ranked! :D Great job
thanks :)
Gordon_Freeman0
Too short :(
But still cool
NoHitter
General
Is the mp3 really cut off like that?
There are two .osb files. Normally you only have to delete one, but as they do nothing, just delete them both.

Skin
Just as suggestion:
Make your hitcircleoverlay.png something like this (excuse the fail photo editing since I was in a rush to make it, but you can just make one without the yellow borders).
Make your hitcircle.png be the default one.
Under the [General] section of the .osu files, add OverlayPosition: Below
The result is this and this.

Easy
00:36:392 (4,5) - Perhaps you could unstack these?
01:24:685 (1) - You could follow the pattern at 01:12:978 (1,2) for consistency.
01:32:002 (2,3) - Perhaps you could unstack these?
02:34:929 (1) - Make this into a repeat slider like in the first chorus?
02:46:636 (1) - Again, you could follow the pattern at 02:34:929 (1,2) for consistency.

Normal
00:55:417 (1) - [nazi] Maybe move this, so it will not overlap with 00:53:954 (3)?
01:08:588 (1,2) - I'm not sure about the readability of this. Fair enough I guess.
01:17:368 (1,2,3,4) - IMO it would be better if the repeat slider comes before the triple notes. The rhythm will be introduced first.

Hard
02:26:149 (1,2,3) - I really suggest that you move this elsewhere. Don't place it under the slidertrack.

Insane
01:22:214 (3) - Unsnapped note.
01:51:758 (5,6) - Unstack them? Stacked sliders look ugly IMO, but it's up to you if you wanna change.
02:02:458 (10) - Unsnapped note.
02:17:092 (5) - Unsnapped note.

Ono's Taiko Oni
Regarding the SB, why don't you make the Caution bar, move with the same speed as the notes below it?

Lunatic
02:10:966 (4) - Spacing? I don't see anything to indicate a spacing change.

Overall, great map!

Edit:
Oh and if you do follow through with my skin suggestion, I suggest you use these combo colors:
[Colours]
Combo1 : 241,198,22
Combo2 : 250,79,5
Combo3 : 228,28,5
Combo4 : 252,140,39
Topic Starter
Mayzel

NoHItter wrote:

General
Is the mp3 really cut off like that?

Original mp3 is below.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jCubA3oltGM

There are two .osb files. Normally you only have to delete one, but as they do nothing, just delete them both.

Deleted both.


Skin
Just as suggestion:
Make your hitcircleoverlay.png something like this (excuse the fail photo editing since I was in a rush to make it, but you can just make one without the yellow borders).
It's too hard to erase the line neatly by my photo editing skill...
Maybe cool even if the line stays XD.


Make your hitcircle.png be the default one.
OK.
Under the [General] section of the .osu files, add OverlayPosition: Below
The result is this and this.
Added in all of .osu.


Easy
00:36:392 (4,5) - Perhaps you could unstack these? fixed.
01:24:685 (1) - You could follow the pattern at 01:12:978 (1,2) for consistency. fixed.
01:32:002 (2,3) - Perhaps you could unstack these? fixed.
02:34:929 (1) - Make this into a repeat slider like in the first chorus? fixed.
02:46:636 (1) - Again, you could follow the pattern at 02:34:929 (1,2) for consistency. fixed.

Normal
00:55:417 (1) - [nazi] Maybe move this, so it will not overlap with 00:53:954 (3)? fixed.
01:08:588 (1,2) - I'm not sure about the readability of this. Fair enough I guess. fixed.
01:17:368 (1,2,3,4) - IMO it would be better if the repeat slider comes before the triple notes. The rhythm will be introduced first. fixed.

Hard
02:26:149 (1,2,3) - I really suggest that you move this elsewhere. Don't place it under the slidertrack.
fixed.

Insane
01:22:214 (3) - Unsnapped note. Resnapped all notes.
01:51:758 (5,6) - Unstack them? Stacked sliders look ugly IMO, but it's up to you if you wanna change. fixed.
02:02:458 (10) - Unsnapped note. Resnapped all notes.
02:17:092 (5) - Unsnapped note. Resnapped all notes.

Lunatic
02:10:966 (4) - Spacing? I don't see anything to indicate a spacing change. fixed.

Overall, great map!

thanks :)

Edit:
Oh and if you do follow through with my skin suggestion, I suggest you use these combo colors:
[Colours]
Combo1 : 241,198,22
Combo2 : 250,79,5
Combo3 : 228,28,5
Combo4 : 252,140,39
OK.
Many many thanks for your mod, NoHItter!!!
NoHitter
Hmm I'm prompted to update when I download the beatmap.
Try Full Submitting it.
Topic Starter
Mayzel
OK, full submitted.
And thank you star~~ :)
NewRulerNA
Mod reqより

[General]
Lead-inを全難易度で統一
tagの「maria polo」が重複してるので削除


[Easy]
OD-1

00:42:246 (2,1) - Distance
00:49:563 (1,2,3,4) - 全体的に離れ気味
01:02:734 (3,4) - (1,2)と位置を揃える
01:12:978 (1,2) - Distance
01:29:075 (5,1) - ^
01:59:075 (5,1) - ^
02:04:197 (2,1) - ^
02:11:514 (1,2,3,4) - ここも距離が離れ気味なのでもっと中央に寄せる
02:24:685 (3,4) - (1,2)と位置を揃える
02:51:026 (5,1) - Distance

[Normal]
NormalではDSの変更とスライダーの速度変更はされるべきではありません
部分的に指摘すると譜面のバランスが崩れてしまうので指摘は今回はしません

00:38:588 (2) - 00:37:124 (5)とクロスさせるとNormalとしては見にくいです
02:00:539 (2) - 01:59:075 (1) - ^

[Hard]
AR-1or-2

01:10:783 - この緑線の必要性を感じられません、またこの直後にある緑線は01:11:514 (1)の位置まで移動
01:35:844 (3,4) - なぜこの2つのスライダーは形が微妙に違います

[Insane]
一点のみ
HP+1or+2

[Lunatic]
これも一点のみ

01:08:588 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 形が歪んでいて汚いです、また01:09:502 (6,8)にCtrl+Rで叩くタイミングを逆に


あくまでも個人的にですが、譜面として見るとInsaneとHardに連打以外に大きな差が見つからず、似た難易度が2つあるように思えました
Insaneの方のスペーシングを部分的に難易度が上がり過ぎない範囲で広げてみては?
それ以外では気になったところはありません
nice song.
Topic Starter
Mayzel

NewRulerNA wrote:

Mod reqより

[General]
Lead-inを全難易度で統一
tagの「maria polo」が重複してるので削除


修正しました。

[Easy]
OD-1

修正

00:42:246 (2,1) - Distance
00:49:563 (1,2,3,4) - 全体的に離れ気味
01:02:734 (3,4) - (1,2)と位置を揃える
01:12:978 (1,2) - Distance
01:29:075 (5,1) - ^
01:59:075 (5,1) - ^
02:04:197 (2,1) - ^
02:11:514 (1,2,3,4) - ここも距離が離れ気味なのでもっと中央に寄せる
02:24:685 (3,4) - (1,2)と位置を揃える
02:51:026 (5,1) - Distance

DSを統一しました。それに併せる形で位置について言及されていた部分を修正。

[Normal]
NormalではDSの変更とスライダーの速度変更はされるべきではありません
部分的に指摘すると譜面のバランスが崩れてしまうので指摘は今回はしません

00:38:588 (2) - 00:37:124 (5)とクロスさせるとNormalとしては見にくいです 修正しました。
02:00:539 (2) - 01:59:075 (1) - ^ 修正しました。

[Hard]
AR-1or-2  修正しました。

01:10:783 - この緑線の必要性を感じられません、またこの直後にある緑線は01:11:514 (1)の位置まで移動 修正しました。
01:35:844 (3,4) - なぜこの2つのスライダーは形が微妙に違います 修正しました。

[Insane]
一点のみ
HP+1or+2 修正しました。

[Lunatic]
これも一点のみ

01:08:588 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 形が歪んでいて汚いです、また01:09:502 (6,8)にCtrl+Rで叩くタイミングを逆に 修正しました。


あくまでも個人的にですが、譜面として見るとInsaneとHardに連打以外に大きな差が見つからず、似た難易度が2つあるように思えました
Insaneの方のスペーシングを部分的に難易度が上がり過ぎない範囲で広げてみては?

初期のころから散々指摘されてきたことですね…音取りを変えようと思うと今までのMODがすべて無駄になってしまいますし、やはり配置で差別化するしか無いですね。ささやかに一部分スページングを変えてみましたが、もう少し譜面とにらめっこして変化させようと思います。

それ以外では気になったところはありません
nice song.
MODありがとうございました。
チャットでの質問にも答えていただいて非常に助かりました!
Topic Starter
Mayzel
悩んでたら一ヶ月たってた
Topic Starter
Mayzel
I deleted skins for readability
bug sniper
Normal Mode:

00:45:905: I can't hit this pair of notes perfectly. I'd probably replace this note and the note after it with a single note, or unstack them.


Hard Mode

02:51:575: I keep hitting this note a little bit too early and getting a 50. Perhaps add another note immediately before this one.

I'm glad you mapped this song. I think the English Touhou songs are some of my favorite songs. I'll try to mod more if you'll get this song out of the graveyard.
Boncho
This map should be ranked, as fast as possible <.<
only000000
good beatmaps
Haganeproductio
Is this map officially graveyarded?
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